Gershwin - 4 years ago

Haha then mission accomplished :)

Jimmyjoe76 - 4 years ago

That's cute!

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Oh and I note that I have been clicking "Contains vore" on my uploads, to be on the safe side. Not sure how that is represented on the actual upload, I don't see anything.

Gershwin - 4 years ago

I'm afraid I disagree, she is not parking in the act of vore, she is partaking in the act of sticking something up her bum, much like you would a sex toy.

If you put a small person in your mouth, is that vore? No, it's mouth-play or at most pre-vore, if that is the intent.

I've had this argument before, and it boils down to this for me: Just sticking something up a backside does not constitue vore. To quote the definition:

"Vorarephilia, an erotic desire or sexual fantasy to be consumed or to consume another"

She isn't consuming her.

Eboros - 4 years ago

oh, but it's vore ! Anal vore to be more précise !

XiaoRenzhe - 4 years ago

Thanks, friend!

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Thanks, all credit goes to :iconXiaoRenzhe: though :)

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Thanks, all credit goes to :IconXiaoRenzhe: though :)

joeburp22181 - 4 years ago

Very nice

Gershwin - 1 year ago

Glad you enjoyed this piece of work!

Zhane00 - 1 year ago

god i love gershwin sooo much @zhanye_00

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Thanks :) it was fun revisiting the scene and cleaning it up for this.

carlj - 4 years ago

Great job incorporating the picture with the story ^^

Gershwin - 4 years ago

I've made inroads on the next part. It got bogged down in complexity and a chunk of writing that I honestly didn't like much when I went to read it back.

I've found the whole lockdown/covid situation has stifled my creative drive as well, but I'll get it back - I love writing, I just want to make sure I do it well. A side project has ignited my drive a little, so once that's done I'll see about finishing this story up!

anyany - 4 years ago

Any news on the next chapter?

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Thanks! More to come, maybe by the weekend, time allowing.

LocoTaco - 4 years ago

I didn't expect another part, this story is amazing. Glad you continued it

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Who knows! (Oh wait, I do!)

Another chapter and a half and I’ll be ready for the finale.

Gershwin - 3 months ago

Glad you enjoyed it, I hadn't really intended it to be DnD faithful, but I have played a lot of DnD so I suppose some of the ideas and concepts just leaked in!

I guess it became sort of romance, more a romance in the making since they're now stuck with each other!

Also Kibate did a fantastic job illustrating this (in my gallery too).

CoolKaios - 3 months ago

Very in depth and alot at play here~
I like how it grew into a genuine romance. I also like the personality of the characters and as a ne DM how surprisingly faithful it is to DnD.

Gershwin - 1 year ago

You can find the original here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/916124

Gershwin - 1 year ago

Oh probably, I can upload it. Will have to wait until my PC is fixed, PSU failed and fried my motherboard, fingers crossed nothing else got broken along the way.

Angelicsiren - 1 year ago

Is there a save of the old version? I preferred it, and think the two should have been posted separately as alternatives.

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Happy to hear you enjoyed it, thank you for your lovely feedback!

MrRonny6 - 4 years ago

Hot dang, that was absolutely amazing! You basically made me fall in love with all of this stuff again

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Thank you :) yes, I don’t usually do death stuff, at least not in a story that is otherwise fun and between people so close.

akinata - 4 years ago

i am a bit relieved that the accident wasn't a death but a revealed secret.

nice vore story overall.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Hahaha a tiny tiny baby. Awkward for Sam and Debbie too!

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Ah sorry, I wasn't complaining - I realise reading what I said back to my self, it may read that way! I was speaking in general terms, not as a result of what you said ;)

I always like to hear what people want, what they think, etc. Unless someone is actively rude or difficult, I'm pretty easy going about comments and such.

MrToon - 6 years ago

Oh. Sorry for that. I feel like an idiot now.
Anyway best of luck in your life and continue with your amazing work as a "Kink" writer :P

Gershwin - 6 years ago

I used to have tons of time to write, now I have to cram it in when I can, so I can’t work on lots at once. Dream Come True has been requested a fair amount so I’ll look into it. Sister Angered was based on an RP that got written up into a new chapter each time we did it. The RP stopped and the person I did it with isn’t active anymore, I briefly tried to find a replacement female partner but had zero luck. I can try writing it as a normal story I suppose, but part of the fun with that one was the RP nature.

MrToon - 6 years ago

That would be fun to see how it turns out.
Thought I still want to see continuation of "sister angered" and "dream come true" series. Is that much to ask? XD

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Haha like Russian Stacking Dolls, only with more slippery fluids and digestion...

Likely not part of the next and final chapter, but certainly on the cards if I do a new story with these characters and world.

shortprey20 - 6 years ago

That raises an excellent point! So i accept that explanation :p still love the work and look forward to whatever you write next!

