Trying124 - 21 hours ago

thank you so much sweetheart!

UBHunter - 2 days ago

This is a really good short story.

Trying124 - 2 weeks ago

Its the next up For edits but alas she is hard to get into bed

Trying124 - 2 weeks ago

Thanks Sweetheart! anything you like especiLy?

HMDVore - 2 weeks ago

Nicely written

Trying124 - 5 months ago

Glad you liked her XD. I think most of my predators are relatively like him as for whether or not you'll get this specific predator again? I'm not a hundred percent sure yet maybe if I come up with a good idea for another story featuring her.

ABoost - 5 months ago

This was very good. I like preds like this. Will we get moee of her?

Trying124 - 5 months ago

Thank you so much! glad to hear you liked it!

Trying124 - 5 months ago

Thank you so much! Always lovely to get more feedback on my work. Thanks

JustAStargazer - 5 months ago

I appreciated the unique style of the story. I feel you succeeded in making what you set out to with it.
The way in which she melted down her rival and how casually it was mentioned that servants and others would later be killed in passing was a rather nice touch to the cruelty already being displayed. Great work.

Jadeharleyzz - 6 months ago

I loved the premise of just the sheer cruelty of this woman, killing one of the most defenseless, powerless creatures in such a slow, gruesome way. I have a soft spot for infant prey lol, the more gruesome, the better.

it's very descriptive as well, going into every little detail...! it's so great and I honestly love your works cause of this.

Trying124 - 6 months ago

aw thanks! anything in particular you enjoyed about it?

Trying124 - 6 months ago

the muse on that one is a little bit dead, but there's never a good time for necromancy

Trying124 - 6 months ago

thank you so much!
Anything in particular that you enjoyed about this?

Jadeharleyzz - 6 months ago

beautifulllll

Trying124 - 3 months ago

u/PredatoryPrincess2003
Glad you enjoyed it, it was really fun doing that collaboration with those two women, even if one of them was a little bit more unexpected than the other. Got your DM but I don't answer those here only on my only fans.
(thank you so much I like the idea thatit's really obvious how much of an Arsehole she really is and that she's just posting this to get more people to subscribe. Although unlike most only fans girls she's actually writing it ;-) staff taken so long to get back to you)

circustoair - 5 months ago

u/mikeock69
NTA
yeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaah sounds like a your brother type problem idk, my 13th girlfriend told me she did something similar so I guess I wouldn't worry about it. Now anyways I was watching that one video where you ate those 2 pregnant ladies and that got me in the zone so I was thinking about this one idea/commission, sent you a DM ;)

(OOC, you really nailed that horrible narcist vibe so many OF girls give off, It's really well done and I like this whole concept of posting)

VoraciousPrincess - 7 months ago

If you want, I have a friend who might be able to...take care of her.

Trying124 - 7 months ago

u/PredatoryPrincess2003

I'm sorry to say that that's only available for my highest tier subscribers on my only fans, and even then it's a lottery.
But you could keep trying

Trying124 - 7 months ago

u/PredatoryPrincess2003
I mean I'm not planning on doing it… to be honest she seems too busy at the funeral organising for him to get a nice tombstone to be bothered about that. but maybe she keeps asking questions should be another collaborator with me on my only fans!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

The muse is taking a little bit to get her stomach rumbling again.

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

I need a new chapter of this :(

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

I need a new chapter of this :(

Jadeharleyzz - 1 year ago

Hot af.

HMDVore - 1 year ago

Thanks

Trying124 - 1 year ago

I will confess to a little bit of a bias ;-) besides you edited together our last couple ones I suppose it's only fair that I give it a try! it is in my name

teamfortress32 - 1 year ago

Aw, I'm the most lovely?
Thanks for editing this together, the formatting looks great

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

Help! I've been refreshing every hour for the past day. LMAO

Trying124 - 1 year ago

It’s with HmD now!

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

OOOOHHHH, do you gave a time frame on it? I'm chomping at the bit for it LMAO

Trying124 - 1 year ago

sorry for taking so long to see this! Glad you liked everything else about it! I am currently working on it and I hope it lives up to your expectations!

