Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

Thanks. Yeah. It’s interesting to try out different dynamics in preds. That is something that I actually tried with this story too. With the focus a little bit different compared to my other stories and the temperament of the predator being distinct from my other recent Mother pred stories. I’d actually say she’s probably the most well-adjusted of the three Mother pred stories that I’ve put on in these past ~two months.

AlbertKwon9182 - 4 days ago

Your mother F/F stories are simply fantastic. A teacher-figure or a mother-like gentle figure being an unaware pred is a great concept also. It’d been super if this was another macro/micro setting for f/f giantess story, but this Easter vore idea seems like a fascinating idea. I might try reading it at some point! You always come-up with one of the rather unique concepts and settings. Hats off to that!

Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

That is the question. Although, if I do a sequel that is more directly following this one, then it would probably be following Sam’s perspective.

BaseKing - 4 days ago

Sequel when? If ever

Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

Thanks. Eh…I think the mode of liberation should be carried out by the people that have been intimate with the tyranny. So, we might have to rely on Sam to do that.

TempestStorm - 4 days ago

Take your time. That way Sunday can delay becoming assfat

Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

Yup. That story is still the back of my mind. I’m definitely looking forward to working on that story too, whenever I get to it.

TempestStorm - 4 days ago

A more merciful(if accidental)end for Robin then what Lady Jade has planned for him in the future. I can already see her rubbing her hands on getting that literal new piece of ass

Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

Thanks!

Yeah. Teleportation has a way of throwing the reader right into the meat of the story. With how Robin is…it’s kind of hard not to present her as an Unaware pred. With how my stories usually go. Yeah. I’m a sucker for scat/toilet endings too. But it would have really just been a bowel movement of normal food with how Sunday was scaled in this story.

Oh well…there’s always next time.

AlbertKwon9182 - 4 days ago

This was really great! Teleportation vore’s got really special charms in giantess vore stories for sure! Love the unaware pred in this story. She will never know she consumed and digested her borther… What a beautiful story.. It would’ve been really nice if there were scat/toilet endings to this, but this still is a very good story. Great work!

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

You aren’t wrong.

BazBackup - 5 days ago

True, but it would be a nice 'cap' to it, especially with sentient fat or something similar =3

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

I guess I should also mention a specific spot where honey’s head was resting. Approximately near Raya’s navel.

The rigidness of the rotund circumference was already giving away. Allowing for their head to sink into the mother’s warm pudginess. A simple roll of honey’s head would position their visual field underneath the stretch of the parent’s mammary glands, which were now protruding relatively farther because of the progressive sinking of honey’s headrest.

I’m typing this all out relying on my memory and not looking at the text of the story, but I hope this helps paint a visual of what that particular scene looked like.

pbysteria - 5 days ago

Ah that does clear up my reading of it. It is a lovely dynamic between the two, and her tying together the past and present in such ways is very well thought out.

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

Thanks for the comment.

Yeah. It’s always a whirlwind trying to pack in as many juicy details as possible and not bloat the word count too much.

As for the “lap pillow” scene. It isn’t really a lap pillow. At that point Raya’s belly was probably half the size of a human and only the ends of her knees would be peeking out. Honey was initially sitting next to Raya, on the spot of the couch she patted, then they lowered themselves on one of their sides onto the squishing half-done of a tubby mattress.

Raya used the words “lap pillow” as that is what she gave her honey in the past. It’s a familiar term and the mother expected her child to catch on to what she was implying and be able to promptly follow through with her request. As opposed to if she said “belly pillow” which is something honey would not be familiar with and caused them to pause.

I hope this comment was helpful and also serves to show the thought Raya puts behind her actions.

As it perpetuates the overall theme in this story. How “competition can be conducive but also has its own share of failings” and why I chose to write this narrative for the 20th anniversary.

Fatedmeal - 4 days ago

Thanks for the comment. As always.

DanMeister - 4 days ago

great job as always <3

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

Thanks a lot. Yeah. I’ve been meaning to write a story like this eventually. The concept given form in my work just happened to come out later than I expected in my gallery’s lifetime. I’m glad to hear that post-digestion is hitting at or near the levels of digestion. As I’m always worried if I’m giving those scenes the proper attention while keeping the reader engaged.

Also thanks for catching the reference. Yeah…a lot of food tf stories end up going the route of losing shape/consciousness. And I think part of it is the difficulty in delving into the grittier details of those scenes. Harlan Ellison‘s story really helps me channel the kind of energy needed to properly put those words together.

Looking forward to future comments from you.

AlbertKwon9182 - 5 days ago

This was an awesome read! Forever being Citlali’s stomach fold…! What a cruel yet beautiful fate it is! Your Macro/Micro giantess vore stories are truly one of the best ever! I know you are an exceptional writer in many vore stories, but I just can’t help but love your giantess vore stories. Your descriptions for digestion and post-digestion scenarios are simply fantastic! (Also, really nice touch with the I Have No Mouth And Must Scream reference! Writing good foodTF vore stories are really tough in my opinion, for how easily the prey loses its shape/consciousness due to the nature of TF’d food’s vulnerability, but not losing shape/consciousness and forever being a part of the giantess’s stomach flesh? Now that’s an ART! Really well-done work. Mad respect to you!)

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

Thanks a lot for the comment and your thoughts.

I definitely enjoyed being able to write about vore in a way that I rarely get a chance to do so. So I was a fan of this process too.

Yeah...I wrote the prologue before finishing Citlali's story quest and learning about their telepathic connection, so I had to troubleshoot a little with what I wanted to do with that. I decided to make it so that the intensity of Aether's telepathy also reduced along with his size.

Regardless, I'm absolutely looking forward to seeing how you steer the ship

SSV - 3 days ago

Juliana does bring up a really good point. when something is too good to be true, it probably is. There' so many ways the the reformation project can and probably will fail. I have this feeling that they would even sacrifice Florian to bring this plan to reality. What's one life for millions.

By the way this is going, seems like this is goodbye for Tyme. Shame really. I liked her in the game. So it seems like N is apart of LAMENT. Does he know what they're planning or he has his own plans.

Forgot to mention. This is N after he left his Castle, right? Or things happen between then and now. I also love you added Juliana thinking she did a good job keeping Nemona and florian apart. haha...she's in for a surprised.

It's looking like LAMENT is setting up to be the next big evil group like team rocket and Galactic.

Anyways another great chapter! I'll be waiting for the next with bated breath.

SSV - 4 days ago

I realized that when you killed off Giacomo. I was a bit confused since he shows up near the end of the game.

Fatedmeal - 5 days ago

Thanks for taking the time to collect your thoughts and type them out.

I really appreciate that the smaller moments that I spend time on are able to keep the attention of readers like you, who have less knowledge about the series but are along for the ride to see where the story is heading.

I will say that the overarching plot has already significantly deviated from what happened in the game by this point, and I say this while discounting the vore. So I think that you aren’t alone in being a little in the dark of where I’m heading with this series.

;-)

Azoon - 9 days ago

I typed most of this up on discord when you mentioned the site metrics but missed my opportunity to post it, so i'll just leave it here:

i have no idea what the overarching plot is, i dont know what a good chunk of the characters are supposed to be like in the game, i have no idea about paldea as a setting, but none of that matters because the moment to moment scenes/interactions are really good, and the prose is detailed + engaging

i always think i'm not going to care about the next part due to lack of interest in the franchise but i've been proven wrong repeatedly, you are cooking something really special with this series and i'll keep following it

Fatedmeal - 11 days ago

Thanks a lot for the comment. I’m glad you liked the chapter.

