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We've finally come to the completion of this comic! I would like to take to moment to let Krimzon have a few words. Without his support to commission this comic and his creative input, this comic would not have been possible!
"Hello! First I would like to say thank you to everyone who has liked and commented on this set. It's great to hear that so many of you have enjoyed this story. It's also been fun watching you all try and figure out what will happen next! If you would like to see more stories similar to this please say so in the comments, me and Donutwish have plenty more ideas we would love to share with you all!
Secondly I would like to thank Donutwish for making the idea in my head into this awesome comic set. I know the project had some rough goings with a number of delays but at each step of the way you exceeded my exceptions! Definitely an enjoyable commission project from start to end!" - Krimzon
I would like to reiterate how important it is to leave comments and feedback. Commission clients and artists make the artwork not only for their own pleasure, but also for the enjoyment of people like you. Commissioned artwork often takes tremendous amounts of work and they cost money. If you want to see more work like this, all we ask is your support through encouragement and constructive feedback. Believe me when I say that it makes a BIG difference in motivating us to do new work.
Of course, you can also help by donating to me, via Paypal :)
Krimzon and I have many other stories in mind for the future, so stay tuned to this channel!
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Posted by HitomiBoy 10 years ago Report
This totes needs another page :P OH well :P
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
yep the sorceress is back.
say wont that need another page?
Posted by gosoxtim 10 years ago Report
so i guess the sorceress and jenn sharing the same body
Posted by iswallowyouup 10 years ago Report
I assume payback, I mean I would if she stuffed me into a sorceress and got me absorbed in the first place(also if I had a vagina ^^)
Posted by yepthatsavore 10 years ago Report
Great work!
Posted by threk 10 years ago Report
Aw, this is the epilogue?
Totally should have another page.
Posted by Zub 10 years ago Report
Now that's my kind of ending!! A page of her friend totally inside would be cool but nice job just the same. I like the story!
Posted by mrcactus747 10 years ago Report
Great job! I could donate for a new story someday... Very impressive. :) Keep it up
Posted by Paradox 10 years ago Report
What a twisted twist!
Me like :3
Posted by RavenXeo 10 years ago Report
Well those 2 suddenly got very large o.o;
Posted by Liz 10 years ago Report
Oh looks like Jenn has the predatory habits of the former owner of that body <3
Oh well XD
Posted by Liz 10 years ago Report
Also Sarah has big boobies <3
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
Well you got your school girl pred afterall, although it was probably not the one you expected, lol.
Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report
Really great story! I suppose a lot of the literary elements were translated into the composition of the panels that DonutWish drew, but the concept is very fun and has some excitement to it. I'm looking forward to whatever else you come up with. : 3
As for the art itself, it's really very good. I especially like the coloring that you've done to establish the folds of the fabric here, it looks great.
I also liked the use of the symbols you invented for the magical language; it allows the reader to interpret pronunciation an sound.
Well done, all of it! I look forward to seein' more from you! ^ ^
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
Thanks for the nice feedback! Stories in comic format are always a challenge to pull off. I felt like we put in a good effort on this one without too many compromises in the final product!
Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report
It really shows! Good job. : 3
Posted by jake110 10 years ago Report
that was absolutely amazing, such a great story, brilliant artwork as always :D
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
Considering I write and RP erotic horror, yeah, saw this coming, lol, but I had hopes that if one could risk her life for the other out of love... but when playing with souls, one need beware of the body itself, as it carries its own wants and desires *chuckles*
Or so you two may have meant here. A recommendation for future works Donutwish: foreshadow a bit more about whether it is the sorceress influencing the new pred OR if it is something like "body memory" influencing the new pred. The story reviewer within me says this is too ambiguous. The soul vore perv within me is smiling broadly with his own ideas of what happened *chuckles louder*
I notice Jenn's eyes are still blue, so I'm assuming this means the sorceress is not making a comeback of any kind (which would not have made sense considering how you set this up). But considering two spells are required to make the UB'ing and then the soul absorption "work"...
I'm seeing a third opt. What if Sarah has come to enjoy the adrenaline rush of being dragged in "helplessly" and Jenn's new body LOVES the sensations of doing this, so... *hand waves* Of course I've been doing a LOT of D/s scene stuff in the last 16, 18 months, so... lol.
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
I tend to prefer erring on the side of ambiguity when it comes to story telling. It can be frustrating for some, because I have no issues leaving threads hanging and letting the reader's imagination fill in the rest. When you combine this with the fact that there's always going to be a finite amount of resources to use for commission work, there's always going to be some amount of efficiency to contend with when it comes to putting a story together.
