Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'm glad you're enjoying the series my man. ^,^
I hope the future ones will be to your liking too.

Zell - 5 years ago

So good.
I love the freedom these pokemon stories give you with how much the shrunken trainers can be altered.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'm glad you liked it my man. :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I won't lie, Hex Maniac is my favorite, but I don't want to do another with her character type just yet. There's plenty of other great girls in the series that need some love to. I'll be looking to Sword and Shield soon enough, don't worry.

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Pretty chilling indeed.

Loving your takes with these Pokemon girls. Dawn was a neat work

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

I'm glad you liked it. ^-^

Swalloweredipus - 4 years ago

A very unique take on pokemon vore. Well done.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'm glad you liked it. ^,^

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Very interesting take especially with a Pokemon Breeder this time.

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

You are responsible for it's creation. Same with others who voiced their opinions. I take a lot of input into my story choices before I begin writing them. But, that's nothing to be sorry about.

I had a blast writing this one, and the tone was a fun change of pace compared to my other stories. Not to mention, I have more in mind for this series as well, thanks to TechniMIND adding in input and character development in his comics for the pair.

All and all, I think I'll be coming back to this series soon, and hopefully people will like it just as much as I do. ^-^

dubblebubble - 4 years ago

I finally got around to reading this one. I could be overstating my own importance here but I feel, at least, PARTIALLY responsible for this story existing bc I suggested a sequel to the Halloween story? So, if that's that case, sorry about that.
This was... unfathomably sweet. And sad. But mostly sweet. Genuine love isn't something I go for very often, but this story truly is heartwarming. I really enjoyed the happy ending.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'm glad you liked it :D

I might do an update around valentines day. Tbd atm.

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

You know what they say, "better late than never" XD

Really fascinting kinks being displayed here and am even more interested in where this goes from here :)

Anonymoususer000 - 3 years ago

NP Bob lol

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Probably not for a bit. I have a lot of other stories lined up at the moment, but I've been hearing a lot of requests to see these two again.

MikeHawk - 4 years ago

To be continued when? Really good btw

UnknownEnforcer - 5 years ago

:)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Thanks! ^_^

I guess the sisters might make another appearence. Now that Rime has a cute little boyfriend to *pamper* because of her loving little sister that is.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I hadn't planned to unless TechniMIND asks me to, so tbd.

SkydiverRed - 5 years ago

I really like this series, hopefully it continues.

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Of course. Merry Christmas to you too :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it my man. Marry Christmas :D

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Always great reading stories from you especially near the holidays :)

Most spectacular!!

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'll see what I can do. I have a lot planned for December, but if I got time and theirs a lot of support for it, I'll try to make a Christmas special. Maybe I'll show how Elizabeth and her friend really met. :3

dubblebubble - 5 years ago

This is just a great story! Can't wait for the sequel. Hopefully a Christmas special?

PaNdAiTe411 - 5 years ago

True story, but its 2019, common sense isnt as common as it use to be :p sucks to be them.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I feel like that should be common sense. You never know if they'll be in hiding or not. :P

PaNdAiTe411 - 5 years ago

The moral of the story, don't take candy from little child, they could be sadistic Vampires.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I'm glad you like it. It was a trip to go from writing Macro/micro for years to Giga out of the blue. xD

EmissaryOfRainbows - 5 years ago

Excellent work on this!

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I don't think there will be a sequel sadly. I hadn't really planned for it to have one. But, you never know with my work whether it will be continued or not.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Thanks! I'm trying a lot of new things at the moment. This story was a lot of fun to attempt.

Mechdragon1k - 5 years ago

When I mean yandere I mean the non-fatal sort but Lawrence will not know that.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad you liked it. I have plan's for other evil teams but I wanted to give these hooligans a little love for Halloween.

thatoneguyintheback - 5 years ago

I love these so far! I know a lot of these are about dominance but one with Wicke where she's caring but still convinces you to submit with the promise of being gentle sounds great

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Nice seeing your take on Team Skull. Their female grunt is always my favorite especially with/without the mask :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Had a lot of fun with it, though it was kind of tricky.

