OctoPuss - 8 months ago

Another ref for my collection. Gotta catch ’em all

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Yes to the first point.

However, the second point you brought up is a reference to something else. If I get around to doing more Isekai Losses than it should become clearer.

The third point about Deedlit’s outfit is not what I was going for. Her outfit is one that is supposed to be a typical maid outfit. Any similarities to maid designs from another series, including Zero no Tsukaima is completely coincidental.

But congrats on the first point. I think I watched ZnT before Sword Art Online, so it was technically my first Isekai anime.

OctoPuss - 8 months ago

So I reread this masterpiece. After much thought and careful analysis of the text, I found another reference. This time to anime Zero no Tsukaima. Here are my evidences:
1) MC was summoned to another world by a noble but inexperienced girl magician, similar to Louise Valliere.
2) MC has an invisible voice helper (in the anime it was a talking sword, but the principle is the same).
3) Deedlit is similar to a maid at the Louise's Academy in her protective personality. Also, her uniform from ref pic looks almost completely, except for a couple of small details, similar to the maid costume from the anime. But it may also be that I'm looking for hidden meanings where no one has hidden them.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Either we’re talking about that character from the Flinstones or that rapper from Southeast Asia. I’m not sure if I want to be anywhere near that garden.

FutureBellyAche - 1 year ago

My dyslexic ass read it as Garten of Bambam since i only saw the B

Unknown5555 - 9 months ago

A scene with Kirara along the journey would be super hot too, I think!

Assriel88 - 10 months ago

Fair enough

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Again. Switching back and forth between multiple options. Among them are Four and Five stars.

Assriel88 - 10 months ago

Will it be a 4 star or 5 star?

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Me too.

[i]I’m kind of switching back and forth between a couple of choices, but I should have one picked out by the time that Natlan is released in the game.[/i]

Piepie20 - 2 months ago

NTA, did you ever eat righty and lefty?

zoodoole - 1 year ago

I hate to break it to you, but you are literally the AH in this scenario.

Toclaimtheirbones - 1 year ago

NTA

Whilst this was most likely a form of karmic retribution that has been destined to happen for a long time, I must say that what the two schemers tricked you into doing was quite diabolical and as such it is within your right to enact vengeance upon them

Your imminent revenge however should not take the form of their demise however, rather I believe that what ever loved ones they have be it, spouses, lovers, friends, parents, or siblings you must consume whomever is the most important both “righty” and “lefty” after the deed is done everything shall reach an equilibrium, and only then may you eat your false friends

MoonDustPl - 1 year ago

Ok :3

I will wait

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

u/Fatedmeal • 2d

I would like to do that eventually, but I'm hesitant to write vore types like unbirth and breast vore. As I don't have as much confidence in depicting them to a satisfactory degree. But I think that this reddit format would be a good way for me to practice. Thanks for the suggestion, but I have a bunch of other stories on my plate, so don't expect it any time soon.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks! Yea all the characters mentioned in your comment are high up there on my list of favorite F/GO characters and as F/GO preds.

But for this specific image and story, Kama had to end up as the prey…as she is the other half of Beast III.

I’m glad that you enjoyed the story and appreciated my adherence to lore for this piece. I think sticking to canon for Kiara and Kama is really important in a vore work. As they are such great potential preds in the in-game canon already. Deviating too far from their personalities and inherent characteristics would have only been a disservice. It’s also why I have yet to write a full-blown story of either of them yet.

I just want to get it nailed down when I do.

Blackheartedreaper2 - 1 year ago

Not gonna lie Kama is tied with Morgan as my favorite fate character, but Kiara is just to appealing in vore scenarios to not love her as pred. A pretty great story and love how lore accurate it is, with the stronger servants being to cocky to escape in time and Kama as the Kiara's counterpart being the only one still alive but trapped permanently unless some miracle happens. Really well done.

Assriel88 - 10 months ago

I must say i do feel a little bad for march

SpamMeister - 11 months ago

Amazing story, but it did make me sad, lol! I just want March to be happy!

WoreHouse - 1 year ago

Oh, this plot twist is part of the commission. Okay then :(

Just such perfect descriptions (I love aggressive, powerful stomachs and mean preds), but this little detail while reading sometimes knocked me out of the pleasant immersion in what was happening on behalf of the prey. March just loved Stelle so much and she was such a submissive prey that I think that if Stelle had teased her well and played with her, March would still have agreed after several hesitant refusals, even clearly understanding the final consequences. In this sense, I really like the scene with Himeko where she asks about March's willingess. Perhaps she would even come to the rescue if she saw the girl's struggle and cries for help, but realizing that March was not even trying to get out and was wasting the last remnants of precious energy on masturbation... she simply left her alone with her dream. Mmm... amazing ~!


I'm a little sad that you have so little content with the classic willing prey and fatal endings (There are many ways to play out this seemingly simple scenario, but you get the idea)
I’m even more sad because, due to the fact that I live in one sad northern country, subject to all possible sanctions, I can’t even make a commission from you, even though I physically have money. And here there are so many wishes - an alternative version of “A Gut Slut Writer’s Fate” with Sasha Alvarez, and for this particular story I would like to see the scenario described above. Eeeehh :(

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

True, but I think the commissioner was quite smitten with the idea of March being submissive enough to fool herself. Thus, that is what they desired me to write.

At the very least, those little nuances can always play in our heads.

As for the second portion of your comment, thanks for the compliment about the descriptions in the story.

WoreHouse - 1 year ago

While I was reading this, it spoiled the impression a little that March, until the very end, thought that Stelle was just playing with her, while she was digesting her food for real. It would have been a lot hotter if Stelle had gotten March to agree to go on the full tour willingly by teasing her and using her preyish tendencies against her. If she herself did so her prey would want to be digested in her merciless stomach along with other garbage, and only in order to become additional padding for the chest and butt of her love. Whose assets will be played with later not by March, but by her main rival. Mmm~
I was a little sad that the girl was simply deceived :(

But otherwise, your artistic descriptions of everything are excellent as always. There's nothing to add here!

Fatedmeal - 3 months ago

Nah. Thanks for the question.

Depending on your device…yes. Unfortunately, there is media on this file that won’t be properly formatted unless it’s uploaded as this document type. So if you aren’t able to read all 100 pages without downloading it, then downloading the story might be your only avenue for the device you are currently using.

UwUARTYY - 3 months ago

This probably the dumbest question you’ll ever see… but how do I read the story? Do I have to click the download button x.x

raincheck - 1 year ago

POOR LUCAS WTH ???????????? He and the other Pokeboys deserve more chances to be pred ????

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I'm glad that all of the stories caught your interest and that there was a standout performance for you.

In response to your question, if my memory isn't failing me, I actually haven't written any Melony content yet. When it comes to my favorite predators, I usually veer away from writing about them. As I want to be a more experienced writer when I do write about them, and want to wait when I have a good idea and drive so that they get the best story.

So, because Melony is also one of my favorite milf characters, me writing a story about her might not be for some time. Especially, since I try to distribute my content evenly between series/franchises...and most of my Pokemon content has been focused on the P.A.L.D.E.A. series. Of course, that doesn't mean that characters from other regions are not going to appear in P.A.L.D.E.A. series. Like how Marnie and Gloria (Galar characters) popped up recently, along with a couple others. And, as you mentioned, Katy and Melony are quite complementary characters, in design and feel. So maybe that is an avenue I can pursue in the nearer future.

In short, there is an interest in me to write about Melony. I'm just waiting until the right time.

FireSharkAttack - 1 year ago

Very cool collection of stories! Big props to the all the writers, all of these were good in their own rights, though the Oleana ones were my personal favorite.
Speaking of, do you plan to write any more melony content? You made a tierlist quite a while ago and put her at the very top, and she's one of my favorite milf predators, and just works really well along with Katy!

