You wipe all excess stains of hooch off our chin and groom your mane a couple of times, ensuring it falls just right on your shoulders before lightly trailing over to the stallion. It’s been awhile since your last attempt at coquet, but you’re confident that the knack of it will come back to you like nature intended.
You sit on the stool next to him and say smoothly: “That is so sweet of you.”
The stallion’s head turns to you like an old barn door falls off its hing
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 9
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EDIT: Voting ended with number 3 as the clear winner! It might take awhile for me to get on with the story though due to some REMARKABLE changes in my life. But I'll get to it sooner rather than later!
Options for the round are:
1. “You so certain I’m only after sex?”
2. “I have this kink for older studs…”
3. “You underestimate your looks gravely. Besides, you must have excellent endurance~.”
4. “I lost a bet, okay?” ...
[ Continued ... ]
Gorat - 7 years ago
3
Gone - 7 years ago
Hm, I say 3.
dudey64 - 7 years ago
3, quite the twist..
corporatebanana - 7 years ago
2, but in a suitably embarrassed tone.
It’s midnight in Meteli, the largest portside town this side of Deadend Bay and the centre of global seal fat trade, a fact of which has earned the place its highly accurate nickname “The Blob of North” or more commonly The Blob. They say it’s impossible to get lost within ten miles of the city because of the characteristic stench of boiling fat that dominates the place’s aromatic identity with unenvied sovereignty, seeping into the very essence of its inhabitants u
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 8
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It's starting to look like Flare Tail is the clear favorite, and besides I'm as eager to continue the tale as I'm sure you are! The options for the round are:
1. Revenge or demise
a) ambush the quartermaster
b) ask him to buy you a drink; seduce him
c) offer to buy him a drink; discuss with him
2. I’m better than this; head to the east
By the way: I may not reply to every encouraging comment I receive (not wishing to risk...
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corporatebanana - 7 years ago
1b, certainly.
dudey64 - 7 years ago
1b, with some luck he'll tire and present a more softened meal to enjoy. You never know what a flustered heart lets slip.
supervore - 7 years ago
1c
Cainiam - 7 years ago
A character like this? As much as it's likely to damn her I'm going for Revenge or Demise. Either way her story will be one worth reading, and come to a satisfying ending point... With that in mind I'm voting for 1B. Don't have to actually sleep with him, just pretend we will. Not to mention getting him alone is a good opportunity for a meal if we catch him with his pants down.
Cainiam - 7 years ago
A character like this? As much as it's likely to damn her I'm going for Revenge or Demise. Either way her story will be one worth reading, and come to a satisfying ending point... With that in mind I'm voting for 1B. Don't have to actually sleep with him, just pretend we will. Not to mention getting him alone is a good opportunity for a meal if we catch him with his pants down.
The air is thick with the crackling of burning sap and the pungent smell of smoke, not to mention the victorious roar of the dragon high in the sky. Underneath the facades of the epic confrontation, the unconscious body of Pine Scarf slides quietly down a grassy slope as you pull her by the scruff of her neck. After a few minutes of exorbitant tension you tugg the filly into the hollow before you as deep as you can, then quiet down your breathing to listen. Judging by the distant wing beats it s
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 7
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Welp, that wraps up the first episode of Mint Button's adventure. Whether there will be more right away or if he has earned a period of me time is up to you. Meanwhile, Flare Tail is more than ready to carry on the plot instead!
So, laid out, the options are:
1. Continue Mint Button’s story right away
2. Switch over to Flare Tail for a while
Because this chapter represents one of the more important narrative joints of the story, I think...
[ Continued ... ]
Gone - 7 years ago
BUTTON ME
Stanku - 7 years ago
I'm 20% sure that there's a pun involved here...
Stanku - 7 years ago
That is so nice of you to say!
Gone - 7 years ago
I say button, myself.
dddddd2 - 7 years ago
I'd love to see more of Button, but I guess we can let him rest for a while. So Flare Tail.
Anyway, I enjoy this series very much. The characters are interesting, the plot is engaging, and the fetish stuff is very well integrated into the story.
“I have something important to tell you about how I ended up here.”
“Spare me your pathetic yarns,” the dragon scoffs. “There’s but one thing of importance about you, and it’s not your words.”
The sizable chops narrow apart, and the nimble tongue snakes out to slabber your face and ballooned belly. “It’s the fat you’re going to add to my own,” the dragon specifies, quite needlessly in your mind.
“There’s dragon h
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 6
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EDIT: Voting ends with a tie once more. This time though I decided to cast my own vote (not forbidded in the rules after all!) and chose 2b because I liked it better. Will get to it first thing tomorrow.
Options:
1. Escape alone
a) into the woods
b) into the hollow
2. Rescue Pine Scarf and take her
a) into the woods
b) into the hollow
You successfully managed to steer Mint Button from a crunchy end, but...
[ Continued ... ]
Stanku - 7 years ago
Hope to get your input for the next chapter!
dudey64 - 7 years ago
Aw, I'm too late. Really fun chapter though. Wonder if they can manage to take down the mighty dragon, either way, he's gonna have preds on his hooves. <3
Darkworkz - 7 years ago
The hero has lived, only now bruised and bloated. His love interest lies near, limp but alive. She can't be forgotten, no matter the risk. Into the hallows with her goodstallion.
May the shadows protect you both.
Gone - 7 years ago
I would say 1 or 2 a, but the dragon is burning the woods, so Maaaybe not the best plan...
Eh, heck, I'll go for 2b.
dddddd2 - 7 years ago
1b. Who knows, maybe the sisters will win the fight.
Hehe, it's such a tease for me to see Mint Button struggled with his prey filled belly. Hopefully he can digest the pegasus into fat and waste without being turned into a stuffed meal himself!
“What compensation?” you stutter.
Another puff of tarry fog meets your nostrils and sends you wheezing for fresh air.
“You come from the pitiful heap of mold they call Backbuck. I can smell its stench on you from a mile away. For your concern, I have already collected the settlement for the first failed delivery.”
The dragon grinds its jaws, inside of which you suddenly hear a feeble whimper erupt. The remaining blood flees your cheeks as you realize there’s somepon
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 5
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EDIT: Voting closed in favor of option two. Since this time opinions were pretty unanimous from early on I managed write the next chapter already! Go read it.
Options for the round are:
1. “You won’t get any pleasure from me, monster!”
2. “Please spare me; I’ll become your slave!”
3. “I have something important to tell you about how I ended up here.”
