helenarlet - 1 year ago

She should be. She paid good money for those curves. =P

doomed - 1 year ago

Wow she’s curvy

YamiTakashi - 1 year ago

she... do have quite the femme fatale look to her x3 ^^; still pretty nice :3

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Thank you~

strayarctic - 1 year ago

never thought about what she would actually look like but she's rather cute! I like her design that you went with

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Makes sense. Unlike Clawdette, Blythe doesn't have a lifestyle that would allow her to maintain tons of fat for too long. She's practically living off of her prey for survival.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

The big difference between Blythe and Clawdette is that Clawdette will just eat anything when given the chance, while Blythe has more self control. Not to mention Clawdette lives a very comfortable lifestyle while Blythe is essentially homeless. It just seemed to me that Blythe wouldn't have packed on the same kind of weight and would look a lot closer to a non-pred like Cotton. And yeah, I'm sure the rabbit biology helps in that area too. Not all of Clawdette's curves are packed on exclusively from her diet. A lot of it's genetic. You can tell that just by looking at her mother and her daughter. So for Blythe it's a bit of a mix. Different lifestyle and different genetics.

AliceXVI - 1 year ago

Hehe its true, im even there in her bio :3

helenarlet - 1 year ago

That image is just Cotton's "around the house" clothes.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Not weird but kind of funny because I did give her the stereotypical "cop glasses" in one of the other outfits I made for that model.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Is it wierd to say that I always imagined Cotton wearing sunglasses all the time to look cool. Even indoors and at night. Only not a complete douchebag like Albert Wesker from Resident evil.

doomed - 1 year ago

Some times we write about our own experiences and pains without ever realizing it. Hopefully your parents aren’t as horrible as clawdette though . It would be a shame for their ideals to corrupt you like hers did Veronica

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Small bit of irony I'm just now noticing in that. Veronica left home, going off to college, and survived, while her brother stayed home and eventually got eaten by his mother. I find that ironic because my brother and I both left home and turned out to be decent people, as far as I'm aware... while my other siblings stayed home and were consumed by my parent's ideals and beliefs until they became just like them. It's weird because I wasn't intending to write any kind of allegory about that, but looking at it now it seems like that's exactly what Veronica became. I must have done it subconsciously.

doomed - 1 year ago

I love how you put “surviving “ since she’s the only child who survived her mother

helenarlet - 1 year ago

They are just for visual reference. All of these bios I'm putting up are just to help people with keeping up with the characters as they read the stories. Especially considering there are getting to be so many of them. (Both stories and characters.) Even I will occasionally find myself in a situation where I'm writing and I'm like, "What did this character look like again? How old did I say this character was? Was this character around when this thing happened...?" So if I have that problem from time to time and I wrote this stuff, I can only imagine there must be some of my readers who occasionally find themselves in the same boat when a character I haven't used in a while suddenly pops up again.

It's my intention that with this character bio folder, if that ever happens you can just quickly go to the folder, click on the name of the character you are confused about, and be like, "Oh right. It's that person." So I felt like some kind of visual reference was needed but I don't have the cash on me right now to commission an artist to draw hand drawn reference sheets of every single character in this series. I'd love to have more art of the characters, and in time maybe I'll get some, but for right now, the 3d models will just have to do.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Hopefully these models can serve as a basis for hand drawn in the future. No disrespect or anything, the 3d model just throw me off a little bit for a loop.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Yeah, I specifically made her curvier than Veronica. Not by too much, but just enough to be noticeable.

doomed - 1 year ago

I love how you can tell she is curvier than her daughter .

HedoroMonogatari - 1 year ago

Pred tattoos! I knew of body count tattoos but this awoken something inside me I didn't know was there! That butt tattoo is my favorite of all, wow!

I hope we get to read about Luna hearing the tale about the son turned fat!!!

TuxKusanagi - 1 year ago

Writing for yourself is the best thing you can do. Write what you know. It was a great look into that life.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Figured I'd make this now. With Luna's new role as Mentor to Cindy. As Luna is a fellow asexual, who has only used her body for money rather then personal pleasure. And for being the one to help teach Cindy the things the internet couldn't. I give Luna the Hierophant card, that represents tradition and the passing down of knowledge in a manner only they can. In this case, Luna serves as the only positive asexual model that Cindy can relate to, giving the two a level of openness unachievable with the current cast.

Upright the card can mean, Spiritual wisdom, religious beliefs, conformity, tradition, and institutions.

While reversed it can mean, Personal beliefs, freedom, and challenging the status quo.

That last one being quite reflective on how Cindy's sexuality is seen by others. Despite it being considered wierd by many of Cindy and Luna's piers. It is actually perhaps one of the churches most recognizable teachings to this day. What with it being that the pleasures of Sex for fun were being constantly frowned upon throughout real life history. Rather that people should only have sex for the direct purpose of having children.

And although Luna still does have sex, she makes it a point to address that it's purely for money, possibly alluding to the idea that she doesn't have other reliable skills.