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Lovely content as always especially with the cute Acerola :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad you liked it. :)

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Nice reading content of the toxic rockstar :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I cannot agree enough. This is truly saddening to me. T^T

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad you approve. >^_^<

Ray1700 - 5 years ago

There's no where near enough Roxie content

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it my man. ^,^

75ChaosFlare - 5 years ago

Nice seeing your works again especially experimenting on different kinds of materials one isn't familiar with :)

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Glad to be writing again. I'll try to have the next spooky girl up soon enough. ^,^

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

This series has vore. This story, however does not. I didn't want to have that in this one given the scenario. Why do you ask? My last four had vore elements.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

This series has vore. This story, however does not. I didn't want to have that in this one given the scenario. Why do you ask? My last four had vore elements.

noctris13 - 5 years ago

I shall wait patiently, and I like Medusa in all her forms, tho I'd say Rider is my personal favorite, I'm very hyped for the story with her

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Well I hope you like both her and her lily form. Pretty sure her chapter will be a family reunion in Chaldea. Though, she won't be doing a lot of domming. Hope that doesn't bother you. I won't say anything more though. You'll just have to wait.

noctris13 - 5 years ago

Do you really?!? That's fucking amazing, their is a critical lack of Medusa on this sight

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Agreed. I have something planned for her, don't you worry. ^,^

noctris13 - 5 years ago

Medusa is definitely my favorite heroic spirit(female) and more stuff needs to include her

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Not today.

SwordkingX5 - 5 years ago

With the tags, I thought Lusamine was going to eat Lillie

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

"Smirks."

We'll see what happens with everyone's favorite psycho mommy. ^,^

UnknownEnforcer - 5 years ago

So cute, Lillie is adorable. Thank you for uploading this and the others. Can't wait for Cynthia's version, along with Rosa (B2 W2 Heroine) If you are doing her that is.

Also, if this isn't the Lusamine idea/Challenge I gave to you, then I am looking forward to it after seeing how you write about Lusamine.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Now that, is a fine idea to toy with. ^,^

Niggle - 5 years ago

huh, if the app lets owners give their toys moves, types and abilities i wonder how much fun some girls could have with something like Transform.

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Im glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

TechniMIND - 5 years ago

What a unique and good idea you got there~

I looking forward for what you got in store for us!

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

Same. I thought it would be nice to have them as a permanent addition to the Champion's throne. It's Iris' job to sit there patiently all day after all, until a new toy- err, challenger, approaches.

ConceptCorner01 - 3 years ago

I’m so glad my Persona never loses Pokémon Battles

ConceptCorner01 - 3 years ago

Ah, that’s makes sense

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

As long as people find them and enjoy them all the same, they can remain hidden gems. ^_^

I hope you enjoy the series.

NRawk is also contributing to it as well. You can find his work here. https://aryion.com/g4/user/NRawk

SDFhvsdfbwiez - 5 years ago

Your stories are terribly underrated.

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Nope, I can see fine. ^_^
I appreciate your input.

Rokkag - 4 years ago

Cuz Ram is the nicer sister and by a long shot, Rem is just a yanderer

Rokkag - 4 years ago

Quick question are u color blind?

yEeTbOi - 5 years ago

What a couple of bitches. I hate those people that only consider crimes and never reasoning. Just ignorant .w.

UnknownEnforcer - 5 years ago

Hey, I am wondering something, do you have any rates for commisions, like do I have to pay for you to write it?

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I replied on there as well. You can set up notifications under the settings. :P

Thank's for the review on both sites. The one on GTS world is a little more in depth though. xD

PM me here if you want to keep in touch.

NRawk - 5 years ago

Okay, so I just left this exact review on this series over on Giantess World, but seeing as you respond more on here (and that GW doesn't actually notify authors when their stories get new reviews) I decided to copy paste it over here:

Despite very 'Pro-woman Anti-male' NWO settings are generally not my thing, I do like some of the implications of this world you've created. Though with the Whitney chapter you have set a precedence for anyone to just say they beat someone and shrink them regardless of a battle, so I don't know why any of the girls bother with a battle, or if they ever lose what would stop them from shrinking their opponent before they had to pay up? Not saying that they ever likely could, but if a male trainer does win a match, could he still be shrunk regardless? And with the law side with the winners (or women in this case) to the point that someone like Misty can publicly murder double digit trainers a day, why would men not just go into hiding? Sorry if I sound too negative towards your setting, but I know if I were in this world and not one of the first people shrunk and likely killed, I'd either leave and go off the grid (which would probably be safer) or join/form an underground resistance to disable this tech (which would be easy if you get the right Pokémon).



Still, the Iris chapter is probably my favorite so far and only because she seemed like even if you lost to her, if it was a good match she'd let you live or at least live an easier life than the ones that disappoint her.



