Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thanks for the support.

I'm already starting with my first stories.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thanks! And good luck reaching that number, I'm sure you'll be able to. ^^

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

The food competition was a lot of fun to read.

He was expecting who would win the bet between Tobey and the stalker. I was surprised that Tobey came back.

200 followers? Not bad. I hope to reach that figure also when I started with my gallery.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

*Pushes up Nerd Glasses*
Actually, you're totally right. I meant to say something else.

IndySteveo - 2 years ago

*Pushes up Nerd Glasses*
Uh Achutally, Triglycerides are fats, pasta is mostly carbohydrates, unless James was referring to the olive oil in the food, but considering the classic spaghetti comes with a marinara sauce, the olive oil would be minimum.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Sorry, I didn't notice it in time...but thanks for pointing it out! XD

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Oh, thank you so much! That's the greatest compliment possible ^^ I believe there's more stories with reformation and willing prey coming in the future, so they might be more to your liking!

TMVore - 2 years ago

Loved it, very fun read. You did mistook "flying" for "frying" when her clothing came out. Makes me wonder what was on your mind. ^.~

zenitharms - 9 months ago

Hard to tell

Theonewhooverseesall - 9 months ago

When are you gonna make part 2

harpylove - 1 year ago

The quotes have me intrigued. What could they possibly mean? I’ll find out… next time on Kaiju Dating!

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thanks! My collaborator and I already started brainstorming some ideas, and we plan to make Part 2 more "epic" than Part 1 :)

harpylove - 1 year ago

I loved that story, cannot wait for part 2.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Only the four most voted will make it into the story. As for whom they'll eat... you'll have to wait and see ;)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Only the four most voted will make it into the story. As for whom they'll eat... you'll have to wait and see ;)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Only the four most voted will make it into the story. As for whom they'll eat... you'll have to wait and see ;)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Only the four most voted will make it into the story. As for whom they'll eat... you'll have to wait and see ;)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Only the four most voted will make it into the story. As for whom they'll eat... you'll have to wait and see ;)

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

Interesting, it sounds like something has awaken inside you. The dark path of M/F is one where there's no return

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Yeah, when I read your stuff, it stirs things in me I scarcely considered, especially with all of the inventive scenarios. I used to only really like male pred when it was a pretty boy or femboy, but your works have me reconsidering. Also, they made me think being a pred doesn't sound so bad... Truly powerful stuff.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

Stuffing plus vore is something I must and will revisit!

Nice to see that, contrary to what I used to think, there's some decent level of variety in my stories

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Yeah, I love cruel vore when a pred eats or drinks a whole bunch, making their prey that much more cramped and making the rest of their doomed existence that much more unbearable.

Also, I think your experimentation in your works is one of your highlights for sure. I love how different a lot of these stories feel from each other.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I am really glad that I allowed myself to experiment new things with this story, I also think it was for the best!

Mulcher - 2 years ago

Agreed more preggos should be fertilizer

liwenyu - 2 years ago

Pregnant women have fertilizer parties in alien bellies

zenitharms - 2 years ago

The sacrifices are worth it :)

liwenyu - 2 years ago

I think the government should provide this alien with a steady supply of pregnant women to make good fertilizer and maybe recruit a lot of willing girls

hyhyd - 2 years ago

Indeed. We balance out the population and help to restore natural habitats. One step closer to a greener planet

zenitharms - 1 year ago

No problem ^^

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thanks!

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Ghetto Barbie, I believe

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

It was a pleasure.

One last question

What is the name of the model in the picture?

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thanks for taking your time to make this list! They do look quite appetizing, so I'll keep them in mind for possible future stories :)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

My humble thanks, there's no greater happiness than reading comments like this :)

GilPix - 2 years ago

I really enjoyed reading your work here. Keep up the Great work!

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Those all-female Marine crews are basically a buffet for aliens...what a waste!

GilPix - 2 years ago

Our tax dollars being blown on Space Force training dumb bimbo jugheads and sending them into space. Just to end up feeding lifeforms of another world! :P

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

I would be very happy to be in his class XD

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Yes, at least they're in a better place now. And in the sewers too.

I'm surprised that you liked Mrs. Wilson so much, but I'm also glad you did. I guess you wouldn't mind being in her class XD

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Well, I am satisfied with the reunion that they will have in the other life.

I will certainly wait for it. The teachers are excellent prey.