At the vary least, Cindy could serve as a nice little passion project of passing down knowledge that she has accrued to the next generation. Which is good, since Cindy up to this point has lacked some vary crucial knowledge on how Asexualality actually works. Hopefully this will improve Cindy's approach towards her friends and family.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Very true. I've personally found that the hardest part of being an asexual was figuring out what the hell that even means in the first place. Something I reflected in Cindy's lack of understanding about the matter. She had the basic idea, she figured it applied to her, but she didn't really know much beyond that.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

In all fairness, Cindy's Asexuiality has been a topic that a lot of people have wanted to get looked into for a while now. And it makes sense that Cindy herself didn't truly understand it herself because she didn't anyone as an example to reflect off of.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Hmm... Provided The Rocky Horror Picture Show managed to survive the apocalypse and isn't currently lost media, I can't think of any reason off hand that it would be black listed by the corporations... The cult would likely consider it to be an old educational film. It's likely something they would show to young inductees during their mandatory education.

ManWithPlan44 - 1 year ago

Ba-dum-tsss

Also, having watched The Rocky Horror Picture Show for the first time recently, I'm wondering what the Cult Of Ultra-Science would think of it

Dews - 1 year ago

Oh no worries, I appreciate a density of content in the writing I read. And trust me I've written things more dense than this, so you're good. I'm just glad to see more in the setting. Like your Miss Small series it's a fantastic one.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Also, yeah, there was a lot happening in this one. I hope it wasn't too much all crammed into one story, but after unintentionally leaving the series on hiatus for 2 years, there was a lot that needed to happen to put things back on track. Now I can start updating this somewhat more regularly again and hopefully it won't be quite as much of an overload from here on out.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

I don't know... She broke Mallory pretty good...

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Glad you liked it! It's always a pleasure to write in the Yiffpunk universe. This commission even gave me a chance to explore a period of the timeline that has been so far unexplored.

ManWithPlan44 - 1 year ago

Hey, Thanks again for this, I love how the story turned out!

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

I like this, I am little worried about Isabella safety, but I liked her calming down when she realized she not being digested.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Sorry that it's long.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

That's certainly a very interesting analysis. Thank you for shaking it~

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Tldr

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

I think it's time I gave a little analysis on Cindy now.

In her introduction, Cindy had only been a young child with every bit of innocence a girl her age could have, While still being made aware of what kind of world she lived in thanks to the teachings of her late mother. Cindy had managed to live a relatively normal life. Until that day came, two days before her 8th birthday Cindy would go on to witness two things. One, her mother being murdered by a retail store robber. And two, a would be predator, fully intent on eating her, had saved her life. Before this moment, Cindy had more or less breezed through life without much trouble. Generally knowing when and when not to trust a stranger, as seen when she first meets Clawdette at the store, she was instinctively prepared to run if need be. However, when a crocodile employee arrives to try and lure away Cindy with a fake story to eat her Clawdette had instead moved in the way to her defense and asked Cindy if she knew the man. With the point established, Cindy and Clawdette made the more sensible decision to head to the front of the store where it would be much harder for others to make a meal out of Cindy. Though when that plan ended up leading into a robbery that resulted in all manners of chaos getting loose. Cindy ended up seeing the unthinkable happening, her new acquaintance Clawdette, a fox, had leaped in again to protect her from anymore harm.

This action would go on to have a massive effect on Cindy going forward. For starters, because of Clawdette's selflessness Cindy had become completely enamored with the woman that had saved her. Constantly referring to Clawdette as brave to social workers in foster care. And often running away to be with Clawdette going forward, officially being adopted by Clawdette weeks later. However according to Clawdette, Cindy seemed to become a damaged from the experience. Being that Cindy was able to move on from her own mother's death pretty easily, which even to Clawdette seemed a little "Cold".

Later, after a close encounter with her new grandmother Bernadette. Cindy had regained a sense of fear of Predators. But had also gained a deep fascination of being eaten. Given that multiple stories afterwards often had a underlying subplot or main plot surrounding Cindy wanting to get eaten by a variety of different preds, with mixed results. Even owning and enjoying a T-rex doll that has eating other toys as a feature. Cindy also once put herself in harms way by playing a dangerous banned arcade game that electrocuted her, just so she could get eaten intentionally. Still needing to get saved by Clawdette. Cindy seems to have developed what others have been calling her fetish for being swallowed, despite Cindy's protests of being asexual.

Though Cindy has atleast gone as far as to gain a sort of Consumption crush for multiple different female preds she knows. Such as Sao, Linda, Sam, to even her new family like Veronica and even her new mom, Clawdette. The thing that Cindy persists to argue with as to why she enjoys this particular activity comes from a strange sense of comfort. Since once she's already in a stomach, a pred theoretically can't do anything else to her while inside a stomach. Especially after dumping anti-acids from her person to stave off digestion, while carrying around Epecac syrup wherever she goes to induce vomiting when she needs to.

Together, Cindy seems to possess a bit of a mischief streak when it comes down to her relationship with Predators. The thing Cindy seems to enjoy most of all from her activities, in my opinion. Is pulling vomiting pranks on preds she doesn't like. While considering it a bonding experience with those that she does. Though this hasn't stopped her from getting in deep trouble with either.

Over time, Cindy has admitted that she is envious of preds, having desire to eat other people herself to feel closer to her new family, despite the disadvantages of being a pure rabbit. However, Cindy maybe in luck. According to real life documented evidence, there may in fact be no such thing as a true herbivore. As there have been many instances of common herbivores devouring other animals in opportunistic moments, (just look these up on YouTube). With it even being common among rodents to cannibalize their young for various reasons, including Rabbits. Meaning possibly the only thing that could be stopping Cindy, (as well as Patti now) from becoming a full on predator herself is a severe lack of habit and experience that could be overcome with fierce determination and trial-and-error until her digestive systems adjust. But when that happens, Cindy will no doubt gain an immense sense of satisfaction for going against the conventional and still getting what she wanted. And with any luck depending on her "breed" it might become a little easier.

