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And there it is folks...
The ending i've been subtly building up to since the very beginning!
The mastermind's plan comes to fruition!
Did you see that coming?
Did you notice anything amiss?
Does it make sense in hindsight?
When you look back at all the previous pages.
Was it... Interesting?
Tell me what you think of the whole thing below, and finally...
Thanks for sticking around to the end.
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Posted by BlazingAce 8 years ago Report
I was looking forward to a leshawk finish though.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Whatever do you mean?
Was it not me who finished it?
Posted by Siorche 8 years ago Report
I think he moreover meant that he wanted to see the /aftermath/ of such a big stuffing.
Posted by TheCrimsonWolfe 7 years ago Report
I agree.
Posted by Artist-san 8 years ago Report
Chica. What a traitor.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
No actual name given.
Posted by Artist-san 8 years ago Report
I know, but I have to call her something. :/
Posted by chaotic123 8 years ago Report
how about a clever fly
instead of getting one animal one after another and having to wait to digest and fly again, she decided to trick the girl to eat all the other then eat her to get a nice full meal
Posted by TinkuTink 8 years ago Report
Pfhahaha, the twist! That was good.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked!
Posted by TinkuTink 8 years ago Report
Also gotta say, I dunno why, but I really really like the design of that fly girl, a lot honestly.
Posted by nnn4463 8 years ago Report
Wow, not that is a great ending
Sad to see the cute lady get eaten but that little fairy needed a nice meal and she makes that big belly look good ^^
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
She makes it enormous.
Posted by nnn4463 8 years ago Report
Tiny preds are the best ^^
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Deviousness! I love it. XD I see the hint now in the comic before this. Very sneaky. Chica got herself a big meal out of all this.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
But... The fly hasn't been given a name.
I'm not the word on spanish. But I believe "Chica" is the female form of "Child"
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
I know. I just figured that was the easiest way to refer to her. XD
Posted by SlasherFiction 8 years ago Report
"Chica" is Spanish for "young girl".
Posted by Royal_Starlord 8 years ago Report
XD
Posted by F1reDem0n 8 years ago Report
You sneaky devil leshawk!
On the page that says she swallowed a cow, there is a small fly drawn on the right side of the picture, just below the section of text that sits at the upper right hand corner. I am guessing that that is Chica flying out from the Old Woman's backside?
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
That is the fly, yes. Who's name is not chica...
Posted by F1reDem0n 8 years ago Report
Oh my apologies. I was confused because the panel showing the old woman's eye makes it seem like she is calling out the Fly's name. Which I though was Chica. Sorry.
Posted by kinglaugher 8 years ago Report
WHAT A TWIST :D Loved it!!
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Mortaven 8 years ago Report
XD YES! Never expected it, but my favorite of the girls (The fly, Chica?) somehow won in the end! X3 ehehe, she so kewl/cute/hawt/devious...>X3
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Call her the fly.
I am glad your waifu won the hunger games.
Posted by Mortaven 8 years ago Report
-w- *Crosses fingers for her return*
Posted by noisekeeper 8 years ago Report
You kept the original ending and yet made it better.
I LOVE IT!
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Why thank you! What did you like most about it?
Posted by noisekeeper 8 years ago Report
Aside from the small pred eating larger prey that I am always a fan of, I really liked the designs you did for all the characters, especially the old lady who has a nice looking maturity about her without being too old looking.
Posted by TongueCuddlingLouse 8 years ago Report
Sweet, love the twist there :D Funny enough, while the ideas been done before, this is by far my favorite, really adore the designs here and the choices in imagery. Will say though, I'm surprised this didn't end in scat (really like the implied digestion, sorta wish we'd get to see inside as they all get turned to soup) XD
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
I just felt like she was too nice an old lady to wait until the others digested, and that the whole debacle happens within one day. Same clothes, you see?
Posted by hamletvalley 8 years ago Report
*claps*
I didn't see it coming at all Leshawk :3 thanks for sharing it!