BroTato - 3 weeks ago

Vore transcends reason and powers kek

Nice strength quirk, unfortunately that stomach lining is tougher than nuclear pasta but just as pliable as dough

TempestStorm - 1 month ago

"Another day another meal."-Mt. Lady. That aside this was a well written one shot. Personally I'm of the belief that Deku prey can only work if he's either quirkless or just gotten his powers. Or if it's after the final battle of the story and he no longer has the majority of One For All. Otherwise Deku just looks like an idiot for not coming up with a way out. Which given his personality he could definitely do.

chibidiely777 - 1 month ago

As always deku is always gonna be prey and mt lady lets gooo!

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Fortunately, Izuku won't be center stage in all the future BnHA stories. There's at least one without him coming up.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks. It will happen. Eventually.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks a lot for the read and kind comment. I appreciate it.

Metalization - 1 month ago

Such a perfect story, 10/10

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Whoo!

Fiaura54 - 1 month ago

Yay

Jamzwm17 - 3 weeks ago

So it's been two weeks now, still I've been trying to draw my own conclusion. Turns out, I can't draw worth a damn. Meh...oh well. x3

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks. Yeah. I saw a video making fun of cave exploration memes like two weeks ago. Then someone on this gallery’s Discord server basically mentioned that they were hoping someone would do a vorish spin on the cave exploration meme trend. It just seemed too fortuitous that I already had an idea for a story in the back of my mind, and decided I could not ignore it any longer and wrote it out.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Practical experience honestly does a lot more for learning retention than most other educational methods. People have been shown to retain more information a day after learning it. However, that is assuming that the person being taught is more than a layer in the instructor’s septic tank.

So…for some subject matters…the educational process is best characterized as high risk-high reward. With the former usually being more glaringly prominent in society’s collective memory and sewage system.

AlbertKwon9182 - 1 month ago

I don’t usually like same size vore, but connecting the cave exploration meme with the idea of vore was one of the most creative combo I’ve ever seen! Just for that, I will need to read this. Such creativity must be complemented with proper manners. You really are a good writer. Never have I ever imagined to see a plot like this, and I am all for it lol

JustAStargazer - 1 month ago

Very well done. I am naturally inclined to enjoy interfamilial vore activities, but you did a great job expressing the mother’s thoughts. It’s always a danger to play around with a predator like they did, however it’s a shame they can really only learn that lesson once.

tomsketchit - 1 month ago

Hot damn. When I asked the question, meant it more in a rhetorical way of "This is a thing that always interests me about vore settings." Didn't expect an in-depth answer like that, lol. Still, thanks for taking the time to share that, it was an interesting read and I am curious to see where things develop.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thank you for the inquiry on this facet of the series. Of course, I can only give some insight into how I think a society would have to be structured for it to perpetually exist, without a risk of collapse, and for it to be a commonly accepted act.

To best answer this question I think I need to focus on how vore may be perceived by the general person. Just like most acts in life, there is a strong social aspect to vore in this setting. In that an observer’s response to a pred eating a prey is contingent on the social context and cues within a situation. Like when a celebrity or a person in power does something that would make someone else typically mildly discomforted. They are more willing to ignore that feeling to preserve that image of the person. This is reinforced by a generally accepted socialization of the general population in their childhood years. To be more accepting of the population inclined to predatory acts.

In respect to the potential for someone being predator is dependent on their physical fitness in overwhelming another person, stretching their orifice, and consuming them. That much is obvious. People without the ability to stretch their own orifices typically can’t be defined as predators. Unless they have some method of shrinking down their targets. However, there is also another constraint in discriminating between whether someone is a predator and prey. That is how their brain is able to react to prions.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prion

A type of protein that emerges after someone consumes the brain of another. Since predators consume the entire body of a prey, they also digest their brain and absorb it. So they need a genetic makeup to be able to resist the effects of prions. As these are proteins that can prove to be fatal. It’s also why these societies are functioning as they are.

A result of natural selection. As it wasn’t until recently that there were screening techniques discovered on how to detect the specific genotype that allows a person to resist the deleterious effects of prions. And it was even more recent that the screening measure was implemented to be conducted by a primary care provider on individuals at a young age.

So how did societies function before then? Well…by trial and error. Different regions had their own social perception when it came to vore and its practice. An act that wasn’t immediately stigmatized because it offered the predator a physical boon that made them generally perform at a higher level than if they chose not to eat other people. Thus, there were two types of societies that cropped up in the past.

Societies that fully embraced vore and allowed its citizens to practice it unmitigated and societies that tried to regulate it as an action.

Now, the former society experienced an issue due to the existence of prions. Everyone that could vore was incentivized to vore to get ahead in those societies. So there were many individuals, who may have been able to stretch their orifices and physically present themselves as a pred…but they didn’t have the prion resistance. Thus, these societies had an astronomically higher morbidity rate of citizens that died due to prions as compared to the more regulated societies. The individuals of these unregulated societies would eventually reach a population anemic state…to the point that there were barely any prey left and they had to either eat the other predators in their society or attack those that were labeled as “them”. The regulated societies…which had better infrastructure due to a healthier and larger population. One that was actively participating as a workforce, providing economic contributions, and offering a more diverse set of perspectives that led to greater advancements in scientific progress. The natural end result is the unregulated vore societies either collapsed or waged war against the regulated vore societies and then collapsed. All before the expansion of the information through inventions like the World Wide Web. An innovation pioneered by individuals like Bill (see Chapter 21) and continued to proliferate due to its great technological utility.

So…the societies that persisted in the present, due to a form of rapid evolutionary selection of societies in the centuries preceding, are generally accepting of prey’s existence as equals to predators. The act of vore is not presently heavily restricted due to the regulations in the past centuries, which led to a setting that didn’t heavily select for individuals with the prion-resistant genes to proliferate. As not everyone engaged in vore before due to prions not being discovered and a screening measure not being implemented until later. Due to the fear of the symptoms that could present from this neurodegenerative condition that often resulted in a fatal end for the afflicted person. Thus, without that selective driving force, there has been a growth of individuals without the prion resistant genes due to mutations typically eliminating that genotypic expression over generations.

As a result, there are more preys than predators in the present world. Meaning that nations are able to remain stable due to the excess of preys. They won’t reach a state of population collapse like the extinct unregulated societies. Furthermore, prey are able to advocate for themselves due to their greater numbers (consumer and voting power in a democratic society). Thus, we get this complex balance of related social interests and prevailing biologies that dictate how local setting proceeds: normalization of preds due to their increased performance and perceived greater worth due to society’s high value of success, a high value placed on the prey population due to historical knowledge of previous society’s collapse when they were all eaten and the economic and scientific boon a diverse population brings, and a capitalist leaning political system in most nations that incentivize individualism and view vore as one such competitive measure in a casual setting.

These are just broad strokes, but I’m hoping that all of this provided some insight into how I perceived this world is able to functions. And highlights why I gave Unova the spotlight at the beginning of this chapter. As it seems to be moving forward in a disturbing direction that isn’t healthy for a predator-prey society with the rights and lives of preys being undermined at a [b]societal/national level[/b]. An urgent problem that provides a potential motivation, as hinted in this chapter, behind Lusamine’s unspecified plan (will be clarified in a later chapter).

tomsketchit - 1 month ago

I'm always interested in the world building of settings like these. How do politics and such work in a world where some people just naturally eat other people?

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate comments like these.

I’ve mentioned the plan in chapter 20, 21, and this chapter too. I also think that people can guess what Lusamine’s plan is by this point with all I’ve written surrounding her, the world at large, and where interests are generally invested. Although, I will be formally revealing the plan, with respect to how it relates to the plot, in the next chapter. So you can do some sleuthing if you want, but trust me when I say that “reveal” is literally less than a chapter away. It might even be near the beginning of Chapter 24.

If you do find the time and motivation to write down the other stuff you want to say later, then I’ll be happy to reply.