As for what Cindy's role has been throughout her journey in this series would probably be something of Clawdette's morel compass and hope. Something Clawdette had tried to have for years, but due to Bernadette's meddling in Clawdette's affairs, Clawdette would give up trying to have anything to do with them. As every relationship Clawdette had with rabbits always ended in disaster with any rabbit they knew getting eaten and leaving her in a emotionally vulnerable state. However, by getting to meet Cindy and know of her, Clawdette was able to reawaken to the love of Rabbits she thought had long since died.

Being with Clawdette more and more, Cindy would allow Clawdette to finally see through the illusions that had plagued her for years, placed by Bernadette herself. As Clawdette would finally start to have rabbits in her life that existed for more than just a food scource, even getting into a polygamous relationship with a couple of rabbits. With plans to marry Cotton soon enough.

Cindy, While starting off as bit of a minor role in the story has also grown up to become quite the resourceful, intuitive, but mischievous young lady. Gaining many friends among predators and prey alike, even getting a crocodile for a girlfriend. Cindy has worked to developing a better relationship with her first pred, Granny Bernadette. Cindy really has become the singularity for her ever growing family. Often being the reason why so many characters have joined the cast like Cotton, Cherry, Blythe, Elizabeth, Sam, Sao (because Clawdette doesn't really interact with Anny's family), Linda, Sally. All characters that Clawdette may never have met if not Cindy, and vice-versa.

As for Cindy's arcana, I would say that she started off with "The Fool", the card of new experiences which can mean beginnings, innocence, leap of faith, originality, and spontaneity. While reversed it can mean chaos, folly, lack of direction, naivety, poor judgement, and stupidity. Being that Cindy was still a little young and naive when she meets Clawdette. Cindy was still relatively empty in terms of real world experience with direction in her and her mother's life outside of just existing as they were. Not bad, but nothing special either. Cindy was plenty open to new possibilities or manipulation from people she meets. Considering Cindy was almost lead astray by an crocodile employee, so he could eat her. And although Cindy was likely taught not to talk to strangers by her mom, she was probably still willing to trust employees of any given store. This became necessary for Clawdette to step in and remind the young rabbit about the rule of not trusting people she doesn't already know.

After the incident at the Pawmart, Cindy would end up transitioning on a new journey of self discovery, spontaneity and recovery. As Cindy was still in a manner of speaking traumatized from the whole ordeal and became somewhat indifferent or jaded to the fact she just lost her own mother, along with her innocence. Though there may've been a lot more to the story than what Clawdette was told by the social workers.

Moving on, Cindy would attain her new path as "the High Pristess". The card of intuition and deceit. Upright the card can define as secrets, mystery, the future as yet unrevealed; the woman who interests the Querent, if male; the Querent herself, if female; silence, tenacity; mystery, wisdom, and science while reversed it can mean Passion, moral or physical ardor, conceit, surface and knowledge. While a bit prone to manipulation, as seen above-mentioned, Cindy has also grown quite capable of performing many manipulations herself in order to get what she wanted from others. From getting eaten or encouraging her inexperienced friends to eat other people. Even Bernadette had come to see the tactical mindset of a pred in Cindy. Cindy also grew a lot smarter as preds don't usually trick her like they used to. Even now Cindy has shown to be capable of seeing through the tricks of the family therapist/intruder Dr. man.

However, it's also plenty apparent that Cindy has some issues with picking up on social ques from others. Such as how in the recent chapter, Cindy started to make it her personal mission to make Linda her new girlfriend so that Linda won't feel like she'll need to leave if and when the whole media incident blows over. Getting overly pushy with Linda to the point of making the young wolf feel uncomfortable. While also trying to justify it with a sort of rabbit privilege that Cindy can engage in certain "activities" way before most others. Linda still likes Cindy as a friend but obviously doesn't wish to take things that far. All this is despite a more plausible solution as simply Clawdette adopting Linda into their family if her parents have no objections to this, if their around. Cindy has definitely grown, but she still has much to learn when it comes to boundaries and the feelings of others.

I even have an idea for Cindy's Stand. Because what kind of manipulater like Cindy be without her "Master of Puppet". And although Master of Puppets is Risotto Nero's ultimate ability. This interpretation would be its own stand alone version. Such as being a bound stand in the form of a large wooden spider puppet that when active, she gains bit of a rabbit motif and has roughly two modes of use. One is standard use where Cindy can have her stand attack her enemies with hidden blades in the front legs. Plus being able to set up medium strength non-stick string webs from the spinneret. Two, and this is the more dangerous ability, "Master of Puppets" will hide till the perfect moment and when Cindy gets herself eaten by a pred, "Master of Puppets" will lunge at the pred's back and bite down into the back of necks and prepare to insert hidden ramrods from her front and back legs violently up the elbows and down the peteilas, (legs) of the pred and control them like another puppet and the pred is fully conscious during the whole experience. And while Cindy is in the pred's stomach, they no longer digest Cindy, she now digests them back like a parasite. And when Cindy needs to get out she can just have her stand slice open her predators stomach and leave.

