Mecho - 11 years ago

I'm sorry, but i'm not a fan of death in vore. But I must say I really enjoyed this story, most of the preds personality and the details ^.^ You put the details on the preds personality and I really like what he is saying.

"Much more fun... I’m going to swallow you whole. Starting at your feet, so you can watch every step of the way as you slide down my throat: Whole... alive... squirming all the way. It's so hot, so incredibly wet and so tight in there"

THIS! brutally hot. Keep up the good work =^^=
Death or not. This story is just really cool.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 11 years ago

Hee hee hee. Thank you. Pretty much all my predators are like that - I love the horrific contrast between gentleness and brutal sadism they present, and Goldeneye loves it too. Death isn't cold and unfeeling, it's mockingly loving and sensuous and indeed rather hot. :3

Mecho - 11 years ago

ahhh <3 A cuddly yet cruel pred. That is just so amazing! This was a very well done story. The preds personality is just perfection.

unicorn - 12 years ago

Wow, this is excellent!

Readasaur - 12 years ago

Nastiness and graphic cruelty aren't my thing, but I must give you credit for doing them well. Well done!

tangent - 12 years ago

Yesss. So much potential. You're giving me ideas. Refer to the last sentence of my comment above. ;D

tangent - 12 years ago

Looool, thank you. That concept is something that drives my personal art... not the smut I post here, hehe.

Precisely! There have to be rules laid down. I can easily see rural areas indulging in that, though. In more cosmopolitain places with dense populations it'd be almost entirely unheard of, save for the uncommon "serial eater" (...oh my god so many pun opportunities, this is hard to ignore)

Oooooh, I'd love to see into that. Oscar seems like such a sweetie, but he's also a fucking falcon. Lolol.

If you ever need any ideas in fleshing out some cultures, I am fiiiiiilllled with ideas (and a ridiculous abundance of animal facts.) Feel free to PM me c:

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Yes, I was so gobsmacked by the astounding insight of your comment that it took me two months to reply. Honest. >_>

But I do agree, anthropomorphic universes should have some balance between the importance of the species and that of the person themselves. And the culture especially, yes. Not in the case that "hey, we have a perfectly civilised society, and oh, also... eating people is legal." I really find it irritating when a writer uses the furry-animal connection to justify a world where vore - aka murder - is legal. Yes, that could happen, but it would be like Actura's hunger wars: there would be no chance in hell, in my opinion, of this civilization evolving... essentially at all.

And yes, I like the slight danger between the two of them... especially with Oscar's darker side. He has had some rather awkward and rather... bloody dreams about the little mousie. Make no bones about it, Jess is a delicious little morsel. And Oscar finds himself uncomfortably aware of that sometimes.

Oh, wait. I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. /B)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

It will indeed. And more. >:)

But now I've started to think about it, I've started to realise just how much potential Actura has for all kinds of stories. What with the Last Day having wiped out pretty much all civilzation, there's essentially an entire world which was lost. And that's a lot of things to explore...

Although, as you may have guessed, being an explorer like these two does not go quite so well for them... *sniff* I'm writing the next part right now, and man, it's heartbreaking.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Aww... thank you. *hugs* It's really not necessary at all, but as always, anything you deign to put your considerable talents to work on will delight me. ^^

sd43 - 12 years ago

I think one of us needs to make that shirt some time... :)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

... @_@

Oh, it would...

Very nice. Very niiiice.

sd43 - 12 years ago

I agree on the tattoo point. Could also make a nice t-shirt design, perhaps?

eatmeplease - 12 years ago

Cool!

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

It would actually be a very cool tattoo. I an imagine Alex waking up one morning to find this tattooed on his stomach, with no idea how it got there, and absolutely freaking out. Even in lineart form, those eyes are scary. @_@

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Damian? That would be this fellow: http://aryion.com/g4/view/219305.

He's a psychopathically insane genius, and one of the most skilled telepaths in the world. He weighs two and a half tonnes and considers little Alex to be the most perfect thing in all creation - and even more so when he's being tortured.

As I said, be careful. ;)

(That said, however, I certainly wouldn't be averse to you having a parallel version of Alex, who hasn't been chosen by the gryphon, if you want. He's just as adorable and tasty!)

ArcaneSigil - 12 years ago

What is Damian? Cause I'm a pretty big wolf, if you can't see my avatar picture. Feral Fang, about 7 feet at the shoulder when on all fours.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Aww... well, you're welcome to try it. Just be warned: Alex has a... "guardian" of sorts, and Damian will not appreciate someone other than him taking his little fox. Be careful...