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Your welcome
Posted by [Dinobonoid] 8 years ago Report
All according to keikaku.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
(Keikaku means plan)
Posted by Doreedo 8 years ago Report
Well, I didn't expect that. I was honestly expecting a more "explosive" ending... Though I guess that's just because I like that more... Anyway, great comic!
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
I like ignoring the obvious endings
Posted by Doreedo 8 years ago Report
Was this the ending you always had planned? I'd love to see how you would show the other possible endings, although I doubt you'll ever revisit this. I still really like your art style.
Posted by wiseguy288 8 years ago Report
O_O *...Applauds*
Lesawk, you magnificent bastard! That was a great ending, I can't wait for the next one.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thsnk you! What next one?
Posted by wiseguy288 8 years ago Report
Pic/comic/Art thingy
Posted by martyr 8 years ago Report
Dastardly flygirl! x3
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
She was behind it from the beginning...
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Hahahaha, that's funny.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by johnyouman 8 years ago Report
Well done! Will we ever see the qt Spanish woman again?
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Well, i don't know... Depends on her popularity...
Posted by johnyouman 8 years ago Report
I would have to say my favorite is the Centaur Smuggler and the Spanish women in this comic series. Once again, you are very talented.
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
perfect~
LOVE tiny preds~
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Are you happy I ended with that?
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
I'd be happier with full digestion x3 but happy enough<3
Posted by marader4 8 years ago Report
Lovely comic, though would be fun to see alittle messy finish ^^
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Already done the comic. Took the whole weekend...
I'm finished with this little sequence.
Posted by marader4 8 years ago Report
Ok, twas a fun sequence to see completed ^^
Posted by KlinKitty 8 years ago Report
Love the whole comic! Tiny preds are awesome, so that's just the cherry on top of a great bit of gluttony <3
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thank you!
I'm glad with how well it went. Fave part?
Posted by KlinKitty 8 years ago Report
Oohf, hard to say, but I think I'd lean towards the ending. Just because I have a big soft spot for tiny preds, and it's rare. But really, the whole thing is awesome!
Posted by UnhingedKadavre 8 years ago Report
Loved it. I love Micro preds. Wish there were more of them.
Posted by meowcatmeow 8 years ago Report
The spanish women is very attractive and cute! =3
Posted by Hayden 8 years ago Report
I'm sure alot of people would love an alternate ending to this involving the lovely lady coming out ontop.
Not that this entire series isn't lovely.
Posted by Doreedo 8 years ago Report
I'd like to see that too!
Posted by Hayden 8 years ago Report
As I said, I think alot of us would too.
Buuut... In the end, it's the artists choice alone.
Posted by Themastermushroom 8 years ago Report
The moral of this story is, not let's you consume by hunger to ask help or you became a lunch for another predator, small or huge is are.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Wut?
Posted by Themastermushroom 8 years ago Report
I mean i get it all, but i never hear that rhyme.
Posted by ECHasPortal 7 years ago Report
This isn't actually the ending to the original story, if that's what you're implying. Leshawk's confused because your grammar is a little... off?
Posted by Themastermushroom 7 years ago Report
Yep, sorry about that.
Posted by Thagrahn 8 years ago Report
Any chances of getting to see all the characters together in a group farewell?
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Very little chance, to be perfectly honest...
Posted by Zalzas 8 years ago Report
Multiple prey, a tiny pred, and betrayal, all things I love! Great comic!
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thank you! Favorite part or girl?
Posted by Zalzas 8 years ago Report
Oh the ending was my favorite part for sure, I loved how the fly had this all planed out so she could eat up all those cute girls at once without a struggle.
As for favorite character, I did really like the old Woman. Its a nice change of pace to see a more mature woman as a pred, and an unwilling one at that. She looked rather cute too. I loved how the situation just got more and more out of hand for her, and how concerned she was for all the people she swallowed.
Posted by h0f 8 years ago Report
This was great fun~
Though i don't understand how the fly girl got out of there. Musta missed that.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Check page 2, 3, 5, and the last frame of page 7.
In that order.
I'm glad you liked it! What was your favorite part, or favorite girl?
Posted by Occulore 8 years ago Report
That's going to be one fat fly.