The Metallica song itself is a song about thinking you're the master of your nasty habits like drugs. But in actuality, the thing in control was the habit all along. And in the case of Cindy, consuming her is also a habit that predators desire to satisfy themselves. But for a while now, it has been Cindy that's manipulating events so that she gets eaten because it's what she desires more. Argo, it's Cindy that is the one in control of what goes down. Especially with her little bag of tricks, aka drugs that keep her from being digested anyway, so preds can't even enjoy that. Plus it's plan to see by now that Cindy has gotten incredible good at manipulating things to get what she wants. And perhaps one of these stories she'll her dream of becoming a real pred on her own. Time will tell.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Does Dr. Man have powers or is he just a fast bug? If he does have powers, does Cindy somehow have the ability to see through them...?

It actually makes me kind of giddy seeing people debate and theorize about my stories. I won't say I didn't try to write them with a certain air of mystery regarding certain things, (nor do I intend to leave questions unanswered forever) but I feel like I've already dropped enough information over the course of this series for someone to work out the answer to this if they really think about it. At least the answer to the Dr. Man question.

vorelover2 - 1 year ago

i love love love these stories soo much. i read alot and i see alot of characters come and go so when i get hooked into a story, a vore story nontheless, because the characters keep growing and connecting in new and interesting ways. it makes me giddy. i agree with Dews here, your story is getting complex in the best of ways and i am all for it. just when you think one character might be a side, or side dish, you get ones like Juniper who was only briefly there for that one part about the abstinence class show up chapters later as a her own gear into the machine that is this world. simply the best

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Damn, you aren't too far off.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

I don't know why, but I've always imagined that Cindy looks like a young Carrot from One piece. And just as mischievous.

HedoroMonogatari - 1 year ago

I just loved the talk between Veronica and Clawdette! I love it when you bring up the situation with her son and his baby mama. It's so terrible and sinful, I can't help but feel bad about how much I enjoy that bit of teasing.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

That may come from me being asexual. I write smut, yeah. But without an actual story to drive it, I would probably get little to no enjoyment out of it. I'm not saying smut can't be fun. Even as an asexual I still see the value in it. It's just not the thing that drives me.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Oh, Ok.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Omnibus /ˈämnəˌbəs/ noun, a volume containing several novels or other items previously published separately.

It would have been a published book containing all of the stories here on my account as well as some bonus content. I had planned to do one for each season of the series but at this point I don't think I'll be able to. Amazon is a little picky about what kind of content they will let you publish if you aren't George R.R. Martin or Stephen King. I've already had one of the books I published on there get banned.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

What's a Omnibus? I don't think I've ever heard of that.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Oh okay... No I didn't make a mistake. Both of those answers are equal parts correct while still being purposefully misleading.

Sorry. I actually forgot that I had already dropped BOTH of those. But I guess that means it's about time for me to finally show what actually happened. I had originally written the story in question as bonus content for a published Miss Smalls omnibus collection, but I have no idea if that will ever get published now. This series may be beyond Amazon publishing guidelines at that point. But I don't want to withhold the story from everyone because of that so I'll post it some time here in the near future.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

I believe you originally wrote it that Bernadette ate Clawdette's husband due to his gambling habits. Then in a later chapter he had died in a car crash from Clawdette's recounting of events at a dinner party she invited her mother to.

doomed - 1 year ago

Lol Claudette is a really REALLY bad mom XD

nyanyan - 1 year ago

After this, I kind of want a non-cannon that has Cindy as the pred, just because the sudden shift would be fun. I don't have the money to commission, but I like rabbit preds. Not the biggest fan of young pred/prey, though. C'est la vie.

Still, good writing. Been enjoying your series. Keep up the good work.

AliceXVI - 1 year ago

wow they really wanted to see the child die XD

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Thanks!

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Thank you so much~ I mean, I can't take all of the credit. I was working off of the prompt given to me by the patron who commissioned it, but I am glad to hear that you are so impressed with my portrayal of it.

Skittles209 - 1 year ago

This is awesome.

doomed - 1 year ago

I love this so much . The initial hesitation of the teacher , then the discorvery of how pleasurable it was .she’s just doing her job and being an educator yet she can’t help but find it pleasurable , then the subtle corruption of her by the students and the pleasure until she finally caved in and enjoyed it only for her to accidentally lose herself in it and digest them. Phenomenal
And what makes it better is the fact that this wasn’t some cruel teacher who wanted a free meal or some undeserving students . Nope , she’s a good teacher who just made a delicious mistake and the students definitely didn’t mind .

So often with teacher preds they aren’t actually good teachers . Great preds sure but they’re more predator than teacher . Here it’s just the perfect balance

Mechdragon1k - 1 year ago

This is just perfect.

Mustelid - 1 year ago

The world setting is the act is highly illegal and heavily punished, the club offers the experience but ensures the participants are returned to duty safely after a amount of time. The realism Sasha performed was honest terror unknowing her inevitable fate which gave our pred an experience she wont forget.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Well this wasn't my setting. I was just writing the prompt I was given by :iconMustelid: so I guess you would have to ask them how it works. I will say that while I was writing it I was under the impression that it was pretty dangerous, but I could always be wrong I guess...

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Thanks. Glad to be back.

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it~

helenarlet - 2 years ago

You are correct. I fixed it.