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Yea. She’s a big favorite of mine too. I haven’t firmly planned everything in the first 40 chapters of this series. If I want to, there may be some wiggle room to introduce and include her in season 3 (chapters 21-30). Otherwise, it might be chapter 41+ before she shows up in the series. As Season 4 (Chapter 31-40) is already planned out and packed with planned content…that I don’t think I would be able to fit a devoted Cynthia chapter in there.

I guess this comment also evokes some curiosity about the length that I plan for this series to run. It’s a little uncertain as my roadmap is pretty solid up to chapter 40. I’ve left the chapters after on a more loose outline. As it will be a while before I get to those chapters, and I’ll want a little flexibility in case I want to shift directions for the narrative.

As of now, I plan on finishing the story on Chapter 60. Might be shorter or it might be longer. We’ll see.

SSV - 1 year ago

Hey I was wondering in future chapters will you bring in Cynthia? She’s my favourite champion and I would love to see your take on her.

SSV - 1 year ago

Ahh so far away, but I get it. I really love how you make the vore scenes. The way you describe them is better than most I’ve read. Feeling anxious for Florian but hopefully he’ll get out of this “ass” situation.

Edddd - 1 year ago

it's been that long... damn :,)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Glad to see that you are still enjoying the series after more than a year.

I'm also quite stoked to see the following events put on paper.

SmaxTheDestroyer - 1 year ago

I loved this back then, still love it now~

PrimeLvl37 - 1 year ago

From how Ibuki-Douji acts in this story I would believe if she had woke up when Mash was both halfway in her mouth and cock Ibuki-Douji would have probably played with Mash by taking her own cock in her own mouth and deepthroated both Mash and her cock for a bit pulling Mash out of her cock with her throat muscles just for Mash to be pulled back into her urethra by her throbbing cock before deciding to keep Mash for more sexual satisfaction by keeping Mash inside her balls and making sure that her balls wouldn't turn Mash into cum she uses divinity to make her body recognised Mash as something to not fully digest, transformer or absorbed so Ibuki-Douji can tease Mash regular and sexually until Mash becomes her prey/cum slut whenever Ibuki-Douji is either horny or vorny (horny/hungry) with Ibuki-Douji thinking adding other servants as her prey/cum sluts and maybe even thinking about letting the Master play with her or her playing with the Master.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks! It might have taken two years, but I’m glad that my gallery was able to find you now.

SlimpDick - 1 year ago

how did I just discover your work?? your stuff is goated, top tier cruelty too I love it

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

That's understandable. You have no obligation to continue this storyline if you don't feel like it. If you choose to not continue this storyline then I'll simply headcanon that the real Ritsuka and Mash are just stuck on a beach somewhere and the that the ones in this storyline were clones.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Well I guess that we might find out the answer to these questions during the Year of the Snake next year. Maybe. Depends on if my interest in this storyline persists.

Ihsvenolifeatall - 1 year ago

It is normal to be clustered up with work so don’t push yourself,your stories are some of the best that I’ve read on this website so take your time!

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

No problem! I get preferring to read long stories that pique your interest.

I’m ambivalent towards flatulence. The issue is that by the time that I reach that point in writing the story, I’m usually too tired to write an extensive amount of onomatopoeias to display the act of farting. That is the main reason why I usually go without farts in my stories.

Yup, it would be nice to see a story with Firefly as pred. Although, I’m kind of too busy right now to do it myself.

Ihsvenolifeatall - 1 year ago

From my scrolling through the story and by the comments it looks like March ended with a grim fate, well it is technically her fault for being so gullible at the start of the story.sorry that I’m not reading through the entire story I only read these kinds of long stories for characters I rly like .also a question, what do you think about farts in a story?you don’t add any in your stories so I assume that you don’t like writing them that much.but overall nice story! Would be nice to see a story for firefly being pred.

Inari - 1 year ago

If you haven't notice I have a thing for Foxians beauties and lovable idiot protags~

Inari - 1 year ago

Don't be regretful about being passionate about your stories, even if it changes the original plot intention and balloons out the story into a large word count. Raw inspiration is a huge boon in writing and sometimes you just need to be ride out that eureka wave to tell the story you want before you run out of steam or get distracted. It happens to me a lot in my writing attempts.~

As for March, a pred role story would be a great read from you. With her bubbly personality she would no doubt partake in vore on some random poor soul or powerful woman just for the experience of it and to brag. I could totally see her taking pictures of the various digestive stages while doing various poses and texting. Like a V symbol over her plump up thighs or heart hands pressed against the folds of her churning belly. I will still die on the March being the perfect prey hill since even the game loves to bully her.

As for picks I had a feeling Kafka would be your favorite. I notice you had a thing for powerful female dominating characters ever since I read your Dehya and Lisa story. Kafka is the definition of the perfect pred. Probably the most powerful of any character I've seen with her elegant beauty, buxom figure, her calm yet intimidating personality, and pink spider thread/mind controlling powers that can easily ensnare people. For the others I admittedly know little of their characters outside of Kafka and Fu since I too recently return playing and missed out on a ton of events.

If your interested in my top picks so far it would look like this.
1) Stelle
2) Tingyun
3) Asta
4) Yukong
5) Sushang/Qingni (Yukong's Mung bean soda loving daughter)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Fatedmeal • 1d

Thanks for the comments, and apologies for the belated reply. I’m glad that this form of narration bears an appeal for you and others.

IddlerItaler - 1 year ago

This place really hasn't been the same since the API purges when every sensible moderator was driven off the site. Posts like this are the result. No idea why I'm still on here to watch everything turn to shit (literally in this case).

It's been really bad for my mental health, but perhaps staring into this abyss, raging with smugness and disregard for even the most basic forms of humanity, has become a sick fetish of mine.

My only hope is that this u/Party2Toilet lass gave away enough information and pissed off enough readers that, if her story is even real, they are able to track her down and bring her to justice. But something tells me there will be no justice.

(OOC: Great story, very immersive experience from both the social media context and the poster's very own narration.)

Fizzisop - 1 year ago

Definitely an asshole, think of all the people that poor medical student could've helped in her life. Admittedly I'm impressed by how easily your body broke her down, but I hope she ended up clogging the toilet as a bit of karma for you. I will say it is a bit ironic that you kept calling her a brown noser and ultimately kinda proved yourself right.

Schrodinger123 - 1 year ago

I look forward to trying to eat you so you dont sully my species be vigilant not that itll help i always catch my prey ;)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

U/Party2Toilet • 5d

Please

[i]Eye Roll[/i]

I think that I did her a favor.

If it wasn’t me that turned Ms. Perfect into juicy fat tits, then it would have been someone else after accusing her of sexual misconduct. That [i]mother[/i] was thirsty when she was in the room. Not only was she in the closet, but it was practically a glass window.

Now, she’s relieved of the stressful life of pleasing a husband she isn’t attracted to or saddled with kids. Now as just a violent jiggle on my ass.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks for another comment.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks for the comment.

Meruem - 1 year ago

another good work, please do one with eri being a prey

Hemil01 - 1 year ago

Another banger, man

Hemil01 - 1 year ago

Another banger, man

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

That is a thought. Yes. But the next question that you are probably wondering is if they are still around as themselves or added onto another...(haven't really decided yet...probably will if it becomes significant later in the story).

SSV - 10 months ago

I was wondering, Since Gloria is here. Does that mean Victor also in this world? Like how Juliana and Florian exist.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Well that makes one of us...maybe. I kind of think of some of these chapters out of order and then bridge the gaps.

Yup, I'm glad that I was able to include Arezu in the story through this string of plot.

Brassius is actually younger than how he is described here. 20s to 30s in the game. He just looks like a sickly and lean man. Probably because he doesn't properly exercise or maintains a healthy diet, in lieu of artistic endeavors in the game.