SSV - 1 month ago

The way you're keeping the balance between vore and non-vore is amazing and I respect that. Your world building and characters are just as good as your vore scenes. What i mean is you're doing more then just vore and it's what keep making me come back to re-read.

Did we get an explanation of what Lusamine plan is or it wasn't explained yet? I might have read over it if you did.

I have any more to say but it would take to long so just keep on trucking!

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks a bunch for the comment. Yeah. Those were definitely the most direct flip on the typical dynamics of Trainer and Pokemon. So I’m glad those were the ones that stood out for you.

tomsketchit - 1 month ago

Good stories. Particularly fond of the betrayal by a trainer's own Pokemon ones, that's always been an enticingly dark dynamic.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks for commenting so soon. I know that it’s a lot since this half alone is 40K+ words. I’m glad that this anthology was a fun read, despite being unfamiliar with the franchise.

So…I feel an impulse to respond with a good job to you as well. On behalf of all the people who put work into this collaboration and are happy to see this comment.

Voshine - 1 month ago

The collab alone was amazing with so many talented writers! I love all the pics/story format, no wonder it is in pdf >=)

from someone who knows next to nothing about pokey man, my personal favourites belong to nandaelions and Ryu and of course yours. Good job

adurtt - 1 month ago

Thanks for the update cheers!

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Oh! Apologies. I kind of changed my mind on the March 14th release date once I remembered that it was Micro March, so I didn’t have to release this follow-up on “Pi day” or Japan’s “White Day”. That and I only had 3 days before the 14th to write my next story…so that was another reason to delay this story. As I wanted more time to write it to a better level of quality.

Anyway, the new deadline I have in mind is [b]March 23rd[/b]. If I’m able to finish it earlier, the I’ll release it on [b]March 21st[/b] the earliest.

adurtt - 1 month ago

When is the story coming out?? If you dont mind me asking

chibidiely777 - 1 month ago

Im all for this and it will be fun but i kinda feel bad when im calm down like what did he do to deserve this? I would probably have some animosity to alice and klee for this if i survive (i kinda wanna know what will be like if he survives) but honestly i thought she had him in her stomach and send invite to the girls to try to get him released and klee have paimon

Anyway half of me is excited for this and other half kinda wants to see a what if he lives through somehow (which is probably never) anyway cant wait to read the next one

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

Voting period is over. Below is the final tally.

Nilou: 7 votes
Keqing: 17 votes
[b]Citlali: 20 votes [/b]
Ayaka: 9 Votes

Thanks everyone for voting. Expect the second part of the story by March 14th!

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks a bunch for the comment. Yeah...I think how palatable a scene is contingent on presentation. So I appreciate hearing that you liked how arranged and structured these sentences into the thick columns we know as paragraphs.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Thanks for the comment. Yeah. Monster girls seem to be a niche with a large fanbase. I'm glad that I was able to cater to that with this addition.

JustAStargazer - 2 months ago

A great story with a favorite character of mine and a topic I don’t really think about much, prolonged digestion. You did a wonderful job portraying Smith’s stay in her predator’s large stomach and displaying her will to survive being useless. It’s odd how often I find myself liking new things—perhaps it’s the execution by others.

WoreHouse - 2 months ago

It's rare that I enjoy stories with unwilling prey... but this is one of them! One prey + One predator, interesting digestion mechanics that reflect the herbivorous nature of the centauress, and all of this multiplied by your writing skills and vivid imagery.

Personally, I would have liked to explore this plot with willing prey rather than watch the misadventures of Ms. Kuroko, but that's just my preference. Objectively, it doesn't make the story worse.

Overall, the story was interesting and enjoyable to read. Well-written predatory centaurs, cowgirls, and lamias have a special place in my heart.

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

I don't think you missed out on anything overt aside from Centorea being a tad bit hungrier due to her running around. Also that the initial reason led Centorea to consume Ms. Smith for a temporary stay initially, but then she rationalized to herself that she would need to be harsher to test the civil servant's drive and will. If she was truly deserving of her occupation of being serving as a Monster Girl liaison. Only for Centorea's mood to worsen towards Ms. Smith. Due to her limitations as a human trapped in overpowering might and sensation overload of a gooey horse stomach. Of course, it seems like Centorea was able to eventually acclimate in human society based on the snapshots we get in the Kimihito household, but bad first impressions have a habit of lingering. Despite how much we shouldn't let them.

Anyway, I'm happy that you enjoyed the read~

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

Yo! Thanks for the comment. I hope the story placated your interests. Even if the focus of the narrative might have not been entirely as you imagined it to be.

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

We'll find that out in the years to come.

;-)

AlbertKwon9182 - 2 months ago

Macro/Micro giantess vore story! Unaware vore and scat! I love what I see from the tags of this story. Can’t wait to read this. This is gonna be a treat!

TempestStorm - 2 months ago

Oh dear. Fem Ritsuka is in for a very bad time next year. And still no sign of the original Ritsuka and Mash. Hopefully they're fairing much better then their various(and digested) clones

TempestStorm - 3 months ago

Hopefully said ward fares much better then previous duos

Fatedmeal - 3 months ago

A lot of eye-catching tags in this story, but I didn't realize that rich prey would be one of them. Thanks for reading.

Fatedmeal - 3 months ago

Yeah...I do wonder just how many heroes and monster girls we'll come across in these stories. Also sentiments shared on the Deedlit mention. Maybe we'll see the ward and her isekai'd partner in a future story.

SmolEmerald - 3 months ago

>rich prey
hello i have been summoned

TempestStorm - 3 months ago

I wonder how many more heroes mystery voice has to go through before she finds the right one. Also nice to see Deedlit again. The elven maid couldn't keep her ward from leaving forever

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

Thanks for the comment. Yeah. Seasonal pieces are best read during the season.

pbysteria - 3 months ago

Some wonderful stomach crushing descriptions in this one, very nice winter piece

TempestStorm - 3 months ago

Yeah you might just end up as someone's meal as consequence

Fatedmeal - 3 months ago

That would have been definitely cool, but I guess that fortune wasn’t on the Trailblazer side. As the budding researcher needed some glucose to fuel her brain and warm her body. So her stomach was just that much more rapidly destructive in retrieving those nourishing calories.

Fatedmeal - 3 months ago

Agreed on the part about Serval and Lynx.

Yup. I’m afraid that Elios might want to have a word with me by the end of next year if this trend continues.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks for the comment. TimeToRun did great work. I just tried to give a proper story to accompany it.

Dolsilyol - 4 months ago

Damn. Fun, Love the art.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

No. None are in the works.

Meruem - 4 months ago

Any bnha fic soon?
These ones with izuku as prey where realy good

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Right…the other main character in this tale. I wonder how things will go for her. I guess we’ll see in two chapters.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Once again, it’s always a delight to read your comments.

I wasn’t sure if I should just describe his appearance at the end of the chapter, or actually name him. I decided on the latter. As there are already a lot of plot points that I’m juggling and expecting readers to remember between chapters. So I might as well make it easier…and the impact of the twist is still very much surprising!

Yup! Florian’s definitely been improving. That and Nemona and him being together. Yea…I’m really not a fan of how romance kind of delays that plot point until the very end of their narratives. Either because the “will they or won’t they” is usually one of of or the central point of conflict or the writer isn’t that confident in being able to depict a couple’s relationship properly while keeping readers invested.

I think I have enough humility to say that I belong to the latter camp, but I want to give it my best. That and, as I stated earlier, there are a lot of plot threads in P.A.L.D.E.A. and I’m sure that the story will keep people invested now that the Florian x Nemona question has been popped.

SSV - 4 months ago

Juliana: Stay away from my brother.

Nemona: Ya, about that...

