ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I'm glad someone likes it. I kind of wanted to try writing something different.

doomed - 1 year ago

i love how he was gonna kill her lol

Yumyum18 - 1 year ago

Aww, this is turning into a real cute tale

AnAccount - 3 months ago

It was already cool but that makes tyler even cooler in my book

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Not so much luck as virtue. Resisting the woman requires a near Herculean amount of willpower. Not only because she is attractive, though that is part of it, but also because this particular predator emits pheromones that make her practically irresistible to men.

doomed - 1 year ago

the survivor

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Which one?

doomed - 1 year ago

lucky guy

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Preds working together to subdue stronger preds/prey is a thing that happens, but it is looked down upon as being cowardly and dishonorable. The younger generation generally doesn't take these codes all that seriously, but older preds do.

It's not that Josh wasn't confident, he was just reluctant. His fear wasn't coming from the prospect of being devoured, but rather having his hand forced. He didn't want to eat his sister. He doesn't like eating anyone and has only ever eaten people in self-defense. When his sister said he was lucky that no one had eaten him, she was wrong, luck had nothing to do with it. His kind and gentle demeanor mean that he is mistaken for easy prey, but he is an exceptionally strong pred. He's not actually putting on act or trying to deceive anyone. People just generally mistake kindness for weakness.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Preds working together to subdue stronger preds/prey is a thing that happens, but it is looked down upon as being cowardly and dishonorable. The younger generation generally doesn't take these codes all that seriously, but older preds do.

It's not that Josh wasn't confident, he was just reluctant. His fear wasn't coming from the prospect of being devoured, but rather having his hand forced. He didn't want to eat his sister. He doesn't like eating anyone and has only ever eaten people in self-defense. When his sister said he was lucky that no one had eaten him, she was wrong, luck had nothing to do with it. His kind and gentle demeanor mean that he is mistaken for easy prey, but he is an exceptionally strong pred. He's not actually putting on act or trying to deceive anyone. People just generally mistake kindness for weakness.

Randomdude5 - 1 year ago

I like social Darwinism in a society where vore is normalized. I like it when no one else cares when the prey is eaten and being digested in a stomach, just a short distance away.
One problem with social Darwinism is teamwork. Small groups of friends or family can help defend each other against preds, or help subdue prey. A group of lesser preds could hold down, and feed a slightly stronger pred to one of their members. IDK, but this might be looked down upon. Obviously Erin didn't care about her brother, and wasn't going to help him, if he needed it, but I think a social Darwinist vore society, might encourage tribalism. Of course I could just be overthinking it.
The point about Josh hiding his predatory abilities makes sense, but I think that he could be more confident, since he knows that he is not in much danger of being eaten. I wonder if Josh had been less fearful of Erin, and had threatened her back, if she would have backed down from trying to eat him. I assume that him acting weak was Erin's last chance to be a decent person. If he had showed Erin that he could eat her, then her decision of whether or not to try, could have been affected by self-preservation.

Anyways, if you write more stories, I will probably read them, unless they have my blacklisted tags in them.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wasn't very explicit with the world building, so I'll clarify some things here. This takes place in a man eat man world where vore is normalized as a form of social Darwinism. Essentially, if someone is eaten they lose all human rights and the act more or less considered good, since it strengthens the gene pool. The weak are preyed upon by the strong and live in fear of being eaten. Preds are both feared and admired in society.

The reason that Erin didn't know Josh was a pred is because he is ashamed of it and doesn't take any pleasure in the act. He became a pred in self-defense, he looks weak and acts timid, so people naturally thought he would make for easy prey, however, he is deceptively strong and was able to turn the tables on his would-be-predators.

Randomdude5 - 1 year ago

I quite enjoy this story. Erin is a good bitchy pred who likes posting her meals on social media for the attention. She has no regard for anybody other than herself. She also does have limits on how she treats her brother. One thing that I don't understand is how she underestimated him so much. Maybe she got cocky, and assumed that since she had eaten so many people, that she could eat Josh, since she thought that he wasn't eating anyone. Maybe it was just a handwave in the plot, or it could be Erin's narcissistic self deception. It doesn't really matter, since Josh ate her anyways. I also like how casual the mother is about her children eating each other. Casual fatal vore is kinky, although I think there would be larger families to keep the population up with so many being eaten.
I also like the chat in Erin's stream. They don't care about her, but just want to see vore.
I also wonder if Annie will become Josh's girlfriend.