For potential future chapters, while Hex Maniac girls, Olivia, Pheobe and Wicke are my favorite Pokégirls, given the setting I'd actually like to see your take on how Liza and Tate (the psychic twins from gen 3) are getting along with these new laws. Specifically, the two share emotional and physical sensations like pain and pleasure, so Liza would most likely want to keep her brother safe since they can't turn off their psychic link, but would it be sisterly love that motivates her or pragmatism? Would she lament not being able to keep him shrunk and close at hand because of fear he'd feel just from being so small, and if someone did try to do something to him how would she react? I feel in this world, these two would have a truly unique perceptive on how both sides of society feel about the change sine in turn, Tate would feel the joy and pleasure Liza feels when she shrinks and interacts with defeated Trainers. Maybe he'd even start to get addicted to the feeling and help lure in unsuspecting Trainers for Liza to then beat...



Actually, if you don't want to run with this idea and it's okay with you, could I take a crack at it? This story sounds way too fun to not write! ^.^

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

^,^

TechniMIND - 5 years ago

I don't usually look forward for Pokemon stories.

But this. This is very interesting for me lol

I like where this is going!

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I can't wait to provide it. ^,^

Wanderingspirit1333 - 4 years ago

It was

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Thank you so much. ^,^
I've been contemplating putting together a part two for this. And seeing as how a second season is already announced, I think the popularity for it will keep rising, so I might just have to.

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

I thought it would be funny and kinky. Hopefully I was right. XD

Wanderingspirit1333 - 4 years ago

The pee stuff legitimately got me laughing

Wanderingspirit1333 - 4 years ago

I couldn’t agree more. Whenever people in fanfic/stories act out of character, it prevents me from enjoying it no matter how good the rest of the story is. That why when I write my own based on movies/anime/tv, I rewatch it several times over and sometimes use lines from to movie to make sure it’s the best quality. Your story is truly incredible and quite believeable for everyone in it. I can’t wait to read a part two!

UnknownEnforcer - 5 years ago

<3 Looking forward to it!

Grimmahr - 5 years ago

I do actually. Expect my upcoming work to have some of that. Im glad you enjoyed the story, and i hope you like whats coming next as well. ^_^

UnknownEnforcer - 5 years ago

Loved this story! Continue with what you are doing, loving this domination and cruel pred stuff.

By any chance have you got any Non-Fatal Entrapment / Permanent Entrapment upcoming?

Grimmahr - 6 years ago

Funny you should mention her. I actually have an outline for her story already made up. I dont have any words on paper at the moment, but i was planning to use her soon.

thatoneguyintheback - 6 years ago

Great work! When do you think Mina will appear in the trials series?

Grimmahr - 3 years ago

Fair, fair lol

Edddd - 3 years ago

oh this was just the first I one read from you, thoroughly enjoy some of your other works as well, ofc not everything will be my exact cup of tea :D

Grimmahr - 3 years ago

It makes me feel I'm doing a good job, but can try harder if only one of my stories does that for you. And November is the BEST time to enjoy it!

Ignore all the propaganda of Succubus telling you to be celibate for a month. It's only so they can feed come December for Christmas. :3

Glad you enjoyed ^-^

Edddd - 3 years ago

What has become of me that this is the first work I have found that fully fulfills my fetishes, this is as perfect as itll ever get for me... Only a shame it is November

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Thanks' mate ^-^

I'm glad it's still a favorite for you. :D

Swalloweredipus - 4 years ago

????
OK then, thanks

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Part 2 is already out ^_^

Swalloweredipus - 4 years ago

The next Halloween? Please?

Grimmahr - 6 years ago

Time constrictions. I wanted to have it done by Halloween but that just wasn't possible.

Skeletaldragin1 - 6 years ago

Why haven't you put up part 2 yet

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Hmm, I didn't actually know that. I'll have to take that into account on future stories based in the region. Thanks you. ^,^

I have a follow up story featuring Kanna and Saikawa as well. I hope its as appealing as this one seemed to be. :)

ScienceTiny - 4 years ago

I'm surprised I didn't find this a while ago when I first looked for these characters. This is a really well-written story.
Since all the other comments are pure praise, I tried to come up with constructive criticism, but I only noticed a small nitpick. Near the end, Saikawa mentions it being Saturday and a day off, but schools in Japan are usually off only on Sundays. However, there are a lot of exceptions, like national holidays and several short breaks throughout the year.
Again, just a small nitpick, and literally the only thing I could find worth mentioning. It's just that well written, and I'm glad to find a good story about my favorite show of 2017.

Darth732 - 8 years ago

No problem at all. You deserve the praise. You worked hard on this and made me a huge fan.

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thank you so much for your words Darth, to a writer its the greatest feeling when we're praised. ^,^

Darth732 - 8 years ago

This was fantastic! What a great story featuring those characters. You really out did yourself with something this great! Thanks for making it!

