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Chapter 1 (read first): https://aryion.com/g4/view/743200
Chapter 2a: https://aryion.com/g4/view/743300
Chapter 2b: https://aryion.com/g4/view/746822
Chapter 2c: You are here!
(Read these three in any order.)
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Ah, the town of Merry-Upon-Avon. A blissful suburban retreat from the hustle and bustle of big city life...
Where humans can live happily, tended by anthro servants, without a care in the world.
...Of course, EVERY small town has its own little quirks!
Like how nobody in Merry-Upon-Avon remembers further back than twenty years.
Or how the humans don't have to work, and are simply encouraged to fill up with food, have children, and relax.
Or how *hungry* the anthros look, especially as they all approach the twentieth anniversary of the town's founding.
And surely it's just a coincidence, how anyone who asks questions about such things tends to "move away" very suddenly, without even telling their family and friends.
...Or at least, that's what the anthros assure the human citizens the next day, before they quietly excuse themselves to unclog the plumbing.
Or, as my friend tarenge said: "The whole thing feels like an episode of the Twilight Zone shot in a porn studio. And that's a major compliment!"
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I know this fourth chapter has been a LONG time coming. It's taken me ~9 months to pull it together correctly. I don't know if the final chapter ever WILL get done (with male prey), but we'll see!
I’ve published multi-part stories before, but this is slightly different. After reading Chapter 1, the other four should each be understandable as a stand-alone story.
This story takes place in the Graduation setting, where most of my other stories are set -- but in a very different part of the world, where humans are treated as livestock rather than pets or family members. This lets me scratch some more degrading itches than my other stories. And an observant reader might notice some Easter Eggs and characters that connect to my other works!
This story will contain nonfatal cooking and preparation, as well as fatal vore and moderate disposal, but NO pain, gore, or blood.
This is an interesting story -- it began its life as a very long commission I bought from bunnywrites!
But with their agreement, I edited and expanded significantly beyond the first (incredibly hot) draft they delivered to me, and ended up as a collaboration.
I’m hopeful that Bunny can enjoy my revised version… but assume all the hottest parts were written by them!
And give Bunny a commission and/or a favorite, they write great stuff!
Posted by vixingirl 2 years ago Report
First
hehehehehe
*foxo screams*
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Hope you enjoy it~
(I'd love to hear your thoughts.)
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Posted by Omny87 2 years ago Report
Like I've said before, while I don't particularly enjoy all the references to shitting (it honestly starts to get rather silly after a while) the rest of the interactions between anthros and their human prey were excellent! I like this sort of "casual" talk between pred and prey, where the anthros treat humans like a cross between cattle and house pets. A nice mix between caring, condescending and callous, but always seeing them as food. I also like this kind of light cooking and "food processing" type stuff the prey are subjected to. Not straight-up butchery and roasting dead meat, just being wrapped up, boxed up, and shipped off to be sold in a store, then taken home, topped with various seasonings and ingredients, and cooked in a nonlethal but quite sexy fashion. The addition of a girl in the fridge was both amusing and hot as well, ironically. Poor girl, treated not just as food but mere leftovers!
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Don't worry, the lady in the fridge will be food tomorrow! XD
And I'm very glad you liked it, frequent references to disposal aside.
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Makes one wonder.
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
How so?
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
To be fair, how this world came about, in general, and how humans ended up as food for everything else, even herbivores, how are humans still around - mainly because humans are not a very efficient animal to use as a source of food/livestock, because if a Predator eats a Human every day, then the Human Population would become extinct after a while - especially since it takes over ten years, at least 16, for a human to become mature enough to breed, while most livestock animals take under three years.
I'm also curious about the ratio of Predator to Human, and just how often they eat a human. At one point, I did some math, and assuming 1 Predator per 1,000 Humans, with the humans being of the age of Maturity - a human per day, the population lasts under three years, not exactly enough time to start next generation, while one human every month will last about 80 years, and be on generation 4 by the time Gen 0 are all ate, while one human per week will allow Gen 0 to last just under 20 years, enough time to have the next generation start to be ready.
(Also, see People Farms and To Serve Man over on TVTropes, as they explain why having humans as a main source of food/livestock isn't usually advisable. Of course, it's a slightly different story if there's other sources of meat for Predators, and Humans are a delicacy that one only has if they have money - let's face it, it costs $200,000 to raise one human to maturity, maybe less if school is tossed out, and human livestock only wear clothing during times walking around naked isn't viable, with everyone wearing identical clothing, but there's still medical bills, food costs, shelter, and other basic utilities, just to keep the human alive long enough to be of breeding age.)
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
I've actually run an in-depth Monte Carlo simulation of predator/prey populations in Graduation and... Yeah, look, some willing suspension of disbelief is necessary in vore.
Some things have to be ignored as genre conventions, like "how the heck can a human fit down a cock?" or "wait, why don't our predators literally weigh a ton from the sheer amount of calories they consume??"
