Kopfschuss - 4 years ago

keep it up you got something great going ^-^

calin22 - 4 years ago

I love these so much <3

dokudoku - 4 years ago

Heck yeah spit is hard to draw. Love what you did with this though. Great job. ^^

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

Technically, it's 2 XD

EctoplasmicResidue - 4 years ago

Such a good looking mawshot. And yeah, I agree, drawing saliva can be difficult.

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

Serve her Diamond of course XD... Whatever their whims.

Bobrocks - 4 years ago

Wait, what is the pearl appost to do again?

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

I definitely intend to :D

YourWhiteMage - 4 years ago

This shit is so perfect. If you gonna continue I will love you.

supersaiyango - 4 years ago

Cant wait for part 2

knux - 4 years ago

fucken hot!

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

Thanks. My handwriting is actually crap, so I had to take my time making it legible.

SherlokKirya - 4 years ago

Ohh you made a colored version too ! Great work, it looks even better !

Kopfschuss - 4 years ago

I'm loving it keep up the good work

SherlokKirya - 4 years ago

This drawing give me Pixar movies vibe for some reason. I like coloring here

SherlokKirya - 4 years ago

Wasn't expecting to see you here.... which was actually expectable xD. Really nice to see one artist appreciate work of another

zaneofbane - 5 years ago

:D

Saxanas - 5 years ago

I like it! I'm a huge fan of F/F anal vore and farting so keep it up!

zaneofbane - 5 years ago

Thanks :D

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

Yay :D

SherlokKirya - 4 years ago

This foreshadowing of what is about to come is really thrilling. Her asshole looks neat, nails could look better though.
Nice work, I looked through your gallery and you have my interest and follow

SherlokKirya - 4 years ago

This foreshadowing of what is about to come is really thrilling

zaneofbane - 5 years ago

Thank you :D

Saxanas - 5 years ago

Great concept and drawing, I love it!

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

On a side note, I might make a comic in the future :D

zaneofbane - 4 years ago

Had it 90% done, but the file disappeared... :(

zim6565 - 4 years ago

You ever gonna do a part 2?

zaneofbane - 5 years ago

Thank you :D I actually thought that up for a comic I wrote originally.

z3d - 5 years ago

Very great story, can’t wait to see more SU stories from you. Loved how you colored the speaking text to signal which gem is talking

zaneofbane - 2 years ago

I'm glad :)

justanothermeal - 2 years ago

its a good story, i liked it

zaneofbane - 2 years ago

Yes, but I opted away from unaware :D

justanothermeal - 2 years ago

i was looking through my old pics, and saw one in which you said it inspired you to write a story with fluttershy as the pred, and that pic was her anal voring seabreeze, was this story it?

zaneofbane - 6 years ago

:D

Mechdragon1k - 6 years ago

I thought this was going to be unbirth at first,

zaneofbane - 8 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. I almost didn't post it because I felt the vore sequence wasn't long enough.

Littledude - 8 years ago

Very well written and the characters of the band were all developed and visible as people. Liked the in-universe lamp shading of how bad an idea it was to shrink oneself and sneak around.

Mechdragon1k - 7 years ago

Me too.

Jay1743 - 8 years ago

I'd love to see a sequel where we find out what happened to the cat. :)

zaneofbane - 9 years ago

me too :D

Kooshmeister - 9 years ago

Mm, heh, well, you did a good enough job that I would've loved to have traded places with those micros, especially the one who ends up going in Roon's butt.

zaneofbane - 9 years ago

I got his input during the creation process so that his character would react realistically.

zaneofbane - 3 months ago

Thank you :)

AlbertKwon9182 - 3 months ago

Beautiful story

namedkitten - 6 years ago

i would LOVE a continuation of this through the day in the victims POV, can ya do that? :3

Fizzisop - 6 years ago

That makes total sense. Perhaps a short epilogue after the pred was done with her would've rounded things off better? Either way it's still fantastic.

zaneofbane - 6 years ago

Thanks. After all the detail the pred went into, I felt writing the actual scene would be redundant. So, I opted to leave it where it was.

zaneofbane - 8 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. :D

Theodous - 8 years ago

Oh my goodness gracious, this was an enjoyable read. I've always loved the thought of anthro species retaining trace elements of the instincts of their feral cousins. Which would of course lead to some problems between species, much like those that Jimmy experienced while living with the family of tigers. But at the same time, it makes the bond that was forged between he and Mac so very much more meaningful.