ArcaneSigil - 12 years ago

I may have to borrow him for a... ehm... little while... O.O

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Oh, he is tasty. He really is. Poor, poor Alex...

*Damian licks him*

It's the tailcuddling which makes it, isn't it? The only friend poor Alex can hope to find in his hellish nightmare is his own tail. ^^

whitewolf3659 - 12 years ago

Emotional situations are critical for any truly good story, and this is especially true with vorarephilia. It wouldn't at all be the same if it didn't bother me a little, and perhaps I'm a little masochistic, but it's much better when it leaves some kind of an impact. Your story comes off as a lot more than just smut, which can be rather hard to find with a porn oriented site. (Nothing at all wrong with smut, but it just isn't the same as a true plot.)

As for how Alex comes off, he definitely seems likes a three dimensional character, especially as the story progresses. His depression and desperation show a deeper character, as well as a development with aspects such as him flat out attacking Damian. I see perhaps even some corruption growing in the poor, innocent soul.

Sorry it took a while to get here to reply, but I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.:)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Gosh. Wow. Thanks a lot. I don't really know how to respond to something as eloquent as this.

I'm glad that you feel able to emphasize with the characters, and Alex in particular. His personality is constantly being dominated by his tormentor, and I've sometimes worried that he comes across as less of a real person and more a jumble of whimpered, broken sentences. It's good to know that you, at least, can feel sorry for him. Poor, poor fox.

I'm sorry if you've been bothered by the rampant terror and horror of this piece, though. What can I say? The emotions are one of my favourite parts of vorarephilia situations, and I try to do them as realistically and as intensely as I can. I'm pleased that you think I've done that, then. Thanks a lot!

And where next for our helplessly doomed hero and viciously cruel villain? Only time, and Chapter 6 onwards, will tell. All I can say... is that Damian is far, far more than a murderous monster without any remorse. And Alex is just beginning to find out what, and who, he is.

whitewolf3659 - 12 years ago

Oh so much to say and yet am limited by the constraints of the english language. There are things that defy the ability to be expressed by words, though this series comes quite close. I could write a page in response to this story so far, especially this chapter in particular, but I'll keep it relatively short. I can't ever read anything with true emotional detachment, and that makes reading stories like this both painful and perfect. I feel legitimate sorrow for Alex while reading, and hatred toward Damian. Toward Damian there is a nagging hope that the glimmers of his old self will break through, but that will be revealed in future chapters.

I applaud you for writing such an emotionally engaging work. Admittedly, this series bother's me a bit, on the emotional level because of how in depth I analyze things, though that's not necessarily a bad thing. In this case it isn't a bad thing at all. There are few stories that I read that instill true fear or sorrow or harted, and being able to convey such strong feeling is a talent. (Forgive me if my comment jumps around a bit, I'm tired lol) As a closing note, the way you ended this chapter makes me desperately curious as to what is coming next, especially in regards to how Alex will use his new knowledge, and how Damian will react. I will be waiting to continue reading. Kudos.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

:D Thankies. I'm quite pleased with those. I'm glad the line about Alex's lovely eyes came out well. I was worried it might be a bit corny sounding. I'm far too fond of those silly poetic metaphors.

This is one of my personal faves: "And now I remember the delicate fragility of him that screams it’s vulnerability every time I so much as look: his heart seeming so weak, fluttering with terror. So weak."

I just love the word "fluttering". XD

masterofvore1 - 12 years ago

lol. I actually didn't want to. i think i clicked a tag link and accidentally,but it looked interesting so i gave it a shot. LOL

TheGuyWhoKnows - 11 years ago

Hee hee. Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I am finding that the potential this world offers in all kinds of situations keeps surprising me. And that's without even considering the Voidtouched as well... *cackles*

sd43 - 11 years ago

How did I wait until now to read this? I am SO glad that I have now... Explains a lot more about Actura's history.

tangent - 12 years ago

Ahhhh please just keep writing <3

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Well, if I may take this as an excuse to be boringly obsessed with this world...

Actura's smaller population is due in part to the high number of sterile, inter-species couples that can't have children. There's also the high quality of healthcare and welfare, which leads to better birth control methods and so less babies.

Of course, there's also the Last Day, which wiped out something like 65% of the planet's population. That put a bit of a downer on things. :P

Someone like Lord Theo would be nice, of course. But on the bright side, we've never been at the point where without someone like Lord Theo, civilization would probably have sunk into extinction. Cometh the time, cometh the man.