4. “Accept me as your third sacrifice and let Pine Scarf go.”
...
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Cainiam - 7 years ago
I feel like we're strung up here as obvious bait. If we go 3 and tell the dragon why we're here the sisters will lose the element of surprise and we might have lost our shot for survival. With that in mind I'm saying 2 as the best delay tactic.
Stanku - 7 years ago
It sure was a blast to write!
dudey64 - 7 years ago
3 as I don't think he could hold up a strong front. That nom was immensely fun. <3
Gorat - 7 years ago
Vote 4 :) Tho. i see a winner already xD
edwinflores428 - 7 years ago
3
“Fine,” you answer. “I don’t have trouble eating somepony who tried to get me killed, whose name I don’t even know.”
“So you say,” says Aurea. The arrow on your neck flouts back into the quiver on her flank. “Just to make sure though we’re going to help you a bit.”
Corona lights up her horn again, and a fir aura surrounds the tied-up pegasus, lifting him from the ground. “Head first or feet first?”
You feel less than comfo
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 4
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Option 2 won! We'll see if there's yet a way out of this for our full and undoubtedly tasty hero. We shall also see if my publishing schedule is going to slow down significantly to do some IRL stuff.
Options for the round are:
1. Say you are a sacrifice
a) made by your village
b) who came here willingly
2. Ask, “What compensation?”
3. Say nothing
Usual voting rules apply: 24 hour until deadline. It's not...
[ Continued ... ]
Gorat - 7 years ago
Option 1a xD I'm mean to the poor guy... sorry hon i just enjoy it. :P
corporatebanana - 7 years ago
2, definitely. Plumb for information, see if there's anything we can do to get out of this mess.
edwinflores428 - 7 years ago
2
Stanku - 7 years ago
Yeah, should've checked the chapter after posting. Tried a variety of different formats; txt at least eliminates the extra spaces, Celestia knows how those got in there.
I love the sisters too <3. Perhaps we shall yet learn what precisely transpired behind the scenes.
Nebbie - 7 years ago
1a
Finding ponies in Griffonstone could be accurately compared to finding needles in a haystack, with the exception that you could ask the straws for clues. Thus it took him little effort to track the next two of them: young and healthy pegasi mares, clearly of the prime stock. The blue one he could already see making an ideal gourmet dessert, and the yellow one would not turn out to be a failure either – not with such obviously delicious wings on her back.
In the general stir of the m
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Trevas invites more ponies over his restaurant while Twilight and Pinkie meet an unexpected face. No vore in this chapter; only setting up for that.
Gorat - 7 years ago
Mmmm... can't wait to read how they plump plots gets cooked and deformed! :3 I call dibs on purple pussy shishkebab!
You drop the saddlebags on the ground before warily nearing the pegasus, who equally guardedly lowers the flagon.
“Let me look at that wound. And don’t make any sudden moves, okay?”
“Don’t believe me, huh?” he says with a skewed, pained grin. “Whatever, you’ll see I’m telling the truth when the lads return. And don’t you try anything funny either, pal.”
You glance back at the club resting by your bags. When you’re confident
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 3
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EDIT: Voting closed and it looks like we have encountered the first non-tie resolution of the story so far! With option 1 winning 4-3, the next chapter shall be first one to include some actual vore. Stay tuned!
Options for the chapter, only two this time:
1. Eat him, it’s the only way to save yourself, he deserves it.
2. Don’t eat him, it wouldn’t prove anything, they’re playing with you.
Make your vote count! Deadline in 24 hours as...
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corporatebanana - 7 years ago
1. He's definitely a bandit, and probably can't be trusted. I mean, the sisters probably can't be trusted either, but they're the ones currently threatening death.
Pachirisu_And_Asmodeus - 7 years ago
1. Eat him, it’s the only way to save yourself, he deserves it.
Cainiam - 7 years ago
Well now... this is quite the pickle. Eating him might prove we're out to save your own skin and show off some bandit tendencies... but not eating him might be taken as evidence that he is our friend. Though given the sister's temperament... I'm inclined to think that eating him would be something they'd find entertaining and perhaps they'd like an obedient little stallion toy, which is better than the alternative so I'm voting for 1.
Gorat - 7 years ago
Hmm as much as i wanna see some sexy vore already i think the answer should be 2. :)
dddddd2 - 7 years ago
Welp! I don't feel like disobeying these two cute predatory sisters, so I'll vote for 1. Eat him~
Half an hour before dawnbreak you set out on the road to Maywell. There’s not anypony here you’d particularly care to farewell, but you definitely do want to arrive before dark. Your two saddlebags are packed with all the food and coin you had, plus some clothes and other useful items you thought to take along. Around your neck you roll a thick woollen scarf against the lingering cold of the early morning.
The shop itself you leave to manage by itself from now on. The few rooms it co
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 2
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EDIT: Voting closed and guess what, it's another stalemate. I can see a pattern's starting to emerge here. Perhaps we shall have a longer voting period for the next round? In any case, the random resolution of the tie is 2.a). We'll see soon enough how that pans out for our hero.
The options for next chapter are:
1. Trust and help him
2. Don't trust him
a) help him regardless
b) eat him
3. Continue towards Maywell
...
[ Continued ... ]
corporatebanana - 7 years ago
2a. No reason to let your guard down, but no reason to be making enemies where you don't need them.
dddddd2 - 7 years ago
2b. He's already in bad condition. But he can still become useful by sating our hunger~
Pachirisu_And_Asmodeus - 7 years ago
1. Trust and help him.
No reason not to I think.
linthia - 7 years ago
I'd vote for 2b ;x
Gorat - 7 years ago
2B xD You must be hungry after traveling. xD hehe
In the hamlet of Buckback a single window spills light into the gloom. Inside there sits a pony deeply immersed in the map before him, the dark shades of his coat drinking the light of beeswax candles not unlike the night outside. The pony’s name is Mint Button. From now on, that’s you.
You rub your eyes tired by all the small print they’ve been reading for hours now. Until finding the map from old Seam Shine’s bedroom yo
Equestria Anno Zero: Chapter 1
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EDIT: voting closed, again with a tie between 1.a) and 2.a). Coin's decision: 1.a)!
The first proper chapter of my first ever CYOA story, starring the public's (and coin's) choice Mint Button. The options for next chapter are:
1. Head to Maywell
a) via the road with possible bandits
b) via the bog with possible serpents
2. Head to Meteli
a) in the company of merchants
b) alone
Voting deadline closes in...