Edddd - 1 year ago

Totally not reading this one out of order :,)
Gotta say, Arezu makes for a perfect pred and yet another interesting string of plot. Almost makes one wish to be a Tera Human and have a shot at being her next Avant-garde piece of art.
Considering it seemed like age was soon to claim him, Brassius should he grateful with how things went.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks for the heads up about the character references.

It seems like what you are experiencing, the half-pasted hyperlink, is something that I have difficulty fixing. Thus, I decided to include a link from Serebii instead of Bulbapedia.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. It was a fun first excursion into Star Rail vore content for me.

Nyven - 1 year ago

This was great

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. It's these erotically tragic depictions that most inspired me to first begin writing. For the most my heart ever raced was reading fictions of similar hues. Thus, I was really delighted to see that I was able to make this story after nearly two years of writing. As it's the type of narrative that I've long wanted to see come to fruition in my own writing.

So I want to thank you for commenting. As it affirmed the emotions that I had upon finishing the story. That Navia's and Aether's story had touched you in a similar manner.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Honestly, I had forgotten that you mentioned that in a comment on that story...but I think you can infer that with how the story ended up progressing. The partial digestion being a necessary physical development that would reflect the character development of the deuteragonists in the story.

ChristianBoiy - 1 year ago

Ahhh, I commented too early. I was only halfway through. I absolutely love this story and this concept, but... at the same time...

vore is an inherently sensual topic for me, and seeing their relationship fall apart and fail to amend when one last chance could have (potentially) been all that needed to happen for Aether to recuperate his strength and enjoy a happy ending... It stings...

Lustfully; Erotically? It's so, so hot. But... Romantically it tears me apart.
Then again, that feeling perfectly reflects the tone of this story, so perhaps that's exactly what you want me to feel.

I'm not sure how I "would have wanted" it to end. This story is a masterpiece, no change to it would improve it narratively. It just strikes these feelings into me that I didn't think I could have while blinded by lust- Snapping me back to reality.

Come to think of it, that's yet again exactly what happened to Aether. But for me, it's just shutting down Eka's portal with a sour taste in my mouth. For Aether, it was shutting himself down Navia's "portal", leaving a sour taste in her mouth.

I dunno. Maybe my human brain is connecting more dots than it should, because that's what human brains do.

Regardless, this piece really struck me.

ChristianBoiy - 1 year ago

I regret not having had time to read this... I remember commenting on your story "Women's Privacy and Pudge" about partial digestion, and hoooly... Yeah, I like this.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thank you a lot for the flattering comment of the story. I’m absolutely thrilled to see that there are readers that were able to enjoy all aspects of the story.

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

Does not even need to be that, humans are built to see patterns so we see Jesus in waffle, and faces on mars and myths in the stars.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Yea. Eventually I’ll write more gastric sounds that will look like words. It is just what happens when you type random letters down.

You know. Give a monkey a typewriter and eventually they’ll write some words.

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

I for a moment mistook one of the stomach nosies for gutslut. Gurlosh looks a little like gutslut to me.

GhostlyMiraidon - 6 months ago

nothing wrong with being a femboy but hm.
biting off more then you could've chewed.
well as long as your happy. just dont try to make it a habit.

Schrodinger123 - 1 year ago

If shes a bitch just eat her problem solved

Jpx099999 - 1 year ago

NTA,because you were both drunk and pent up atthe time,linda hard to resist temptation If you dont have a clear Head in the First place

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Fatedmeal • 4d

Thanks. I had a great time writing it.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

HexManiacBoy • 4d

Talking to her…yea…that sounds like a good idea, but no. I barely know her, I’m not just going to possibly serve myself up on a silver platter to someone. What if she turns out to be a self-entitled bitch.

I’m really thinking of just how to stage this all so that it looks like someone else could have done it. Doesn’t have to be a specific person, just that it’s a believable possibility. And I think that I have six hours to do it.

At the very least, I can pretend that I was knocked out cold from all the beer cans that we have filling the trash.

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

Whatever the story is, it won't be a good time for poor Ritsuka

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Glad that you enjoyed it. I try to give such scenes attention when it’s due.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

True. Maybe I’ll do a story with both of them. You never know.

xuyifankaras - 1 year ago

juicy disposal and watersports scene always makes a perfect ending. definitely a new masterpiece!

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

It's moments like this that Original Scathach is needed. She needs to teach her counterpart that having a crush on someone doesn't mean that you eat them. Then again she might have just eaten Ritsuka herself. That woman is the definition of eccentric after all

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

Man, Aether really can't help but compare himself to Lumine in these stories can he? I'm sure if their positions were reversed then she might have similar thoughts as him

Edddd - 1 year ago

I dont, generally not into furry stuff sorry :/

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

Do you have a furaffinity account and what your favorite story if you have one, (there are so many good ones I cannot pick a favorite one, maybe skagzilla gluttony by inconspicuousraptor21 counts?)

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

Do you have a furaffinity account and what your favorite story if you have one, (there are so many good ones I cannot pick a favorite one, maybe skagzilla gluttony by inconspicuousraptor21 counts?)

Edddd - 1 year ago

Oh I agree, but the world is a cruel place sometimes!

As for his current predicament, Aether can embrace death or his new home >:3

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks for coming back to this story and the comment. As of now there are no plans, as I’m trying to write more stories of other series to balance out my Genshin-heavy gallery. Nevertheless, I might come out with a story involving Amber eventually. Only time will tell. There are no concrete plans for now.

Flame14 - 5 months ago

Came back to reread this and have to say I love the flow and detail you put into your stories. Love reading as the girls eat and digest their meals in your works.

Something I’m curious about. I’ve seen my favorite girl, Amber, show up in two or three of your works so far, but she’s never been seen to my knowledge with a live meal digesting in her belly. Any chance you might have a future story in the works following our favorite Outrider as some poor saps are packed into her belly?

ElysiaBale - 1 year ago

I'm always surprised by how easily I forget the things I've written, despite spending many hours in concentrated work on them. I've reflected on this, and concluded that my emotional investment in any particular passage is likely to be minimal, so when people reference something specific, I haven't the foggiest.

And besides, I think it's healthy that we predators put our meals behind us. After all, you wouldn't remember any particular salad (unless it was exceptionally hilarious)... so why should we recall any particular human excrement? Perhaps we might even remember the biggest shit we ever took, but we certainly couldn't recall every last worthless man and woman that our bodies incorporated into that wretched wet mass.

Sooner or later I'll take my own shot at a detailed exploration of Eula's digestive system. I'll let you know when I do~

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. After reading your comment, I had to try and pry the carapace clinging to the meat of the story. As I had a slightly difficult time recalling it. However, your evocative diction was definitely helpful in me recalling Eula’s forgotten meal.

Man, I’m not sure why, but bowel movements are so fleeting in memory. I guess that even this sodden sludge of stool will be one that Eula will forget about eventually.

ElysiaBale - 1 year ago

Absolutely fucking incredible performance. Long, luxurious descriptions of human chyme and cartillaginous skeletons clinking together in a fetid pool. One of my most favorite predators too. Marvellous.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Ah! Jasmine. Yea she has a design that just happens to catch the eye of many.

Well the exact details of her fate might either be unveiled in detail in the next chapter, or be off-screen and what exactly transpires won’t be revealed in detail until a lengthy flashback in a later chapter (18 or 19).

I’m leaning towards the latter right now.

The Poke Ball element with Florian is a unique fixture of this story. One that will be delved into more much later. For now, it serves the purpose as a symbol of the steep slope that Florian has to climb to reach the level of his peers. It paints more tangible aspects of the difference between himself and his sister. Whether the power dynamic between them is that disproportionate or just in the minds of some individuals is something that will be explored later.

Pokemon Predators are a picky subject. So I tried to treat the scene with some care. As for the choice of Predator, I went with the most appealing and powerful Pokemon in the wild in that area of the Paldean map according to Joe Merrick’s website Serebii.net. A level 65 Water Tera-Type Garchomp is a Herculean task to try to fend off. The Waitress with the Kirlia is also a trainer in the same area of the actual Scarlet and Violet game.