The more sadistic inhabitants? Well, you've already met some of them. ;) But there's a few more to be introduced...

OH GAWD. SO MANY THINGS I WANT TO WRITE...

tangent - 12 years ago

Ugh, why can't our planet have a small manageable population and a leader with a voice like Theo?

Anyway, I enjoyed this. I'd be interested to read about the different cultures and the more sadistic inhabitants. :3

eatmeplease - 12 years ago

*smiles* You're welcome. And yes, this one is quite aware of that.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

*Pangur purrs* Oh, very friendly. Thank you... *Hs eyes gleam* You are aware I'm going to kill you, of course?

eatmeplease - 12 years ago

Yes, he's a lovely pred. *gives him a nuzzle*

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

He is that kind of fellow... *Pangur bats his eyelashes at you*

eatmeplease - 12 years ago

Well, generally fluffiness makes one seem cute. He could probably use it to his advantage.

nephilim - 12 years ago

I read your flavor text (:
Darkly poetic. I loved it.

I'm telling you.. you need to explore Stockholm Syndrome with these two. >:)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

And words aren't needed for this, which is what I like so much about it. The emotions and relationship between these two comes across wonderfully clearly without a single word. Mmmm... "MINE." indeed.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Wait... you mean an entire story? I assumed you meant just an extract! That is just... /unbelievably/ generous of you. I mean... wow. Thank you so much for simply offering it, and if you actual commission it... just... wow. Thank you.

Aeznon - 12 years ago

I would like to commission a "complete" illustration (probably 40-70 pages) at some point either by koschei or possibly neltruin This will likely be a ways down the road however since I'm clearing a ton of other commissions

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

I'm not entirely sure. Perhaps so.

Koschei has done an excellent job of the eyes, though. They're very important for this story, and I'm very pleased with how they've come out.

greatwhitegut - 12 years ago

This was a good addition to the series, I think. :)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Yes, I'd corrected a few typos and tried to simply reupload it, but it didn't change. I had to take it down and up again. Thanks for the fave!

CharlieC - 12 years ago

Did you take this down and put it back up?

Oh well, I'll just favorite it again. >:)

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Indeed. She's captured the gryphon's essence perfectly, and in such a wonderfully simple way. I still love it.

greatwhitegut - 12 years ago

I love the style this was drawn in. It's crazy how much detail seems to be there, even though there's very few lines.

tangent - 12 years ago

Noo, thank you for writing such lovely inspiring stories!

tangent - 12 years ago

Thanksss c:

nephilim - 12 years ago

D'aw I loves it ~

TheGuyWhoKnows - 11 years ago

Oh, this piece. I remember when we finished it, I read it through, and I actually did cry. I walked into the kitchen, sat down, and cried. I'm delighted it can provoke such an emotional response in others.

I think I can guess which parts were so sad, though, and Zair was written entirely by LN. Kudos should go to him, really. Thank you very much!

Creaturedude - 11 years ago

I actually almost cried. And I NEVER cry. Holy cow dude, you are a great writer!

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

:D Aww... thank you very much indeed. We do work rather well together, I think.

And you love gryphons? Ah, a person after my own heart. I approve.

sd43 - 12 years ago

You are both AMAZING at this. Your writing is extremely well detailed. Also, I LOVE gryphons :D

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Should put this out there... LN has written an epilogue of sorts to this story, and a very interesting one at that. Find it here, at http://aryion.com/g4/view/219180

nephilim - 12 years ago

Read it! I am strapped in and ready for the next part... this is shaping up to be really really good. GREAT transitional piece.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Well, I can assure you that Redstone is not necessarily going to do "good"... but you have a point. Finn is certainly a villainous character, but he's just so fun that I find myself rooting for him sometimes...

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Um. Possibly. It was more that Finn is the main character of this story, and our dear Redstone is in direct opposition to him. Essentially, this whole story is a bit of a twist on the traditional "superhero" storyline: hero meets heroine, they start to fall in love, hero suffers strange experience that gives him superpowers, hero develops his powers and eventually confronts and defeats the villain, hero returns to his girl... and then he gently and lovingly murders her.

I suppose you have a point, though. Certainly, Finn is somewhat villainous... maybe I'll change that round actually. Thanks for the favourite, by the way. : 3

However, I can assure you that just because Brutus wants Finn dead, it's not going to be the case that he does good. Oh, no...

