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Could still use another layer of shadows and highlights, but I'm going to call this done for now.
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Posted by Dragonitas 2 years ago Report
Great as always! Thanks for the comic!
Posted by HellBlaze 2 years ago Report
Awww, no cum puddle. Anyway this was a great comic and im looking forward to the colored version!
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
I'll try to fit that in. The digestion sequence should probably have another page to breathe.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Definately, you could always have fun with the pred experiencing/showing a massive climax, as she showers her bathtub with her cum, sort of deal.
Or at least, show what she'd need to clean 'off', sort of deal.
Posted by Yurifan009 2 years ago Report
Honestly if you ever plan on coming back as more than hobby I say keep'em around, these three are fucking amazing
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly, more OCs or said female pred having a cumgestion fueled orgy would be better
Posted by chimera134 2 years ago Report
I agree with this comment. Maybe there's a special device to bring back Cum Puddles like how several blueberry writers/artists have blueberry machines to revive them after they pop? Or like Octovore they just revive after a few days because magic. The chemistry betwern the girls was just so good I wanna see more with em.
Posted by HellBlaze 2 years ago Report
Yay, you added them becoming a cum puddle~ I've got a question though, is this comic a 1 time thing or are you coming back to making vore lewds?
Posted by 2good2btru 2 years ago Report
Another great one from you. X3
Posted by Winny 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the lovely adventure! <3 Continue being lovely~ <3
Posted by NTTA 2 years ago Report
Amazing, just as great as ever. Love the instant squelching digestion, although were it up to me I'd like to see it slightly more explicitly - seeing the goop they're squished into in the internal shot, and/or a good shot of the disposal/puddle, or maybe seeing Holly's belly deflate from one panel to the next.
Everything else is basically perfect though, that teensy bit of extra detail would just take this from a 9.5 to a 10 for me. And it may be clearer just from adding color as well.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
You make a compelling argument for another page between this one and the previous one.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Heck, as an alternative. You could 'shift' the instant clench, to 'liquify', and then have the 'internal cum' be further clenched/cummed out, as the pred pours it out of her snatch.
Either that, or have it expel in one, massive burst. That honestly, could have been 'fertile' if it were cummed into someone else, instead?
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Damn, i was expecting a different outcome where she blasts the “spent condom” down her girlfriend’s throat but this is great too
Posted by Naganommer 2 years ago Report
This comic was amazing! It's so good to see you again. I missed seeing new content from you.
Posted by Sinny777 2 years ago Report
Moar Shadowfaps! It's been so long!
Posted by phex 2 years ago Report
since you asked, it does feel a smidge disconnected on this last page. could maybe use either digestion panels, or some other segway if you're trying to avoid digestion thematically. u still the goat tho. or horse. whatever
Posted by NTTA 2 years ago Report
Yeah, like I'm no artist and I wouldn't presume to suggest I know best, but if Pg 12 ended with partial squishing/melting and Pg 13 started with external belly shrinking instead of just the big drain panel... Mmm. *chef's kiss*
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Makes sense. I'll try to rearrange to fit that in, thanks.
Something that might not be clear here is that there is going to be hair swirling into the drain: Meghan and June's hair colors.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
You could try giving them both dyed hair colors , that way all you have to do is paint the water the same color as their hair
Posted by phex 2 years ago Report
hope she keeps drano in the house
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
For real. I was going to include one of those rubber mushroom hair catcher drain things but I was afraid it would confuse the image too much.
But given the length of Holly's hair, she must have SOME way to unstick the drain occasionally.
Posted by phex 2 years ago Report
You could add a joke one-panel postscript page where she has to unclog it lol
Posted by yetAgain 2 years ago Report
I never thought I'd see the day the two Great Masters of F/F-humorous-casual-fatal-soft vore comics had a discussion of creative decisions in a comments section. I am so happy. :')
Posted by overlordxu 2 years ago Report
The return of king!
Posted by Rokka 2 years ago Report
Looking fantastic ^^
Posted by Tanookicatoon 2 years ago Report
Wow, you've been busy.
Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 2 years ago Report
like someone said the king is back nice to see you again idk for how long but i hope longer now .:D
Posted by dinoman514 2 years ago Report
didn't end the way I expected but still awesome :D
Posted by Rawr534 2 years ago Report
I thought you’d never return
Posted by mmcalpine1988 2 years ago Report
This is the best.