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Pachirisu_And_Asmodeus - 7 years ago
1b.
dudey64 - 7 years ago
2a) seems like a fun tag along party, also nice work!
Gone - 7 years ago
1. A) for me!
Also, as to the file type, I use 2003 comparability mode. It's on the menu when you hit 'save as' under the name.
Cainiam - 7 years ago
A nice little bit of backstory. I'll go with 1.a. I think. Maywell is closer and we know the place. Bandits might be more reasonable than serpents too.
edwinflores428 - 7 years ago
2a,looks like a good start to an interactive story. I hope we see romance in the future~!!
Not much is known about the ages preceding the first Heart’s Warming Eve, save the dominant agreement among historians that life in the alicornless land was brutish, nasty and significantly more likely to end in somepony else’s burp than in the present day Equestria. Only stories of this harsh period have survived to cross the veil of time. This is one of them. And it starts with one of three possible ways.
Mint Button is a twenty years old earth
Equestria Anno Zero: Introduction
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EDIT: First voting closed! Read the results and updates from my latest blog post.
Also, a new rule: The voting for the next chapter will remain open for 24 hours after the latest chapter's release. After the deadline I'll simply count the votes, in case of a tie toss a coin again. However, the deadline will be delayed if four or less people have voted -- I want to keep a minimum of diversity alive in the audience.
This is what they call a "Choose your...
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Battle541 - 7 years ago
Ok.
Stanku - 7 years ago
PM me and we'll see about it!
Battle541 - 7 years ago
I see. Though. I do have a request for a story.
Stanku - 7 years ago
Heheh, only on this site can that statement appear adjacent to an apology. No need for it though: I don't take it personally if folks don't share my taste. To the contrary I'm here in part to learn from them in that regard.
Battle541 - 7 years ago
Hmm. I guess so. Sorry if I was... Out of it. Being cooked alive did put me off.
When Trevas had bought The Merry Squeal, the former owner had assured him it would be impossible to make the customers leave the joint. Two months later it turned out he had been told no lie that day. It would indeed be challenging for any customer to leave premises they had never entered in the first place.
The young griffon would-be-cheff sank a bit further under one of the restaurant’s tables. On the floor the dust balls appeared to be already waiting for him to join their ranks,
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EDIT: The original idea came from Cainiam.
A friendship problem in Griffonstone leads the mane 6 for the rescue, although in a rather different sense than what they anticipated.
Stanku - 7 years ago
It's not actually one-shot, but I chopped it up for smaller parts for reader's convenience (and to maybe get more views this way). The next chapters should be more thorough.
Stanku - 7 years ago
I would very much appreciate it if we all could keep the conversation civil and polite. In fact I demand it insofar as in question are comments on my stories.
What is more, we had a brief exchange via PMs with saintheartwing just recently and came to an identical conclusion there.
Gorat - 7 years ago
As for the story. Pretty neat one-shot. I would surely enjoy a bit more in depth process of preparation of AJ but as it is its still interesting. :)
Gorat - 7 years ago
God its you again. FUCK OFF ALREADY!
ViperBits - 7 years ago
Aren't you tired from commenting on almost every piece of fatal MLP vore by now?
What did you expect to see in a story with tags like these? Happy sensual non-fatal willing soft vore? >_>
The thing about true chaos was that it wasn’t as random as all that. Randomness, at least in the mathematical sense, was simply pure arbitrariness of numbers, always relative to a given set of events. Moreover, nothing could be random in the absolute sense. For example, when asked to choose a figure at will, any figure at all from the sea of infinity, people would always mistake their decision as random, which it strictly speaking wasn’t for the simple reason that their finite minds
Return of Harmony Revisited III
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It's Fluttershy's turn to meet everyone's favourite draconequus in the maze; whatever will he have thought this time for our heroines?
The story progresses painfully slowly, I know. But it'll get there eventually.
Stanku - 1 year ago
Mhm a plethora of opportunity
whitpey - 1 year ago
Honesty most love anything with discord in it (except him being prey) as hes just so much fun.
Stanku - 2 years ago
Yup sadly this one I haven't found the motivation to finish, for various reasons. Not saying it's completely out of the question to return to this at some point, but might need some help with it then. Glad to hear you liked it though!
whitpey - 2 years ago
Is this story pretty much dead now? I was hoping to read more with this concept.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Yeah maybe.
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Daring
Times
By Stanku
For Cainiam
It is said that in the ancient of
tongue pegasi there were half a hundred words for different types of
wind. Stark semantic distinctions reigned between a meadowy breeze, a
gale at sea, or the scorching blast of a desert. Some of the terms
were all but untranslatable, their content relying on sensations only
a creature born with wings could know of. Even most modern day pegasi
eager to learn the language of their foremothers would face trouble
incorporating
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Daring Do is after yet another treasure, this time in unexpected company. Nasty fates follow one another as her prize reveals its true nature.
This fic is both my part of a trade with Cainiam and a tribute to his story Curse of the Snakebite Anklet, which I enjoyed greatly.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Yes, definitely! And much obliged!
Stanku - 8 years ago
Thanks!
dddddd2 - 8 years ago
Enjoyable read. :3
And I remember that story, too! Very interesting idea.
Gorat - 8 years ago
OH. How nice! Also great story! Ah a while back i did commission a fanpic for Cainiam from that original story! http://mars-venusgore.tumblr.com/image/126452473039 you can find it here. :) Its a scene from the fic but i'm sure you remember it!
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Centaur
Justice
By Stanku
For Trashteir
There were three lessons Gunnar
Teethbreak had taught his sons about adventuring. The first was that,
when forced to choose between reaving a maid or plunder, always to
choose the maid, because love was the greatest treasure of them all.
The second was that, even if the said maid herself felt differently
about the first lesson, she could always be sold to the slavers of
the coast for a reasonable fee. Finally, the third lesson was never
to go hunting cen
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Two foolhardy adventurers discover the dangers of hunting centaurs.
Fischie - 1 year ago
Such a wonderfully detailed tale of humans getting recycled.
UserMan90 - 6 years ago
!
Stanku - 8 years ago
Thanks!
Bright - 8 years ago
Quite the enjoyable story.
Stanku - 8 years ago
My pleasure!
6
Part II:
Lessons of Rarity
“Oh, for Celestia’s sake – how
many dead ends can a single labyrinth have?” exclaimed Rarity as
the bend revealed yet another lush cul-de-sac. Just for the
sake of it she tried to press right through, only to jump back with a
yelp. Wincing, she looked at the side of her ankle and the fresh,
bright red chink there. On closer inspection the harmless looking
bush concealed a sea of thorns sharp as sewing needles.