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Um. Possibly. It was more that Finn is the main character of this story, and our dear Redstone is in direct opposition to him. Essentially, this whole story is a bit of a twist on the traditional "superhero" storyline: hero meets heroine, they start to fall in love, hero suffers strange experience that gives him superpowers, hero develops his powers and eventually confronts and defeats the villain, hero returns to his girl... and then he gently and lovingly murders her.

I suppose you have a point, though. Certainly, Finn is somewhat villainous... maybe I'll change that round actually. Thanks for the favourite, by the way. : 3

However, I can assure you that just because Brutus wants Finn dead, it's not going to be the case that he does good. Oh, no...

greatwhitegut - 12 years ago

Finn an anti-hero? I thought anti-heroes still did 'good'. O_o

I imagine Brutus as the anti-hero and Finn as the villain.

Readasaur - 12 years ago

If you say so....
Personally, I've never felt the appeal of the Hannibal Lecter types.
I just can't find their endless posturing and bragging and obnoxious mind games to be anything but an incentive to watch them die horribly. Preferably while someone is screaming"Shut! The fuck up!"
I do wish you luck in continuing his story, though.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Well, no. That's the wrong word for it. He's not going to stop doing what he does - indeed, he's going to start getting deeper into it. A lot of innocent people will suffer... and the wolfie loves it.

But nevertheless, he's more than just an "insufferable" villain.

Readasaur - 12 years ago

...Redemption?
Oh dear.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

I know, and I am honestly sorry. I actually felt really, really bad about all this. ;~; Poor, poor Sarah... she's actually the only character of my own devising to date who I have genuinely killed, and I do feel really rather bad about it.

But if I'm going to write stories like these, I think I am going to have to be prepared to do things like this. *sniffs*

However... redemption and justice for Finn? All I will say is that his story has only just begun. >;3

Readasaur - 12 years ago

Aw, darn.
Still, it would have been pretty strange for the predator to face justice. A unstoppable, perfect killer is much more to be expected in tales like this.
I shouldn't have gotten my hopes up, but he did seem to come so close, and he was SO insufferable...!
Oh well.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Everyone likes Finn. He's just so charming and cheerful and charismatic... and by then it's too late.

He needs more attention, methinks. I may be getting some art of him done soon, which will be glorious fun.

And I'm glad that the dramatic change in this story's plot has worked in it's favour, rather than making it ludicrously, laughably unrealistic. Thank you.

nephilim - 13 years ago

Wow... just wow. This is amazing. I Love your world, your characters in this story and how it started one way and underwent a massive transformation into something completely unexpected. I LIKE Finn.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Yeah, I had fun doing the fight scene. I kinda imagine it being like something out of the Matrix - complete with bullet time awesomeness and epic music. Finn and Redstone are both very, very skilled combatants, so this could've gone on a lot longer, and I wanted to do more of it, but ... eh. Maybe I'll rewrite at some point, add in a bit of Judo-style wrestling or some dramatic leaping-kicks too...

And its good to knw that the flagrant lack of continuity of the wild-horse of a story is actually working in it's favour. Thank you very much.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Hee. Insanity is gloriously enjoyable, but I'm glad the story hasn't suffered because of it in your eyes. Thanks a lot.

Foxwolfy - 13 years ago

Just.... wow. Your characters just keep getting deeper... crazier and crazier... and yet, it works. It's brilliant. Terrifying, and brilliant.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Oh, it's all about the words. Thank you very, very much.

Incidentally, I saw this and thought of you. It's an interesting discussion about the nature of words and how they can be used. Thought you might be interested : )

http://aryion.com/forum/blog.php?b=10416

nephilim - 13 years ago

Ah, again, the twist. So subtly snuck up on me I had to read it several times. Love your writing. Ha, 'Brutus' indeed.

nephilim - 13 years ago

Finn lounged in a chair in his holding cell, and examined the word “Scything”. It was one of his favourites, he decided. The hard sharpness of the “s”, “c” and “y”, suddenly given a hissing whispering quality by the delicate insertion of the “th”. And then - with a glorious pulse of energy, “ing” gave the word sudden action, bringing it to ecstatic, thrumming life. Showing that it was a word of action. Of power. Of violence, but also of control.
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oh !@#$%^& you! That's stunningly beautiful. LOVE it. I knew you loved the qualities of words for their sound and 'feel' like I do (:

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Ok. Part 4 AND 5 are going to be the big ones. Sigh. This is getting frustrating.