Posted by KyleWaterdrop 2 years ago Report
Kinda expected the Futa to live, but this was a great concept
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Something I've noticed around here is the futas usually live. I want to show that everyone is edible no matter how unique or interesting they are.
Posted by KyleWaterdrop 2 years ago Report
Just glad to see a new comic by you
Posted by Assimilation 2 years ago Report
My preferences never matter when it comes to enjoying your comics. Your characterization might be second to none.
Another legendary work, Shadowfaps.
Posted by JudasArtworks 2 years ago Report
Heeeeey super glad to see something new from you! love the comic very hot, as always your expressions and dialogue really won me over <3
Posted by EaranMaleasi 2 years ago Report
Great series as always
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Holy shit it’s phenomenal
Posted by jamobo 2 years ago Report
This was fantastic! Great to see you back
Posted by Teodor435 2 years ago Report
So glad to see this work from you. Genuinely you’re one of my favourite artists on this site. You have your own style that is immediately recognizable and your writing is great. Your pacing, attention to detail and scenarios make everything seem more solid and memorable. Keep up the good work and I hope you get enjoyment and satisfaction from it too.
Posted by 676darkness 2 years ago Report
Amazing comic.
Posted by elliotalien08 2 years ago Report
If thats how she treats her girlfriends i gotta ask her out *^*
Posted by Grimoutsider 2 years ago Report
Its great to see you back, its as great as always.
Posted by realitywarper 2 years ago Report
I am not sure I can articulate how this made me feel so I'll just go with afdakdsglgaslgdsafgakhkasdfgkl!
Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report
Awesome comic. Not what I expected from ‘unbirth control,’ but that’s a good thing. Variety is the spice of life, and vore as birth control has been done enough.
Definitely agree that the squish was a bit abrupt though, I’m glad to hear that’ll get worked on.
Posted by Luxio512 2 years ago Report
But when the world needed him most...
Wait, he came back!?
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Happy to see the king return
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 2 years ago Report
Extremely creative concept, nice to see your work again!
Posted by InfernoDeity 2 years ago Report
I'd be interested to know what would have happened had the Condom not been lost? I'd assume it's just garbage to be disposed of, like any used Condom.
Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report
You are my favorite vore/unbirth artist in the 20 years I’ve had this fetish. Thank you so much for sharing your art
Posted by kailan 2 years ago Report
I am very happy to have you back. You are one of my favorite artists. I love this comic and it is not easy to suggest an improvement when it is already excellent.
I would like to see the last panel on page 12 removed and an extra page added. I loved the digestion of Cultural Sensitivity. The prey is really visible and the gradual disappearance of the outlines is very well done. Having this type of digest with maybe a last view inside would make this comic for me even better. I guess it takes a lot of work.
Posted by Ieattwix 2 years ago Report
I have never seen a better UB comic
Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report
The new edit might be one of the best comic renditions of an orgasm I’ve ever seen. The fuzzy weird clouds and stars around her head *perfectly* communicates her experience *chefs kiss*
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Thanks. For the record, the plan there is to do a trippy space picture sort of radiating out from her head and overlaying everything else. Lots of bright stars and galaxies.
Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report
I can’t wait!
Posted by HellBlaze 2 years ago Report
Yay, you added them becoming a cum puddle~ I've got a question though, is this comic a 1 time thing or are you coming back to making vore lewds?
Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report
I like the changes, but I have to say that the instant squish feels out of place now that we see the stomach stays large. It worked before because of the brevity of it all, but now it’s weird.
That said, I do like the new visible melting, it’s always preferable to see a whole process. And I really look forward to seeing that orgasm in color, it’s already interesting even without it.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Hm. The more I look at it, the more I feel like part of the problem might actually be the sound effect. The "squlch" kind of anchors that panel in time as the moment that the cummification happens, as part of a discrete sequence of events, followed by the belly shrink. Without it, the page might read more as I intended: a sort of broad telling of this moment of climax. "Here's what happened inside, here's what happened outside." There might be a panel layout that communicates this better but I don't see a way to shuffle things around without making it clunky.
Posted by Briarheart 2 years ago Report
I said in another comment but I agree the cummufication should be a bit more drawn out. The impression I get is that its a sudden instant thing, they go from being solid to cum in a split second. I think drawing tasteful panels of characters dissolving can be a challenge but I do think it would be worth it. Not worth disrupting the whole flow though.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Sorry for the textwall, but I've been doodling and fiddling with this for a while here to no avail and feel like I need to explain myself.
