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Tanya is determined not to make waves at a fancy dinner party, but the family dog makes that difficult.

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This was the story idea that won the vote I put up a while back for what I should write next. I am home sick today and decided to write it up. I might do two or three more variations of this, centered around shrinking and/or vacuums instead of full size and dog.

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JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 6 years ago Report

Lol, I wonder if Tanya is the same little girl that got swallowed by a neighbor's cat in a more-vore picture series.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/343881
https://aryion.com/g4/view/343881

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 6 years ago Report

Sorry, same picture twice, this is the second one.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/343882

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

It would explain her lack of a major reaction.

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 6 years ago Report

Lol, I wonder if this is going to end up as one of your next stories.

Casaroja

Posted by Casaroja 6 years ago Report

Did she get digested? ovo

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

The official answer is "Maybe?" But in my mind, she ends up unceremoniously pooped out, whole and intact (though a good deal more embarrassed) when the dog takes his next walk.

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 6 years ago Report

Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 6 years ago Report

Oh my god! Please, Please, please, please, please write a short epilogue containing that scene! I love this story, particularly the attitudes of everyone involved.

I'd really like to see what everyone is thinking or saying as the dinner party ends, and also what the owner has to say after Tanya gets pooped out.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

We shall see!

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 6 years ago Report

P.S.
This is my new favorite thing on the whole site.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Golly!

sweetladyamy

Posted by sweetladyamy 6 years ago Report

One of my OCs is definitely fond of being swallowed whole by canines (not just dogs but any of the canine family), and this scene reminded me of Anabel, a transgirl who lives off the money she makes from prostitution, and happily throws in vore on the side.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm not usually one for this sort of story, but I kind of enjoyed the idea enough to give it a try.

sweetladyamy

Posted by sweetladyamy 6 years ago Report

I can also relate to being unable to make friends unless they're animals. But that's really society's fault, and I'll leave it at that.

Uryx

Posted by Uryx 6 years ago Report

I'd prefer just the vacuums without the shrinking, but I'm sure I'll enjoy at any rate~

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I do like a squishy vacuum vore.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report

Be nice if she gets out safely

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Unless explicitly stated otherwise, it's generally safe to assume that the characters in my stories (particularly non-commissions) end up safe and sound (though probably a bit smelly and damp) in the end.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report

That’s one of the things I like about your work.

CowboyHat

Posted by CowboyHat 6 years ago Report

Wow! Super well written. Great work

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

heromc

Posted by heromc 6 years ago Report

That was super interesting! I loved how casual she was while still freaking out inside, great story all around! What a unique take on casual.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it!

Bright

Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report

I enjoyed this story.

I like how the character is like: "Don't make a scene, try to fit in, oh no I'm being eaten by a dog."

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Hey, we've all been there.

Throat_Wolf

Posted by Throat_Wolf 5 years ago Report

I do love this sort of story. I tend to wonder what the other guests thought of that, and what the hosts thought, and if it's a common sort of thing to happen there. And whether it helped or hurt her business prospects. :)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

I like to imagine it's an uncommon thing for hosts and guests alike, but they just thought "Well, she's seems okay with it. She must know what she's doing. May as well leave her to it."

Good to hear from you, by the way! It feels like ages.

CowboyHat

Posted by CowboyHat 2 years ago Report

I always enjoy coming back to this one! Maybe its the relatable social anxiety...

lint231

Posted by lint231 1 year ago Report

An all-timer. Stuck in my head for ages. The mix of nonchalance and slow escalation works really well. Cool to see less-common reactions, I really like it!

BrokenBees

Posted by BrokenBees 2 months ago Report

I still read this story very frequently, I love how much she tries to avoid being trouble while being in trouble. 10/10