greatwhitegut - 13 years ago

Just for me? Why thank you, kind sir! ^^

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Heh, I'm glad. Part 4 is going to be the big one, where it all comes together at last. I'll go extra hard at it for you ^^

greatwhitegut - 13 years ago

I can't wait until the next part.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Hee. For some reason, the stronger characters seem to develop really specific names as they grow in my mind. Glad you like them.

nephilim - 13 years ago

I appreciate the name-play with the words. "Brutus." I do.

nephilim - 13 years ago

Oooo we are from the predator's perspective now >:)

nephilim - 13 years ago

.......good God the opening @_@ it's so delightfully dark and sinister. And POETIC. must... read... more.

greatwhitegut - 13 years ago

I wouldn't really call it 'hideously fascinating'. That sounds like it has negative connotation. I legitimately enjoyed reading this, I'm just surprised how much I did. xD

Actually having some vore in this? Interesting.. I'm definitely going to have to keep up with this. ^^

nephilim - 13 years ago

LOL yes, newspaper clippings. The inclusion of them in the narrative of a story can add so much to it; a whole new dimension of feeling and thought. I think it's a great stylistic device.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Again? With newspaper clippings, of all things? I know that inspiration is supposed to come form anywhere, but... this... I admit, I can't wait to see if you do
anything with whatever idea it is, if only to see how in the world such an insignificant piece of the story like that could inspire you. I mean... newspaper clippings... oh well. Glad you like it so far.

nephilim - 13 years ago

AH-HA the twist. It was so subtle and utterly without patronization to the audience that I actually had to re-read that section about two times before I realized what happened. LOVE IT.

Feedback: Do not worry at ALL. The writing is so good. So good. Crisp, to the point, elegant and flowery just where it's needed; clever, playful and creative. I love your descriptors and how you give the characters their sense of personhood.

They both feel real (: and not imitations of characters with no other purpose than to drive the plot forward.

nephilim - 13 years ago

...I am going to blurt out my comments as I read. Hope you don't mind >_>!

nephilim - 13 years ago

OK wow, I love how you intersperse little journalist 'clippings into the ongoing narrative. @_@ good lord maybe you have inspired me again LOL.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Heh. Well, I'm flattered that it was so compelling. Thank you. ^^ I admit, these two are and probably will forever be my favourite couple of characters.

Glad you enjoyed it all. There's more in store for these two...

AngelFox - 12 years ago

You say this is far too character-driven? Believe me, nothing like this can be too character-driven. It was the believability of the characters that kept me reading, that and your excellent storytelling of course. The odd thing in, I'm not usually into this kind of subject matter, usually death, pain and harm in anyway results in an immediate click of the back button; But you made it sound so intriguing and emotional that I just had to carry on. o.o

CharlieC - 13 years ago

This is my take on it too. I can really get much more into a story if the characters -- whether pred, prey, or observer -- feel like characters, and not just a group of names drawn out of a hat. It adds a personal level to the story that shows the writer is actually putting effort into what he does instead of somebody who's just writing to temporarily satisfy a kink.

That said, I really enjoy your work. I'm honestly not sure how it slipped past me to add you to my watch list. :D

nephilim - 13 years ago

Had a feeling (:

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Thank you! I feel honoured to be included in this prestigious class of writers.

And yep, I'm male. It is TheGUYWhoKnows, after all ;)

Kenkii - 13 years ago

You're welcome!
Your thoughts and comparisons to other art forms is fantastic (very similar to the way I understand music). It is tragically rare for artists to perceive their works in forms other than those of the medium used. It's wonderful to see this kind of understanding and comprehension is out there.
Cheers!

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Thank you. The flow and writing style of a piece is a vital part of any story for me, so that compliment was really appreciated. :)

But what can I say? Violence is an art form unto itself: with cruel claws it's brushes, brutal agony and blood it's paints, and a victim's tortured soul it's canvas. Every snap of bone and sob of pain is a symphony, every desperate plea for mercy a sonnet... Ahem. Um. Yes. So thanks.

Kenkii - 13 years ago

Wow :O I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. It flows beautifully - there is elegance in the violence you describe so fluidly.
Really a wonderful piece. Instant favorite!

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Wow... okay. Thank you. That's certainly one of the most superlative comments anything I've done has recieved. Thank you very much indeed.

Besides, we're all masochists at heart ; )

tangent - 13 years ago

Jesus fucking christ
Words cannot describe...
You are a magnificent person. This is glorious in every possible way. I... I will articulate further at some other time. This spoke deeply...beautifully to my masochistic soul.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Aww, thanks. Glad you enjoyed. ^^

Simura - 12 years ago

Loved this. <3

nephilim - 13 years ago

LOL YES. I have done that. Ha!