Anyways, good story. I haven't read much of your writing, because I am picky, and dislike f/m vore.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Nowhere, it's AI generated. I can send it to you if you want, though.

PErecda - 1 year ago

Where can I find the original preview image?

doomed - 1 year ago

Sometimes family is evil

theonlymatt - 1 year ago

Yes, she did try to dump him.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Indeed. I love dramatic irony, and Melissa. I really hope nothing bad happens to her.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I think I'll stick with Meat Cute. Not that I don't like your suggestion, but giving it a title like that would compel me towards making it lighthearted, and I tend to be all over the place when it comes to tone. Plus, there are some really tasty dark elements I think would be fun to explore.

Soranshiro - 1 year ago

Sounds good. Or it can be My sweety darling/boyfriend, considering he got poured with chocolate and honey already. Up to you.

doomed - 1 year ago

lol abby is in fact a bad person melissa,

doomed - 1 year ago

now i see why they cheated on her , natalie sucks lol

Jacquelope - 1 year ago

Sheesh, that's what ennui will do to you!

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Technically, she already dumped him, but immortals are nothing if not persistent.

doomed - 1 year ago

Nope , she decided to be a horrible person to him, and now she wants to dump him XD nope she gotta deal with the crazy man

theonlymatt - 1 year ago

This story has like all of my favourite elements. *chef's kiss*

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

At least Ben had a choice in the matter, Becky had it the worst. Thanks for the suggestion, btw. I'm not going to go with it, but it did get my gears turning and now I think I'm going to go with "Inseparable."

doomed - 1 year ago

“A Final date” is another title . Since it’s the best way to describe it . Sucks for Ben

UBHunter - 1 year ago

Wonderful story, love some good casual vore.

doomed - 1 year ago

oof yeah joe is right shes evil

redsquallff8 - 1 year ago

Absolutely awesome

AlbertKwon9182 - 9 months ago

This is a great giantess vore/scat story! I think I like this as well. Poor Lily and Ava and Emily... Really loved the digestion scene!

HotDingo - 1 year ago

this shit is clearly ai generated

KimKibong - 1 year ago

It was really great but I should should have specified the same size

AnAccount - 3 months ago

I didnt even realize it was AI until the telltale signs showed up in one paragraph. "A stark reminder ... twisted rivalry" wish there was an AI to un AI something it made haha

TMVore - 1 year ago

Loved it, thanks for such a great story!

shlurpay64 - 1 year ago

It bothers me that this story has been up 14 hours and has no comments. I really enjoyed it and it pushed so many different buttons for me. I love that Claire went full fat girl and couldn't even make it through her promotion without embarrassing herself by having to take a shit. I loved the paragraph about Claire leaning back with a swollen stomach and belching in satisfaction. I would have maybe preferred more teasing (especially about disposal) but maybe that's not the dynamic or Claire's character.

Fat dorky women are sexy as predators, there is no doubt.

doomed - 1 year ago

Everyone’s dream

AnAccount - 1 year ago

Wow gregs a douche damn. Hot story though good stuff

doomed - 1 year ago

If they go back I wonder if the witch will have a word with them lol

theonlymatt - 1 year ago

Accidental digestion is getting to be one of my favourite tags and this was a great specimen.

shlurpay64 - 1 year ago

It's hard to say whether we should be sad for Jerry or jealous that he did end up becoming a different kind of sausage in the end~

Also a really fun and creative plot idea.