UncleRippu - 2 years ago

think you may have mistagged this as male pred going by the f/m tag

helenarlet - 2 years ago

Well, as for Cherry... This was a commissioned story where it was specifically asked that the main characters not make it out. And a version of Rabbit Night where Cherry not make it out was specifically asked for. I mean, if you go back and read the actual story, you'll see that Cherry did get out of that one, although she didn't beat the wolf up on account of Cindy being there and this was still back before that fact about Cherry was openly known.

As for the sleep over... Yeah... I could have kept going with it until there was only one person left, I'm sure... But that story was getting a little long so I decided to just leave it there. I mean... If someone WANTS to commission ANOTHER alternate version of that story specifically, where it keeps going until there's only one left, I'm sure that could probably be arranged.

doomed - 2 years ago

I honestly thought the sleep over would’ve set off a chain of events that ended with cindy getting eaten too lol
Also that cherry would’ve beat her up in the first one

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Well this reply is 4 months late, but I didn't notice it until now. No I didn't get hurt. Thanks for the concern. Although more recently I did have someone break into my house and then not take anything. And I'm kind of paranoid it may have been the same guy looking for me on account of the fact that he did take my ID during the robbery and threatened to come after me if I called the cops now that he had my address. Because, I mean... who breaks into someone's house and then doesn't touch anything? He went through the trouble of destroying my doorknob to get in so he obviously wanted in for something...

helenarlet - 1 year ago

Oh right... I had avoided answering this before I posted the next story because I didn't want to give away spoilers. But I sort of forgot to come back and actually say something once I had posted it. I guess it's kind of a moot point now because with the next story posted you know what happened.

Warwolf1 - 1 year ago

Feel free to shut me down. But I'm guessing that Linda got Rabies as well, and in the worst possible manner, on television during an event and caused an incident.

YamiTakashi - 1 year ago

Also sucks that you got robbed >.< i hope you diden't get hurt in that event ^^; i know a friend of mine that got he's bag stolen and got a jack right in the forehead... he had to stitch it up afterwards >-<

wisecrack3 - 1 year ago

Jesus, that's pretty fuckin rough. Glad to see you're still kicking though, I'll be sure to pick up some of your payed books to help with grocery money.

wisecrack3 - 2 years ago

Loving the development with Cherry and Bernadette! I hope you've not been hurt too badly by your private life, this year has been terrible all around for everyone i've talked too so far :(

slonim - 2 years ago

А будет еще продолжение про мисс Смоллс??

Amnael - 2 years ago

Welp now we know what happened to the lone survivor x3
Nice integration from your other story ~

YamiTakashi - 2 years ago

Well... that happen x3 uwu

Although feel sorry for Cherry for losing her love ones ^^;

slonim - 2 years ago

А бабушка Клодетт съест в конце концов свою чайку? Чем она вообще питается? А секс с Бернадетт удивителен.. Наконец-то мы дождались!

Morbius123 - 11 months ago

i will be honest i was really pissed at doctor man for revealing he has those documents to Burnadette and letting her destroy them before he showed them to Clawdette. i will be honest im really hoping Clawdette kills Burnadette someday.

slonim - 2 years ago

Огромный интерес! Мы так долго ждали продолжения! Спасибо!

helenarlet - 2 years ago

Thank you. I'm glad that after 38 of these stories they are still holding interest.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 2 years ago

Man continues to amaze/scare me I love it to hell. And the drama is just peak entertainment, marvelous.

AliceXVI - 2 years ago

Wow this one was an emotional gutpunch. well done <3

Prismo - 3 weeks ago

omg, excellently written, thinking of writing a yeogno story myself

Alenae - 2 years ago

that's what i meant. most fiction is just existing concepts placed into new contexts, after all, and that's not mutually exclusive with the fiction being cool!

helenarlet - 2 years ago

Thank you. And, I mean, the concept of the creature itself isn't exactly mine... This is an actual creature from Korean folklore. All I did was place it in a fancy gated community in modern times and think, what would it naturally do in this setting?

Alenae - 2 years ago

i'm glad to see you're doing alright enough to be able to post stories and i hope things keep getting better for you! also this is a really neat concept and i really like it.

slonim - 2 years ago

Решайте свои проблемы и возвращайтесь скорей! Мы вас ждем!

helenarlet - 2 years ago

Sorry, there will be more. I've just been having a hard time lately with things going on at my day job so I've been on a bit of a hiatus. Not a planned one either. But I'm hopeful that will be coming to an end now.The hiatus, not the Miss Smalls series...

slonim - 3 years ago

Is this the last story about Miss Smalls? Or will you write more?

TheDarkTraveler - 3 years ago

I’ll being you something to eat shortly…” or someone

Amnael - 3 years ago

Sounds like she really cant keep away from rabbits... looking out how this continues ;p

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Oh thank you~

helenarlet - 3 years ago

I was for a couple of days there, yeah.

Kasra - 3 years ago

I'm really enjoying this series! It's unique and interesting. Great work!

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

You are working really hard huh?

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

And, just as I asked, you make a chapter 2...
Fingers crossed for a chapter 3 :D

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

And, just as I asked, you make a chapter 2...
Fingers crossed for a chapter3 :D

Serwin - 3 years ago

I would be interested in seeing more myself too.

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

I love old folk/fairy tales too, so I'm very happy to hear that.