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

That he is :)

I never need to describe things to him, he always hits the nail right on the head with how it should look. I couldn't ask for anyone else.

rojo55 - 8 years ago

Your friend is very talented.

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Pretty nice

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Have to thank TechniMIND for that. I didn't even specify what i wanted her to look like, and he knew right away just how to make her perfect for the role ahead. ^,^

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

I love the design. Pretty cute.

rojo55 - 8 years ago

Nicely written I say. I want to read the next part <3

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

^,6

TechniMIND - 8 years ago

I love fairies XD I can't wait to see Nyako in action :3

I like your fantasy <3

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

No problem.

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thank you :)

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

:P

TechniMIND - 8 years ago

I love how Nami acts in the story <3 Like shrinking is a second nature to her :3

DragonqueenShyvana - 8 years ago

gg nice Job ^^

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thanks rojo55, ^.^
Knowing where this story is headed there will indeed be more to come. :3

rojo55 - 8 years ago

Just in the most exciting and suddenly...
to be continue TnT

Fantastic work and I want to read the following <3

Darth732 - 8 years ago

Noice!
Love FT giantesses an unbirth!

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Love the POV!!

heath - 8 years ago

hot :)

Grimmahr - 6 years ago

And Acerola. I'm going to get them back on, don't worry. Feel free to look on Deviant Art and GTSWorld for them though, they're still up there.

SteelPyroMantis - 6 years ago

Dang, looks like your Lana story is gone. Your mallow is all that is here now.

thatoneguyintheback - 8 years ago

Of course! You're a great writer

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

:D Thank you for telling me that, you made my day good sir!

thatoneguyintheback - 8 years ago

I forgot to favorite this when it came out
Definitely a reread

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Avec plaisir, i hope you enjoyed it :)

TechniMIND - 8 years ago

Thank you Grimm for writing this for me <3

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Thank you.

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thanks Flare :) I'll be working on yours next!

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Nice story. Pretty neat work!!

Grimmahr - 7 years ago

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed them my man. I haven't forgotten about this series don't you worry. ^,^

Derek197 - 7 years ago

I read all of them straight probably one of the best stories I've ever read it seems it needs more though pretty please

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thank you :3

TechniMIND - 8 years ago

I really love how Levy is turned out to be XD

Good one :)

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Nice on!!

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

I'm glad :D
Also love Mettaton, Undertale <3

dele350b26b9 - 8 years ago

Love this series

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Ty ^,^

75ChaosFlare - 8 years ago

Nice to see you again and awesome Warcraft.

TechniMIND - 8 years ago

Good to have you back <3

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I'll try to keep up on stories more often for everyone to enjoy ^,^

Dragon17 - 8 years ago

This story was great I really hope there's more coming!

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Indeed it is :3

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

Thank you :D

Chaos - 8 years ago

Very hot, we always need more Nami.

Grimmahr - 6 years ago

Gelbooru, I get most of them from there.

Live2run1990 - 7 years ago

Where can I find the picture used for the thumbnail?

Grimmahr - 8 years ago

This was pretty much a one time story.

Ray1700 - 8 years ago

Hmmm... Are you going to continue this story? Or is this just a one shot deal?

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it ^,^

Ixtili - 2 years ago

Possessive demoness in a relationship with the summoner? Sign me up.

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Tanosia, and you shouldn't feel sad, the stories only just beginning for Alexis~

P.S. <3 the Tracer pic ;3

tanosia - 9 years ago

I quite enjoyed this story, more than most. Was sad to actually see it end. Great work!

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I appreciate your input Flare :)

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Pretty awesome, I like it. Thanks for all the hard work.

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Thx

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Flare, and i love your new portrait

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it and it lived up to your expectations ^.^

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Looks pretty awesome!!

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

Finally!!! <3

I freaking love this! Nami was awesome! I really love how she's been I conflict with her feelings, or confused? Not sure lol

But at the end she turned into a much better giantess <3

Also, it's really nice that this story is moving with the same original anime arcs XD It's like... Nami hit a flag and that changed her future XD

I love it <3

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

Thanks :) I'm still going to try and get it colored eventually but I'm content with how it is now ^.^

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

Cute picture XD

Finally I got to read more from you :3

Definitely worth the wait XDDD

Good work Grimm! :)

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

As you command ^(*,*)^

:p

Tsubasa17 - 9 years ago

Now go, student, and write more stories (preferably with more oral vore and giantess/shrink/macro-micro, but its writer's preference) for me to devour! My endless pursuit of reading will not rest until my 13th reincarnation dies!