The internal struggles of both characters as the inacted their plan is what really brought this story alive. Especially with this having been the first time that Mac had ever so much as explored anything with his rump. You could definitely get a very real feel for the turbulent storm of emotions he felt as Jimmy worked his way inside. That inner voice screaming at him that what he was doing was wrong. That he had to protect his friend. While his body was awash with the pleasure of the new sensations. And the sheer, intoxicating power of the control he held over the tiny life that was being entrusted to him. All the while Jimmy struggled with the reality of what he had commited himself to. Every breath a reminder of the natural order of things. And what his fate likely would have been, if not for the incredibly sweet tiger, who had rescued him.

I so would have loved to have seen a sequel to this story. Because I can imagine so many different things happening from this point onward. Hehe and I'll admit, there's a part of me that loves the thought of Mac becoming so entranced by the experience that he tries to talk Jimmy into doing it again, in a more intimate light. Or simply kidnapping his little mouse buddy all for himself. ^.^ Though I think the two of them genuinely care for one another enough that it would never come to that.

Thank you so very much for sharing this with us. I'll do a cut and paste of my comment on your other account. Just in case you don't check this one.

zaneofbane - 9 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm definitely considering doing more in the future.

JMW - 9 years ago

Wow very nice read for a first try at a furry story! Thanks for posting =^.^=

zaneofbane - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed the characters.

zaneofbane - 9 years ago

Thank you for the kind words.

iviruniverse - 9 years ago

Quality story man, loving the cruelty of it all, Also loving the 'onlookers point of view' in which its written and the 'you decide his fate' ending gives some originality and separates itself from the common structure of story on eka's.
Well Done Sir!

ElviraTepes - 9 years ago

Id love to read what happens to adam

zaneofbane - 5 months ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Vstar66 - 5 months ago

How is it no one has commented on this story it is so good

Theodous - 8 years ago

As someone, who's read hundreds of online fictions. It's become increasingly difficult to find any that are even close to the level of detail that I've come to expect in scenarios such as these. But once again, as I sit here writing this, I find myself absolutely astounded at the quality of your writing.

The way that you weave your descriptions and the emotions of your characters together is simply masterful. In that it feels that your not only seeing what's happening to them. But experiencing it through their eyes. And riding the tides of their emotions as they struggle to come to terms with what they're facing.

Throughout the entirity of this story, I felt so very bad for Riza. I wanted to just sweep her up and cuddle her. To tell her that it was all a bad dream. And do do everything in my power to convince her that not all humans are terrible. But the truth of course, is, that the only thing that seperates good humans from bad, is the will to fight the impulses that drive us at times. Having a tiny sentient life completely at your mercy, behind closed doors would be the ultimate power trip for many. And given such an opportunity, I'd imagine there are very few who could resist their carnal impulses. :)

THExDARKxSANDMAN - 9 years ago

very nice story, good use of vocabulary and a good concept

zaneofbane - 8 years ago

I do have some older work on other sites, but it isn't up to my current standards atm. I can still link it if you want.

I'm actually working on my first commission already at the moment. After I'm done, I can contact you and we can talk about the details. However, I've been dealing with melancholy as of late, so I've been a bit slow when it comes to writing.

Theodous - 8 years ago

Thank you so very much for responding. I often worry that I'm bothering people with comments. And become a little disheartened when I don't hear back. But work like yours deserves feedback. Far more than you seem to be getting here, that's for darn sure. Have actually been wondering if you post your work anywhere else besides here and Furaffinity?

Also, I know the answer is probably a resounding no. But, are you at all interested in commissions? Because well... I would love so very much to work with you on one, you have no idea. And I would happily give you a tremendous amount of freedom and creative license. In addition to letting you name whatever price you felt would make it worth your while. :)

zaneofbane - 8 years ago

I'm happy you enjoyed my work. The characters themselves are as important to me as the interactions when it comes to vore, so I try my best :D

Theodous - 8 years ago

This just might be, one of the most incredible stories I've ever read. Setting my own personal feelings on the subject matter aside. The level of detail in your writing. And the way you painted the scenes was truely impressive from a literary standpoint. It was easy to not only imagine what was happening, but to feel for the character every step of the way. Because his thought process felt very real and believable. And thus, the mental anguish he experienced at the hands of his would be lover and the sorority girls was out of this world.

As a person who enjoys size play to the extreme of both spectrums. I've come to realize that it's not always about wanting to be on the giving or even the recieving end of a situation. So much as experiencing the emotional high of what it would be like. And you accomplished that with this story, in glorious fashion.

I'll definitely be taking time to read more of your work in the days to come. :)

zaneofbane - 10 years ago

Feel free to.