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

Kinda wish the husband caught wind of this and instead of hating it, was really into it and it rekindled their relationship. Maybe it's just me but ntr makes me sad :c. Despite that, everything else is a fucking banger. I eagerly await the second serving of this fine meal :P

dekabreak - 1 year ago

I would say going after religious leaders, but i don't think the Pope or others would be her style, maybe try to make them say she is the true goddess in front of others.

Otherwise, torture or brainwash attractive priests, nuns or religious equivalents to worship her and be her slaves or even toilets, after all, she ate whole continents, at that point, some people will worship just because of fear alone.

skorm - 1 year ago

I fear for the whales in the great blue sea at the rate she’s going.

SarahGrows - 1 year ago

That's a good idea love ;)

dekabreak - 1 year ago

Whole continents...like, does she go around the multiverse eating mankind over and over again?

I wonder if she constantly gets new human toilets or slaves...assuming she eats her sister at some point.

At one point she would get a cult with how destructive she is...probably feeding her Goddess Complex, and being extra mean to those praying to other Gods for salvation.

dekabreak - 1 year ago

Wow, she is just awful.

And man, fattening prey is...something i have not seen that much, let alone making them eat people, dunno if her sister will be a permanent human toilet, but if not, fattening her up with people rather than just shoving someone inside and eating her would bedifferent.

But seriously, i have seen some cruel preds, few who would kidnap their sisters and turn them into toilets.

Trying124 - 1 year ago

I am so sorry I didn’t see this! Thank you so !

Trying124 - 1 year ago

Thanks you so much!!

Duncan-Idaho - 1 year ago

This is a fantastic story, I love the cruelty, the intentionality of the pred, and the scat details!

bwill194 - 1 year ago

This was amazing, loved every line of dialog. Zahra's cruelty is so much fun to read, great job as always man!!!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

I think she'd certainly enjoy rumours of a monster or whatever.probably because she would feel that they were true.
I think when and if she figures out that other ways of possible she will certainly consider some of those.

Trying124 - 1 year ago

Then I’m afraid you’d be getting disappointed, she’s not actually receiving mercy, if she is being unburst and regressed into a child, and also partially merging with Kayla

Trying124 - 1 year ago

Exactly, I really don’t know what he’s so… Broken up about.

Trying124 - 1 year ago

Thanks Buddy!

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

I would of liked to see some of the daughter perspective, if she was of age. I love prey getting mercy.

krazykid - 1 year ago

what a lucky stepdaddy, getting to be a nice meal after a good orgasm

bwill194 - 1 year ago

God damn, you did it again lmfao. Loved it!!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

I'm a bit of a mixed bag on the very large size difference, sometimes the sheer stretch of it and the difficulty can be part of the appeal. The predator resting almost comatose on top of their conquered parents as they brutalise them from nutrients.

This was a really enjoyable role play to do and most of the good bits I would argue are in fact Tyslan03,who did a phenomenal job with Aisha.

I'm glad you enjoy the vibe I was going for, I do try with Sahara to make it seem like she has an existence when she's not on the page tormenting people.
Plus it lets other people think about writing her,and adding other details onto her life even if only in their own heads.

Any time you contemplate writing your own stories my wholehearted advice is to give it a go. Even if you never publish them and only write them for yourselves it can still be an amazing thing to do.
Thanks as always for the detailed comment!

Jinxopow - 1 year ago

When it comes to Vorarephilia I’ve typically been turned off by daughter/mother or daughter/father because I instinctively believe that it’s going to be a very large size difference. But your amazing work here has broadened my eyes, having Zahra just be a grown adult and Aisha being Middle Aged really makes this premise stick, for me atleast.

I also found something really special about this work and in general with all your written work. That your stories feel like a tiny chapter in a large world. Like how there’s leads to previous and future vore stories! Like with Zahras cousin or with Ralph, that really leads the reader to imagine.

This story isn’t just about a girl churning her mom into nothing, it’s a major turning point in her life. While reading, I forgot that it was a Mother’s Day special. Which just proves how invested I was in the story! Since it was a role play adaptation, I hope what I enjoyed most was part of your contribution.