Gershwin - 6 years ago

I find with a continued series there’s only so many ways you can describe the same event without repeating your self. In this case the vore was more a means to an end - to get him inside quick so they can go to work. I tried to make it more interesting by adding a size change, otherwise I’d end up copy-pasting the same scene as before! I accept that criticism though.

Glad you enjoy the theme, looks like discovery can’t be too far off now :D

shortprey20 - 6 years ago

For me personally i love the unaware bit of son and stepmother indulging in a fantasy together without knowing it xD i look forward to the eventual reveal but still unaware is delicious. My only criticism is while the vore scenes in the previous versions were a bit longer these ones seemed more rushed but thats only a minor thing. Still love the story and the premise

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Cool, do let me know what you think, feedback is the lifeblood of casual writers! I especially like to know peoples favourite bit, it helps guide future content.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it, I aim to please. Looks like there needs to be a part five though. This chapter was commissioned to be done as I didn’t plan to do more for a fair while.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Good you enjoyed it. It was fun writing something based on someone else’s concept. (Art trade).

Eclipseneko51 - 6 years ago

I really enjoyed that, I like how she wasn't supposed to digest him but still went with it and just moved on and enjoyed it.

Great work

(excuse my lack of grammar)

blahblahblah - 6 years ago

This was great! Thanks!

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Cool, I always like to hear when people like it. I’ll be trying to get chapter four of my main work done now.

Jamie263 - 6 years ago

I enjoyed that.

AndAnotherOne - 6 years ago

Obviously lol, the holes i should look for can all devour me and im fine with that

Gershwin - 6 years ago

haha also, I have a sibling, and the idea of doing anything with her is quite frankly horrifying, and yet the stories about such things are oddly enjoyable.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

haha also, I have a sibling, and the idea of doing anything with her is quite frankly horrifying, and yet the stories about such things are oddly enjoyable.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

I think at one point I make reference to her voice changing briefly from a deep lusty tone to a more normal one.

However, yes, I wouldn't think too hard about it :P

If you're looking for plot-holes in fetish writing on Eka's, then you're looking for the wrong holes ;)

AndAnotherOne - 6 years ago

Or her for her sons either

MechaSharkZilla - 6 years ago

And the receptionist? Albert Einstein.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Glad you liked it :) a twist you say? Nooooo idea what you could possibly be talking about. (It turns out Samantha is Ben, his best friend is a 30 something woman, a mistress of disguise!)

MechaSharkZilla - 6 years ago

That was... Pretty amazing. Now I just need to wait and see if the twist I'm expecting in part 3 comes to fruition.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

It may be short than this chapter, or it least I hope it is! I get too into the writing and just do too much. I need to get this finished so I can do more of my main story!!

GeneralUrist - 6 years ago

Well this is interesting, I wonder what the finale will be? Aside from Full Tour, not sure what opportunities remain.

I suck at 'short' stories as well. Most things I write end up several times longer than intended.

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Almost done on part 2. Took lol her than planned, and got stuck with two endings I wanted to do!

Gershwin - 6 years ago

Why do you hope you’re wrong? You dislike the theory? I’m actually toying with where it goes now ;) (if your reply may be spoilery do PM me instead)

oishi1 - 6 years ago

I have some theories, but hope I'm wrong.

theheadsn - 6 years ago

Patently anticipating ch 2

Jamie263 - 6 years ago

I enjoyed that. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Gershwin - 2 years ago

Aw thanks! I really have a soft spot for the characters. One day I'll finish it... one day...

CowboyHat - 2 years ago

This is an all time fav of mine I love to come back to now and again. Just love the teasing, love the dynamic between our two leads, just this whole series is so great!

TastesUndivided - 3 years ago

I love those~
The build up really shows how big of a deal vore actually is.

Gershwin - 3 years ago

Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing these characters and their almost “going all the way” scenarios.

TastesUndivided - 3 years ago

I love "Will they won't they" vore scenarios. Especially when they play around with vore without actually getting to it. Or at least taking time with it~

Gershwin - 5 years ago

Glad you liked it. I’ve struggled to get much writing done recently, but have a half done epic finale for this story. I’ll get there eventually.

Soulary - 5 years ago

Thank you for writing this series. I definitely enjoyed it! ^3^

Thatguy69 - 6 years ago

fair enough that's understandable :P i only suggested that because the way you describe your characters having dark desires to just digest the person in their stomach makes me kinda want to see it happen sooner or later and could spice things up but i do see your point and understand, personally i don't mind repetition as long as its not just copy pasted identical stuff but you would have to be a pretty bad writer to do that in the first place lol. on the commissions side of things i might just have to take you up on that offer when i have a bit more cash :D what is your going rate for commissions btw? feel free to message me the details if you would prefer and we can discuss further

Gershwin - 6 years ago

I think within the universe of this story
"accidentally" taking someone's life would be considered a pretty horrible (and not consequence free) event and mentally scaring for the person who did it. What Francesca did was for a greater purpose and wasn't aimed at "because it'd be hot", even if she was sort of enjoying it at the time.