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Currently there are no plans to revisit the other potential choices. Same as the previous DestinedCuisine Two-parter.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks! I’m glad that you ended up enjoying the poll winner! Yea…I like reading stuff chocked with detail, so why not write it myself. At least that is what I think to myself. Thanks for the comment.

Dongers - 4 months ago

Do you ever plan to revisit this in the future?

SSV - 4 months ago

Aw ya, we got the milf! The way you used creative words for certain scenes was actually genius. A lot of writers on this site don't go to that length. It's probably why I love your work so much. It's quite enjoyable to read.

SSV - 4 months ago

Aw ya, we got the milf! Also the way you described her dick was actually genius. A lot of writers on this site don't go that length. It's probably why I love your work so much.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Thanks! Yea, I’m hoping that the future is a swell one. I’m glad that you enjoyed this present. It was a fun experience describing how Blathine handled such a large and unseemly meal.

Voshine - 5 months ago

Wowie! Where to even begin?

Small pred/larger prey combo, amazing digestion sequence, loom not aether (yay!) and non dook dook bone disposal not to mention casual disregard of life!

Thank you soo much for taking your time and effort for this story. I really appreciate it and I love the future is kind to both of us <3

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks!

Yea. NTR is good. Surprisingly, I’ve only really come around to the fetish full swing this year. So maybe I’ll have more stories of this variety in 2025. Well just have to wait and see.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks! The twisted aspect of her affection was something that I really wanted to nail down. I really appreciate your comment, and only wish that I had responded sooner.

Edddd - 4 months ago

To jeanne: Shut up and take my QP! (Or keep berating me, probably)

To the author: thank you for this treat! I feel like NTR adds a lot of deligjtful cruelty to the already potent cocktails you tend to brew in your stories, especially if the protag is degraded and traumatized into cuckoldry against their will, but unable to resist the tide of emotions woven by the pred, such as here (though technically I was the protag, but... details).

MisterNut - 5 months ago

A VERY indulgent story of the events leading up to this story would be VERY entertaining aswell.. :>

TempestStorm - 5 months ago

Had to come back and read this story again. Not only did you manage to perfectly convey Jalter's twisted affections but this is one of the few stories I've come across that has Jalter as the pred instead of the prey. Great work!

ReducedTension7 - 5 months ago

Never let you go...

Rosebird - 5 months ago

okay

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Thanks! This image is already out in the public space. Just make sure to properly credit who drew this wonderful piece when showing this image elsewhere.

:iconJevmav:

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

True. Dan Heng might have needed to think about that present more. Or maybe he just had that Lancer-level Luck.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Thanks! Yea…gotta love Hoyo recognizing Hoyo. I can definitely see Silver Wolf playing Genshin.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

[b]**Final Results:**[/b]

Trinity Cruz: 11 votes
Emi Tanaka: 11 votes
Izumi Inoue: 8 votes
Bethany Parker: 18 votes

[b]Winner:[/b] Bethany Parker

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Welp…it seems like you are the last vote, so I guess we just have to wait a couple hours before I formally announce the results.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Nah. If anyone is late, then it’s me replying to your comment. Vote Received.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

For sure. For sure.

Fatedmeal - 5 months ago

Say it loud. Say it proud.
[i]I’ll stop being cheesy now.[/i]

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks! Yea…I agree on this being very in character for Yunli. Thanks for the suggestion. I’ll have to see how next year looks, but maybe a component of your suggestion might make its way into a future story.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks! Sorry for the belated reply!
I don’t have any other Macro/Micro stories planned this year, but look forward to next year!

AlbertKwon9182 - 5 months ago

Fabulous giantess vore/scat story as always! Really loved the casual tone of Yunli throughout all cruel stuff she's doing on the poor tiny lol. When it finally came to the moment Feixiao turning a blind eye to Yunli swallowing Caelus, the level of irony and guilty pleasure is literally off the chart! Must say that you really nailed this one and created yet another banger in the Macro/Micro uncaring pred/unwilling prey dynamics. This was really great! The disposal ending scene was pure gold too! Really loved how Yunli sent the photo of the remains of Caelus to March 7th. Poor March! Then again, the whole thing is kind of caused by her too, technically, so she could have prevented it, if she played the right cards, I guess? Haha. Ngl, when I first read that Caelus did not see March and did not know what happen to her, I, for some reason, thought that Caelus might reunite with March in Yunli's stomach or something as I imagined that it meant Yunli would've digested her beloved student. But then I guess even uncaring pred Yunli was not that cruel! Perhaps my imagination needs discipline lol. Your story is so great so it really expands my daydreaming and imagination as I move forward reading your story. Great work and I hope to see you creating more stories like this henceforth!

darkdog2 - 5 months ago

Nice story felt quite in characters of yunli to eat somoene she would see as a distraction to the art of the sword.nt gonna lie though i was expecting feixio to have one or a few prey of her own. On the side note if I may give an idea of a story for the future.The story would be an eating contest hosted by the ipc as they serve shrunken people of planets who refused to ally with them or couldn't pay their debts so the population was use as collateral.

TempestStorm - 5 months ago

Maybe Elio should get better at writing scripts where the Trailblazer doesn't wind up someone's stool

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Cogita does seem to be a player of this game board that they call a reality. However, reality a self-playing game too. With pieces (people) of varying power, influences, and motivations.

Although, if you were referencing what just happened to Florian, then yes that was a fun game for the August Lady to tease our naive hero. He might not have found out about his past, but there may have been a significant detail he could have learned in that last memory/simulation (if he can just get over his disgust from the event).

On the topic of Juliana and Nemona’s relationship, Nemona at the very least liked Juliana by association. Since she’s Florian sister. At the best of times the Pokemon Champion simply liked Juliana because she’s a strong trainer. I’m not going to precisely define Nemona’s prior fondness for Juliana. I will say that Juliana always had her reservations of the freckled tomboy. Especially as the twin sister became suspicious of the Pokemon League. Of course, this chapter showcased the first explicit conflict between the two of them. We’ll just have to see how this proceeds for them both…maybe Florian will be unlucky again and get caught in the middle of the crossfire.

SSV - 6 months ago

Oh so this is all a big game for Cogita! Though I do love the vore scenes throughout the chapter. Also my man Florian can’t catch a break. Wanting to find out more of his past only to end up as waste.

Is Juliana and Nemona friendship going to get worst? I feel like Nemona didn’t really like her since the beginning. Maybe I’m just overthinking things. Anyways, another great chapter!

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Gatdamn! I’m glad that you’re enjoying the inclusion of new characters in the active cast.

swerto - 6 months ago

Gatdamn I hope Lillie slurps half the cast by the end.

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Most definitely. Gotta love the certain perspectives that body parts can have.

ChristianBoiy - 6 months ago

holy fuckkkk, getting to witness your own disposal?
fine, I'll admit it, sentient fat MAY have its perks...

TwistedTelltale - 6 months ago

I'd also bet the Yuri Pirates Anne and Mary would both each grab a teat and start suckling her booty - er, booby.

...I fear Nightingale eventually putting this into standard medical practice. Chaldea's Servants better hope they like being flicked, fondled, and milked!

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Yea. That would be something the couple would not be fond of. They better hope that Mary Anning won't be one of Nightingale's patients if she decides to adopt this practice. As I'm sure the Paleontologist Yuri character will just jump at that chance.

TwistedTelltale - 6 months ago

...hot. I do hope Mashu and her senpai enjoy being sentient titties for the long haul. If they think they're having it bad now, just imagine if Nightingale starts getting it into her head that breastfeeding Chaldea's Servants and staff to boost overall health is a good idea!

Better hope they're ready for milking!

