Hmm... I can't resist!
I love time-travel paradoxes very much, so pardon me for giving this one a shot ^_^
First of all, I must give you cred for making a very reasonable scenario that isn't much of a paradox at all, as much as a loop. It would have started with Twilight simply not eating Fluttershy, waited and then traveled back to be eaten herself, only claiming to have eaten past Flutters. Fooling both Flutters and her past self. Present-Fluttershy eats future Twilight, which won't kill present-Twilight, who then eat the present Fluttershy and leaves both her future self's- and Fluttershy's urns behind as she travels back in time and the infinity loop has started! Without even mixing alternate universes, you've created a very reasonable and possible time-loop that has a logical start. Most time-loops in movies or books are illogical, since there'd have been very few chances of them starting at all, but this one really works through simplicity! =D
Awesome quality of art as always, and I love the time-twist! Very rare in vore!
well when you think about it the whole point of the actual episode that this is in reference to is that time in equestria can't be rewritten like that and self perpetuating loops like this can be created without outside causality so your idea of twilight needing to be deceitful would make no sense.
You've got the thing down apart from the start. It wasn't a case of present twilight not eating fluttershy, it was future twilight cutting her off and twilight realising her plan worked.
Hmm, maybe! This is what I love about theorizing
about Time-travel and the effects it has! It is
such a fascinating subject with so many different
and possible outcomes ^_^
And a dinosaur, into which's mouth he jumps after
giving you the device and zero instructions xD
Leaving you with nothing but confusion and the
promise of future vore in an endless loop xD
As I understand it, a Paradox revolves more around
the "breaking" of time or
doing something that would prevent/en-early the inventing of time-travel.
Loops are more when time doesn't evolve past one point until the traveler
simply stops going back in time. It is theorized that -any- time-travel to
the past would resolve in a loop, and we might be living in one without knowing it at this moment.
Of course, a Loop could be considered a type of Paradox, and I could be wrong in my definitions..
I just want to specifically call out Fluttershy in panel 4. Her expression, her wingboner, her pudgy little flank, her little hoof-shuffle--it's just amazingly cute and believable. I look at her and I feel what she's feeling. It's just incredible.
Heh, everyone's obsessed with the tine loop, but you know what I like? The Urns. It's a really romantic idea, and I wish more artists did something like this. (Hint hint please do more with urns hint hint)
They seem kinda small though xP Lucky drew a pick with urns a little while ago and they were MUCH bigger to compensate for all the shit it would produce
this here is literally one of my favorite comics of all time. one of the reasons i made an account was to say that lol. i would love to see a version of this were the whole gang gets their own urn and maybe the twist could be that twilight forgets to cast a spell that would being them back before she goes back in time buts she's so excited she forgets. lol there i go letting my dumb brain get away from my self.
I kinda wish there was an all-mane-six version. One pony eats another, starting with Future-Twilight and they go one-by-one until Twilight is left. I keep imagining something with some kind of plot like they want to not be eaten by some predator so they choose to eat each other or something. As a "stinger" I keep also imagining Twilight sending a box with all 6 urns to Celestia and her opening up the box and looking at it with the most awful shock and confusion on her face.
I know this is a comic from eight years ago, but I still want to say that Twiligh should have brought Weng back when she hadn't pooped yet, so Fluttershy wouldn't miss the chance to see herself being pooped.
Posted by PegaSUS 10 years ago Report
It's like... the setup to the answer of a weird riddle.
I like how casually this is treated, haha!
Cute comic, even if this isn't my type of subject! This looks like it took quite an amount of time too. Great work!
Posted by AugustBebel 10 years ago Report
Thank you, I've worked hard for it.
Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report
Hmm... I can't resist!
I love time-travel paradoxes very much, so pardon me for giving this one a shot ^_^
First of all, I must give you cred for making a very reasonable scenario that isn't much of a paradox at all, as much as a loop. It would have started with Twilight simply not eating Fluttershy, waited and then traveled back to be eaten herself, only claiming to have eaten past Flutters. Fooling both Flutters and her past self. Present-Fluttershy eats future Twilight, which won't kill present-Twilight, who then eat the present Fluttershy and leaves both her future self's- and Fluttershy's urns behind as she travels back in time and the infinity loop has started! Without even mixing alternate universes, you've created a very reasonable and possible time-loop that has a logical start. Most time-loops in movies or books are illogical, since there'd have been very few chances of them starting at all, but this one really works through simplicity! =D
Awesome quality of art as always, and I love the time-twist! Very rare in vore!
Posted by AugustBebel 10 years ago Report
Oh my! Story was written by comissioner, so I'm just mediator here.
Posted by megidragon 10 years ago Report
well when you think about it the whole point of the actual episode that this is in reference to is that time in equestria can't be rewritten like that and self perpetuating loops like this can be created without outside causality so your idea of twilight needing to be deceitful would make no sense.
Posted by Hereforvore 9 years ago Report
You've got the thing down apart from the start. It wasn't a case of present twilight not eating fluttershy, it was future twilight cutting her off and twilight realising her plan worked.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Hmm, maybe! This is what I love about theorizing
about Time-travel and the effects it has! It is
such a fascinating subject with so many different
and possible outcomes ^_^
Posted by Hereforvore 9 years ago Report
It makes you hope that any second your future self could appear and give you a time machine
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
And a dinosaur, into which's mouth he jumps after
giving you the device and zero instructions xD
Leaving you with nothing but confusion and the
promise of future vore in an endless loop xD
Posted by Hereforvore 9 years ago Report
I think I'd prefer a really hot girl, but a dinosaur would be cool as well
Posted by MajorStrange 9 years ago Report
There's a difference between a time-travel paradox and a loop? I thought the loop itself is the paradox.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
As I understand it, a Paradox revolves more around
the "breaking" of time or
doing something that would prevent/en-early the inventing of time-travel.