Xenophage17 - 11 months ago

Love some transformation with a boy doing the gulping and disposal.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it, particularly because your comment was the inspiration for it. I figured I'd explore his trauma and let the guys win one for a change.

doomed - 1 year ago

I have never loved a revenge story so much . Not only was his revenge completely justified . You made it even more justified by showing how they treated him . Add on the fact that rather than give Cynthia some way to come back and fight back you made her powerless to stop him . He didn’t even buckle either , so many times when a revenge story is written the character buckles and feels guilty , here he his resolve never fades . He may have gone slightly too far for Emily since her actions were accidental , but he’s right the teasing and bullying they did after he came back was intentional. As for Cynthia she got what she deserved . Bradley was just a curious guy and she turned him into a ginger bread cookie over a mistake and then tormented him .
This was perfect

Yumyum18 - 1 year ago

Ooh...revenge IS sweet!

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I don't disagree, but so is he, so it works.

doomed - 1 year ago

yeah shes crazy lol

Xenophage17 - 1 year ago

Love the sibling angle and teasing with cheesy jokes. Also big fan of the exit discussion.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Just so you know, this comment is what prompted the sequel.

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Undoubtedly, but he still got off lucky.

doomed - 1 year ago

At least he gets to live LOL , with your stories the boys usually die or suffer some worse fate for something that wasn’t always their fault. Bradley is probably traumatized though

doomed - 1 year ago

Well at least Bradley gets to live lol I was expecting him to die like brothers tend to in these stories XD he’s just gonna be traumatized

AnAccount - 3 months ago

"Do you think im some kind of sexual predator?" No just a murderous one. These scenarios always make me laugh

Gelenor - 1 year ago

Is it really that much of a sacrifice giving up a day off if you get a nice big meal out of it?

doomed - 1 year ago

Any teacher that doesn’t know to avoid bad scenarios like this , and then defaults to killing a student who doesn’t understand is a shitty teacher XD giving up a Saturday for a student is noble , but teachers can still be shitty and do that

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

What are you talking about, Ms. Voreman is an excellent teacher? How many teachers do you know who would give up their Saturday to privately tutor a failing student? It's not her fault that Mark is a shithead, he was like that before she digested him.

doomed - 1 year ago

Passing out her ass , seems like she’s just as bad a teacher as mark was a student lol

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was aiming for addict vibes. She wants to stop, knows she should, is afraid of what will happen if she doesn't, but can't, and she lies to herself every time, telling herself that it's the last time.

EmmaTummy - 1 year ago

Incredible. Really loved the airheaded semi-unwilling angle you took for the pred!

Indighost - 1 year ago

Very sexy

Toxix - 1 year ago

Very nice. Love food transformation and the cruelty here

Mentald - 1 year ago

Thank you

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I was thinking of doing a continuation called "Naughty Mommy," I could probably incorporate that.

Mentald - 1 year ago

let him speak to her please

ClosetMonster - 1 year ago

I suppose it depends on your perspective. It's more like they have fused together. His mother absorbed him and aspects of his personality, but his body and mind no longer exists as they did before. His body has plumped out her curves and made her youthful and his mind made his mother more adventurous.

Mentald - 1 year ago

In that i just wanted him to live please tell me he lives

Indighost - 2 years ago

Good story. Pig transformation is a good theme to go along with stuffing and vore.

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

I wonder what happens if the police investigating the disappearance find out what happened.

AnAccount - 3 months ago

"Besides people would blame him" this andrew guy is a piece of work huh. I remember reading this story a while back. Nice work!

Vorachist22 - 3 years ago

I love this story.

ClosetMonster - 3 years ago

I appreciate the criticism, but I actually excluded that for a purpose. Nancy wasn't facing any punishment for what she was doing, and Emma was actively covering for her, not wanting to get her in trouble and denying there was a problem. It's why Nancy kept bullying her and why she thought of her as a "perfect victim." Andrew sticking up for her was supposed to blindside her. I guess I could have made that more clear though.

The_Prof - 3 years ago

pretty good story. Though since from the sound of things you seemed to want to improve I'll give some critique. Try to work on the buildup more. Some foreshadowing would help such as in the initial paragraphs bringing up that Andrew would admonish Nancy for her behavior and try to get her to stop a few times.

VoraciousSincerity - 3 years ago

There are two words that together I think sum up this story pretty well: "Karma" & "Whoops!"