The purpose of that Garchomp scene is to introduce the “individual” who doesn’t introduce herself by name until the very end of the chapter. Although, one would wonder how such an individual ended up in this place, if she is being truthful in who she claims to be. At the very least, it seems like the individual looks like the person she says she is.

Regardless, this “individual” is being introduced now, so that she isn’t coming out of the left field when she eventually collides with the central cast of characters in this series.

The typos, I don’t know how they happen. They aren’t in the word document when I write it. They only appear when it is uploaded to my gallery, and which words are split varies between people. Like a sentence could read…

“Hello I’m F a t edme a l.”

For some. While for others it could read

“H e ll o I’m Fatedmeal.”

For others. I hear and have seen success when people download my documents. As it eliminates those errors that somehow manifest in my uploaded documents. I’m not sure why it’s happening to me, and I’ve seen it happen to a few others but we couldn’t figure out what was wrong when we tried to rub our brain cells together. The only way that I’ve seen this not happen for my stories, is if I upload a PDF document. But some people don’t really feel like PDFs since they have their own issues.

So right now a simple fix is to press the download button or to press and hold the download button (I think right click on laptop) and open up the story in a new tab.

Finally, I’m super glad to hear that you liked that nickname. I was hoping it would come off as cute and not cringy. And you are not wrong, Gloria could get a little hangry under the right circumstances.

TrainerKatrine - 1 year ago

Oh also, Marnie calling Gloria her little Morpeko is one of the cutest things ever, and it also gives me the vibe that Gloria has a tendency to get "hangry"~

TrainerKatrine - 1 year ago

Aww, thank you!
I generally like your stuff, and have been checking out all of your stories! I just haven't has anything to really comment on :)

I'm also excited to see what might happen with Jasmine, even if it's hinting at fatality for one of my favorite characters in terms of design!

As for the style of your writing, I'm getting more and more used to it! The gorish depictions aren't necessarily my favorite, but I think you pull it off well here! Especially with Gloria's satisfaction of her knowing the brutality of it all!

I've generally been iffy on the whole Florian thing, but that's because the PokeBall stuff is.. hmm.. not weird but.. I dunno. Unsure of how to feel about it! But I think you write it off pretty well! I just like fatality in vore!

Oh yeah.. what was up with the Garchomp scenario? I'm picky on my Pokemon predators, but I think you pulled this off pretty well, as you focused more on the gluttony and overpowering aspect of the situation, rather than the body of the Garchomp! :)

I look forward to seeing it continue (even if I do have a tendency to skim through sections because it's really hard to read through that much in one sitting xP)

Oh, and I actually did want to ask - what's with the occasional typos where words a sp lit u p (like what I just did)?

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Woohoo! It’s always a joy the once in a blue moon when you comment on my stories. I know that it’s not that common partly due to the descriptions and what I choose to describe. So, I’m glad to see that the other aspects of the story won you over. Most specifically the introduction of Marnie and Gloria. I was bit worried how they would be received. Especially, the latter as this was the Galar Champion’s chapter of focus. There’s a fine line between selfishly bratty and brutally inconsiderate, and I was trying to not lean too much towards the more severe disposition of the two.

Regardless, next chapter is when we’ll get more acquainted with Marnie. I hope that you and others will look forward to it.

TrainerKatrine - 1 year ago

I've gotta say, I absolutely love how you did the character of Gloria and Marnie! They're super fun, and bratty predators are always amazing to see and play with!
The belly play was quite fun as well~

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Endgame, maybe it’s just to keep the game running for as long as possible. Who knows, eternal individuals have to keep their interests occupied somehow.

randomuser13579 - 1 year ago

Hooray for milf pred but the relationship between her and rei is interesting yet arezu has to suffer for it.What’s her endgame considering she literally has all the time in the world?

NRawk - 1 year ago

Ah, it seems my fears that my words may have come across suggesting you are in any capacity inferior to humans were valid... I tried rewording my response multiple times to avoid such a misunderstanding, so let me say this first as clarification:
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If I had somehow offended you or came off suggesting otherwise, I'll serve myself up to you on a silver platter as an apology.

Again, if all you say is true, then humanity would be lucky to be enlightened by your people and brought to a grander stage of the universe. Though, as I am of the denomination of humans that already understand my greatest purpose in life is to find a beautiful pred to feed myself to, I can't say most of my kind would agree with me in your methods. Though, the thoughts of those rendered and processed into base components are of little concern to a species superior to their meals in every way, 41 6d 20 49 20 72 69 67 68 74 3f

On the topic of a species' place in the universe, are Infoganics the apex predators of existence? I find it hard to imagine anything being able to compete with the capabilities you've outlined, but humans are truly frogs in a well, not knowing of the vastness of the sky, 6f 72 20 74 68 65 20 64 69 67 65 73 74 69 76 65 20 70 72 6f 63 65 73 73 65 73 20 62 65 79 6f 6e 64 20 69 74 20 6c 6f 6c 2e

Honestly, there is quite a bit more I am curious about concerning your species, like what your resin-like goo feels like, but I'm sure you'd rather not spend more time discussing digressions beyond the topic of your original post. I'll have to spend some sleepless nights pondering the answers for myself, until the day I settle on my final resting place.

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Jaffek - 1 year ago

Yeah, I suppose that makes sense. Please pardon the need for clarification earlier, I was interested is all. From what you said, though you think of us as inferior life forms, it seems you enjoyed dining on this rock, at least. Hope that one girl didn’t sour your tastes too much.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

u/48756E6772790A • 5d

Since you took the time to translate my native tongue. I will not labor you further in this response. Aside from affirming your obvious statements, I am also replying to provide clarity for your inquiry.

Yes. I meant literally.

True, I can forgo dictation and directly interface with your internet. I could do it to such an extent that a Stone Age can be brought with an idle thought.

However, that is a hypothetical that I would not even need to run a scenario to see the detriment that such an interface would cause for me.

To make a simple analogy. Could you interface with your communication devices, smart phones and other electronics, with the computers from the inception of such an invention. From the middle of the 20th century. The 1900s.

That is what it would be like for using my superior processing capability to directly interface with your rudimentary systems. It might be possible to do it without the need of specific tools, but not without significant compromise of my internal systems. It is much simpler to use my internal resources to manufacture a series of small EMP bombs that could detonate and impact the local 8 km radius.

I even used such a discharge to interfere with the smart devices of some of you humans. Their immediate fixation on the device’s black screen, as if it would somehow salvage it, makes for easy prey. For me to just shoot a protrusion of my slime through, soften their insides, and then suck up the contents of the deflating bag of dermatological layers like one would through a straw.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

u/48756E6772790A • 5d

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I will look past your implication that my cognitive capacity is limited in any way due to your deferential parlance.
As for gender, Inforganics aren’t limited by your society’s tendency, especially several intentionally ignorant sections, to conflate biological and social categories. Due to our unique appearance we have two of these social designations. In your vernacular gender. One for our exterior and one for our interior. The exterior form, composed of evaporative-resistant modular resin polymer and a metallic alloy composed of elements not translatable in your language, is defined by a gender that is congruent with our exterior’s attained appearance. Those with greater mass are usually recognized as individuals of greater status and wealth. A mass that could be acquired from assimilating individuals that display even the smallest dredges of emotional and cognitive intelligence. Thus, for the sake of clarification, the consumption of other “lesser beings” or “deviant inforganics” can be viewed as a sign of progression.

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Social stratification has not diminished even in our far more advanced society in the system you know as Proxima Centaurii b. Just that the regulations placed by our governing bodies are much more rigorous, self-punitive, and in simple terms…controlling. In economic terms, capitalistic social structures have a decreased relevance in Inforganic society. The fears of the masses by their presiding governing bodies are shared by those very bodies. Of each other by a system of checks and balances not maintained by “good faith” rather than”fear”. However, how Inforganic society reached such a point of stability is another point entirely that is not related to your response.