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

Sounds good.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Yes there is. I love old folk tales so this was a fun little project for me. As long as there is any kind of interest in this I'll be glad to continue with it.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Oh nice. Glad to see that there is some kind of interest in this. It's not my usual style so I wasn't sure if I would have any takers.

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

Ah okie :3 thanjs for the heads up

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Marlon is one of the characters from the published Yiffpunk novels which can be purchased on Amazon. He was a side character in the first book, and is set to be one of the protagonists of the third book which will be released in the coming months. Although I believe there is one short little story featuring him posted on my gallery here.

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

Have to try follow the yiffpunk series someday owo

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

Cuuuutie~ ^^

TheDarkTraveler - 3 years ago

great story whish we had more of the digestion of the rabits from the last part before this

johotpocket - 3 years ago

I was so torn between not wanting to lose Cindy... but also *really* wanting to see that muzzle get unlocked. I'm hoping to see the little bun get more stomach time in the future, willing or not.

Lovely stuff as always, keep it up!

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

I dig the latest work of the miss smalls owo although i diden't know dr man survived since the i think was the past story sounded more like you know who tried to drown the moth ^^; but if it is to help keep the sound down through the choping of the are i buy it... too x3 still good job :3

Dragonlover19 - 3 years ago

Ha ha ha

TheMysteriousSadSack - 3 years ago

I dont dislike dr. Man, but hes gotta knock this BnE stuff off. But who knows? Maybe he can help our house of colorful personalities. I mean Cherry turned out just fine right?

helenarlet - 3 years ago

There will be more stories. I have been going through a hard time lately and had to take a break. But there are more stories on the way.

Будет больше историй. В последнее время я переживаю тяжелые времена, и мне пришлось сделать перерыв. Но впереди еще много историй.
(I hope that came out of Google Translate right...)

slonim - 3 years ago

А будут ли еще рассказы или пока перерыв на неопределенное время?

TheDarkTraveler - 3 years ago

I like this comment thrad, says a lot of what I'm thinking. That rabbit kid will probally only get to see ones set of boobs in his life and it will be his mom's as they both digest

softvarelover - 3 years ago

I wonder what Cindy would think of Clawdette eating rabbits again?

Honestly she would probably want to have another visit to her mothers tummy.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

No problem at all. I enjoy hearing what others like and want to see. Can't promise I'll write EVERYTHING everyone wants, but it's still helpful input.

NewSuperTrios - 3 years ago

Guess we're all fucked.

softvarelover - 3 years ago

Thank you.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

There you go. It is done.

softvarelover - 3 years ago

Have you put any thought into putting all of your Miss Smalls story's into a single folder to make it easier to find all of them on account that this site does not have a good way to search for posts within the users folders?

Or at least not an obvious one.

AliceXVI - 3 years ago

Holy shit

Skittles209 - 3 years ago

Yay grandma? Assuming this turns out great in some fashion somehow? I kinda expect Dr Man to poof into dust though. Most moths seem to be ninety percent dust.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

I'm getting to it.

VVVx - 3 years ago

And I'm really, really wondering how many people Cherry has killed, and if it's limited to people who tried to eat her.

VVVx - 3 years ago

"You think I’m sleeping with another woman because I’m into it?"

This is really messed up of her to do to Clawdette :/ Especially with how she was hamming it up and nearly outed her.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Cherry called herself a psychopath at the end of the last story. Whether or not she actually is however is up for debate I guess. I know a good bit about psychology but I'm not an expert or a licensed professional capable of making a diagnosis, so I'm skeptical about my ability to accurately portray one thing or another. It's kind of like trying to diagnose Batman villains with actual mental disorders. It becomes hard to pin something down exactly when you consider that they aren't real people and they are written by various different people who don't accurately know the behaviors of one disorder from the next. At the very least, we can safely say that Cherry is definitely mentally disturbed.

Either way, I hope everyone has been enjoying this little detour the series has taken into this look at Cherry's character. It should be ramping up to some actual answers fairly soon and then we'll be able to get back to other stuff.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 3 years ago

Hoo boy, that Cherry is a real tough cookie. Maybe Dr. Man was secretly conditioning Cherry to be a sleeper soldier of sorts. Also, can we safely call Cherry a psychopath? Just seems like her internal dialogue reflects that.

doomed - 2 years ago

I will call a lot of predators on this site serial killers . Because that’s how they act , and vore ends with death. Especially preds who eat people for being witnesses .

That’s said , seeing an actual serial killer in the story , in and a predator , I find myself unsure if serial killer is an accurate comparison. Cherry is amazing

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Oh yeah... I can see how a prep scene would have been a fun thing that cold have added to this story. I'm a little disappointed I didn't do something like that now... But truthfully, this story was running a bit long in my mind and it was mainly intended to shed some light on Cherry's character. Kink was kind of low on the priority list this time around. I do enjoy adding kink to these stories, but sometimes a certain story just needs to be told even if there isn't really room for that sort of thing.

ShadowDM - 3 years ago

Nice story. Kinda hoped for a preparation scene with the bird, but I won't complain. It was an interesting read.

Skittles209 - 3 years ago

Mothman or devilman. Are they the same? This chapter is awesome.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

*say

That should have been "I'm not going to say..."

Jewel33 - 2 years ago

Been meaning to read through this series for a long time, and lo and behold I get to this part the same day I quit my four year Pharmacy job for...similar public concerns that may or may not have also involved a gun being pointed my way over an unfilled antibiotic.