EmmaTummy - 1 year ago

Absolutely adore this. I've read through it too many times to admit... Would love some more in this style!

xvx17 - 3 years ago

So.good

Wilhelm00 - 3 years ago

Hot damn that was a good story

ClosetMonster - 3 years ago

Okay, I took your prompts and ran with them. This is the result: https://aryion.com/g4/view/744475

RaptorJesus - 3 years ago

well that was certainly an experience

ClosetMonster - 3 years ago

He's still alive.

GGO - 3 years ago

Loved it, but how is this non fatal?

nousername179 - 4 years ago

Nice

nousername179 - 4 years ago

????

redsquallff8 - 4 years ago

Hot

HentaiMaster90000 - 11 months ago

Not bad! This is outside of my usual tastes personally, but it was a nice read nonetheless

Lupe - 6 years ago

I liked that you used tf vore! We don’t see much of that in here. You did a good job making the sister fun, as well.
Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Cobbly - 6 years ago

Not a bad piece of sentient disposal. I like.

00000 - 7 years ago

Nice! I hope there is a continuation of this character!

SonOfDarkness - 8 years ago

10/10

ClosetMonster - 8 years ago

That part is actually based on real lore. When making a pact with the devil witches had to perform something called the "shameful kiss", which basically involved performing analingus on Satan. It's not much of a stretch to imagine Satan might be in the mood for a BJ instead. Besides, he had to get rid of her gag reflex somehow.

Indighost - 8 years ago

Quick but effective. I laughed out loud at the part about giving the devil a blowjob.

TempleOfHephaestus - 13 years ago

What a fantastic story, thanks for writing it. Do you intend to write anymore of this type?

drudcommupence - 14 years ago

Awesome,more like this!

theheadsn - 14 years ago

wow transformation accidental vore very cool and rare. would love to see you write more

SesshouFan22 - 12 years ago

I liked the idea, I love when shippo makes that cocky hanyou pay x3 but I don't like all the digestion and scat details

overall, awesome story!
<3<3<3<3

BabLe7 - 13 years ago

interesting. i don't know how else to describe that.

ClosetMonster - 14 years ago

Feel free to make a comic if you want. I love your work and will look forward to seeing it.

deleteduser301 - 14 years ago

This is really amazing, I might just make a comic based on this with your permission of course ^^

What a lucky prey..

Indighost - 14 years ago

Wow, you are indeed very fast :) In that case I hope you won't mind if I say that I can't wait for the next one!

ClosetMonster - 14 years ago

Thanks, and yes these have been posted directly after completion. So far all of my stories have been started, completed and posted in the same day, with the exception of my first story that sat on my hard drive for several months while I worked up the courage to post.

BlueBlaze - 14 years ago

I loved it!

ElPortero - 14 years ago

This is an amazing story! Thank goodness you are here, 'cause we need more authors like you!

krishna3ca - 14 years ago

Really good story. I like long digestion. Thanks.

Indighost - 14 years ago

WOW. --Good Writing, --Stuffing, --Extended Digestion, --Scat, --Nice details... I am AMAZED. This is an Awesome story, closetmonster!! I will have to Watch you!

Bright - 14 years ago

I laughed at the idea of literal black mail.

I liked the story, I am rather found of prolonged stomach vacations.

Sitharc - 4 years ago

Maybe her brother is next or one of her classmates... or in the past and gets rid of someone, young or not, then finds out a bully was never born.

Sitharc - 4 years ago

Shippo needs to be digested by Kagome more often, but love how she freaked out upon realizing!

Tho sadly for Shippo, doubt the cookie rain would save him any time as the acids would still be going to town on his flesh alongside the soon to be slurry of cookiemush.

ElPortero - 14 years ago

Really enjoyed this! I am so glad you are here on the portal!

Indighost - 14 years ago

Lol @ "furry porn" as a modern convenience.

This story was equally as amazing as your other one. Thanks for posting it, I am super impressed. It's great to have an author like you on Eka's! :)

ClosetMonster - 14 years ago

I'm going to use Mrs. Incredible from the Incredibles for my next story. In fact, I'm just about finished right now. It should be posted in the next day or 2