TempestStorm - 6 months ago

"She even tried her best to extricate him from her system."
Hate to break it to you Aether, but she did not try her best. Also here's a tip for next time. If you think you have an opportunity to escape a predator's stomach then act on that opportunity immediately. Prioritizing your own survival is more important than worrying about the comfort of the predator. Emilie certainly had no problem prioritizing her own reputation over your life.

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Thanks for the comment!

Who knows. Hopefully, this one work will bring more attention to Emilie. Aside from that…well I think both you and I know there will be more stories with Aether as prey in my gallery.

Inari - 6 months ago

Another fantastic story from you as always Fatedmeal. It's always a treat to see Aether stew away in the guts of Genshin girls~

Emily is such an interesting character that it's sad everyone including Hoyoverse themselves quickly forgot about her. I enjoyed Emily shifts into a selfish pred with immersive descriptive details of her dress ripping from her corpulent stomach, Aether's digestion, and the ending gently teasing the reader on future meals to keep up her new figure and predetory desires. There's certainly a large cast of characters for Emily to nom upon and I can easily think of a few.
Happy Genshin Anniversary!

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

I would say give it time for other Vore creators to get around to making works for her, but with all the characters being pumped out by Hoyoverse now…that seems to be less likely.

SPHikeV2 - 6 months ago

Can't believe it, this is the ONLY post with Emilie.

She wasn't just shafted by hoyo, but the vore community too!

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Yea…who knows…maybe this Alola will end up like the area that Guzzlord feasts on.

SPHikeV2 - 6 months ago

This is not gonna be good for when Necrosma come. Then again, at least he won’t be able to fuse with Nebby.

maxicrack - 7 months ago

Lusamine needs Nebby to open the Wormhole in all versions of the Alola games.

Mechdragon1k - 7 months ago

How so?

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

I guess this is one grievance that we and Nebby experienced. From the naive little protagonist spending a touch too long in a little cramped bag. Time spilling out like the onrush of stinging slime.

amerdism - 6 months ago

Always love your macro/micro stories.

Angelicsiren - 7 months ago

I don't mind mind break, but fatality and gore really aren't my thing. IMO an ending where she reforms would've been better, as it opens up the possibility of a part 2. Hell, she could even reform inside the balls over and over, becoming an infinite supply of living cum until she's rescued.

FutureBellyAche - 7 months ago

Im gonna make you into batter

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

I’m pretty sure you want the answer to be a word defined as… [i]a small domed cake or quick bread made from batter or dough[/i].

FutureBellyAche - 7 months ago

MELTED DOWN BY WHOOOO
MARIO?
MLUIGI
MBOWSER!!!?

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

u/Fatedmeal

Thanks a bunch for the comment. I always appreciate constructive engagement with my public works. Regrettably, due to my schedule I have moved onto other written works so I can’t entertain a full response to your post. Regardless, I am thankful for your well elaborated opinion.

Yea. I always thought that it was odd that more downsides of vore haven’t been tackled in other works. Probably because overly medical perspectives might not be that “sexy” or it would create some dissonance with a fantasy.

SPHikeV2 - 6 months ago

As far as this story goes, I wouldn’t really call you the villain, but I do see a bit of assholery.

To start with, I believe the two gold diggers were the real villains, so while I usually don’t agree with voring people, since I firmly believe that it is murder, I must concur that you were somewhat of a vigilante hero here. But the murder of the husband to avoid responsibility was extremely selfish, which honestly to me is what makes someone an asshole: thinking only about themselves, especially at the expense of others.

I also believe I am seeing a worrying trend towards you becoming an asshole. But for now I have to say that you aren’t the asshole in this story.

- Valerie Yon, RWA (or I guess u/ValMILFerieYon, I believe that’s the proper name format. Haven’t used Reddit for ages, but I always find these Reddit post and comment response style posts quite fun)


[OOC:]
I really liked how you covered a niche downside of a vore form when you talked about how eating a lot of women via one’s breasts can cause increased chances of getting breast cancer. I don’t think I’ve seen anyone put that sort of long term “out of sight out of mind” sort of consequence before. Reminds me a bit of the consequences of smoking, and it’s a nice change of pace from predators either having -> A: no consequences, or B: weight being the only real issue.

SPHikeV2 - 6 months ago

As far as this story goes, I wouldn’t really call you the villain, but I do see a bit of assholery.

To start with, I believe the two gold differed were the real villains, so while I usually don’t agree with voring people, since that’s murder, I believe you were somewhat of a vigilante hero here. But the murder of the husband to avoid responsibility was extremely selfish, which honestly to me is what makes someone an asshole: thinking basically only about themselves.

I also believe I am seeing a worrying trend towards becoming an asshole. But for right now I have to say that you aren’t the asshole in this story.

- Valerie Yon, RWA (or I guess u/ValMILFerieYon, I believe that’s the proper name format. Haven’t used Reddit for ages, but I always find these Reddit post and comment response style posts quite fun)

[ OOC Section Below ]

I really liked how you covered a niche downside of a bore form when you talked about how eating a lot of women via breasts could cause increased chances of cancer. I don’t think I’ve seen anything so long term. Reminds me of smoking effects kind of, and it’s a nice change of pace for either A: no consequences, or B: weight being the only real issue.

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

I did…latest story on my gallery now. No I will not do another for some time, as I have other stories I planned to write. So enjoy the story while you can.

Fiaura54 - 7 months ago

1. Your version of Cock Vore is really hot
2. Just Hot IN general, do another one.

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Igualmente
:-)

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

It happens. Better watch out.

stkpro11 - 7 months ago

I would love to be navel vored by her

Jackfishproductions - 7 months ago

Foot vore

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Thanks!

This isn’t meant to be a centrally-entertainment focused piece. Just a way for me to make “teaching/reviewing” facts about the P.A.L.D.E.A. series fun and engaging.

There are plans to follow this Pokédex up (as it’s intentionally incomplete) but that will be farther in the future. Since this covers chapter 1 to 20, then the next Pokédex after P.A.L.D.E.A. Chapter 40 is released. There will be a third Pokédex closer to the end of the series, which will cover every super-powered individual.

So, in short, this 4th wall-breaking informative entertainment piece is the first part of a long-term trilogy.

Edddd - 6 months ago

Honestly I think there was such a gap between reading those that I just tossed it up to my faulty memory and convinced myself the plot made sense and I just wasn't xD

I've now read and enjoyed both missed chapters and though I expected to like the typically gothy Marnie more, you just made Gloria into the kind of cute but egotistical maneater I particualrly enjoy and she takes the cake <3

Also the whole narrative just makes more sense now, with all the characters who's introductions I was missing til now.

And thanks for believing in my aspirations o7

tomsketchit - 6 months ago

Appreciate it! You've definitely set up quite the mystery that even just reading a summary of it was so compelling!

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

I will admit, I made this recap/outline with the expectation that some people would be encumbered by the burdens you mentioned. As I want Florian and Juliana's story to be as accessible as possible for readers.

Thank you for the continued interest in this series.

Fatedmeal - 6 months ago

Damn...I wonder what the experience was like. Reading from Chapters 13 to Chapter 16 with the expectation that there were contiguous with one another. Might have been a little bit of whiplash.

Anyway, I'm glad to see that the each of these chapters have been giving you ideas. If you ever do post one then I'll definitely be one of the ones looking forward to reading it.

tomsketchit - 6 months ago

I will admit, I read this instead of the full chapters. Your writing is amazingly detailed, and I'm fascinated by the mystery... but man do I not have the attention span, time, or energy to read full stories like that anymore...

Edddd - 7 months ago

Oh indeed I'm looking forward to it with bated breath and practiced patience :) til then

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Thanks a bunch for allotting the time to comment on the Season 2 Finale. I'm super glad that you enjoyed Giacomo's arc in P.A.L.D.E.A. I actually planned on ending his arc along with another back in my original idea for Chapter 10 (Season 1 Finale)...but my initial conception of that story had changed a lot when I finally reached this point.