The "tasteful" aspect really is a sticking point for me. I don't really want to depict the act of digestion/cummification/whatever.
In my mind, the fleshy walls closing in over the view is the friendly abstraction of what would realistically be a grisly and horrifying image. I know that might seem to be a weird distinction to make, and it IS, but the tightrope-walk of my preferences is a weird journey to begin with. It's important to me that the digestion HAPPENS, that the grisly and horrifying scene actually occurs behind the friendly flesh-curtain. If the prey doesn't give everything up to experience this one climactic carnal moment then it feels empty. But I don't want to SEE it.
As far as the on-stage action is concerned, they didn't MELT, they BECAME AN ORGASM, and all that's left is the happy afterglow. At least, that's the pitch. The problem is, any actual depiction of "becoming an orgasm" is going to look a lot like "melting". At least, any actual depiction that's within my skill level.
If watching someone melt IS your preference, that's totally fine! I'm in no position to judge where you draw the line between "sexy" and "horrifying". I know MOST people draw that line somewhere north of the action all the way back on page 5. I'm not going to sit all the way down here at "fatal vore makes me horny" and claim to be superior because I'm not at "onscreen digestion makes me horny". As long as we're all aware of the difference between fantasy and reality, we're all good. But, I do draw the line where I draw the line, and for my preferences, I can't find a way to depict more of the digestion scene in a way that doesn't become a turnoff. I am, as always, doing this more for myself than for any of you.
I've been messing with this layout for a while now and I can't find a way to make it more satisfying. If I keep going any longer, I'll never actually get around to coloring it. I think I'm making the executive decision that the layout stands as-is, sans "SQULCH" sound effect. Hopefully that's not too disappointing.
Posted by Briarheart 2 years ago Report
I think that's fine then. The moment at which the vore becomes fatal can be difficult to reason with depending on how you approach vore. I agree with feauxen below that signifying the passing of time (is it instant, or gradual?) with some kind of other visual cue might work. Its not something I'd get especially hung up on though, because as you say, cum digestion would generally look like someone was made of white chocolate and was melting into liquid form.
I agree with you that there's no sense dwelling on it further and trying to refine that panel. It is already satisfying as it is and colouring might be able to reflect that they've turned into cum inside her womb. A simple caption might be able to reflect how long it takes for them to be cummed out - is it a huge flood, or a sustained orgasm taking many minutes? I personally feel like the orgasm lasting for ages would do a good job of explaining why people want to unbirth people - because there's literally no comparable experience that feels as good or lasts as long.
Anyway I also have the tendency to write textwalls when I'm reviewing my own output or the output of others, so I'll just reiterate that there's no need to directly show digestion - just that I think the passage of time in these panels goes some way to making the scene seem hotter.
Posted by heromc 2 years ago Report
I just wanna say, such a detailed response, and all the responses you've been giving for us ravid fans, has been very appreciated. I love seeing how an artist thought through their choices, and you express yourself really well.
Make the art you wanna make. You can't please us all :)
Posted by MrMD 2 years ago Report
It's interesting to think about how granular it can get when vore art gets millimeters to that line and tries to capture the moment without showing some sort of Cronenberg horror still. Do you do it seconds before, where they're at their most content and blissful? THE second before? The split-second it happens? Their eyes rolled back in their head, mouth open, cumming their brains out as they go from living flesh to mush? Trying to capture the moment of twilight when the sun dips below the horizon etc etc and all that artsy-fartsy stuff.
I remember seeing some part of the third season of Stranger Things where a line of people, the first a daughter and mother, were made to walk forward and melt into a puddle of flesh. I was feeling like 90% revulsion but 10% of my casual/"willing"/fatal kink kicking around in my brain, but it got me to thinking about when I maybe first realized I had a bit of a fetish. It was probably the AKIRA movie, where a young sympathetic girl got trapped in a flesh monster and over the course of a shot was squeezed until her face and body was obscured by her blood, but before it happened you saw an instant where her eyes went sightless and looked in two directions. Again, horrifying and not my willing/fatal preference, but your reply made me think of it because it seemed to blur the line between showing and not showing. In a different universe maybe it could've been pleasure instead of pain that contorted her face and a gush of cum instead of blood that hid them away while she was obliterated and absorbed.