Last I’d like to say that everytime I’m done reading your stories I find myself contemplating writting my own stories, it’s inspiring!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

always lovely to receive your comments!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

thank you very much!

skorm - 2 years ago

Thanks so much! I hope I did this justice. Trying124

Carlis - 2 years ago

No, I mean when I say your pieces and this character , there's specifically less focus on scat and farts. The dimensions feel different, not as sexual. More Brutal. Sorry if I wasn't clear. Yea, I was interested if this was Tyslan's proof reading. Thanks to your more recent stuff, it comes off as less carnal but more horror , shock value. Thanks.

Trying124 - 2 years ago

The last one was Originally a snippet out of a larger story that got a little out of hand and was inspired by someone I was having conversations with.

Zarha, is certainly a character that I have a better handle on and I would certainly say she is smarter then Meghan, that's more deliberate and part of that is the meta knowledge that I assume people who have read my previous works will know who she is. So to bit more suspenseful.
Oddly enough this piece was written much much faster than the other one, and oddly had less reading although my proofreader was a different person. And that was mainly about flow as opposed to grammatical.


The intensity of the betrayal was deliberate, and I was aiming to try to make sure that Radebe Ahmadi, and who she was As a charactercame across well. Which is the reason it got more grossly inflated than Zahra, after Eating an entire fraternity.
but I will certainly congratulate my proofreader for their excellent work!

Carlis - 2 years ago

It’s actually a sharper and darker betrayal. Immensely so, this piece and the last piece feel night and day different; I think the last piece you had someone proof read it, ya? I think this piece is better than the last piece because the villain came off as more of an unsophisticated brute. I think both are good work, but this piece is far superior. This piece shows a lot more thought in the characters actions, one far smarter than Meghan.
Did someone proofread this piece? Because this piece and the last feel extremely different from all your other works. I think you said Tyslan had proofread it. I think this piece will do far better than the last. There’s a lot more suspense and a well-thought-out approach in this piece. So I guess my question is, "Did someone proofread this piece?" I think you'll find yourself headed in a different direction. As compared to your past work

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Feel free to spoil things dear heart, I presume your comment is being directed to other people as I have in fact read Zaha's virginity ;-).

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Aw thank you so much! Anything in particular? So I know what to do for next time?

jeangab - 2 years ago

Story SUPER ! I love really !!! Thank.

Trying124 - 2 years ago

thanks a bunch! They are and they are still phenomenal

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it!

Welcometocave - 2 years ago

gawd damn, quality work as always. glad to hear the prolific tyslan is still around

skorm - 2 years ago

More then that you know I re-read and reevaluate till the cows come home I think your “ Matryoshka” and understanding of it was positively brilliant it shows your intellect and your usage of it is so in character to Selina and adds to her cultural understanding , where as mrs canary just responds what the hell is that let me out you crazy bitch. It’s just so catty, plus you drive the knife in deeper with the deception with her eating her husbands glasses . You really feel adding to the despair of poor mrs canary. It’s devious it’s cruel and it ever so plays into your element of deception, deception is a art in writing becasue, clever use of it requires good set up to its in story to play off the element of the characters , and then your Audience. You twist it in further and add to our horror mrs canary’s next pleas she’s pregnant what has her unborn done wrong , only for Selina to crush her hopes further by saying even better and this was genius as it’s so cat like “even better two birds with one swallow” played as elegantly as a cat is sadistic to its prey, and then the hope spots you play with with William twice where she just drops the keys and your use of how cultured you are as a word smith , how you play upon Williams nightmares and target him with it that it’s all his fault. It really is clever how you make double usage of the canary’s as family and the taunting of them by cat woman so absolutely brilliant , you don’t shy away from vulgarity you embrace it where as most authors would shy from vaginal vore’s sensation you explain it as a odd numbness and expand upon it with the kicks and the bulges it’s leaving outside of her body and even the brief light of hope William thinks he can get away , again such playfulness and cruelty from our cat , as she spreads her vaginal lips to admire her machine of a body , but the knife is it’s just another hope spot , and even that she slightly lets him out only adding to Selena’s pleasure and signaling his death-knell , the added detail of there heights as each of the canaries grew etched into the wall nearby the mirror a moment of warmth outside the horror she’s putting them through , serves to zigzag our emotions it only fueling cat woman more with a whimper , you explain her orgasms so well as stars . Works like these really show when your in your element there’s more but it’s really like looking into a kaleidoscope with all the elements and primality you wield it’s a voregasmourge . I believe this will age like fine wine , good bye my dear friend I miss you and hope this day finds you well

