WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

As soon as I finish it. Probably later today.

nattasit01 - 5 years ago

When the next ep will release?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

That won't be possible. Cervix is sealed tight, won't open again until Alexis goes into labor.

DresdenQ - 5 years ago

excellent writing, loving this series!

Bobgodofallbobs - 5 years ago

Just a thing if his sisters try push out not like get out just playful and say hi

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Discord I guess?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Not saying anything as someone could read the comments, and if I do tell you anything it'll be spoiled for them to.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Harem?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

You're actually pretty close to guessing a bit of a plot twist of mine with the whole love interest thing.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Sounds like Ruby might show up again, Chekov’s gun and all that but as what, possible love interest? Potential unbirthed child to be? Proposing love interest cause there’s been a stereotype of childhood friends being reluctant to get with anyone other than the friend if it’s the opposite sex but fine with temporary or long term same sex relationships, kinda like they couldn’t find another member of the opposite sex better than the childhood friend

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

MaBeelZ

sadcat - 5 years ago

Who's the cover artist?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Glad to hear it.

FudGuy - 5 years ago

Oh well I’m still enjoying it! I love your ub works

BreadMaster - 5 years ago

Lol, you troll. You got me.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

That was a cute ending

Groblek - 5 years ago

A fun story, though some of the bits referencing legal stuff were a bit too far on the “that’s not actually how law works” end of things. (A Supreme Court judge reviewing/certifying the contract in particular). But overall it was a good story, and I liked that the sisters went willingly and worked to help convince their brother to go along with it.

Groblek - 5 years ago

A fun story, though some of the bits referencing legal stuff were a bit too far on the “that’s not actually how law works” end of things. (A Supreme Court judge reviewing/certifying the contract in particular). But overall it was a good story, and I liked that the sisters went willingly and worked to help convince their brother to go along with it.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

DA. RiddleAugust I think it was.

BellyLover045 - 5 years ago

Where did you find the image?

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

Oh I see. And tmyeah that sounds hot

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

No Weiss-on-Winter Action. Only Ruby on Weiss, Ruby on Winter Action.

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

oh that would be hot. dating both sisters. :P not into insest but it's your story.

Midnightwolfy - 4 years ago

By chance could you point me in direction of ch 8

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

then i look forward to it!

SwordkingX5 - 5 years ago

I can give it a try.

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

perhaps you should write one?

SwordkingX5 - 5 years ago

Now I want a solo of Kali unbirthing Ruby.

thelandcruzer - 5 years ago

Great realistic unbirth story.
Wish there were more like it.
Would like to see the outcome in nine to ten months. With Miss Steel going to the hospital to rebirth the girls and Matt babysitting.
Just to add closure to the story.

Moonsniper - 5 years ago

Is there going to be a part 2 where we see the outcome of that video

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Matt's girlfriend

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

Who’s Amy, again?

zelphi - 5 years ago

that was awesome

Nightcrawler99 - 5 years ago

I LOVE unwilling/abduction style unbirth. It has that simi-real feel to it that just can't be beet.
There is also not a whole lot of it out there so I prey to see more like this from you in the future.^^

threk - 5 years ago

Ooh, an unexpected present, nice work

acrylic - 5 years ago

Same here. I always imagined this kind of scene in age regression ub genre

BreadMaster - 5 years ago

Ah, talk about cathartic. Admittedly, I do like the stories where the protagonist is heroic until the end, but every once in a while it's just nice to see a villain get smacked in the face, and her accomplice taken to jail. So satisfying.

Bobgodofallbobs - 5 years ago

Love it

doomed - 5 years ago

This is what I like . A realistic response . Instead of someone just giving up because a pred took their sibling

zelphi - 5 years ago

interesting and interesting conclusion, i wonder if Miss Steel is going to take revenge on Matt.

zelphi - 5 years ago

hmmm i wonder if Miss Steel will have her revenge

lilbabydeadpool - 5 years ago

I'm reading the end like, "knock her out Matt!!!"

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

http://fav.me/dcl47sq

Neoninja - 5 years ago

Where's the cover art from?

Bobgodofallbobs - 5 years ago

Love it

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Well looks like the original one’s have been set to private

Moonsniper - 5 years ago

Are you going to do an alternative ending where he says yes

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I'm glad you like it. Kidnapping gets under my skin, so I just do simple rewrites, or alt-endings, which actually keeps me calm.

Lewdghost - 5 years ago

Gotta admit, much prefer this one to the original. The actual unbirth was good, but yeah chapter 2 had issues in how it was done and the kidnapping itself, which this thankfully fixes.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I'm saving it for a second chapter I'll be making.

threk - 5 years ago

I recognise that thumbnail, it's Free Cookies! by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/view/404660

threk - 5 years ago

Nice. Don't get me wrong, I love the original story with the prey being tricked into being trapped and the only person outside who knows being powerless to help them, but it's super weird to me that in the second one everyone just sort of rolls over and goes "K, gues I'm down two kids now" etc.

It's a really commonly reoccurring theme in max123's commissions too, so no judgement, I guess that's just his thing.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I am honored, you think of my work that way. Thank you.

BreadMaster - 5 years ago

I'm with Robotdocter. I like this far better than the original. Then again, I hate these types of stories in general. If your that angry with her, knock her out, take her to a hospital and make them do a C-section, this isn't hard. Sure they'll be some legal repercussions, maybe even some jail time, but it's better than doing nothing and losing your family. If Matt and Steel still become an item, fine, but I prefer these stories, cause nobodies a moron. Thank you for your work, and fixing what was broken.