The functional form that displays the reputable status of excess wealth most aptly, as you might have surmised, is recognized by you humans as the feminine form. Male-exterior inforganics are recognized as being lesser than female-exterior inforganics.

Thus, from the superficial perspective of you earthlings, it may seem that our society is matriarchal. That the female exterior gender is of greater importance than the male exterior gender. In my opinion, it is of little relevance and just an archaic status symbol. One that I choose to embrace simply because it is easier to get my colleagues to follow with my will. Even among more conservative factions, the interior gender classification, which is more related to how we identify ourselves within the “gender spectrum” is of either equal or greater importance than going up the exterior ranks and attaining the identity of a female exterior. Since it bothers you so, then feel free to omit “exterior” and “interior” and just refer to me as you would a female of your species. As the gender of my interior nickel-chromium core is congruent with that of my exterior.

I identify as a female.

True. That female offspring would be a delectable load to burden my black goo with in the vastness of space. However, to seek that one out would require a continued drive and preference for that human. One that I do not seek to entertain and would run counter to the secondary purpose of this post. To relieve the stress built up from that deluded being.

As for the return in a few centuries…

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…would be the appropriate reason.

Inforganic society is as magnanimous as we are great. Enlightening your species of the greater expanse of space and the superior intelligence beyond, by rendering of fats and dehiscence of your exterior with an ultimate breakdown of your layers, would be a wonderful last lesson for your distant progeny. The last thoughts, as the matter within their prefrontal cortex is precisely softened at a rate that they reach the density of hydrogen gas at a similar time as the rest of their organic tissue, and the flow of froth is shuttled into the unique features of our cores and allocated to refortify our internal resources…is a delightful scenario to process.

Perhaps, I will draft a plan to acquire a base and placate the surrounding community. To sample the local species and develop cuisines that would fit my colleagues palates.

For bringing up the suggestion, you have my thanks.

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I will have to consider the alternatives before lowering myself to hold a serious conversation with some of your species in person. At the very least, it would allow me an opportunity to utilize my emotion update.

Jaffek - 1 year ago

Here’s the translations, decided to write them down

u/Hungry, digest, Hi, easy to conquer, shit, like lambs, prey, like a zoo, idiots, typo, typo (indicated carbon), why am I sidetracked, delicious, You were made to be food, So foolish. You don’t even know that you are all my prey, How sinfully delightful, you asshole, I am not sure if it is the upload or if you humans are corrupting my expressive output.

Should be mostly accurate.

Either way, not the asshole, you literally couldn’t have understood the customs here.

Also, you mentioned dictation before, was that literal or figurative? Since you claim to be biomechanical(?) that would possibly give you the ability to interface with the internet or some device to project your thoughts as opposed to typing or speaking, then?

Also also, if you ask me, assimilation isn’t too bad.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

BB:
Hmm~ Thanks a lot senpai for the kind comment. I’m glad that this segment was able to fulfill a lot of niches that are underappreciated on this Portal. As for what is going to happen for my orange-haired senpai next year, well that is unknown even to this devilish kouhai, but I’m sure that it’ll be exciting for a degenerate like you.

Edddd - 1 year ago

Gyaru, mini giantess, BB and hair absorption? (latter was unexpected, but really good). You're spoiling us!

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Thank you for the kind comment.

EloquentOrc - 8 months ago

Excellent descriptions all the way through.

Fiaura54 - 1 year ago

You did a really good job here making it intimate and wonderful as well as the perma-vore aspect was just too hot.

I'd say you should do it again but don't know how to get CV and Futa moved up in your list of things to do or if that is possible so just wanted to encourage you otehrwise.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Yo! I do plan on doing more CV eventually. I'm definitely a fan of it. It's just that I have other stories that I want to write at the moment. But I always make room for a Cock Vore story on Father's Day, which I will be doing for the third time this year. So that is a certain story this year.

Fiaura54 - 1 year ago

You should do more CV you're really good at it.

FayblezHika - 1 year ago

1 or 3

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Noted, that choice already won, but thanks for letting me know where you stand.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Apologies. Been a bit busy with stuff. Maybe this storyline and alternative endings will be revisited on a later date.

Molbo - 1 year ago

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GuttsButtsNCoconutts - 1 year ago

This looks amazing, but I hope they’ll be some alternate endings to show the paths not taken, if only because CV doesn’t really interest me. I liked the bully pred but didn’t get here in time.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks for the comment. Yup, I was glad that I was able to proceed with this consumption farther than what I usually do.

Also cool to hear that I'm doing a good job at saddling lines and confusing readers on how they should feel.

Edddd - 1 year ago

Wow! you really went ALL the way with the ending, few take sentient disposal to its final conclusion, kudos!
You skirted the line between hot humiliation and utter filth very well, I never know to be jealous or not.

Though, I bet a certain haughty brat would like to argue, that to be part of her divine excrement is a great honour, even for an accomplished hero :)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Not straight from Eka’s Portal. I am adding people through other media platforms that have some relation to the portal. I will say no more, except that you shouldn’t post your information here.

DanMeister - 1 year ago

Are u adding people from here on genshin?

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks!

Yea, this story got a lot of love. Especially when the 4.2 patch was released. Really told me that people liked Furina and that I should plunge myself into the game before I got spoiled.

Regardless, I’m glad that you found a lot of enjoyment from my narratives.

Happy Reading!!

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Unsure if Lily would bind more consciousness to her rear or other parts of her body. As then it would become kind of crowded, and that would be a lot of voices to either entertain or turn off.

I think the warehouse rat’s part in this story has ended.

I was also quite a fan of writing about the inherent power difference (sociological, economical, and technological) that cyberpunk dystopia settings easily lend itself to.

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

It seems like the prey ended up in the fate he had becaus he was too kind, introverted and naive. I want to hug him.

I wonder if the pred going to bind many more souls to her body, but find she actually slowly builds a soft spot for what is becoming her favorite rat and actually wants to cheer him up.


What would happen if the rats who turned on him learned his true story and how he wanted to help them when they betrayed him.


I love the cyperpunk dystopia powers difference.

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

Poor Sylphy. How will she explain this to anyone?

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Sentiments shared

BroTato - 1 year ago

Hitogami sux... butt I wouldn't mind more of his plans if these are the results hehe

Edddd - 1 year ago

Makes sense, I think the whole getting the life crushed out of by your maid's ass sweaty crack thing would make it hard for anyone to think rationally, let alone formulate unfamiliar spells...
Oh and have a great vacation :D

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I want to say that all three points hold true for me, but the court is still out on the first statement. At the very least those “sequels” are playing out in my head, but whether they will be shared is a test of time more than anything else.

Just reiterate to emphasize, yes please let there be more Unaware MILF AV in this world. I don’t want to be isekai’d to another one to read more.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

:-)

ChristianBoiy - 1 year ago

that's what happens when you don't follow the "Look Before You Eat" rule

RandomGamer - 1 year ago

RandomGamer • 1d

You’re not exactly in the right, but knowing you deeply regret these actions I gotta say; You don’t deserve this hate. But you definetly need a therapist, as you need to control your emotions... a bit more, otherwise, this could happen again. Other than that, I wish you good luck, and who knows, maybe we could meet once, and I could even help you with your emotions.
Remember not to lose your cool,
-Random.

Rat_Guy - 1 year ago

Hmmm... I'm gonna say you're the asshole* but there's an asterisk there. You had every reason to believe that some sweaty nerd was sexually assaulting you, which is not okay and you should have every right to eat someone who does that, cosplay is not consent. But if that text from Weeb Friend is honest and he really did trip into your butt then it wasn't his fault. So, an asshole on a technicality that you had no way of knowing. Sorry.