TheGuyWhoKnows - 13 years ago

Wow. Have I inspired you? I feel honoured. Looking forwards to whatever it is already... :)

But yes. I will admit that I'm addicted to creating little, sentence-or-two phrases like these and then making half the story evolve purely so
I can fit them in. I'm glad you like them too.

nephilim - 13 years ago

“Yes...is it starting to sink in? You could die, Alex, tonight. Forever...or not. You could live again, to slide down my hungry throat a hundred times... a thousand times.”
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oh my god (cackle) that is so incredibly cruel! I am usually not a fan of re-birth or reformation, or whatever, but the way you approach it - I'm a convert (:
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Then the mental agony spiked as Damian lazily touched his mind again, taunting him, and for half a terrible, terrifying second, he saw his struggling, dripping, bloodied form from the outside, inside the gryphon’s beak up to his chest.

Don’t you look beautiful?
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Whoa. Love that. So creative. That really gives me an idea, too...

Totally love your stuff....

Lbobl - 6 years ago

It needs .....

Wow i cant nitpick this

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Hee hee hee. We seem to be thinking much along the same lines in some cases...

Well, I suppose the idea of the Void is that it DOES exist for every universe, and all magic, supernatural effects, etc, are simply a corrupted form of Voidseeing, so... maybe it's not such a coincidence that Divine is so similar.

Pity about the RP site, though. That sounds like a pretty major thing. I'm rather impressed really. :3 It sounded like a fun place.

And exshellent. *cackles* I look forward to whatever madness you may create.

DivineDarkEvil - 12 years ago

Now it is our turn to be amazed. What you just described is one of two versions of DivineEvil of which I have. The version of which I first spoke of was pretaining to the aspect of the Void being something slightly different from your realm as what I spoke of was something I had originally written years ago into a book series but never got it published. Instead I transformed it into an rp site which at the peek of its time had 12,000 active members. Unfortunately the site was hosted on a forum server and when they did their first major update it was deleted by accident. I remade the forum and the members came back, but as the years went on it faded as people became so absorbed in their own daily lives. Eventually I shut it down about four years ago. The place had a good run.

But yes the version of her which I am currently using is what you described.^^ Very perceptive!

And thank you!^^ When I have the time I will most certainly get started and we'll see what Goldie's response is. I can't wait.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 12 years ago

Yes, you really did hit the nail on the head. We were honestly quite unnerved by it...

As for your pretty divine beastiess, she sounds like an interesting creature indeed. However, the Void is not all dimensions, but simply the miasma in which all dimensions reside - the anti-space between worlds. Your creature sounds more (if I may use the jargon of dimensional metascience) like a exceptionally high-graded dimensional manifestation consciousness - essentially, the sentient manifestation of an entire universe, a creature the mind of which exists in the entire Void-space of their entire universe. These creatures have only been theorised to exist, but if they do, they would likely be the most powerful entities in the whole of Creation, so capable in their manipulation of the energies of the Void that whole dimensions could be within their power...

I have quite a lot to tell about this mythology/science o' mine. >:D

As for Goldie... well, he'd be delighted to meet such a creature. You have my permission and my interest, by all means. :D

DivineDarkEvil - 12 years ago

Thank you Damian. -nods-

Wow....O-o seriously? I hit the nail that squarely on the head? Awesome....XD TELEPATHY!!! -shot- Okay okay I'll calm down. XD

Voidtouched....well my main sona of who's name is my screen name....she is a Voidtouch. Or rather what would be the equivelent in the mythology of my own universe of which she was originally designed for. She was a creature known as a Draconian of which was reduced to the ranking below known as a Planeswalker...or as it would also translate, Voidwalker, VoidSearcher, VoidSeer. Prior to that she was [this is also creepy] what I called a Shard. Her soul was shattered into countless pieces and fell to be hidden, scattered across countless realms of countless dimensions. As she collects those pieces she regains her power. As of now she's back to Draconian status...[the ultimate being in the universe I created]

She is the void itself, and therefore everything which is part of the void, born forth from the void, was taken from her, sharing even the tinest fragment of her soul. And thus...all so shall it end, every fragment consumed to make her whole again. Goldeneye would be no different if he were in my headcanon realm. XD

This leads to the second question. I know Goldeneye wouldn't exactly be fond of this unless he wants to see the challenge. XD He'll probably hate me for this. But...I was curious as to if I might be granted permission to write a little scene between Goldie and Divine Evil if I so may please.^^ If not thats okay.