At least I'll remember Mrs. Wilson as the funniest dam I've ever read.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

I fear her daughter's end will go unavenged, but we can hope that she at least gave her devourer a nasty indigestion :)

Sadly, Mrs. Wilson is gone for good, since in the world of Pred Journal there's no reformation and digestion is permanent. But don't worry, I'll probably come back to sexy teacher prey in the future!

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Fantasies with teachers are the best. We all had at least one sexy teacher.

Ms. Wilson didn't just fulfill her biggest fantasy. She was also able to meet with her daughter.

I admit that when I found out that her daughter was the victim of revenge by the students, I felt very bad. Since he did not deserve to pay for the actions of her mother and I hope that that student suffers from good karma.

Part of me doesn't see it as likely, but does Mrs. Wilson return in another story? I loved her as a prey and that desire of hers to chase predators is fun to read.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I believe you won't be disappointed!

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

I'm looking forward to see the other collabs y'all have done as I read more because the last 2 I read are definitely gonna be living in my mind for a while.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

They provide me with absolutely amazing ideas so yes, I believe that we make quite the duo haha

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

I saw that in the description, but didn't know how much to attribute to whom. Just finished reading "A Problematic Cupcake" and it seems y'all 2 are a dynamic duo because that story was great.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

This one was very fun to write, glad to see it was to read as well! The entire plot outline as well as the pictures were provided by the requester, so imo they're as responsible for this story's sucess as I am, if not more ^^

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks for the feedback! This time around, Mary´s karma caught up to her...

randomuser13579 - 2 years ago

So used seeing younger preds I forgot I enjoyed more mature preds winning the outcome, great stuff.Only wished Mary got a reward she’d live to see.

CrazyLala - 2 years ago

thats alright lol. i got to find a servant i never even heard about.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

No problem! Of course, I believe I overdid her horniness a bit for the story to work XD

CrazyLala - 2 years ago

I did not know about this lancer at first but your story told so much about her that i cant wait to gain her in fgo myself. thankyou very much.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Don't worry, there's more vampire stories to come in the future :)

knightwww - 2 years ago

sorry, can I ask you to write some kind of story about lesbian vampires, you do it best of all, but I just really like this.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Wow, I didn't know that XD Maybe that'll become a story on itself!

awdx11551515 - 2 years ago

Maybe you should know something, she wants to be eaten by her own master~ (Valentine's Day event~

zenitharms - 1 year ago

My humble thanks again. This was a fun little project to do, and I'm glad some people enjoyed it.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

I also like the original version better. More for the fact that Valeria ended up eaten because of her arrogance.

But these What-If? They are a very fresh and interesting idea. More if they are from your stories.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thank you, just wanted to play with the concept a bit. Although I still like the version where the lizard does the eating more :)

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

It is the first time I read a vore where the damsel in distress eats the fearsome monster.

It was a very funny alternate ending.

NomNexus - 2 years ago

Maybe try the one where the wife eats her family story, only it's the husband instead

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thank you so much! Maybe one day I'll deliver some more troll stuff ^^

kitty122 - 1 year ago

Great story! I really hope you come out with a longer and more detailed version of this!

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Many thanks for the feedback :)

hyhyd - 2 years ago

what an intriguing story. very impressive

Mulcher - 2 years ago

Thats an excellent idea I'd leave the doors open for him

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

A sadistic story all around...

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Denied of her one wish... how cruel /lh

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thank you very much, I plan to start writing it after I publish my first story.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Sounds interesting. The whole arena setup is creative. I'll be looking forward to it ^^

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

The idea came from Teasing Teacher, this story and one of the manga that I follow Shuumatsu No Valkyrie.

The idea is simple two sexy and horny women walk into an arena with a Pred student.

The one I managed to please him will be able to have sex with him. While the loser will be the prey of the student.

I have the idea that it is a theme of "students vs. teachers" to see who gets the boy of his dreams.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

I wish you luck too so that everything goes well for you.

Halloween is undoubtedly a date that inspires Vore content

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thank you, I wish I did them more often but sadly the inspiration only comes sometimes.

Yeah, Julia really screwed up bad, but she at least was useful enough as a meal in the end. And yes, I have another vampire story planned for Halloween season. Hopefully, all goes well and I remember to post it XD

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Your vampire stories are great. Although this is the shortest I've ever read, I enjoyed it just as much as the other two.

Poor Julia, she made the two biggest mistakes when you're with a vampire. Do not obey and interrupt your meal.

I know it's September, but will there be a vampire story in October as a Halloween special?

knightwww - 2 years ago

I have read this story, but it seems to me that with lesbian vampires it turns out to be exciting and more interesting.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

My only other vampirism story is https://aryion.com/g4/view/773597 but the vampire isn't lesbian..