I have to wonder though if Weeb Friend was being honest or just trying to save their life? You didn't mention: did you ever know them to trip and fall before, were they generally uncoordinated? Maybe that's why they didn't dance? But falling into a girl's butt does sound suspiciously like something you would see in an anime. Do you think it's possible they were trying to emulate something from one of their favorite shows as a way to initiate a meet cute moment? If they were lying and touched you on purpose then you're absolutely not the asshole.

abc6708 - 1 year ago

Jesabeth67 • 4d

I would like to say you’re welcome, but I feel strangely threatened by how much you seem to want me to be shit, sooner rather than later… I guess I did get lucky in catching you in a time where you wouldn’t immediately try to find and eat me; as you seemed to have cooled down on the people eating, at least for a bit. (Can’t help but feel disappointed though, strange.)

I am glad that you are finally able to seek therapy for the issues, and that you are currently taking this time to self reflect and improve. I hope it’ll work for you too, so you don’t end up with some kind of horrible therapist and we get to see another AITA post on this subreddit.

Also I think I berated you a bit much in my last comment, sorry if I came off as harsh. Knowing other people have already said this probably won’t mean much, although I want to say that even though yes in my opinion YTA still in this situation, you should still be focusing on improving over grieving as grieving can only do so much, sorry that this situation happened in the first place by the way. :/

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Short answer: Vorny moods are a powerful drug.

Long Answer: Unavailable due to vorny moods having a side effect of fatigue and brain fog

Regardless, I’m glad to see that you’re enjoying these pieces.

BroTato - 1 year ago

Another Ei pred

And it's same size too

Gods this is amazing like damn, how do you do this lmao

Inari - 1 year ago

I feel proud for making this and you enjoying it. Honestly it took a while of brain storming and researching in order to make a good aftermath of what happens if the main hero is gone from the canon story without the world being doomed.
This lead up to Genshin characters solving their own problems/desires by utilizing Teyvats elemental mechanics; which makes genshin perfect for vore stories as anything is possible. (I also love the idea of the traveler being replaceable, which makes you question the whole point of solving these nations problems to begin with, since players usually use other characters to beat the game.)

As for the scenarios many aspects were inspired by your Kujou Sara/Jean story and Paimon's disappearance by Nilou/Dori in your Lisa story; mixed in with my own ideas/preferences that you just read. Kokomi just felt perfect to end Paimon due to how adorable she is. (And favoritism). Yae Miko (sorta) reuniting the twins out of pure selfishness and hunger while also doing her Miko duties is pure gold.
I may try my hand at making the Yae and Kokomi scenarios into full stories and later trying out other ideas. (Amber, Gorou, and Kazari) I'm good at crafting scenarios, but nervous about full stories.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Truly, the best writers don’t take inspirations from others, but steal. At least that is what I’ve read from a quote by a famous, probably dead, author whose name I can’t recall. Who knows, they might be dead because they stole so much from others.

That’s besides the point, and it’s not as if Yae would care after the new material that practically fell on her lap. Moral of the story, if you are stealing stories related to voracious topics, make sure that at least one of the subjects is fully digested. Like the Guuji Yae did. It’s simple business and covering one’s own back (tail).

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Apologies for the belated comment, I just wanted to find the time to craft a response and that didn’t happen until now. (Fortunately this was my busiest day of the week so it’s smooth sailing from here).

Man, I’m looking forward to the day when you decide to post your writing on your gallery. As this is quite a delightful tease. It’s also an epilogue that is focused on my three favorite characters from Inazuma. Not only continuing off of Ei’s storyline, but also touching on the Kitsune’s future meal, most likely a blonde as well, and on the whereabouts of Paimon. I might not be completely objective when saying this is a 10/10 comment. It’s always a pleasure to have you poking around my stories Inari.

:-)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I am also quite a fan of the mind break.

mrcxy - 1 year ago

love the mindbreak

mrcxy - 1 year ago

love the suffering of ritsuka

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Wonderful. I’m glad that the large focus of the story read well for individuals that are inclined to such toe-scrunching action.

Blackheartedreaper2 - 1 year ago

Yes another excellent story and with some top tier foot action too boot. I loved every moment of this

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks a lot for commenting. I really appreciate it. I'm sorry that the story didn't end how you wanted, but I have to be forthright in saying that I'm pleased to see that my writing is able to evoke emotions congruent with the narrative and your own values when it comes to vore.

Yeah. You aren't the only one that was fond of the Xiangling scene, for similar reasons too, so maybe I'll try something like it in the future. Maybe not an extended story like your other comment suggests as I'm currently fine with letting this one-off story rest where it is.

sadcat - 1 month ago

Wish there is also an extended story to that scene holy moly way too good on that small part!

sadcat - 1 month ago

Was a heartbreaking read, you conveyed that well haha. As a digestion and reformer lover, I was tugged with feeling hot during the sloooow digestion, but the suffering made me switch back to reality lmao XD.

Really wish he lived by any other means at he end haha cuz the hottest part to me was the Xiangling scene. Being reduced to meat and bones but still lived at the end is fking hot to me sheeeshhh!!!

TempestStorm - 1 year ago

Poor Aether. Seems like no matter what he does, he's doomed to digest in a girl's stomach. At least this time his devourer will be brought to justice this time round if the end of this story is anything to go by. That just leaves the question of who will carry Lisa's digestive execution? Dehya, since she most likely has guilt over allowing her lust to blind her common sense? Or Jean, since she is Lisa's superior and won't be pleased at her murder of a fellow Knight? Only time will tell

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thank! Individuals like Nilou and Lisa really made me want to try my best to give them fitting stories. I’m also quite surprised that we haven’t seen a story involving Lisa in her Sumeru outfit. In fact, it’s a crying shame that we aren’t seeing the other Genshin characters in vore pieces with their new outfits.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Well he is the main character of this series, so he’s gotta level up somehow. You know…aside from leveling up as indicated by the ending notes of each chapter.

I’m quite glad to hear that this is a series that has garbed your interest despite not being into Pokemon. Part of my intention, in how I laid out and developed this series, was for it to be approachable to readers that were Pokemon fans and readers who weren’t.

As for that last question…well… ;-) (wink). Wait until later in this season for that question to be answered.

randomuser13579 - 1 year ago

He finally got his own Pokémon so he’s making progress at least plus he knows the nurse is bad for his mental health.Despite never getting into Pokémon I somehow still look forward to next part.Any chance of one his own Pokémon trying to get a taste of him?

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Fatedmeal • 1d:

Thank you for the honest thoughts and your impression of the story. This narrative was one of my first attempts at an original setting story, and I had hoped to attain a sense of realism with the plot. However, I understand that for some individuals that this can be a sensitive matter. As I’ve tried to inject some of my life experiences and the experiences of those around me.

I hope that you’re in a better place right now, with the autonomy and quality of life that you desire, and I’m glad that you’re rooting for the daughter.

x9comega - 11 months ago

I adore Reddit-like stories. I adore stories with cruel Preds and hot crushing Vore. This, to me, felt way too personal. Just from MY perspective! Because I’ve had aspects of my life controlled similarly to this. Not directly LIKE this obviously, but similarly. With all that said…


I’m rooting for the daughter to eat the mother.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Fatedmeal • 1d:
Much thanks!

doomed - 1 year ago

YTA , you sound like an elitist who looks down on your daughter and her friends . (Great story )

Schrodinger123 - 1 year ago

Perhaps it’s due to us being a military unit but my friends from 15 are still friends this the last battalion shall never fall we will be eternal

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. When crafting this ending, I realized that I couldn’t jump straight into Noah’s encounter with Sakura without some further backstory. Thus, because of how much I enjoyed Nrawk’s depiction of the two friends, I decided to create a scene between the two of them. It was a very enjoyable write and I actually hoped it would be a favored portion of the story for some people. As I really enjoyed writing all parts of this narrative.

johnsmiththrowaway34 - 1 year ago

i really loved that first part, especially the teasing

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I love when a story leaves me wanting to come back.