Talking about it actually reminds me of one of your early works with Roomies. I remember the main character eating the second girl and there's a frame where it's just the second meal's eye and a bit of her hair falling out of the other girl's mouth. It's rolled back, she's cumming, and in the next instant she's gone. Not dead yet, of course, the two girls eat each other out in the gut before succumbing, but one could imagine a framed instant just like it in a stomach or a womb, a warm wet interior flesh closing in instead of a mouth, capturing the moment where orgasm and death meet and pass the baton.
Anyway sorry for rambling just never expected to see another of your works and felt inspired to say something lol
Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report
In my opinion the problem is that we go so suddenly from girls taking up space to cum (apparently) taking up no space. Even just showing the girls starting to melt would be better IMO. I was never fond of the instant squish, even if it worked as it was before due to the lack of other implications.
That said, if you want this to be a moment stretched out for posterity, I'm not sure what would work. Long panels showing the internal moment which take up the whole of one edge of the panel to emphasize that it's all happening at once? Maybe Holly drops the showerhead in bliss to give a visual indicator of how much time is passing? I'm not good at this visual stuff, my game is writing, but maybe I'll serve as adequate inspiration. =D
Posted by Tanookicatoon 2 years ago Report
Ooh, nice edit.
They definitely got heckin squished in there. X3
Posted by qawsedkre 2 years ago Report
Doesn't the cum break free if she melts them, rendering the whole thing pointless? And if the cum also breaks down, what was the point of the condom? The art is superb, but the plotholes are huge.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
You're not really wrong, but I feel like you could come up with a justification.
For example, if womb-havers in this universe ALWAYS digested the contents of their wombs, nobody would ever have babies. Womb digestion would have to be something that only happens in specific circumstances, like if there's something big in there but you're not pregnant. If that were the case, jizz alone wouldn't qualify, and it could stick around long enough to make a baby. But, jizz plus two whole people is too much, so it all got digested along with June and Meghan.
Alternatively, maybe you're right and juicing them was irresponsible! Maybe Holly's now at risk of pregnancy, but she took that risk for the thrill of the double-unbirthing-mega-orgasm. Maybe she weighed this experience favorably against the cost of having to go pick up some Plan B at the pharmacy in the morning. Or maybe she just got too horny and did something stupid; that certainly happens in real life all the time.
In any case, my hope is that the reader either enjoys it enough to make up their own justification, or that they enjoy it enough that they don't have to.
Posted by Neverthriving 2 years ago Report
Let's face it "got too horny and did something stupid" is exactly what happens to all the prey characters in your comics, lol
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Gotta love that cum shower
Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report
Am I misremembering, or was there a "squelch" sound effect in the third panel? I can't quite put my finger on it, but them being squished feels less dynamic in colour than lines. I don't get the sense of a sudden crush that I found (maybe invented) before. I think it might be all the black - rather a static colour.
This is real nit-picking, though. Love the hair swirling down the drain, and the galaxies! Amazing stuff overall!
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Hm. I removed the squelch because it made the timing of the events on the page confusing; there's a discussion in the comments above about it. However, the problem I was trying to solve was also somewhat alleviated by carrying the speech balloon trail through from the first panel to the last. Maybe the squelch can come back now, I'll experiment with it when I do lighting.
Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report
Oh, I missed those comments. I get what the other people are saying, though personally I like the abruptness of the squelch. I don't think the instant squish is out of place because the stomach stays large - as I saw it, the squelch is them being crushed / killed, not digested completely. But I'm biased toward a more violent end, and you can't please everybody.
Maybe motion lines would work? I don't know if that's your style. Whatever you choose, I look forward to viewing it!
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
The cum could beb a bit more darkened/coloured, if to a sort of "flesh/white" or semi-transparent colour, with a liquid tone.
Past that, gotta love how the flesh is looking, and could only wish there was 'maybe' some liquids 'building' up for the rapidly cumgested prey.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 years ago Report
Yeh, that'll be in the effects pass. Still working on it. The space stuff should be part of the effects pass too but I wanted to draw space.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Effect wise. It's now become harder to see the cum expulsion as it is.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report
Loved this, it's always a treat when you post. I look forward to your content! A master of willing vore.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 2 years ago Report
I love re-reading this part, call it a curse or a blessing but I would love to fill that pussy get churned up, digested and turned into a cum puddle adding me to her body. She could stuff me away and I'd be all hers too take. Idk why I feel this way sometimes but its a hell of a thrill and release! Ty shadowfaps!