Sucking her hoof, Rarity turned back,
solemnly sw
Return of Harmony Revisited II
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In the Royal Labyrinth it's Rarity's time for some involuntary introspection.
Gorat - 8 years ago
Cool. :) I'm just putting some ideas out there. :D Like lollipops with ponies inside them . I think it was even in one of your old stories, something like that or very similar. :P Also http://pastebin.com/h6jKA34R nice story with Sweetie eating Rarity I think you may like it. :P
Stanku - 8 years ago
This could find its way up my alley...
Gorat - 8 years ago
I was thinking... what you think of ponies being encased in crystal? There is that one drawing of Twilight showing exacly what i mean https://derpibooru.org/1037384 - traped, suffocating and exposed, and ofc being used. :P
Stanku - 8 years ago
I take this as a promising sign!
Gorat - 8 years ago
I think i'm starting to like plant vore more and more! At lest in your stories. :D
8
Part I:
Truths about Rainbows
“–But as long as we stick together,
everything will be all right,” finished Twilight.
The trust in her gaze knew no bounds in
the unshaken confidence it radiated. On either side of her, five
other little ponies reflected its glow each in their own specific
colour, shared in a prism common to them all. The name for it was
friendship. It was a force capable of shifting mountains, or the very
earth itself.
As it happened, the ground chose that
specific moment
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A retelling of the story of MLP:FIM S2E1, where Discord hides the Elements of Harmony into the Royal maze for the mane six to find, not only the tools to defeat him, but a lesson more valuable than that.
PonyThroat - 8 years ago
Im glad you enjoyed the write up. And youre welcome!
Stanku - 8 years ago
To think I wouldn't want to hear critique -- it's that close I'm not begging for it on the streets! I mean to say thank you for your input; it is most appreciated, not to mention an honor coming from such a distinguished, skilled member of the community.
About the twofold critique itself then, cruelty first. It is funny that in fact I never prefer reading material as cruel as what I produce myself. That being said, I have thought of expanding my scale to nicer landscapes too, for several reasons. In any case, as you correctly mention it's ultimately a question of taste(and mood, I should add).
The other point about the fic's main engine strikes an essential chord, one which I recognized myself after the second chapter at the latest. The "tests" truly are more or less the same thing in a different colour of wrapping, neglecting real differences between their subjects. Now that you have explicitly mentioned it I can no longer pretend not to see it, and thus shall make a serious attempt to remedy the situation in the coming chapters.
Thank you again for the comments! Lastly I just want to say that, if you're ever in the mood for requesting a vorish piece, I'd be eager to provide whatever you desire.
PonyThroat - 8 years ago
Gave the story a shot, (went in reverse order), it ended up being too cruel for my personal tastes. Good luck with the rest of the chapters, even though I dont like this level of cruelty I will say your writing is impressive. I felt the emotions of the characters really well. (Which is why it went past my personal tastes, lol).
Mini critique if you like:
I would state that his 'tests' really isnt a test of their elements. It's more of a mind over matter. After Dash cooked her own wings, it wouldnt have been a stretch for her just to eat it, her mind was already past the wall to do anything he suggested. To save her friends life and sacrificing something very dear for her, isnt a test of loyalty but a test of her love. (Not romance love, but the bond between friends) . It's the same test for the other chapters. On the upcoming chapters, avoid the same pattern, otherwise its just writing for the sake of making him an evil villain who wins. Piling shock factors and testing their sanity beyond their limits.
Apologies if you didn't want a critique, each writer is different. Keep in mind the critique was aimed to be another point of view of your work, and maybe you find it useful. As I said before, you have great skill, I can see it despite the fact its not my personal preferences. Good luck and keep writing.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Should be coming sooner rather than later!
Stanku - 8 years ago
<3
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Autumnal was the form of the girl every
soul in the village knew by the name Red. A strange thing the
comparison was, the vast differences between the season and the lass
considered. Fall marks the flow of melancholy, whereas crisp joy was
the common companion on Red’s features. Warmth fades and dark
descends come the second equinox, yet Red’s hair, that curled,
flaming crown bending to sorrel at the edges, heated any heart after
a glance. A gait such as hers could no doe match – nor a s
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My taking on the classic vore-themed tale. Merry Christmas everyone!
Stanku - 6 years ago
Such a nice thing to say!
Withania - 6 years ago
I have passed on my compliments to you in other chats, but for prospective readers I can assure you that this is a masterpiece. Phew...
Stanku - 8 years ago
<3
Gorat - 8 years ago
Merry Christmas Stanku! :D And a happy new year!
Every
so often and usually without any special intent, Celestia would read
a book which would somehow deal with the subject of immortality. It
never failed to amaze her how easily even the most original authors
would succumb to the banal twist of treating the condition, when all
was said and done, as a curse. Perhaps there was no other way for a
mortal mind to conceive it. Once, she had discussed the topic with
possibly the most brilliant pen of the century. To her
disappointment, in the end nei
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In the last part of Feast of Change, Equestrian army clashes with their new enemies. Despite the predictable result, not all goes according to Chrysalis's plan in the end.
Well, this took me a while, but once I managed to steal the time, writing it to the end was worth it, and overall I'm pleased with the results. That's all I really came here for.
Also, I'll probably write an Epilogue (leading to a sequel?) at some point.
Kapitantorrento - 3 years ago
I like when karma happens. I didn't think the ending would be good. But I didn't quite understand what exactly happened in the final battle between Rainbow Dash and Chrysalis. everything somehow happened too quickly and the subsequent details are not explained.
IhateloveCelestia - 5 years ago
Wait, you're not going to go into detail about Princess Celestia using magic to infinitey regenerate luna and eating her body forever, as her soul is eternally boiling away in Her Highness's royal solar belly?
Stanku - 8 years ago
I felt obliged to introduce some justice in the end, for the sake of credibility.
emikochan - 8 years ago
I'm really glad you gave it a happy ending too, I love the dark themes but I also love karma :D
Stanku - 8 years ago
Thank you!