However, now my ideas and roadmap are much more solidified...so I don't there will be many changes going forward aside from chapter titles (whatever I think sounds good).

Yea...I'm super glad that Zoroark has been a fan favorite for a couple people. As this isn't the last that we'll be seeing of her.

Just, as I'm guessing, that you are looking forward to the next chapter...so too am I looking forward to your next comment. Until next time!

Edddd - 7 months ago

[GIGA SPOILERS]


I had been patiently looking forward to this and it didnt disappoint ^^

The entire Giacomo arc was full of twists and turns too, almost as many as Lusamine's guts that claimed him, hope he's getting the rest he dreamed of as a micro layer on her.

I must say I really wanted Arezuark to win but sadly the show must go on and that would be difficult indeed with Florians spirit absorbed and his body turned to Arezu-mud :P

Glad shes still kicking and feasting though!


Really nice overall, I dont visit here too often anymore but I always make sure to check your page <3

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Writing all of this definitely took a long time for me as well. Regardless, I hope you enjoy every moment of it.

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Yea. Sentiments are definitely shared about the satisfaction I had with this piece coming out. It was definitely “touch-and-go” for our protagonists in this chapter. Probably the highest the stakes have been in the series so far, so I’m glad that this story was able to naturally build the tension to that point.

Also yea…I’ll definitely miss Giacomo as well. He’s my second favorite out of the Team Star Squad Bosses.

I’m glad that the combat writing was well received. I was worried if it would be disengaging since this is a Vore Story on a Vore site. However, I had to give the few fight and beatdown scenes in this chapter the proper attention they deserved. Whether it was a quick bout, a fight so one-sided it was off-screened, a battle between one exceptionally strong, and a duel between those of near-equal strengths…they all deserved the proper amount of details to deliver the relative weight of each scene.

I’m glad that Lusamine and her family came as an organic surprise. I had pretty much just mentioned Team L.A.M.E.N.T. only once so far in Chapter 16. So I was worried about the reception of the appearance of the Aether Foundation’s Matriarch. As, it is implied in the story, this family will end up being an integral part of the story going forward.

Yea…I’m afraid that I haven’t really let Florian have many opportunities to stand up for himself in this story. It will still be a rocky road ahead for him, as his one offensive ability so far is similar to Deku from Boku no Hero Academia (more reckless and with higher drawbacks than a recoil move) and comes at a steep cost of forward payment in terms of injury. Regardless, as of now, I think it positions Florian as an increasingly unique presence in this story. One that I will be excited to see develop in the next P.A.L.D.E.A. Season.

As for the question about Lucas…I haven’t really given any thought about him in my current roadmap for the first 40 chapters of this series. At the very least, you can be relaxed in that I haven’t designated him as having already experienced a fatal fate and being written out of the story (and I don’t think I’ll be doing that either as cutting too many distant threads would be troubling for me in the long run). Especially post-chapter 40 where things are more nebulous.

IddlerItaler - 8 months ago

It's an interesting variation from your usual word-heavy style. Even in this laconic form, the stories still maintained a dramatic flair.

IddlerItaler - 8 months ago

Yea, absolutely. When there's open war between two sapient species, or discrimination to the point where some folks are labelled as people and others as monsters just from the way they were born, nobody walks away clean from that ordeal.

Maybe Adalinda will be able to rule with a modicum of kindness and her descendants will eventually move on from the pain, maybe she'll usher a new reign of terror as terrible as the one she and her parents suffered, who knows. I guess that a monsterbook scholar will say "What is her scale colour? Red? Then she's chaotic evil, and will be as petty and terrible as a dragon can be." but I'm fully behind you on not pre-establishing intrinsic characteristics about someone's appearance.

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Thanks a bunch for the praise of [i]Princess in the Tower[/i].

I view it quite highly considering the large volume of fantasy vore works you have written. Truly, I wanted to write a short entry for the Monster-themed month that showed that the other writers don’t have to feel so constrained by thematic limitations. As long as they got creative.

I was quite happy to see what I ended up with last October, and I’m just as elated right now to read you reaffirming what I liked so much about this narrative. The dichotomy of perception tolerating monsters in what we believed to be virtuous and punishing those that do not embody heinous values. All because of some pre-established and erroneous belief in intrinsic characteristics decided by someone’s appearance or “blood”. Thus, what results from this sophistry of black and white is usually a very dark shade of gray. Where both sides are left a little bit tainted from this irreversible collision.

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Strong, ravenous, potentially intelligent, and a wide variety of attributes as shown by other media. Yea. I would have to agree with you on this one.

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Thanks! There are probably more tags involved with these short stories, but I’ve been writing them over the course of a year and it’s quite a number of narratives.

But I’m glad that I was able to recall some of the significant ones.

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

A truer statement has not been said today.

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

:-)

DrLewdLunch - 8 months ago

Wonderful!!! Ibuki is perfect pred

Oztoatl - 8 months ago

thanks for the tag!! also i had open comms!!

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Sentiments shared. Maybe one day I will be like Draconatedz in that respect. Until then...I guess I will just have to brandish my pen.

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks a bunch for the comment. I appreciate it and hope that I will be able to repeat this level of degradation in future stories.

NoChewing - 5 months ago

The dynamics and conversations between Jean, Ellin and Lisa was so fun to read. What makes the scene even better was that fact that both Aether and Lisa could've saved her from her demise, but the former was fooled by the prey's own prideful display while the latter (semi-)consciously left Jean to die inside the smaller girl.

Also I love the disregard of life shown by the preds throughout the story.

Such an amazing story, fantastic job!

Edddd - 7 months ago

quite a number I like to think, certainly more than she remembers :P

if that was their goal, then the adventurers guild did well in reducing bureaucratic strain and weeding out the reckless, all the while saving fuel, how economical ^^

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

I share your sentiment on the first sentence.

I share your sentiment in the following paragraph.

You are two for two. I think that I can trust your judgement in figuring out how many Adventurers were converted into Katheryne’s biodegradable fuel and waste by the time the new Ascension Quest for World Level Nine was finalized.

Edddd - 7 months ago

Another gem! Weaker pred and NPC pred are always hot as hell.

I loved the ever so minute glint of sadism and predatory satisfaction in this Katheryne's behaviour. tauntingly petting Aether inside her belly, blushing at his melting and being eager to churn Mika and other weak adventurers, of course ultimately her programming prevails, offering her stomach's embrace as a free choice is the most she can do.

I do wonder how many Adventurers ultimately took Katheryne's hand and were churned, helping her as biofuel and in testing her no longer so rarely used excretion protocols <3

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Thanks! I think that NTR is an acquired taste. It definitely was for me, and I was a bit late to the game. Regardless, I’m glad that I was able to combine those two aspects well in this story.

Kuru - 8 months ago

Really good stuff!!! And Vore NTR is certainly a new one. Surprised there isn't more of that considering how popular a kink it is relatively and that Vore and NTR work together quite well. Would be cool to see more of that. Keep up the good work~

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

Thanks a bunch for the comment Glassblower. Yea, I'm honestly surprised why F/GO's Foreigner class doesn't have more material on Eka's Portal. Their entire concept, and the individual implementation among several of the Servants within the class, really lend well to a vore narrative.

Personally, I think my favorite character to write about in this story was Jacques de Molay. She is probably a peak Foreigner design for me as well.

Glassblower - 9 months ago

Peak as usual from Fatedmeal, love seeing less popular characters like Yang Guifei and Jacques de Molay get some love (especially Yang).