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

"Praises" my hero :3

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I had to come a bit out of my comfort zone to write this but i love how it turned out. I'm glad you enjoyed it TechniMIND :3

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

I'm not into death, but my body and emotions couldn't reject how hot and sexy this was! I really did enjoy it!

I loved the breeding idea! damn, it's amazing XD

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Thanks, I'll try to send a prompt or a rough draft a story I'm working on if that's okay.

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad it was to your liking Techni, I'll aim to please with my future chapters ^.^

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Flare, I'll be able to get to your story soon to :)

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Pretty neat chapter. Awesome job!!

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

This chapter was so sexy and hot! XD

I really like how Gemini is using Lucy :3

Good job on this one too! You're really good at this XD

KEEP IT UP <3

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

Oh! I can't wait for the next one! XD I'm definitely going to enjoy it XD

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm happy you enjoyed it :D

I'll try to please with my next one very soon ~

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad to be back, i felt a bit empty not writing for it after so long, this is by far my favorite story I've written, or more still writing :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Flare

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

Lol Michelle is kinda fun to have XD

I enjoyed her interaction with gemini lol her childness works good with Gemini's playfulness XD

It's a good read! Thanks for the hard work!

（＾ν＾）

75ChaosFlare - 9 years ago

Good have you back on this story. Even better since it features Michelle.

nick222238 - 4 years ago

I'm fine with either one really. Though I would make a request for more oral-vore and scat. The tease in this chapter was kind of disappointing. I really like partial digestion and it looks like it would fit well considering you wouldn't want to kill off Lucy.

Grimmahr - 4 years ago

Been debating this for awhile to be honest. I might only continue one FT story, or possibly start a new series and try to make it better then my older ones.

nick222238 - 4 years ago

Will this ever be continued?

Grimmahr - 9 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Techni, ^.^

TechniMIND - 9 years ago

I really thought sherry will vore Lucy XD

I like how you mixed shrinking with the original story line... I can imagine the real anime with shrunken Lucy lol

I can't wait to see what Mirajane have in store for the poor Lucy XD

Grimmahr - 10 years ago

I'm glad it's to your liking, i was having trouble finding a good balance with her emotions in it so I'm glad it worked out how i planned ^.^

TechniMIND - 10 years ago

"You shouldn’t give your toys so much power over you, my goddess," LOL

And thus, the life of a butt plug begins :P

I really love how Mirajane is using Lucy! She's playful, dominant and caring <3

And when she decided to shove Lucy up her ass! It's satisfying <3

I can't wait for your next chapter XD

Grimmahr - 10 years ago

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to posting the next chapter soon.

TechniMIND - 10 years ago

I forgot to say, i was surprised to see you add Levy in this chapter XD

It was totally not expected XD

But I love it! I'm glad you decided to go this path XD

TechniMIND - 10 years ago

I forgot to say, i was surprised to see you add Levy in this chapter XD

It was totally not expected XD

But I love it! I'm glad you decided to go this path XD

TechniMIND - 10 years ago

Finally, the moment I have been waiting for! The moment Mira shoves Lucy up her ass!!! <3

So hot and playful! Nothing better than a playful, dominate mage <3

I can't wait to see the next chapter!

bighead - 10 years ago

I imagine Tinette's in for a load of fun, eh? XD Feeling kind of sorry for Ayame though, not being able to experience things at gnome size :P

Grimmahr - 10 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Big ^.^

bighead - 10 years ago

Damn, this was a lovely surprise to wake up to this morning! Thankyou so much for another amazing chapter.

DRayElliott - 9 years ago

Good story potential, awful sentence and paragraph structure.

Evilpancake - 10 years ago

So I was gonna forget all about this, but ya get that notification of response, and i had to comment here one last time...

Pointing out someones lack of understanding of how the english language works, pointing out bad grammar, poor sentence structure, and all around bad writing is not an "opinion"

It would be like you saying 2 + 2 = 5, me telling you it's actually 4, and you saying "well that's your opinion"... no actually that's a fact...

I think people today forget there actually IS such a thing as proper writing, ya know there's actually college courses for it and all! imagine that?

/sigh

nysmnyd - 10 years ago

well if you're trying to be terrible then good job, otherwise stop thinking you're such hot shit and actually acknowledge when you need to improve instead of being arrogant and dismissive.

Grimmahr - 10 years ago

I'm not trying to, I'm just generally a nice person and try not to insult others for there views. I understand your opinions but i find them invalid to my writing.

nysmnyd - 10 years ago

I asked you to stop acting nice, it makes you come across as cantankerously condescending.