Loops are more when time doesn't evolve past one point until the traveler
simply stops going back in time. It is theorized that -any- time-travel to
the past would resolve in a loop, and we might be living in one without knowing it at this moment.
Of course, a Loop could be considered a type of Paradox, and I could be wrong in my definitions..
Posted by 8th Demon 10 years ago Report
And here I was hoping for F/F/F... makes sorting for the urns harder though.
Posted by bonberjean 10 years ago Report
I love stories that have time travel in it... so, great job to not creating a paradox
Posted by LightSpeed 10 years ago Report
Vore Paradox. @w@;
Posted by DireZyre 10 years ago Report
Actually it's not a paradox, it's rather logical indeed
Posted by Trexthepony 10 years ago Report
I want to be her poop
Posted by Hereforvore 10 years ago Report
How....it actually makes sense....maybe.....ummm,m
Posted by ublover1 10 years ago Report
so lovely <3
Posted by Leshana 10 years ago Report
This is a stupendous idea! I'm glad it was thought of by someone who appreciates the proper ending of digestion too.
Posted by donutbrittle 10 years ago Report
Squee, this came out beautifully! And for that matter, so did they! A++, would commission again!
Posted by AugustBebel 10 years ago Report
Haha, you welcome :3
Posted by sevensix 8 years ago Report
I assume https://e621.net/comment/show/2077680 is lying about their being another part scheduled?
Posted by donutbrittle 8 years ago Report
Heh! Yeah, wow, that's pretty out there.
Posted by sevensix 8 years ago Report
*there; sorry
Posted by silverspec 10 years ago Report
Perfect. Paradoxes and vore all in one comic now. Yiiiiiiiiiiiiis
Posted by MintyCat 10 years ago Report
Yay! I was wondering what you were doing for a while, but I'm glad to see your art work again.
Posted by donutbrittle 10 years ago Report
I just want to specifically call out Fluttershy in panel 4. Her expression, her wingboner, her pudgy little flank, her little hoof-shuffle--it's just amazingly cute and believable. I look at her and I feel what she's feeling. It's just incredible.
Posted by AugustBebel 10 years ago Report
Unf… you make me fell it too.
Posted by Xodiaq 10 years ago Report
Pfft, infinite looping vore? That's actually pretty genius! XD
Posted by Vraddock 10 years ago Report
Heh, everyone's obsessed with the tine loop, but you know what I like? The Urns. It's a really romantic idea, and I wish more artists did something like this. (Hint hint please do more with urns hint hint)
Posted by donutbrittle 10 years ago Report
I got the idea from Carnoustie's pic: http://aryion.com/g4/view/279957
Posted by megidragon 10 years ago Report
yeah, lucky introduced the scat urn concept to me aswell
Posted by DireZyre 10 years ago Report
They seem kinda small though xP Lucky drew a pick with urns a little while ago and they were MUCH bigger to compensate for all the shit it would produce
Posted by DireZyre 10 years ago Report
oh someone already linked that pic
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
Got to love the urn idea! I hope to see more of it sometime. ^^
Posted by DireZyre 10 years ago Report
Thats the most beautiful manipulation of time travel ever...
Posted by DarkPinkie 10 years ago Report
Such a lovely senario only possible with time travel.
I find it a tad sad they didn't use translucent urns (colored glass) as it hides away their final forms.
Posted by powerplayer01 10 years ago Report
A hope another comic is made where Rainbow and Applejack do that!
Posted by Xharyuk108 9 years ago Report
Can someone explain for what using urns?
Posted by angrytiger12 9 years ago Report
this here is literally one of my favorite comics of all time. one of the reasons i made an account was to say that lol. i would love to see a version of this were the whole gang gets their own urn and maybe the twist could be that twilight forgets to cast a spell that would being them back before she goes back in time buts she's so excited she forgets. lol there i go letting my dumb brain get away from my self.
Posted by andromon 9 years ago Report
I kinda wish there was an all-mane-six version. One pony eats another, starting with Future-Twilight and they go one-by-one until Twilight is left. I keep imagining something with some kind of plot like they want to not be eaten by some predator so they choose to eat each other or something. As a "stinger" I keep also imagining Twilight sending a box with all 6 urns to Celestia and her opening up the box and looking at it with the most awful shock and confusion on her face.
Posted by LightDragon 8 years ago Report
Well, usually I'm not into digestion or scat, but this is so hilarious that I must fav' this anyway XD
Posted by e_voyager 8 years ago Report
twlight must have really worked on that spell to make it last long enough to be digested.
Posted by liwenyu 1 year ago Report
I know this is a comic from eight years ago, but I still want to say that Twiligh should have brought Weng back when she hadn't pooped yet, so Fluttershy wouldn't miss the chance to see herself being pooped.
Posted by donutbrittle 8 months ago Report
Wow, I didn't think of that. It'd be hard to cram it into the already way-too-compressed narrative, but it's a hot thought.
Posted by liwenyu 8 months ago Report
you creat that?
Posted by donutbrittle 8 months ago Report
I wrote and commissioned it.
Posted by liwenyu 8 months ago Report
You are absolutely genius, I love this idea