I wish I was as strong as you, being able to use the shit thrown at the service sector as fodder for your art instead of just burying it like I have. This one scared the hell out of me because of how close it hit, I've done the back-to-back 12 hour shifts, watched multiple people defecate themselves and smear it in various places, and been threatened with lawsuits and physical violence on a daily basis by people the corporate overlords refused to let us ban or even call the cops on. Also if we caught COVID from our unmasked patients it was considered our fault and we weren't paid for the time off.

tl;dr: I know you got a lot of backlash from this story but it grabbed me because I saw it too. I hope you continue to write and find a way past all this.

VampireBunny - 3 years ago

Fargo is pretty infamous for using that as a controversial way to get away with false advertising though, but I understand what you mean. lol

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Sorry. It said "based on true events." As in, these were true events I witnessed and then inserted a fictional character into them. That was all I meant. I never meant that anything Clawdette said or did was true to reality. The term based on true events rarely ever means that what you are seeing is an exact representation of what actually happened, especially in fiction. The movie Fargo claims to be be based on true events. It even goes so far as to say that other than the name changes, the story is told exactly as it happened. The story is almost entirely fictional however. The only thing that actually happened is that a man was once arrested for trying to dispose of a body in a wood chipper. That's it. The rest of Fargo is entirely fictional. This story is also fictional. The events of the board meeting did in fact happen just as I described them, but the character of Clawdette was not there and her thoughts and actions in response to this event are fictional, not "true to reality." I am sorry if there was a misunderstanding there.

As for the rest of your criticism, you are welcome to have it. Not everyone is going to like everything I write and I'm okay with that. I'm still not sure if my intentions came off the way I wanted them to considering what I was going through at the time, but I've already said what I had to say about that. I hope if you have enjoyed other stories in this series you will be able to continue to enjoy future installments and just consider this one as one of those occasional flops we all have.

VampireBunny - 3 years ago

I think there's a big misunderstanding here.
The only reason I commented was because normally while you see people write disclaimers that say "this story is a work of fiction", yours has a disclaimer that states it to be true to reality. Reading this, I think what you meant to say was that it was a vent piece. If a disclaimer had said that instead of "based on a true story" I definitely wouldn't have commented or cared.

But I was emotional myself. I had to leave my job there before because a librarian overheard me say I don't like to watch a youtuber, and she decided that that meant that I need to be harassed constantly every day, and put on a political "red flag" list she made up in her head. So I think I was set off by seeing a Library setting, with a disclaimer saying it's true to reality, with the same behaviors I've almost been hurt badly by.

Now that that's said and done though, I still stand by the writing criticism part though, even from the perspective of wanting to write with a political bias, no matter what side your on, I suggest it's not really great to write everything black and white.
Because I used to do the exact same thing years back with my personal writing but I got rid of it all because I stopped caring about pretty much all the stuff that I used to be against, and seeing those works now just makes me groan and cringe.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

I would like to first take a moment to say that this is not a self-insert. It's more of a reverse of that. I took a situation that I personally witnessed and I inserted the character into it and wrote what HER thoughts on the matter would be and how SHE would handle it... both of which are quite different from my own. It was an experiment in taking an event from my life and writing it in a different person's perspective. Maybe I failed miserably... Maybe this story is total crap... Maybe I didn't explain things the way I wanted to... I couldn't really say at this point. This was written three months ago. So it was written right around the point that shit started falling apart in my own life (from things not described in this story) and I was on the verge of a mental breakdown. I can't speak to how clearly I was thinking when I wrote this. Maybe I need to go back, re-read the story, and think about re-writing it completely. I don't know right now and I don't have the energy or mental capacity at the moment to do that.

You said I painted Clawdette as a sociopath who only thinks their own feelings and opinions exist... But that's the thing... That's exactly what Clawdette is. Maybe I'm wrong, but I thought I had always been perfectly clear about the fact that Clawdette is a sociopath. She's a sociopath dealing with the very troubling problem that she has actually started to care for someone else and she's struggling to figure out how to handle that.

I do not condone Clawdette's actions in this story. These are the actions of a very troubled person who can't even understand her own feelings or come to grips with how to handle them. I once had someone tell me how they loved the fact that not a single one of my characters wasn't at least fucked up in three different ways, and regardless if you like that kind of thing or not, that's just the thing... All of these characters are fucked up in their own way. And Clawdette is by no means the least of them.

You said she wants people to die painfully because she wants them to stay safe and healthy. That's not actually accurate... She wants OTHER people to die painfully because she wants the ones she actually CARES about to stay safe and healthy. She has this small group of people she now cares about for reasons she can't quite understand, and if it means killing everyone else just to keep those few safe, that's what she would do. Now again... Maybe I didn't portray this the way I wanted to. I don't know at the moment. I wasn't even aware of the mental breakdown I was having at the time I wrote this, but I WAS going through some serious shit and there is every chance it could have affected how I was writing. So if you don't like this story, that's fine. No one says you have to. I'll reevaluate it later when I'm better able to do so and figure out for myself if my intentions were actually there and if it needs to be revised or not.