However, I suspect you will enjoy the next chapter...

As for KINKS (and indeed with this story) I feel the need to close narrative arcs before too long. I find that after a while the situation and events become stale, there's only so many ways I can describe being swallowed and shoved in various holes before I'm basically repeating my self.

That doesn't preclude me from simply writing a new story which involves those characters and KINKS but from a new starting point, allowing me to frame events in a new/different way and move things along, do a time skip, etc.

There's also the commission side, if someone (as was done before) simply commissions more KINKS work then I do more KINKS work, I guess. I have ideas for where I may go next with it, but won't be working on it for a while now - going to try and get the next (possibly two) final chapters of this story done, then attempt to do the next chapter of "Dream Come True" which has often been requested, then ... not sure what comes next :D I may do a few short stories.

Heck, if you want a digestion scene involving some specific characters, you could always commission a short story as a "non-canon" offshoot of this story.

Thatguy69 - 6 years ago

glad to hear it and cant wait for the next part to come out :D also food for thought, i know you dont like having characters that become friends and such digested but i was thinking maybe you could have another human girl come along to join in the fun only to be "accidentally" digested ;P just a thought i had, feel free to take note of it or disregard it completely as its your story after all and an amazing one none the less :P gotta be honest though i felt like the KINKS story ended a little early and would have hoped for more fun but was still great none the less

MCPB - 7 years ago

I like Alexa and Mandy, the story setting, the fact that Mandy is not invulnerable (which allows the digestion-teasing)... and especially the misunderstanding between Alexa/Mandy and Francesca in the end – and of course the resulting possibility of accidents :)

Eclipseneko51 - 7 years ago

I didn't want you to spoil anything anyway

Gershwin - 7 years ago

Glad you like it. hehe I won't give anything way, spoils the fun!

Eclipseneko51 - 7 years ago

I'm really loving the series so far and I hope mandy doesn't get digested but anyway great work and hope to see more like it in the future.

Gershwin - 7 years ago

Sigh “both parts” stupid phone keyboard.

Gershwin - 3 years ago

I’m really happy you enjoyed it! You’ll find a lot of my writing is “almost” rather than “actually” fatal. The work Kibate did on the comic is amazing though. Really he’s such a talented artist. This story is one of my oldest, I really should do a re-write a new chapter. Haha as soon as I get over my year or two long writing hiatus.

josephpetters34 - 3 years ago

I had no idea that this existed outside Kibate's comic. It's a fantastic piece! (also I am super a fan of it being almost fatal. I feel like there not enough of it and it's deeply more preferable to me than a fatal end so after the last few pages of the comic I was getting worried I would see characters I like be digested. I always get queasy when the idea of fatal digestion or otherwise is involved so I was super happy to read this <3)

vorefanatic314 - 4 years ago

I get it, as a former vore writer myself I know how real life and other stuff can get in the way. Still, this is a fantastic story and I love the comic adaptation of it. Hope to see them continue and more like it in the future! Keep up the great work!

Gershwin - 4 years ago

Always nice to hear when someone has enjoyed my work :) When I get back into writing I have plans to do more with this story, though I have plans for a lot of things.

vorefanatic314 - 4 years ago

Just found Kibate's comic of this and had to read the story. Great job! I would love to have seen it end fatal but I like what you did and would love to see more of these characters in the future!

backdown - 8 years ago

Outstanding, can't wait for part 3!

Gershwin - 8 years ago

Heh sorry its taking so long, not had the time or feeling for it recently. Got a lot on!

joeburp22181 - 8 years ago

No spoilers, that's fair enough.

joeburp22181 - 8 years ago

Yeah that's cool, the struggle is fun!

Gershwin - 8 years ago

So am I! Haha I have overall plot beats I follow and a plan, but I find that the details of what happens tend to evolve and change as I write it down :)

Wolfsage - 4 years ago

cool

Gershwin - 4 years ago

It's one of my oldest pieces :) One of these days I'll write another part to it. Not doing much writing at the moment, but I'll get back one day.

Wolfsage - 4 years ago

Why havn't I heard of this story before now?

Gershwin - 8 years ago

Well next part is up. It does have implied sexiness but not the usual sort and it won't be graphic.

Gershwin - 8 years ago

I know! I wished there was more... so I decided to write it instead of wishing for it :D