GOTO - 9 months ago

Good story I love when the reader is in the story, but I want to ask you, I think this is the right time for Bennett to go on an adventure, but Karen will ask him if he wants to work inside her ass and he refuses, but his bad luck will make him find himself searching for a sexy ass for... A tall woman or an archon, and you can make the story have several paths, some of which end with Bennett being released after long suffering.

crankzzz - 9 months ago

Such crowded guts~

Lith - 9 months ago

There is this cool game on roblox called blade ball where you use the blades to slash the balls and cause testicular torsion.

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

[b][i]URP[/i][/b]

Stoave - 9 months ago

no regrets..

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Thanks! I'm a fan of both same-size and size-difference content. Kind of have to with how voluminous this stomach has become with everyone else stuffed in...and how the sweltering acids oozing our withered forms into smaller and smaller shells. Hopefully, I'll be able to kick out another size-difference story soon enough...maybe in the next wind of this mortal coil...[b][i]GOROOAANNSQH[/i][/b].

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Nice to see that you enjoyed the change in pace.

Yea. Well…bad thoughts was just the gateway for the strong pheromones to make their way to weigh down the blonde’s better cognition. But…what can you do. People be horny and do stupid things.

Thanks! Yea, we’ll have to see when we’ll be able to return to Lumine next.

TempestStorm - 10 months ago

Never thought I'd see the day that Lumine would once again take up the prey role in one of your stories. On a different note it's interesting to see that Lumine and Aether both share the bad habit of allowing the negative thoughts to take over and ultimately doom them. Great job with this story and keep up the good work. Hopefully this won't be the last time we see Lumine being consumed. She deserves just as much voracious attention as her brother gets.

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Sentiments shared.

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

I’m super stoked to see that one of my non-male pred stories was able to catch your eye and keep its hold on your attention. I’m also glad that the disposition that I envisioned for Arlecchino in this scene was conveyed well to you, and I’m assuming most of the other readers as well.

Assriel88 - 10 months ago

Love it

Fatedmeal - 4 months ago

Thanks for the comment. Definitely agree on the part about Venti prey. Sorry about the belated reply.

idaser - 4 months ago

Omg this is so good, I need more poor pathetic Venti prey

TempestStorm - 8 months ago

Glad to see that Ganyu was smart enough to simply keep her head down and stay quiet during this whole ordeal. Her white haired sister on the other hand...

BroTato - 10 months ago

Johnlee of Johnshin Impact is retired and would definitely be monologuing about those who remember the memories as he gets digested by a superior archon

BroTato - 10 months ago

Nahida: And that how the world could have ended when you edited the tree

Scara: So the first time... I could have been eaten by Ei causing you to have go on a depressive arc resulting in you not saving Apep causing Sumeru to go kaboom causing you to die causing you to not fix irminsul... The next is Ei and Furina eating the two most senior and definitely most suspicious Archons causing a lot of bad things to happen... If I have mora for each time the world ended because Ei ate the wrong person I'd have two... Which is isn't alot but it's weird it happened twice.

Nahida: I know right? Wanna know the next ones?

Scara: If someone gets eaten again Buer I swear

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

We'll have to see when I get to work on Ch. 20...still have at least one other story to work on before I tackle the next part of this story...but that hypothetical is a very tantalizing Bad End idea.

DudeBoi54 - 10 months ago

If Juliana survives, I hope you’ll make a Bad End where she gets churned up for good!

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Great to hear that the climbing action up these Glaseado Mountains has kept you guessing. Hopefully the way to the top of this mountain, and the descending action of this season, will be just as invigorating of an exercise of a hike.

Edddd - 11 months ago

Nice work! the tension is coming to a head nicely and your writing remains unpredictable, I hate when I can consistently anticipate a plot.

Love the slow corruption of Florians character, cant believe hes hard in that situation. perhaps defying death so often has made him numb to danger, that or he really is becoming a masochist who enjoys receiving cruelty from women 0.o

Im also really looking forward to how Jul-... Melony's meal develops (or perhaps departs?)

Kudos all around!

SSV - 11 months ago

Ohh you clever bastard. You’re playing with our hearts here!

Schrodinger123 - 2 months ago

Well since you stole his girlfriend you have to replace her obviously so long as ya do that no harm no foul otherwise to avoid ashholehood you’ll have to let your son eat ya

Fatedmeal - 10 months ago

Specifically concerning this post? I usually stop replying on AITA stories after a certain time has elapsed and/or I have to focus on my next works.

In general? I just posted a new story and I’m working on my next one.

stilluncomfortable - 10 months ago

Any updates?

Schrodinger123 - 10 months ago

You killed all his female friends and acquait says when he finds this out either. He's going to turn into some demented. Creep like Jeffrey dahmor the guy from psycho I just hope you're ready for a very odd mother son relationship. Good luck lady who has made herself an ntr villian hes gonna either eat you or use you
Yta

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

u/Fatedmeal • 12h

Thanks for the comment. Also apologies for the belated reply. I was hard at work with another story that ended up being much longer and time consuming than I expected.

I really appreciate that you found the content of this work to be well-suited for its format. I’ve always prided myself on being able to deliver a rich description, but I can’t really overkill it like I usually do in what should be a Reddit post. So I try to fine tune my writing and find a sweet medium. Thus, it’s very reassuring for me to read that my descriptions have neither overstayed their welcome or left a taste that was lacking.

Edddd - 11 months ago

Indeed I am! And yeah Ritsuka had the right idea, almost knew his place :)

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

I’m assuming you are talking about that [i]lovely[/i] peasant witch. As I think Ritsuka was plagued by mixed feelings during the perfunctory pulverizing of his pulpy form.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Thanks for commenting. I hope that you were able to enjoy the story even if you aren’t completely familiar with the source material.

Edddd - 11 months ago

There's just something about a prey being gobbled, digested and shat out by someone who they utterly despise :)

SSV - 11 months ago

Another amazing story! Glad to see F/GO getting some love.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Thank you for leaving a comment.

I hope that you are reading my reply after you've read through the rest of the collaboration and that the rest of your read was just as pleasant.

When we first did a collab for PKMN Day our hope was that our audience would be introduced to the works of authors they have yet to engage.

Of course, this Akira Toriyama memoriam collaboration has another purpose, but the base interests from the prior collab were still there.

To reiterate, we really appreciate that you took the time to read and leave reply.

RexLou - 11 months ago

The effort alone is incredibly admirable. I'm currently about halfway through reading and I can definitely say I've found new writers to follow. I had never encountered NitroMan before but his use of SFX in his chapter was really fun and has made it by far my favorite so far. All really fun concepts and a great mix of subjects and genres here.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Thanks for championing the idea to me in the first place, and I agree with what you said. Both about the reach of Akira’s works, its pervasive cultural diffusion, and that there were lots of androids. Lots of androids.

0nl1ce - 11 months ago

Good job everyone and nice stories all around (lots of androids). Thanks Fated for getting this set up along with everyone else. Just goes to show whether Dragon Ball was a major influence in someone's life or just a known thought, it had an impact on us all in one shape or form.

Caustic - 11 months ago

Glad to have been a part of this!
Amazing work from everyone involved!

TempestStorm - 11 months ago

Yep. The whole fandom would gladly become a part of Father's backside. I don't think there's a character that we've collectively been more down bad for than Arlecchino.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

I think you and me share the same sentiments about Arlecchino. She’s best Father. There is a kindness to the stern hold of her stomach walls, and her expression of affection may be a tad extreme and distant…but I’m sure that most of us would enjoy the fate of being reduced to fuming Father dung.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Shh~ Don’t spoil the Aether Toilet story I have in the works later this year or the next.

And thanks.

Voshine - 11 months ago

Poor Aether getting shat on ( or out in this case ) as usual. Great story though >=)

TempestStorm - 11 months ago

This might be Aether's best possible end, rivaling his potential digestive end at Ei's hands. Unlike Ei though Arlecchino does acknowledge her feelings for the Traveler. But those feelings were of a parent proud of their child. But that is only natural. I doubt that anyone could even come close to being viewed as Father's lover.