5UP3RN0V4 - 3 years ago

I see the logic in that.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

She believed she had destroyed her relationship with her son and was about to destroy her relationship with her foster daughter as soon as she found out. So she was thinking she didn't have anything left and was feeling pretty down about it. I'm sure her actions may sound like a bit of an overreaction, but I'd also point out that we don't really know much about her or what state of mind she's in. Not everyone thinks and reacts to things the same way others do. As someone who spent a large portion of my life suffering from very severe depression I can see how it could be possible for a person to react the way she did under the circumstances she believed herself to be under.

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

ah okie :3 got it ^w^

5UP3RN0V4 - 3 years ago

Okay, so Pip's Mom wanted to be eaten due to making out with her son?
Am I the only one who thinks that that was just crazy?

helenarlet - 3 years ago

They were so close together because I had some extra time so I decided to go through my folder of half written stories and see what I could use. I realized I had three of them that I could string together that would work well with what I had planned and I just needed to write a few parts to finish them up. So yeah, it helps when most of the material was stuff I already had written and waiting to be used.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Pip is not a coward. Pip, unlike his idealistic sister, who still believes she CAN change things from the inside, is giving in to depression and hopelessness. He doesn't believe that doing such a thing is even possible so he doesn't see the point in even trying. It's not that he's AFRAID to try. He's just already made up his mind that it's a useless endeavor and it's better to just get out now before the whole thing drags him down with it. Pip and Cotton are two very different people with very different mindsets.

Therian - 3 years ago

So, wait. Let me get this straight. Pip, noting that he's turning into a corrupt cop, instead of keeping his badge and trying to change his precinct from the inside, just.... gives up? So now Pip is a coward?

5UP3RN0V4 - 3 years ago

Good to know that Veronica was able to talk sense into Pip.

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Probably not the only one.

5UP3RN0V4 - 3 years ago

That’s odd.
Pip and his mom had a fallout.
Then, Miss Smalls ate Pip’s mom.
Pip will surely lose his shit because of that last part.

Morbius123 - 11 months ago

everyone in these comment sections is a horny psycho wishing horrible demises on these poor side characters

doomed - 2 years ago

I’m convinced Linda is a spy or an assassin

TheDarkTraveler - 3 years ago

"That girl is going to put me in an early grave" probaly just after she ends up in one herslef in the from of poo

Nickdavis1844 - 3 years ago

Loved the story! It was such a fun change of pace, and very well written.

Sad Claudette didnt get what she deserved... that little tease... but hopefully fortune shines in the future and she randomly bumps into him again :)

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Oh yeah. I have no doubt Cindy would have.

willowshat - 3 years ago

Kid, can you lighten up a bit?

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Taking notes...

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

to be fair... i would might feel terror the same way as Sao, with the thing Clawdette sade to her ^^; never mess with a hungry pred momma lol x3

slonim - 3 years ago

Cindy will not rest until she has been in the stomachs of all the characters! there are still Anny,Doroty and Blait

softvarelover - 3 years ago

Cindy sure is messed up, Maybe next time Clawdette should warn her choice of babysitter about that little problem.

doomed - 2 years ago

I love how anny called clawdette out for her past actions. Many writers just brush over the horrible things their characters have done after they grow . The problem with that is that it gives a less genuine feel. By having other people acknowledge what Claudette did you made it feel more like genuine character growth

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Yes, but things are tough financially right now so I haven't had a lot of time to work on free stories.

slonim - 3 years ago

And The vore rules are you planning a sequel?

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Oh thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. But yeah, I've been writing it for quite a while now. I guess one good side to discovering it late is that if you decide to go back and catch up on what you've missed, you'll have plenty to read without having to wait for updates.

Nikkidafox - 3 years ago

Ahhh. I somehow JUST NOW discovered this "miss smalls" series and I don't know how I didn't know about it sooner. I'm definitely a fan.

doomed - 2 years ago

Tbh I saw a twist coming , just not this . Things were too happy

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Great is up to you to decide. But stories, yes. I'm finishing up something right now.

slonim - 3 years ago

Can we expect any great stories from you in the near future?

helenarlet - 3 years ago

Ah, well... I've actually written a prequel story that gives the answer to that question. I was planning to publish a collected volume of the first season of Miss Smalls on Amazon and put that story in as a bonus. I'll eventually post it here as well, but I'll have to wait until a couple of months after the book is published. Although at the moment my editor has demanded drastic re-writes on that particular story so everything will have to wait until I can get it to the point where she is happy with it.

slonim - 3 years ago

This is probably the first story where no one was eaten! What happened to Ferdinand, Veronica's father?

YamiTakashi - 3 years ago

i am glad ya like it <3 i was meant to make a gift for you, a long time back but the time was pretty sort ^^; but when i finaly got the time... It was pretty fun to make :3

AliceXVI - 3 years ago

Cuuute

empatheticapathy - 4 years ago

More of this character please.

helenarlet - 4 years ago

Thanks~ I like older women as well. Makes me wonder why it took me so long to make one a protagonist.

CarnivorousVixen - 4 years ago

Sounds interesting~ And very nice, I'm a big fan of older women. She's right up my alley

helenarlet - 4 years ago

Her age is a little bit complicated because this a character from one of my weird sci-fi/biopunk novels (Book should hit the market day after tomorrow) and there is some stuff going on in that one with people ageing much slower. The character looks to be somewhere in her fifties but is believed to possibly be much older.

CarnivorousVixen - 4 years ago

Ooh she's pretty. How old is she?