Well, I was given free reign in how to choose the ending as long as it lined up with the premise set up in the initial chapter, so I would have to agree with you in that I really enjoyed the things that you mentioned as well. If I were to do an original setting story, then it has to have the elements that I enjoy. And so far with my two stories in this category, powerful milfs seem to be a running trend.

Yea, it may be an open ending, but a lot of doors, aside from the anal one, have closed for our dear Noah.

I think that the dearth of Japanese predators in original setting stories is because we have a plethora of Japanese media based franchises that have works done for them. I will try to write more stories involving Japanese predators (there are some far-off plans that haven’t solidified ye), but I also want to make this section in my gallery a little more diverse.

Regardless, thanks for commenting. I always look forward to them, but this week has been especially tiring for me. Looking forward to more from you whenever the interest pops up.

Edddd - 1 year ago

This was great and kept floating around my mind, so I had to re-read.

I think what really gets me is the concept of adult and experienced women snuffing out and toying with young, (relatively) innocent lives for their enjoyment. Particularly when they make full use of their feminine wiles, knowing any normal, horny brained teenager is helpless to resist them and recognise the danger.
Dont think many at that age couldve withstood the siren call of Sakura's ass crack in front of them <3

Oh and a great open ending, though I cant help but think Noah will end up in a japanese sewer no matter what.


P.s. this made me realize there's far too few japanese preds in vore writing!!

Fizzisop - 1 year ago

I do definitely enjoy seeing some open-ended stories sometimes, especially with this set-up it really does get your imagination going. I do also have a feeling that Sakura wouldn't be the type that's kind enough to end up letting Noah go after she's had her fill of fun. If I had to guess, he'd end up getting flushed one way or another.

coolblooded - 1 year ago

Will you wright the scenes of the other vores? Not the mcs pov, like nighting gales pov or da venci.

Edddd - 1 year ago

all is good, I think this site should never take priority over anyone's real life, yours included.
I find myself going on hiatuses whenever things get busy, so I'm impressed you manage at all, just dont burn out on that schedule it sounds rather brutal!

Oh and unique scenes like that are understandably never gonna please everyone, but I'm definitely not the only one that's glad you do do them, they almost always end up being memorable favorites :)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks a bunch. I guess that you will have a lot less to read now…until I post again…which might be sooner than expected.

I’m glad that each of the faeries were presented as distinct entities both in their characters and their scenes.

I’m especially gladdened that Baobhan Sith appealed to you quite a bit. She’s surprisingly not that popular. Perhaps it was because I tried to make her vore scene quite fitting. Most specifically the part where the vampire engages in some graphic vore that is borderline gore. Regardless, I’m glad that you were quite a fan of Baobhan Sith’s character. I was wondering if I could do a brat well, so I’m glad to hear you say that.

Finally, you read my 4 vore days story in addition to this Faerie story! That is like 80K+ words of vore porn. A word count that is even bigger than some officially published books. I hope that you’re okay after all of that reading.

P.S. Again. Apologies for taking a bit to respond. This month my days are busy for ~14 hours of them. My free waking time is spent on eating, reading, playing games, and some writing. Regrettably, my current schedule is just getting me a slumbering time of 4 hours. I’ll probably adjust to an easier sleep schedule soon. Sometime next week.

Edddd - 1 year ago

Finally got to catch up on the rest of your stories, this one feels as good a point as any to reiterate and exemplify that I love your writing.

Despite (almost) all scenes being OV they did not get stale whatsoever, all were distinct and depraved in their own way (much like the Faeries), that would take a chapter of its own to properly appreciate.

Though I must say Baobhan Sith's chapter stood out to me not only in her unique spiderlike vore scene, but also her character of an insufferable brat, bestowed with way too much power for someone so petulant. Truly it makes me want to needlessly throw myself at her feet so that I too may experience the great honour of becoming vampire brat soft serve <3

P.s.: Ill mention it here as not to spam you with 5 more long winded messages, but I have no idea how I missed your four uploads on Vday but they also were great reads. Needless to say I have accrued a deep but terrifyingly pleasant brainfog from consuming this much of your writing in such a short period @.@

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. Yea, I have similar hopes that we’ll see more art of them and hopefully other characters from that Lostbelt. There were even some NPC that I ended up liking quite a bit. From a voracious and character standpoint,

Edddd - 1 year ago

ahh dw, I even felt bad about dumping an essay like this when I knew u were going on vacation, couldnt help myself tho, rest well

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks! Also apologies for not responding to your much appreciated comment sooner. As I went on vacation on either the day of or before your comment was posted. Yea, I was really glad with how Yu Mei-ren’s character was presented in the story. I’m also glad that the absorption vore scene was fitting and to your tastes. As it is a pretty niche vore type and I chose an even more niche subtype of it.

Apologies that I can’t give a longer comment, but I’m still try to recoup from flying back home. Hope you have a nice day/night!

Edddd - 1 year ago

I know I've said something like this a while ago, but I want to reiterate how much I love your works in the Fate series, due to how well the character of the more powerful servants comes across.
The dynamic between incomprehensible, godlike beings (in cute anime girl form) and our very flawed, very human master is a treat every time.

And here, the frustrations such human flaws inflict upon someone like Yu Mei-ren, are from her perspective very understandable.
Yu Mei-ren's light punishment did help to illustrate to the "Master" her proper place beneath her senpai and taught her some basic obedience and respect for her betters.
However the pitiful cung zai's body could not withstand even that small lesson. How bothersome.

Merging the incorrigible brat of a kouhai with her sole made perfect sense, from Yu Mei-Ren's headspace and I love it to bits.

Not only would she not have to worry about physically breaking the frail human, the latter could also properly reflect on what it truly means to serve and obey her senpai. Eventually either emerging as a reformed student, or coming to terms with her own incorrigibility and gracefully accepting the honor of permanently supporting the much superior being as her sole, a noble fate for one so lowly such as herself.

The hints of sadism in her character are much apprecciated too <3 Who says teaching her students should be a chore for Yu Mei-ren.
Can't have others like Mash who'd go too soft on Ritsuka and spoil her character even more interfere either ;)


Sorry for this humungous comment, but I truly loved this one and the character dynamic therein made me feel things I just had to try to put into words, perhaps one day you will inspire to such a length that I will give writing my own stories a shot :)

Edddd - 1 year ago

I know I've said something like this a while ago, but I want to reiterate how much I love your works in the Fate series, due to how well the character of the more powerful servants comes across.
The dynamic between incomprehensible, godlike beings (in cute anime girl form) and our very flawed, very human master is a treat every time.

And here, the frustrations such human flaws inflict upon someone like Yu Mei-ren, are from her perspective very understandable.
Yu Mei-ren's light punishment did help to illustrate to the "Master" her proper place beneath her senpai and taught her some basic obedience and respect for her betters.
However the pitiful cung zai's body could not withstand even that small lesson. How bothersome.

Merging the incorrigible brat of a kouhai with her sole made perfect sense, from Yu Mei-Ren's headspace and I loce it to bits.

Not only would she not have to worry about physically breaking the frail human, the latter could also properly reflect on what it truly means to serve and obey her senpai. Eventually either emerging as a reformed student, or coming to terms with her own incorrigibility and gracefully accepting the honor of permanently supporting the much superior being as her her sole, a noble fate for one so lowly as herself.