Ultimately, with so few pages to tell the story, I think it'd be a mistake to lay everything on the table, but I understand where you're coming from.
Of course I have some personal thoughts about what I think happens to Jenn and Sarah in the end, but I don't want to deny the opportunity for someone to draw their own conclusions!
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
Okay, now I'm tempted to PM you and ASK those thoughts, ROFL. Damned curiosity >_>
And yeah, I understand. When you write short fiction, you find yourself under the gun of word limits and "cut more out" lol. You have to get creative, but also... yeah, sometimes it just isn't worth the cost:profit ration to tie up everything.
And, when all else fails, let the reader fill in those blanks themselves ^^ IE, I keep coming back to your stuff because you make me think. Bastard. I hate you. I don't want to think with my porn >_> *smirks*
Posted by Demihunger 10 years ago Report
ANother great comic with another great ending twist.
Posted by Jacquelope 10 years ago Report
OH NOES!!! IT'S THE SPIRAL NEMESIS!!!
Posted by giggityman69 10 years ago Report
Another awesome comic :D
Posted by CGR-7 10 years ago Report
Hum... I noticed that Jenn is now, and still, wearing the Sorceress's necklace from earlier. Perhaps Jenn got a taste of something good in her short time spent with the Sorceress and wants to indulge her appetite, too. Maybe some residual, and corrupting, magical force in the charm that motivated the Sorceress in her quest is now possessing and motivating Jenn... in her own quest. Sarah, being closest, might as well be a good start point. XD
An awesome comic and an awesome read, D.W. and Krimzon. A terrific twist ending that I actually didn't see coming. =)
Posted by thilkalar 10 years ago Report
It´s a perfect story, please draw more like this, you're great :)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
So I got a question. Were they supposed to be sizering and somehow the one girl suck half the other girl inside her before she noticed or doing a less intense unbirth here?
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
Think of it as a very dangerous but highly pleasurable act. It's like playing with fire, and sometimes it goes wrong...
Posted by boyot 10 years ago Report
Same way with fire works some work right and some blow you halfway across your yard! (speaking from experience)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
So I take it to mean Option two then?
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
I'll leave it to your imagination!
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
But the Immagination confuses me. How on earth did she get half way in there without noticing if they were Scissoring?
Posted by AnonBrony 10 years ago Report
Wow this guy loves his plot twists doesn't
Posted by Thanatos2k 10 years ago Report
......Ha
Posted by four_fleets 10 years ago Report
And here I was hoping she could spare the girl with glasses. Would love to see the irritating bulge put up some wards, maybe shield herself, or absorb both the blonde and the red-head's voluptous forms... She could use a pair of tits.
Posted by four_fleets 10 years ago Report
Bigger! Tits rather. And it wouldn't be a surprise, she taught herself how to take down Red...
Posted by blank 10 years ago Report
loved it from beginning to end.
Posted by DoniVores 10 years ago Report
I never liked UB until now. Well done. This last page could be a sequence of it's own.
Posted by anonymous19999 10 years ago Report
wow, you've entered the top tier. more more more please!
Posted by fatbelly 10 years ago Report
I am glad this was left open. I'm soft core so enjoying endo and reformation goes with that. Which means this comic goes either way. I can think "Aww she gets to sleep inside her. How comfy." Others into hard and think what they want. Good job here. :)
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Plot twist!
Posted by dragon32078 10 years ago Report
I greatly enjoyed this comic. Thank you for commissioning it, and thank you for drawing and writing a story to go along with it. I think I may know how the story ends, and would love to see the ending if you don't mind adding a page to this comic.
Either way I am really glad that I had a chance to read it, and enjoy the well done drawings.
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
The commission client definitely deserves praise for making the project possible. Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Skeiron 10 years ago Report
Very nice ^^
I took the liberty to add the F/F tag to the comic if you don't mind :)
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
Don't mind at all, thanks!
Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
nice comid ejje
Posted by casuallurker 10 years ago Report
okay, i agree. this is actually much different from the one with the devil woman with the horns. O_o *applauds*
Posted by donutwish 10 years ago Report
I'm glad you agree :)
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Seems more like a form of play than anything
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Is this being playful or for real
Posted by davidr2002us 5 years ago Report
to bad there ant a part 2 or at least a pic of jenn with a big belly with sarah slowly being consumed please and thank you if you make a part two or continue with this one