Robotdocter - 5 years ago

i like this alt. i didnt feel very comfortable at all with how she basically kidnapped two kids who both obviously didnt know this was going to happen, nor that this would have been permanent. cant wait to see the rest! :D

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Much better than the original series which felt like a NTR train to hell

ifdre - 5 years ago

Oh, finally! It was worth waiting. I'm glad it is a happy ending for everyone.

Deathbat99 - 5 years ago

Nice drawing

LemonBarb - 3 years ago

Can't help but keep on looking back at this art piece after all this time, for inspiration. And all I'd say at a glance, is two things...

A? Would there be sort-of sequels, with those twins 'mid-regressed' to a more round pregnant belly, or at a "first trimester" status?

And B: ... Almost, tempted in one day having an art commission from you. In a sense of this art style being just right, I guess? :)

ProudVWriter - 5 years ago

Didn't see this before, but it's great, so great job!

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

All characters, minus the photographer, belong to CurioHeart/Max123

acrylic - 5 years ago

Are they all your original characters? : rosa sal nessa ?

Bobgodofallbobs - 5 years ago

Well noting can go wrong for sure

Deathbat99 - 5 years ago

Nice work

CurioHeart - 5 years ago

This looks amazing! I can't wait to see the finished piece~

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

As well as some spelling and grammar errors being corrected.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Original Author made some edits to some character designs. *Cough*...Blake's Booty size...*Cough*

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

Exactly what was changed in this reupload anyway?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Quick question, are you not as confused anymore since I sent you the link to the full story?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3393336

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

https://aryion.com/g4/view/552532
The complete story. This was only the work in Progress

Flame14 - 5 years ago

Clicked for the thumbnail (btw link to it please) and stayed to read the story.

A bit confused. One of the girls was named Lana and isn’t that the younger blue haired girl from the series? Also, could have sworn that Lusamine was the blond woman who was mother of cute little Lillie. Getting a little confused so hopefully you’ll put out the rest soon so we can get everything sorted out.

FudGuy - 5 years ago

Please continue

scar - 5 years ago

I can't wait for the next one :3

ifdre - 5 years ago

OK. I got it.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

As soon as I can upload it. I've been a little swamped with work, and family matters.

ifdre - 5 years ago

When will the next part of this be uploaded?

ifdre - 5 years ago

When will the next of tbis be uploaded?

KaiYuga - 5 years ago

Well whose "original artist"

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

https://aryion.com/g4/view/523304

Dooot - 5 years ago

Where is the original this was based off of? I want a story where she keeps them.

ifdre - 5 years ago

OK. I assumed that ther'll be no sequals for this. Anyway, thank you again

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

This is a one-off one-shot. No sequals I'm afraid. Sorry.

ifdre - 5 years ago

Oh, if there will be seauence of this, I hope Mr. Baccari doesn't get so mad.

ifdre - 5 years ago

Oh, thank you so much.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Some time later tomorrow or Wednesday

ifdre - 5 years ago

Oh, I really want the next part! Could you please tell me when will the next part be released?

Virgo13 - 5 years ago

Oooooh so she didn't tell her family it was unwilling! Mama Baccari ain't gonna be happy if she's anything like my mom, Catholic women always end up Mama Bears they love their children dearly but if you fuck up they'll tell you about it. Ask my brothers xD (I say catholic since you know most Italians are Catholic and my mom ain't Italian).

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Especially since it's Mrs. Baccari's older brother.

alex457 - 5 years ago

They a good read

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

You just love that story!

alex457 - 5 years ago

You have no idea how happy I will be if you make more

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

i think so. ^^

alex457 - 5 years ago

So does that mean there will be more rwby reactions?

moonpunch101 - 5 years ago

Is fine. Not the end of the world. Knew it was probably a long shot. :P

Still, looking forward to what you do with the rest of Nightmare's stuff.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I've actually got a bit on my plate. I'm still doing Nightmare's stuff, plus I'm working on a few of my own things at the moment. Sorry, but I'm gonna have to pass.

moonpunch101 - 5 years ago

Been loving these so far, especially since it's Nightmare's stuff you're reacting to. :)

It's really made me want to see someone do a reaction to my RWBY vore series, purely to see what a reaction's take would be on that.

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

Just love how Weiss really enjoyed being sucked on when Ruby breast fed Winter! XD

Znonymous - 3 years ago

while not as interesting its a fun chapter. Need more hugry snek.

RachelBabe - 5 years ago

I like how casual Weiss is about losing her individuality. "Oh, that was pretty annoying how I don't have a body and I exist as a soul in someone's tits."

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

granted silver eyes never worked like that in my story. Well at least yet if they will or not.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Well, she had to start out with something simpler than a drider, as she just starting to think about using her silver eyed powers like that.

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

too bad she didn't want to be a drider and not a naga.

Znonymous - 3 years ago

Ohmy, great stuff and naughty fun.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

okay

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

Ah I see. Well that makes sense. I'll pm you about some ideas I have for pictures related to the series.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

You would not believe how many times it took me to try and get it right.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I might be able to, but I had been working on this one since last night, so I could have it done for the story.
So I'll be able to do them, just only after I get some rest.

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

Damn that is awesome! Think you might be able to draw some pictures of the main story?

KorinDragoon - 4 years ago

I wonder why i can never see the cover art unless it's its own thing? ????????????

Deathbat99 - 5 years ago

good story

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

pretty funny to be honest!

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

What'd you think of the end, when they forgot about Weiss and left her tied up on the floor. Funny right?

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

Oh i liked this! here i thought they would all be turned off by it! Hope to see you do more of the series.

PrimeLvl37 - 4 years ago

Hey just to let you know that this story doesn't show up with the tags the second part does but not this one

SwordkingX5 - 5 years ago

I hope you do a second part to this.
As this was great read.

Deathbat99 - 5 years ago

Great first story, and great dual narration