Embrace the horny -- just like the hyena told Melody in this chapter, being smart doesn't raise a human's quality as food ;)
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Yeah, willing suspension of disbelief is a necessity in any sort of fiction, but sometimes one has to do a bit of in-world logic during world-building, like how are humans still around? Most mentioned never even get a chance to produce offspring!
I suppose that's one of my issues with Jamie - he was bred to be the perfect Pet-Meal, top grade, tasty going in, smooth going out - he has never had a chance to continue the line, not even via sperm donation. I mean, I could understand a bit more of his, more or less, willingness to be a meal, if there's already a Jamie 2 (or more) waiting in the proverbial oven. After all, he'd of then done his biological job of procreating the next generation.
Granted, there's probably some sci-fi/biological way around it - Surrogate Mothers involving females not fit for anthro consumption, that merely provide a womb for a baby created from the genetic material of tasty humans, or Uterine Replicators that do the same thing as the Surrogate Mother idea, only without a third human involved.
I mean, numbers are kind of why, in my Reptilian Chronicles interactive over on WdC, as depicted in, "Their First Time", Reptilians are normally limited to 12 humans per year - barring humans that are mortally ill/injured, or are criminals under death sentences, and of course, the Reptilians that don't follow the Predation Laws anyways - and many don't get all 12 humans per year anyways. Heck, even in "Their First Time", the Meal-to-be tells the Predator-to-be that they've made sure to make plans for the continuation of their line, via a sperm bank.
Might be an idea to explore, if you decide to do something along those lines.
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Posted by Dragon808tr 2 years ago Report
It was so nice to read this! It had some sadness, and yet so sweet. I loved Piper! Shes just so wholesome making her prey happy like that! The factiry and cooking sections were my absolute favorite! Now im really curious what that cookbook might look like! Im glad you finally got arounf to completion on this! Its quite qgood!
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
I'm very glad to hear that you enjoyed it!
I love writing stories with Piper, she's the best fox-milf. You'll see plenty more with her, worry not!
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Posted by Latinfood 2 years ago Report
Me next please
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Piper: "Oh, eager humans are the absolute TASTIEST! C'mon, get up on the counter..."
;)
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Posted by Latinfood 2 years ago Report
Happily removes all clothing and get's on the counter "like this?, is this how food behaves?"
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Posted by KaiserDunk 2 years ago Report
Why is this considered Chapter 2c instead of just Chapter 2? Initially I thought I had somehow missed Chapters 2a and 2b. Still, I’m glad to see more stories set in this universe.
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Chapter 2a is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/743300
Chapter 2b is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/746822
I really should include all the links in all the descriptions...
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Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
I like how mira was wrong about eating clara. They're all interchangeable to her.
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked that!
...But, uh, I must confess that it was unintentional, because I completely misremembered what happened in Chapter 2a. I forgot that Clara was Alistair's treat, not Mira's.
(I think you're the only person so far who caught this! I might have to do major dialog edits now.)
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Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
I mean, it's in character?
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Okay, mild nit-pick -
A human meal costs, I'm guessing, like $10,000, if not more (I use like $200,000 for F-Grade Humans, and $5,000,000 for Prime Grade humans as an average in my own human farm stuff), and all you get for turning in say 50 pounds of ex-human manure is a mere $0.10?
Someone is ripping someone off here.
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
I'll fully acknowledge the inefficiencies and inaccuracies about raising humans as a food source, but in Graduation every pelli biologically NEEDS to eat at least one human per week. On a practical level, they can't be prohibitively expensive.
(Also, I got a kick out of the fertilizer being worth SO little.)
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Well, perhaps the economy reflects this - Pelli make a certain amount of money to afford at least one human, if not more. Now I wonder about the price of a bag of fertilizer.
As it is, now that you've set up a minimum amount of humans needed for a pelli to be healthy - about 50 per year - and assuming humans outnumber pelli by a certain amount, say, 1,000, just how do the pelli stay on top?
I mean, I could see it working for say 20 years, maybe, but as I've mentioned before, there's bound to be a rebellion. My "Traitors and Turncoats" explores this sort of aspect - most humans don't like the idea of being food, and would fight back. Likewise, there's bound to be Predators that don't see every human as a source of food - murders, extremely dangerous criminals, at least those that would warrant a death sentence in most societies, or those that are deathly ill/injured, or already dead, maybe - but not every human at any rate. This is all I'll say about this sort of thing.
Now, if the pelli have to follow a rule where they are indeed under that strict limit, of 1 human per week, and there's enough of a human population to support this, maybe this would reduce the odds of a rebellion. This would also help to keep a steady population of humans that isn't in danger of being wiped out. I mean, there's a reason that hunting limits exist - so that hunters don't kill all the deer, or other animals, in the area. Just something to think on.
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
So, is there a Part D coming?
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Unsure. We never saw Hugh's fate, and an initial draft exists, but I'm not certain I'm interested enough to finish it?
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Well, could always do a Stand-Alone involving a Sperm Donator that isn't "performing" as well as they should.
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