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Well, thank you so much. Always lovely to see your comments

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Excellent! Do let me know what you think!

bwill194 - 2 years ago

Dude, see another one of your phenomenal stories on my update feed makes my day. Love how playfully cruel you wrote Selena. Love it, love it, love it!!!!

Jinxopow - 2 years ago

Ayy, good to see ya, can’t wait to finish reading this!

skorm - 2 years ago

Noooooo she still has to take care care of Victoria who it ends up as Jonathan’s wife’s to her bewbs . Humiliate earls mom by seduceing and then marrying earls dad all before she has the baby! How’s she gonna pull it off in 3 months !? She can’t do any of that with how big her meal ticket is Gona be , this is a slow methodical corporate take over

Carlis - 2 years ago

Hot , wish it was longer ! All the best to you on your journey!

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Oh thank you so much! Yep her little baby is growing up fast indeed! I will be busy for the next little while but I hope to 1 day be able to continue this. Thanks for your comments and feedback

bwill194 - 2 years ago

Loved the story holmes! The continuation of Ashley was great! Glad to see that she's making her meal ticket even plumper! Great job, and even though you're busier now, can't wait to see what you cook up next!!

skorm - 2 years ago

Did you just squirt? Nope marking my territory !

Trying124 - 2 years ago

I take this means you enjoyed it ?XD

Jinxopow - 2 years ago

HOLY SHIT YESSSS

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Always love your detailed comments my friend.
She is certainly a lot cruder. Though I suspect the father might be more problematical. That does give me an idea for a story though…

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Hmm, A part of me that likes Ferel Thinks that maybe she was experimenting with a kitten or a puppy or something like that and swallowed it down. And then practised using watermelons and other stuff like a reference. But that’s not too firm an idea

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Awesome! Thank you so much. I decided to make it a bit harder than her usual ones to emphasise that she’s quite young still!

Trying124 - 1 year ago

all see what I can do

Jadeharleyzz - 1 year ago

More please!!!!

Trying124 - 2 years ago

To be honest I don't know, I do quite like her as a character and she has some potential ideas that I have in my head but I'm too busy at the moment to do much.

Carlis - 2 years ago

Will mary ever get a sequel? I read a lot of your other stories but I really kinda think some of the subtle things you do with this character stand out it’s REALLY hot how she tastes herself when blowing a kiss good bye

Trying124 - 2 years ago

well that is very high praise indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as Mary enjoyed her meal

Augustin - 2 years ago

It's my pleasure! I think what made this story really stand out to me is Earl himself. I begin by sympathising with him because he's the protagonist, then realise how much of a piece of work he is -- and then Ashley enters, seen through Earl's dull eyes. Even though I'm familiar with the conventions of the vore story, I didn't immediately think "oh, she's eaten someone", buse that thought would never occur to Earl, and by then you've made sure the reader's trapped inside his brain. It's very well done.

Aside from that, I was a fan of the last disposal scene (which is unusual, cause I don't tend to go in for that stuff). Too often I just write "bone-flecked turds" and call it a day, but you've got the pelvis and the jawbone! Pleasantly specific. Earl's death was also a highlight.

Trying124 - 2 years ago

I think I can say with all honesty that this is possibly the nicest compliment I have received on any of my work. I may fan of quite a lot of Stephen King's writing. And to be compared to him is a colossal honor and I really really appreciate it.
I think I'd avoid showing it to any of my IRL friends for fear of outing myself but you're right it could be a fun experiment. XD
thanks for the compliment. Is there anything in particular you like specifically about the story? So I can know to do it next time?

Augustin - 2 years ago

Wow. This is quality. I've been reading a fair bit of Stephen King lately, and your style reminds me of him. It's not often I come across a vore story with an actual plot. You could give this to someone who isn't "one of us", and I reckon they'd get over halfway before realising something was up. Might be a fun experiment.