“My lords, my ladies, trust me, this
is no time to save your silver. The batch is seafresh, straight from
the hold: you can still smell the seaweed on some of them! Nothing a
good wash wouldn’t fix, of course. Come now, who’s the first
brave soul to – there! A hundred and fifty from the good sir
Frater, very good very good. Anyone to contest him? Don’t let a
good bidding war go to waste, there’s no telling when – right you
are, madam Hel, two hundred it is! Now we are getting somew
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In a world of anthros, a wolf noble brings home from the slave market more than he bargained for.
Stanku - 8 years ago
An element of intrigue is always welcome in my fics.
Bright - 8 years ago
I like the skullduggery described here.
Gorat - 8 years ago
Hmm... Maybe 2nd hottest for me, feral ponies are hotter just coz of the sexy pussies and butts! :P
Stanku - 8 years ago
The hottest.
Gorat - 8 years ago
Missed opportunity at tentacle porn! But still nice story. Doe girls are hot! :P
Before
the sun had even thought of showing up in the horizon, the camp was
well on its way of dismantling itself. In the light of several
thousands of horns, the ponies worked to take down tents, load
carriages, and arrange into a column several kilometers long. The
terrain here was rife with mountains and rugged hills covered by
dense pine forests, foreclosing all possibilities of a more
spread-out formation. The only decent way through it all for an army
this big followed an old trade road tha
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The first kindles of war spark as the changelings ambush the ponies. The pact of Chrysalis and the dragonlord thickens over a feast.
For my readers, a few brief remarks. First of all, thank you for bearing with my less than regular (to say the least) schedule. For what's it worth, your supportive comments have helped to tip the scales whenever the choice has come between writing and conquering the world in CIV. That is to say, if you found the fic enjoyable, please let me know it,...
[ Continued ... ]
emikochan - 8 years ago
more great cooking and nomming :)
ViperBits - 8 years ago
Did you even read what I wrote? I doubt you did as I never said it can't be done. What I say is that there is no point in doing it. Furthermore, I strongly believe that doing so, in fact, detracts reader from the clop itself and makes them feel negative emotions when the character eventually dies. These stories shouldn't have good characters to begin with, this is mindless fetish clop, it is best without lengthy pointless expositions and wasted space spent on character development only to see the said character die right away.
For another popular example of what I'm talking about, refer to hentai and various manga of this kind. They often have the silliest of premises (like space bugs attack) which they don't even bother to explain. The characters are mostly cliche husks, the dialogue is complete nonsense. And yet people don't go calling them bad for not having proper romance and top-notch characterization. People like them for what they are - porn. In fact, they love them :D
So, what exactly is different here? I'll tell you what - nothing. So stop hiding your own personal distaste and opinions behind a veil of universal truth. Don't like the story or the entire genre - don't read it. You trying to sound clever while saying the most stupid of things looks downright pathetic, especially since there were multiple people who tried to pull the same bullshit before you.
charlesdeleroy - 8 years ago
Wrong. A good short story can properly establish characters with great strength and depth in a very short space. I would point to the vore writer on Furaffinity, 'scratchel' as the prime example.
ViperBits - 8 years ago
And for the hundredth time I tell people like you that IT IS THE POINT. If you are so enlighted and clever, then how come you can't understand the simple truth that writing a detailed character with intricate and lovable personality only to have them murdered right-away makes ZERO sense?
People who read these stories, like me, are after clop material, not adventure, romance, or whatever else. CLOP MATERIAL. It doesn't make sense to force them to read through hours of pointless exposition only to see pones getting eaten! In fact, 2 consequent chapters with exposition is what stopped me from reading this story any further! I have yet to find time and resolve to read through them only to get to the juicy bits... So congrats to the other guy, he might or might not have influenced the author and made him take the path that ultimately led to this story's stagnation. Good job, hope you guys are happy!
Furthermore, if you make a detailed character, it could enable viewer to associate with them and form an emotional bound. This is not only pointless, but also harmful for the job as it can turn fetish porn material into terrifying murder fest that will leave you sad and depressed for how much the characters had to suffer. WHICH IS NOT THE POINT here. This is supposed to be enjoyable for people with the right fetish, and we don't chose our fetishes, we are basically slaves to them. If you don't have the required fetishes, then what the buck are you doing here raining in our parade? There were numerous warnings, plus this is the eigth bucking chapter. The only real explanation I see here is that you are either a dupe of that guy, or his friend, and therefore decided to throw in your own two cents. Or did you just want to express your opinion and make people listen to you... 2 months after the topic has been settled?
So, until you and other folks EXACTLY like you manage to get it into your heads that fetish porn literature is a completely different genre of literature with unique goals and properties, and that it can't be directly compared to other genres, I'd ask you to keep your overblown ego in check and your mouth shut. No offense but there simply is no point in repeating this meaningless conversation yet again, especially if you, just as countless others, don't understand the most basic of things. Thank you!
charlesdeleroy - 8 years ago
Not all critiques are 'bullying'. Anyone of serious literary proficiency would have expressed significantly more condescension for what amounts to a prototypical depiction of fetishist excesses, and hence peppered their disdainful commentary with sufficiently polysyllabic terminology wherein the Wernickie's area of all others would blow a fuse. ;]
Projecting rageful revenge in the form
of mindless destruction onto the property of the hated person had
always had a definite passé taste for Katy. Yet today she intended
taking the practice to a whole new level.
Right now she was reaching into a
diaphanous plastic cage filled with sawdust, a cardboard cottage and
a mouse wheel spinning furiously under four little furry legs. The
rodent, noticing the approaching fingers, halted its run. A tiny
pink, whiskered nose rose up, as eager and curiou
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A woman looking for revenge stumbles upon a solution too sweet to pass up, only to have it backfire magnificently.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Yay!
Indighost - 8 years ago
Nicely written story!
Stanku - 8 years ago
<3
Stanku - 8 years ago
Much obliged!
Cryos - 8 years ago
Well, that escalated quickly. I mean, that really got out of hand fast. Fantastic work though!
Of
all her virtues, patience had never been particularly close to
Chrysalis. Lack of practice was mostly to fault. When you had a whole
hive looking after your needs every waking hour of the day, since the
moment you had hatched, you didn’t really get the time to develop a
stomach for waiting. Instead, you made others wait. There was power
in that, she well knew. Perhaps the other side of her rendezvous knew
that as well. With dragons you could not really ever tell, since
punctuality was for t
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Chrysalis forms a new alliance while the ponies discuss the matter of missing Dash. No vore in this one, but the plot advances.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Oh I'm still working on it, no worries. It's just that I only write vore when I'm on the mood, and then too I need to be in the right mood to write FoC.