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
She should have considered her cholesterol beforehand.... Now she'll pay the price!
Posted by Occulore 8 years ago Report
Yeah, by her being extremely gassy, and a constant pit stop to the loo~
Posted by NekoYuki 8 years ago Report
I sorta hoped to see her swallowed by a lamia. Oh well
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Eh?
EEEEHHH?
Why a lamia? There's none in the original rhyme?
Posted by night22 8 years ago Report
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
FUCKIN AMAZING
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Thank you! And I'm so glad you liked it.
What was your fave part?
Posted by night22 8 years ago Report
MY fave part would have to be the old woman right before the fly eats her.
Posted by chaotic123 8 years ago Report
what happened between the 1st and 2nd panel
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Nothing, actually.
Posted by chaotic123 8 years ago Report
i mean what was the plan and why did she swallow the horseperson
Posted by Deviantfan16 6 years ago Report
She accidentally swallowed her
Posted by chaotic123 8 years ago Report
did the girl and the wasp related as all e.g. family, friend
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
Probably closer to friend.
Posted by Razgriz 8 years ago Report
A centaur yay! :D
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
you like em?
Posted by Razgriz 8 years ago Report
I love them.
Posted by Rendezvore 8 years ago Report
This is a favorite rhyme and one of the best vore versions I've seen, so far. Very cute, whimsical, and funny, with a style almost like children's book illustrations. And I also like that the woman pred was reluctant and it went from micro prey to micro pred just because it could.
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
I'm glad i went beyond what you expected!
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
That's... wow. Wierd.
Posted by cooleatme 8 years ago Report
Cutest surprise pred tho
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
Flies are evil. Always rubbing their hands like they're making nefarious plots.
Posted by Ezio45 8 years ago Report
I know she get out her butt. but sadly cant say I know she eat her, seem like thay were friend tho kinda sad. but neat story
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
Thank you, then.
Posted by algog8 8 years ago Report
Is she even full?
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
I have never seen mention of a fly ever being full.
Posted by algog8 7 years ago Report
You go fly!
Posted by Zen_Coyote 8 years ago Report
I was actually hoping everyone would be shit out unharmed like I've seen in at least one of your other works. I thought that was the way this was going too with the first couple of pages.
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
But everything changed when the fire nation attacked
Posted by missingno 8 years ago Report
and then the fly became too fat to fly
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way that she should be able to fly. Her wings are too small to get her fat little body off the ground. She, of course, flies anyway. Because she doesn't care what humans think is impossible.
Posted by Phanto 8 years ago Report
How long is that going to take to digest?
Posted by leshawk 8 years ago Report
not quick.
Posted by CrimsonShadow 8 years ago Report
I loved this whole thing!
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
Fave part?
Posted by CrimsonShadow 7 years ago Report
Probably the ending since I love micro preds.
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
thanks, then!
Posted by acualsims 8 years ago Report
Loved the whole thing and all the characters too, I even loved the twist ending. But I couldn't help but feel sad for the old Mexican lady because she was my favorite out of all the characters, and I hope you make more art with her in it.
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
She's pretty popular, ain't she?
Posted by Arta_Shrike 8 years ago Report
I was looking for Chrisis's take on this old rhyme when I found yours as well. I liked how cute and silly it was, and then the next thing I knew I had perused your entire gallery. Yeah, you've earned a watch.
Posted by leshawk 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it.
I'm a bit bummed that i wasn't the first to do it.
Posted by Snakesolid21 6 years ago Report
The Emperium would commend that women for eliminating those Abhuman scum, but she did it such a slaaneshian way thay could only mean one thing...... HERESY!!!
atleast she was sent to the immaterium, even if it was by but another lowly Abhuman wretch
By the by, like your drawing style(even if this post is quite old by the time i am typing this). Art is a dying hobby in the Emperium of Man, replaced with the crafting of the grand war machines that are titans and the even larger Dreadnaughts
Posted by Flara 5 years ago Report
And now I'm imagining a post-vore picture, this is amazing
Posted by Undernom 5 years ago Report
Still great~
Posted by Nightmare49 2 years ago Report
oh man i remember this old comic.