Fatedmeal - 1 month ago

Yo! Sorry for the much belated reply. I've been a little stretched thin when it comes to replying to every comment and my life's other hassles. I just want to let you know that I appreciate the follow-up. I have my own experience where I was not a fan of a story on the first read, especially with how it made me feel angry, but I ended up liking it a lot more on future rereads.

Hope you're doing well.
Best,
Fatedmeal

WoreHouse - 3 months ago

Today I read this story again. Well... instead of being less vivid, as it usually happens with stories, all the images that you laid down at the beginning and which are incomprehensible and rather distracting during the first reading, are perceived much better the second time. When you already know where everything is heading and how it will end. The double line of the narrative during digestion also doesn't look so bad, when we first see from the outside how Acheron's stomach mercilessly obliterates the prey, creating a certain anticipation, and then see the same events from the inside. Even the way she choked the reader... I admit, the first time I read it, it caused rather negative emotions in me. But when I reread it now, I even liked how she arranged for us a small demo version of what would be inside and got some sadistic pleasure from it. The moment with swallowing the cake is... an excellent cherry on the cake, beautifully completing the digestion.

So... you did everything very well! Especially considering that the story was written in two (!!) days. Personally, my limit is 2-3k words per day, and then they need to be translated into English for the same amount of time, lol.

1882950 - 11 months ago

thanks,sounds very interestings,looking forward to your next work.(I know there may not be any other choose，But perhaps in the future, I will see likeness story plot in works where prey is for others，like Lisa’s Overdue Meal relative to Nilou.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Firefly was the gentle pred in that choice, but all four choices end up with a fatal ending. Basically, how I planned for Firefly's choice to end fatally for the protagonist was to have them be digested in the dream...but (spoiler if I ever do decide to write the other parts) Silver Wolf would sneak into your room. The string of numbers in Firefly's message was from Silver Wolf to find your location and covertly devour your living body while you were digesting in the dream. It was the only choice of the four with two different predators. I would have left it ambiguous, whether Firefly knew that Silver Wolf was targeting you in the real world or not, and let the reader decide if Firefly knew this was a permanent end for you or not.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Yo WoreHouse, thanks for the feedback. Yea I think this was more of a shaking off of cobwebs for me. As it has been a while since I last wrote a piece of this length. Yea, I think I'll try and see if I can find a more appropriate tag instead of willing to unwilling. As I wasn't sure what to pick for that section.

As for the cons, again a bit of rust coming off and I wrote all of this in two days to make it in time for the date of the Honkai: Star Rail Anniversary.

I went with the metaphors and imagery as something different. To inject some voracious imagery and allude to what was going to happen at the very end of the story. It's different then my usual style, and rereading it while editing it...did make me regret going this route for the writing of the story. As I have to agree that it did more harm than good for the story, and made it harder to read. I really should have followed the Brandon Sanderson route of writing long narratives and kept it clearer...as this style of writing is more suited to shorter pieces.

I actually never intended on touching cooking from even when I wrote the prologue. It is a fetish that some people enjoy, but it's also a tag that causes some people choose not to read a story, so I rarely use it myself. I also felt like including a cooking scene would have necessitated a longer digestion scene to balance out the composition of the overall narrative, which wasn't really possible because of the time constraints I put on myself by working on this just the day before Anniversary day. As I implied before in this comment, this is supposed to be an Anniversary story...and honestly my mind was rotting from Arlecchino (I'm just down bad for her as a predator) and I really wanted to get ahead and write the story [b]Father's Fat Shit[/b] and delaying this story would have meant that I would have not been able to work on that story sooner. As for the double narrative. I agree that it affected the dynamic pacing, and it was more of a short-cut for me to make the story move along more quickly. As if I went with your suggestion (classic continuous narration), then the story would have actually been a longer piece...which time didn't really afford me.

To summarize, apologies for this work. I did put my heart and mind to it...but I think that I treated it more as a Pokemon game and I was the developer of the game. Trying to meet the deadline in front of me (that I regrettably self-imposed) by cutting corners. I would have liked to work on the story sooner.

I was planning on working on [b]Penacony's Purgatory: Prey's Paucity[/b] for four days and not two days. But real life reared its head when I didn't expect it, and I was sapped of both energy and motivation on Tuesday and Wednesday of last week.

I guess this is more of a reply where I explain how the deficiencies you noticed came about. Kind of wish that this reply wasn't as somber, but it is what it is.

See you in a future voracious work I'll write. As I'm pretty sure that there are a couple in the woodworks that you might enjoy more than this one.

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

Fate/Grand Order. It’s a gacha game set in the Fate Universe. It’s also one of the series that I write a bunch of stories for. As you can tell by my gallery folder for the series.

SSV - 11 months ago

Might be a dumb question but what is F/GO?

SSV - 11 months ago

Might sound like a dumb question but what is F/O?

SSV - 11 months ago

Might sound like a dumb question but what’s is F/O?

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

I have a writing schedule on both my commission status page and my discord for all my work, which is usually accurate to the month of when I'll post stories for this year. I also post the predicted release of the next chapter of the series within the description of the P.A.L.D.E.A. folder itself. Just click on P.A.L.D.E.A. Series in the top green bar and look at the bottom of the box with the summary description of the series. At least that is for future reference when you are wondering.

As I'll answer your question right now. The current plan is for the next P.A.L.D.E.A. chapter to be the second to third story that I release this month. I'm currently working on an F/GO story...as I realized that I've written 18 stories this year and only one has been an F/GO piece. So you should expect chapter 19 not this week, maybe next week, but definitely by the third week after that. The last chapter of the second season (Ch. 20) should be released early into the month of June, so I can focus on more F/GO releases and the Father's Day story.

ChristianBoiy - 11 months ago

i misread firefly vs sparkle lol mb

Metrolix - 11 months ago

Firefly, definitely

Edddd - 11 months ago

prayers to that :,)

Fatedmeal - 11 months ago

I will say that I am favorable to all four choices, and do hope that I'll find the time to write a deserving story for each of them. Penacony simply has a bunch of great characters.

Total0ripoff - 11 months ago

I think the same, but unfortunately it seemed to only be between Firefly and Acheron that the majority debated so I had to weigh in for my girl favored one of the two

Hopefully one day Black Swan gets her turn ;(

OctoPuss - 8 months ago

Another ref for my collection. Gotta catch ’em all

Fatedmeal - 8 months ago

Yes to the first point.

However, the second point you brought up is a reference to something else. If I get around to doing more Isekai Losses than it should become clearer.

The third point about Deedlit’s outfit is not what I was going for. Her outfit is one that is supposed to be a typical maid outfit. Any similarities to maid designs from another series, including Zero no Tsukaima is completely coincidental.

But congrats on the first point. I think I watched ZnT before Sword Art Online, so it was technically my first Isekai anime.

OctoPuss - 8 months ago

So I reread this masterpiece. After much thought and careful analysis of the text, I found another reference. This time to anime Zero no Tsukaima. Here are my evidences:
1) MC was summoned to another world by a noble but inexperienced girl magician, similar to Louise Valliere.
2) MC has an invisible voice helper (in the anime it was a talking sword, but the principle is the same).
3) Deedlit is similar to a maid at the Louise's Academy in her protective personality. Also, her uniform from ref pic looks almost completely, except for a couple of small details, similar to the maid costume from the anime. But it may also be that I'm looking for hidden meanings where no one has hidden them.

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Either we’re talking about that character from the Flinstones or that rapper from Southeast Asia. I’m not sure if I want to be anywhere near that garden.

FutureBellyAche - 1 year ago

My dyslexic ass read it as Garten of Bambam since i only saw the B