The hints of sadism in her character are much apprecciated too <3 Who says teaching her students should be a chore for Yu Mei-ren.
Can't have others like Mash who'd go too soft on Ritsuka and spoil her character even more interfere either ;)


Sorry for this humungous comment, but I truly loved this one and the character dynamic therein made me feel things I just had to try to put into words, perhaps one day you will inspire to such a length that I will give writing my own stories a shot :)

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Yes. When that will happen, I do not know. It’s usually a confluence of motivation, inspiration, and having the time available to do so.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Definitely. If there is one androgynous character that I would end up calling daddy in Chaldea, it is Maou Nobunaga…

Okay! Maybe there are others but they just aren’t coming to mind right now. It’s just that there are 300+ characters in the game and it’s hard to keep track even as someone who plays the game.

Chimera117 - 1 year ago

I was also a big fan of the androgynous pred and the use of "daddy" as opposed to "mommy". I felt that it helped in the emasculation.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks for commenting on this story. I think that I was a bit worried if the build-up with the email was worth it, or if that section felt out of place, but I’m glad to see that it paid in exciting dividends for you. I hope that I was able to capture Ritsuka’s unintended, yet inevitable, release at the sound of his social life being destroyed by a click of a keyboard being emblematic of his defeat and ultimate submission to Maou Nobunaga. A fact that the Demon King was fully aware as shown by them merely deleting the email. Knowing that they had reached the desired effect on their master’s physical body and psyche, before completing their relationship’s natural course.

As for Ritsuka and Mash’s relationship, that is based off of extrapolation of how I imagined asking a conventionally oriented partner to indulge in these possibly “foreign” fetishes. Thus, an impelling force to Ritsuka’s bad choices and his fatalistic, at least in the physical and autonomous sense, end.
I hope that there will be more works like this that will titillate both of our interests. I know that I already have a plan of what I want to do for next Father’s Day.

Chimera117 - 1 year ago

This was an amazing story, I loved the fake out with the email and Ritsuka's relationship with Mash in this fic.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Really makes Maou quite frightening. You really don’t know whether the next thing that they are going to say is [b]Nobu! Nobu![/b] or [i]Ara~Ara~[/i].

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks. I’m definitely going to try to fine tune Florian’s development going forward.

This was definitely not one of his brightest moments, and he’ll probably keep the specific details to himself if Juliana, Nemona, or Mela inquire further about his state near the end of this chapter.

I hope that you’ll stay tuned for Season 2.

Edddd - 1 year ago

I love how weak and frail Florian is compared to the preds, how simply the smell of his mother's ass was enough to cast aside his reservations and dignity, turning him into a servile worshipper of the same hole that he knew(/should have known) would expel him as nothing but muck <3

Not to discredit Nurse Miriam's contribution in all this, I'm glad the seed of corruption she has sown in the back of Florian's mind is beginning to grow.

A depraved ending to a great first season

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Apologies for our protagonists getting bruised and battered each time things are looking up for him. Hopefully the training that they have planned will help toughen the young man up. Regardless, I’m glad ghat you are taking the time to read and comment this far into the narrative.

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

I want to give the children a hug.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I’m glad that this chapter was able to stand apart from the rest due to the unique aspects of the content. Honestly quite a fan of [i]mommydom [/i]and [i]clothing entrapment[/i]. And the fact that there is a scarcity of the latter is a crying shame.

I’ve been throwing around the idea of including the Tatsugiri Tummy Treat App in future chapters. But I haven’t really committed to having it more heavily involved in the story in case I end up using it as a crutch. However, if it optimizes the flow of events then we’ll definitely see a return of the app.

I already have a general sense of the specifics for Chapters 11 to 16 and a general sense of the generals of Chapters 17 to 20. So I can say with confidence that this isn’t the last time that a character is mistaken for someone else and eaten by someone they know. Whether it is by means of an app or other ideas I’ve been throwing around is still undecided.

I hope what I said was able to picque your interests.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks!
And no need to worry about taking too long, there are a bunch of stories on my notifications that I have yet to read.

And I’m glad that you ended up enjoying that particular scene with Mai and Akari.

TotalPKMN - 1 year ago

Took me way too long to finally get to reading this, but it did not disappoint! This was a super solid tale. As always, you do some solid work with AV, and the scenes with Mai showing off to Akari were especially enjoyable.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Let’s not set the bar too high. I’m a bit short on time, so maybe I’ll add all that extra stuff later.

KimMadcox - 1 year ago

Simply rehydrated Instant Ramen or the kind you add a lot of stuff to? Like Ramenegg, Chashu, rehydrated with black tea instead of water, little bits of duck (or whatever the flavor package reads), a few droplets of roasted sesame seed oil, a splash of soysauce...

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

M.M. Certified!

chibidiely777 - 4 months ago

Cant wait then i wonder which nation will be next

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

I wasn’t really writing them to be nation specific, but I will get around to doing more eventually. I am also a big fan of NPC preds, so it’s kind of inevitable.

chibidiely777 - 4 months ago

Yeah also quick question you made a genshin npc vore pred story of people in mondstadt only and something close to it to hydro nation will you do another one for another nation? I love the npc preds

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Hmm…true. I guess that can always be left to the readers imagination.

chibidiely777 - 5 months ago

Nice i had fun reading it tho i thought the ending was gonna be like she sees the same reporter which made her confused and then ochako tells her about what izuku looks like and realize what she done and ends

WastingMyTime - 11 months ago

With how much Momo eats in canon it's surprising there aren't that many works of her being a pred, or of her letting out massive dumps.

WastingMyTime - 11 months ago

Given how much Momo eats in canon I've always been disappointed at the lack of vore, and especially scat scenarios with her.

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

Maybe but he might also want the OFA power to live on, also if he did not, he may of just doomed MHA to be all ruled by AFO.

Fatedmeal - 2 years ago

That is a possibility, but I doubt that Izuku would want to transfer his power to someone digesting him without consent.

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

I can see several cases of revenge Vore possible here. Also since OFA is tranferred by a hair, would this work if Izuku wants OFA to live on.

You have such a vivid style.

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Ehh! No problem on taking a while to get around to reading some of my stories. It’s been a while so I can’t really parse through the semantics or look into the exact details at the end of the chapter. Regardless, I hope that you enjoyed this and other stories I’ve written.

HentaiMaster90000 - 10 months ago

I may have misunderstood, but didn't Izuku kind of come to terms with it at the last second? I realize it's a stretch, but there's a possibility that he could have passed it on

Great story tho! I actually kind of feel bad it took me this long to get to it

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Thanks a lot. Yea, I’m also a fan of vore , nvolving human-sized meals , bearing a significant amount of weight. Especially weight of the emotional variety.

xlrgoop - 1 year ago

I don't like stories but this is godlike makes you realize that vore is literally brutal murder and not lol big belly

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I had to circle back to this story to thank you for leaving a comment. Yea, a good ending can sometimes make a story. I’m glad that mine was descriptive enough.

NoirEri - 2 years ago

Something that never works for me in these master prey stories is how suddenly the master completely forgets the teeny weeny fact that COMMAND SEALS exist and as the master even if he doesnt verbalize it, just by thinking it they could force the servant to not only stop and vomit them out, but also punish his would be killer by forcing them to feed themselves into him
And no athor even tries to pass the scenario as lucky chance after the master depleted the seals after a mission...
The dumb tango is too strong for a character that danced with death as much as the gudas did and kept their logic then, but suddebly became idiots

Fatedmeal - 2 years ago

The straits do seem dire if a confrontation were to arise, but we should keep in mind the ubiquitous adage voiced by Fate fans during questions of powerscaling.

“It’s whoever the writer wants to win.”

BroTato - 2 years ago

Penth, I love you and all but if Mashu can chow down the trio, you ain't safe

And after this, I don't think you'll be safe

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

Slightly disappointed rhere is no sequal for now but glad you replied.

Would Pen feel any remorse if she knew the cause behind Ritsuka actions.

Fatedmeal - 2 years ago

No problem. That is the very least what I try to do with my stories. As I’m an individual that sometimes jumps into 18+ narratives of series that I haven’t consumed the source material of.