The good news on that front though. I'm almost ready to finish the next chapter, which contains the first actual vore since the big feast in the woods. Spoiler: Cady won't be enjoying it that much (or maybe she will, who knows).
Better yet, I'm publishing later tonight a whole new story -- my first non-pony one.
Gorat - 8 years ago
Just wanted to ask - are you still working on this story or is it on a hiatus?
Stanku - 8 years ago
How industrious! And thanks!
Gorat - 8 years ago
Ok i have read most of them. Pretty nice! Equine, All Too Equine is great! Gonna start reading the 2nd part now!
Stanku - 8 years ago
My life's work of poneeh.
The
thick carpet drank noise like the oblivion, smothering the steps of
the pony walking down the corridor. His shadow followed heavily in
his wake, looming behind the walls of soft candlelight spreading at
his either side. At this hour, it was his sole companion in the
usually so crowded Canterlot Castle. Recently it had felt the castle
was empty even at daytime, and that there would be nothing to make it
full ever again; not the way it had used to be. Henceforth, wherever
he went, there would
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With Ponyville annihilated, digested and passed on, the remaining leaders of ponydom plan their counter offensive, to which Chrysalis is only too eager to respond. Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash has wondered off to terra incognita of her mental realm.
Stanku - 8 years ago
That would be a natural conclusion to make; it's all I'm saying...
Rathalos122 - 8 years ago
shining is going to do something stupid and will doom the army or maybe even all of ponykind (hmm I have never seen a story where a species has been consumed to extinction) right?^^
Gorat - 8 years ago
Well it sure was an interesting chapter. :3 Now what will happen next i wonder. Poor RD maybe she should have ended it all when she had a chance. :P
5
The Great and Powerful Trixie woke up
gagging and in pain, and although this was not for her the first
occasion such a thing had happened, it was no less of a shock.
Instinctively she tried to spit the rag in her mouth out, but a tight
strap around her muzzle kept it firmly in place. The same was true of
all her limbs; she was tied from head to heel, left lying on the cool
grass under the spotless moonlight.
The last thing she could remember was
the after party they had had in celebration of t
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Trixie finds Twilight to be rather less okay with being defeated by her than was initially apparent. In the meantime, the manticore finally gets its meal.
This episode practically begged to have a vore version written about it, in one form or another. So I dunit.
TsuyoiPone - 9 years ago
Nice!
Just a small typo
"fun shared is fund doubled"
Fun is misspelled as fund
Stanku - 9 years ago
There was no avoiding it.
Gorat - 9 years ago
GREAT! Haha!~I was sure this episode will get a vore version very fast! xD
No
matter how deep a slumber is, or how badly craved, a bucketful of icy
water to the face wakes up anypony. Dash inhaled like it was her
first breath. The gag in her mouth was gone, but the rack was not.
Those where the first things she knew. It was more than enough to
enroll her nightmares into reality.
Another
bucketful hit her face, but this time she was expecting it. With her
mouth open, too. Although her fur was still anything but dry, her
throat welcomed moistness in all forms. She lapped
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As Dash thinks the situation can't get any worse, it does. But the night is darkest just before the dawn, as they say.
Stanku - 8 years ago
Thanks for the compliment! While it would of course be always better to get more feedback, in the end I write as much for myself as to others out there. The story will continue for sure, although I can't say when exactly. I'm in the habit of writing three to four chapters ahead of publishing anything.
Mcleod - 8 years ago
I for one thoroughly enjoyed the series thus far. I feel like you have made all the characters act as they would in show. I can't blame Applejack or Fluttershy for their betrayals (and subsequent redemption), I for one wouldn't wish any of the actions that happened in this series on the worst Human beings in all of our history. I hope to see a continuation of this despite the lack of comments you've gotten. You do have 460+ veiws, so people are reading what you've spent time writing.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Sad news. But dont rush it take your time! I hope you will feel better soon! <3
Stanku - 9 years ago
No harm in asking. Sadly, I haven't been on the mood for writing lately, which is really the deal breaker for me continuing any work. It'll come out some day though.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Just feel a need to ask - any progress on next part or any new stories in works? :3
Meanwhile,
Chrysalis tracked back her way through the camp, this time heading
towards the outskirts, where the outhouses lay. Dishes each more
delicious than the other paved her way, but she turned them all down,
albeit with heavy hearts. It was rough to see the disappointment in
the eyes of her dearlings. But she was simply stuffed now and,
accordingly, had to alleviate the stress gathering in her bowels.
Already she could sense pressure building up in her rear end.
Luckily,
a row of outhouses
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Time for the "obligatory" scat scene; skip this in peace if you're not into it.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Not into scat but also not into Rarity. That end fits her perfectly! So overall good (tho very short) chapter! :3
13
A laughter like silken lace weaved
itself around the restaurant’s atmosphere made of candlelight, the
scent of fresh vegetables, and gentle murmur of conversation. It was
a laugh many a socialite practiced in secret, but which Rarity
managed without trying. She hoped her escort could appreciate the
fact.
“Your laugh is a blessing to my
ears,” said the stallion across the tiny round table. A coy little
smile peaked on the slim, snow-white cheeks. “A shame I can’t can
it for preserva
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Rarity's date with the new inhabitant of Ponyville experiences a sharp turn for the worse when he introduces her to his cellar.
Speedyblupi - 9 years ago
*vine
not wine.
For
the whole trip to the place the changelings kept on referring as “the
grounds”, Dash could not decide whether she’d choke on her hate,
shame, disgust, or any of the other oppressing emotions that had
turned her chest into a quagmire of despair. Either way the result
was the same: she was done. The blasted bugs had won. There was a lot
Dash could recover from, but the sight of half digested Twilight
tested her limits unlike anything else ever had. The image of her
dissolved features had
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The journey of Dash through the changeling camp continues, and not in the good way.
Gorat - 9 years ago
You never gonna finish it? So it means it will go forever?? Yey! I didn't know you had so many ideas to fill and infinite story with! :P
Stanku - 9 years ago
Right as I get my thesis finished; should be on the better part of infinity by now!
Joking! I'm never gonna finish it anyway. But we'll see what we can do with ponies on the weekend.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Next chapter soon? I can't wait! :3
Stanku - 9 years ago
Yay!
Stanku - 9 years ago
Nah, the length fine: saves me from writing more just yet!