Anyway - splendid story, hope to see more in this vein.

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Well you certainly make a convincing argument! I think I probably will end up writing a sequel now, thank you very much for your comment which give me the inspiration! Try

skorm - 2 years ago

you really have a perfect set up , she loaths it, id see it as her giveing her baby nutrients that it would take from her . and from the charcter of ashley you have crafted well she doesnt take things laying down plus it seems like she enjoys what she does i thought it sexy she got off on it

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, i’m glad you like the marrows internal conflict.

Jinxopow - 3 years ago

The justice system is so corrupt… poor Sorrel White.
I really enjoyed this short experimental writing! The specialist regretting the situation complemented Harriets cruelty.

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Thanks! Only regret is that she didn’t get the mother too, lol. Glad you enjoyed her, might have more with her in the future.

Jinxopow - 3 years ago

Well she’s a master of disguise… fooled the whole Brown family.
(Wait was the Brown name a foreshadow to how they end up? Lmfao)

Jinxopow - 3 years ago

Oh yeah, “how more cruel can a pred get” 100% blew it ouf of the park man!

Newtonne - 3 years ago

I loved how she was brazzingly digesting the children in front of the parents hehe. And how she teased Roger before gulping him down. Great pred.

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Glad you enjoyed the foreign language teasing, A little bit of cockiness, I think works for her. What’s the point of being better than everyone else without telling them?

And don’t worry Honestly I’m not even sure if she is Muslim or just occasionally pretending to be. She certainly is willing to taunt her prey, in all sorts of languages. Thanks again for the comment

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Funny you should say that, my usual tendencies are to be more descriptive and include more bodily functions, but that tends to up the word count, was trying to experiment with more concise writing.
Not sure if it worked too well, but hey that’s what experiments are for.
Glad you enjoyed it.
thank you for commenting.

shlurpay64 - 3 years ago

I would have liked even more digestive details and bodily function stuff because I'm gross but the story is super memorable and creative, I feel like this should be getting more attention than it is.

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Well thank you. Hadn’t seen anything like it before so decided to give it a go. I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

KimMadcox - 3 years ago

Now THAT'S some gereat Idea XD

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Glad that my suffering amused you!???? i’ll have to try describing them next time. And I appreciate the comment and the desire for more mean girl stuff. So underutilised.

AeriaGloris - 3 years ago

I genuinely laughed at your comments in Red. It would be best to describe the emoji as opposed to including it in the written text. However, I I used .emoji in an emoji heavy text.

And yes, more Mean Girls content is required!

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. Going to try some more feral stories but probably not my next couple.

jordan08070 - 3 years ago

wonderful job, you should write feral prey stuff more often

Jinxopow - 4 years ago

Great work! ❤️

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Glad you liked her. I’ll see what I can do about some more :)

RyanKrakinski - 3 years ago

More of this pred please!

Trying124 - 4 years ago

oh wow!! thank you so much glad you enjoyed it.

HMDVore - 4 years ago

Excellent, cruel story!

Jinxopow - 4 years ago

I mean that asswipe with the missing photo of Tyler was so demeaning! lmao.

Trying124 - 4 years ago

Thanks. She has a certain smug quality to her that I think looks good on preds .

SmaxTheDestroyer - 4 years ago

There’s not enough cinder pred~ Evil preds are the best!

Trying124 - 2 years ago

Possibly but more likely I would do Barisal eat Ashoka. I find her more appealing as a predator

Jelvyc177 - 2 years ago

Perhaps another time, you could do Ashoka eating Barriss. Such harsh betrayal needs fulfillment.

The K - 3 years ago

My pleasure. Hope to see more elements like these in your future stories.

Trying124 - 3 years ago

Thank you very much!
Yes she’s excellent as a predator. Tho sadly underused. I appreciate giving specific feedback about what you liked. It really helps for writing the next ones.

The K - 3 years ago

Good story. I love to see Barriss Offee as a predator. My favorite parts is when Bariss burped with ventress' smell and taste, when she did her curtsy with her gut on the ground, and how you described how foul smelling the insides of her stomach were. All good.