Deeper
in the camp, in a wooden cage with a score of other ponies, Applejack
woke up with her worst headache since the time Big Mac had taught her
to cook moonshine. Carefully, she lifted the rim of her hat covering
her face. The first thing she saw was herself. Or rather, reflections
of her self, mirrored in the many familiar faces wracked with anxiety
and grief. Ponies had huddled close to her, probably because she was
an Element Bearer; she would know what to do next. She would have to,
becau
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Dash's trip through the changeling camp continues with Applejack and Pinkie Pie.
ViperBits - 9 years ago
Thanks, good luck to you as well!
ViperBits - 9 years ago
It is already on my reading list, I just don't really have much time for reading as of late. But thanks, I'll try to move it up a bit! :)
Stanku - 9 years ago
If I may, I'd be keen to recommend a fic - my own of course - offering a rather more grim and realistic image of Equestria. No porn in any shape or form included, but I still consider it my best story thus far: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/230955/equine-all-too-equine
saintheartwing - 9 years ago
Okay. Take care, seriously.
ViperBits - 9 years ago
Ukraine :D
It's been going for over 2 years now >_>
Originally started by USA and Russia to contend the neutral zone that once laid here, now it is just an ugly mess where people are dying for no reason whatsoever other than for our corrupt government to make profit on war and their citizens. If this thing keeps going on for 2 more years, I will be drafted into the army as it is obligatory in my country and there is literally no way out of it... At least USA got what they wanted, I can only hope Russia calms down before it is too late :\
But let's not talk about politics, I already hate this topic.
It
was over. They had lost. It was all over.
The
night had not even properly started, but the hour would not get any
darker. Not for Rainbow Dash at least. She was barely conscious as
she was dragged by no less than four changeling guards through the
woods of Everfree. Bruises and small cuts ran all over her exhausted,
beaten body. Alone they would have slowed her down none, but the last
blow to the back of her head had sent the stars whirling around her.
Her vision kept on blurring and clearing
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The changeling army has occupied Ponyville and is about to feast on the spoils of victory. As a cruel afterthought, Chrysalis makes Rainbow Dash witness the details in all their goriness.
LightSpeed - 8 years ago
Ahh... true. =/ I have seen a lot of vore stories on there though. ^^
Stanku - 8 years ago
Glad to hear! Not really, since Fimfic is profiled less with fetish work and more with actual stories.
LightSpeed - 8 years ago
I'm really enjoying this story so far. ^.^ Have you thought about uploading it to Fimfiction? =3
Stanku - 8 years ago
Yay!
LightSpeed - 8 years ago
heehe, you write for Chrysalis and Dash REALLY well. >=3
Where
on Equestria could everypony be? Twilight
wondered as she travelled the dank, gloomy corridor deeper into the
mountain. Now even Rarity had been lost to her, and the stetson she
carried was anything but a good sign of what had happened to
Applejack. The farmpony would never part with her headwear
voluntarily. More than ever before, Twilight felt she should find her
friends, and soon.
Once
again she came to a crossroads; once again she made a little mark on
the wall before picking the tunne
Ponies, Caves, and Vore Part IV
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The cave trip of the mane six ends here.
Battle541 - 7 years ago
Meh.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Ok. That was just so random...
saintheartwing - 9 years ago
Wow, that was stupid.
“It’s
really interesting, that moss,” continued Twilight. “One of the
more ingenious creations of nature. It traps living insects with its
tentacles, you see, then uses special enzymes to digest its prey in a
cocoon for nourishment. The plant can then draw nutrients from the
dissolved mass like drinking a fleshy soup. I’ve even heard of moss
big enough to catch and process birds in that way! Researchers have
found these cocoons with nothing but feathers and bones inside them.”
“Lov
Ponies, Caves, and Vore Part III
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Ponies continue to get devoured in various messy ways.
Stanku - 9 years ago
It pays to try out new things, I think.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Oh i do Agree with you about anticipation and -most of all- a good story build up are VERY important and i only just suggest adding a bit more longer interaction (or just quick mentions of different parts being eaten to just spark the imagination of us readers) coz what is a long and intensive build up when in the end the culmination would sound something like this "and they eat her ass. the end." if compared with the rest? Like with the Pinkie Pie scene in the last chapter. I read through it and was thinking that actual, more detailed vore description of PP was saved for later. Still - its your story if you like them like that then its ok with me. And i'm more than happy that you are working on that mentioned story! But you sound forced and skeptical to write it. If i may ask - why? And if you don't like the concept maybe you shouldn't force yourself?
Stanku - 9 years ago
I get your point. But personally I find the anticipation and build up just as important (erotically speaking) as the main action. This shows in my stories in which, as you mentioned, the actual vore scenes are relatively short, and not always that detailed. That is because I believe best erotic writing is arrived at, not when the camera shows everything, but precisely when it does not.
That being said, I'm working on a changeling fic which will contain more detailed vore scenes, hard vore included. People have been asking for them so I thought to give it a try, but I remain skeptical of the eventual outcome.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Decent chapter. But being honest there is a a bit to little actual vore/eating. We have a -lets say- 1000 words of preparation and story and only like 90 of description of vore. I would love to have read more detailed/longer description of Rarity being eaten -part by part. Describe how they bit that bit then crawled inside and bite other bit etc. There's so many juicy parts that you could describe ass,pussy,boobs/tongue,vomb, eyes etc.etc. Same goes for other chapters expect i think the 1st one. Please dont think im saying that its a bad story! Its a great one! But maybe add some more details to the actual vore proces/scenes? Make them a bit longer.
“Pinkie!”
shouted AJ. The name bounced around the walls like a ping pong ball
before sinking into the gloom. She sighed, and kept on trotting
onward. She had no doubt that her friend could not take care of
herself wherever she went, but it would relieve Twilight a great deal
to keep the group tightly together.
At
first AJ had worried she might not be able to see anything in the
cavern, but thankfully some sort of glowing moss covered the bare
rock in many places. A faint bluish luminescence
Ponies, Caves, and Vore Part II
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The mane six interrupts a picnic for some casual adventuring in a local cave. If this was not a vore fic, they might've actually had some fun.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Nice one! Pinki part was a bit short but it looks like Aj part will be longer. :D I wonder how will Twilight react when/if she finds dead bodies of her friends. xP Hehe i can't wait for Rarity turn, i hope she will suffer for a bit - lest favorite PoN of mine. xD
“Now
why on earth they would’ve gone inside?” wondered Twilight aloud.
“I mean, can any of you imagine Fluttershy
willingly
trotting into a dark, damp, unknowingly deep cave?”
“I
could, had she been in the company of a certain other pegasus best
left unnamed,” remarked Rarity. She paid careful attention to
remove a speck of dust off the side of her hoof. “Honestly, that
recklessness of her knows no bounds.”
“No
need convincing us there,” said Applejack.
“We
should go af
Ponies, Caves, and Vore: Part I
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The mane six interrupts a picnic for some casual adventuring in a local cave. If this was not a vore fic, they might've actually had some fun.
Stanku - 9 years ago
Well thank you, for the comments and typo notifications both.
I'm planning on writing a fic involving changelings, but in general I'm not terribly much into bugs. But we'll see.
About more detailed descriptions: I'm not actually convinced this would enhance the reading experience all that much. Not for me personlly at least. Writing porn for me essentially revolves around guiding the reader's imagination with subtlety rather than literally "showing them everything". I'm afraid this would bring about a mechanical effect more than anything else. But again, I'm always open to try new things in print!
Finally, if you're interested, my works would certainly benefit from a proofread by a native speaker, which I take you to be. Just a thought. Might help you with the chanches for that mantis scene though.
ViperBits - 9 years ago
Some stuff I've noticed while reading:
- pussylips
- the kicks Das still
- around dash
- moaned in (+both) lust and disgust
- The whites of her eyes turned up(upwards?)
- as the tongue, thicker than any dick that had her penetrated (might need to rephrase), reached her womb,(no coma) and started licking the walls.
Now that I have finally made it to the end, I can say that this fic was AMAZING! I am a bit saddened that Fluttershy got off so easy compared to Dash, but at the same time I am delighted to no end by my favorite pony getting so much attention, and with 2 of my favorite predators no less! Never seen a pony become prey to several creatures at once! The external digestion part was also nice, although a bit too fast and non-descriptive due to the perspective. By the way, have you thought about adding Mantis or other insects?
More attention to their "fun" parts during not only fucking but the digestion itself would be awesome! Maybe have someone poisoned/hypnotized so that they start rubbing away while digesting inside a beast (ALL descriptions, especially of regions like private bits and wings, included)? Would be also great to see other beasts that eat like spiders, it is damn sexy!
Keep up the good work, I am excited to see how the Plant part will go (I hope those are carnivorous plants like Venus Flytrap or the Pitcher plant)!
Gorat - 9 years ago
Damn what a shame for poor RD! becoming snake and then spider food! At least the snake had a "taste" of her so she can say she didn't die a virgin! I wonder what kind of cruel fate awaits for rest of the team! I just hope for some more corpse fucking and vore+rape! Best mix for me is vore-corpses-fucking-more vore- more fucking! :D Love all yours stories so far!
DarkPinkie - 9 years ago
Welp there they go. Considering Fluttershy was bound someone was most likely behind this.
Aw well, seems like the monsters kissed and nade up before settling for a deal.
Grau entered the
bottle, once again passing through a magical door on its side. Magic
really came in handy, in more than one respect.
He landed next to
the orange pony and started studying her critically. Her belly was
very bloated; he could see the paste churning inside while it warmed,
expanding even further. Her fur looked squishy, and felt also as he
smoothed it. Surprisingly, the pony reacted to the touch, squirming.
It made a faint smile appear on Grau’s lips.
He kneeled next to
the pony
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Stanku
Tags: Scat Dragon Digestion Hard Vore M/F Unwilling Rape My Little Pony Cruel Applejack Pinkie Pie Rainbow Dash Fluttershy Twilight Sparkle Rarity prepping
Finishing the fate of the mane 6 at the claws of a vicious dragon. Contains the scenes that did not quite make it into the finished version.
Gorat - 9 years ago
Its great! A real shame that it was not a part of the others chapters (mixed in them). But its still good "enjoyable" read as a chapter by itself! The part with Grau eating AJ head and then fucking her body is officially ending up in my favorites! :D DAMN i just wish he would do something similar to Rainbow Dash! Just starting at the other end! ;3 You could use someone to proofread it as there's quite few places that have repeated words and you used "his" instead of "her" in few last sentences of AJ part. :)
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It was an exquisite sight indeed. Two
pegasus mares – one blue as the sky with a rainbow crown as a mane,
the other the tone of rich butter and shy pink – hanging upside
down by their hind legs. Tied, gagged, and blindfolded, they could
not manage more than the occasional wriggle, which sent them swaying
uncontrollably by the strong ropes, occasionally bumping into each
other amusingly. Had hunger not forced his will, Grau might’ve
admired the play for quite some while.
For change he ha
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Stanku
Tags: Dragon Digestion F/F M/F Fatal Non-consensual My Little Pony Cruel Cooking/Prep Rainbow Dash Fluttershy
The anthropomorfic, magical dragon oc of mine dines with/on Dash and Fluttershy.
Stanku - 9 years ago
A reasonable assumption; an enticing suggestion.
Evil-Dog - 9 years ago
by the title I thought scootaloo was involved
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The late bird that she was, waking up
had never been Twilight’s forte. Yet this time, already before she
opened her eyes she could tell getting up might be the biggest
mistake of her life – in addition to being the last. Very
carefully, she cracked one eyelid.
She saw herself. But there was
something wrong with the picture. She had a somewhat partial, hollow
look; as if her existence had been spread thinner than usual. Only as
the other eye blinked open did she realize she was looking at
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Stanku
Tags: Soft Vore Dragon Digestion Hard Vore M/F Cooking Cock Vore Rape Pony Macro/Micro Oral Sex Preparation My Little Pony Cruel Applejack Pinkie Pie Rainbow Dash Fluttershy Twilight Sparkle Rarity
Continuing the namesake episode beyond the scenes, we find the rest of the mane cast at the mercy of the dragon they set out to defeat. Uh oh.
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There was a sound like raw thunder, and
suddenly Fluttershy felt a lot more exposed than she had a second
ago. She peeked from under her mane and noticed that the boulder
behind which she had been hiding had crumbled. Her friends lay in a
mismatched pile next to it, groaning from the blow they had shared.
It was clear they were all but out of it for now.
And, towering above them all, there was
the dragon. It was the headlights of a truck, and Fluttershy was the
deer. The growl the creature emi
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Stanku
Tags: Dragon Digestion M/F Fatal Pony My Little Pony Applejack Pinkie Pie Rainbow Dash Fluttershy Twilight Sparkle Rarity
An alternative ending for MLP FIM episode "Dragonshy", one which ends rather more poorly for Fluttershy.
Darkworkz - 7 years ago
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