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

Yeah, I was feeling like that final part should indeed be extended. I'd also give it a larger build-up and more meat overall. I would also like to add some more focus on the horror elements

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

What do you think you would've done differently had you made it today? Only thing I can think of is maybe extending the post absorption part.

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

I personally, like with many things, have to be in the mood for it. I feel that certain subject matter in stories lend themselves with going a lil further with the hard vore and put me in that mood like this one imo. But at the end of the day, it's about what you wanna do. Curious to see what this 2nd hard vore story is like.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I think it turned out a bit weird, maybe underdeveloped

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

I thought it was a fun read, though I suppose as the one who went through the process of writing it, you can see more faults than I can.

bajillionandone - 2 years ago

That's very kind of you to say, you're welcome :)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Receiving approval from the CEO of gassy goths himself is really something XD Thank you! :)

bajillionandone - 2 years ago

Mmm I love this one, cruel and gassy goth preds are my favorite :)

knightwww - 2 years ago

I'm looking forward to new stories about vampire lesbians;)

zenitharms - 1 year ago

"Pickman's Model" used to be frequently anthologized in short story collections back in the day. I like it a lot, it's pretty fun.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Wow, The Ghouls do have a rich history. I'm very interested in Pickman's Model, I'm reading a bit of Lovecraft's works due to a recent curiosity towards his horror form.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

This time around, Myrgana's name has no specific source, I just thought it sounded "vampiric" and went with it XD

As for ghouls, indeed they originate from folkore, and classic monsters from horror and fantasy. Even Conan faced against some ghouls in "The Hour of the Dragon", and there are several iconic ghoul tales: Lovecraft's amazing "Pickman's Model", Henry S. Whitehead's grotesque "The Chadbourne Episode", Clark Ashton Smith's chilling "The Nameless Offspring" and before those three, Edward Lucas White's "Amina". The ghoul-craze in western fantastic literature probably started by the translation of the "Arabian Nights" and the publcation of "Vathek".

And about a hypothetical confrontation between Myrgana and Mrs. Aneworth, that sure is an interesting discussion! Myrgana is the leader of a whole coven (or maybe nest would be more appropriate?) of female, sapphic vampires with zombie slaves on top of that. On the other hand, Mrs. Aneworth is a vampire from the 1920s whose feats aren't that impressive (she doesn't even infect anybody with vampirism during the story, although nobody knows if she hasn't sired more vampires off-screen).

Myrgana's feats might be more impressive but Mrs. Aneworth still is a formidable woman, and the fact that she has both a vampiric form when alive and after her initial demise is a trick Myrgana doesn't have up her sleeve. An interesting confrontation for sure.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Does Myrgana's name come from a literary vamp? She didn't know that ghouls were folkloric creatures. I thought they were an invention from the Tokyo Ghoul anime.

I admit that at first I thought Myrgana was going to play the predator and one of her servants would be her victim.

Now, I don't know if it's because of the fact that they're both vampires. But I could not help imagining a meeting between Mrs. Aneworth and Myrgana.

It would be interesting to see which vamp lady would win while the other is eaten.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

I probably will, since I really like vampires :)

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Indeed, who knew boyscouts could be so dangerous?

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Short but entertaining. He knew that Ben would use his brains and not his strength to eat Megan.

In the end it turned out to be a simple pretty face XD.

I don't know why, but it made me want to see more "Ladys from Boy Scout" themed dams.

There are plenty of ways for them to end up as food and children as Ben would be the least of the problems.

Xenophage17 - 2 years ago

Awesome, hope to see more in the future :)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it! I also have another shota pred story called "Auntie is Coming" if you want to check it out! :D

Xenophage17 - 2 years ago

Awesome, love boys as preds, especially scouts alongside gas and disposal.

Trew - 4 months ago

B

Trew - 4 months ago

Especially the **booby** part

zenitharms - 2 years ago

End of the voting period! The B option won!

Godeater - 2 years ago

B - Take the path to the old, creepy temple never know what you will find

Pokemon007 - 2 years ago

B

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Good, I'll wait patiently.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

He certainly will! I have some other scenarios planned for him :)

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Wow, Phil's series turned out to be more interesting than I had thought.

Although I would like to see him have other prey before the rematch.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Indeed

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Everything seems to indicate that there will be a rematch between Phil and Alexandra.

zenitharms - 1 month ago

Glad you liked it! I didn't think about that angle with the parents at the time but it could have been a more traumatizing alternative to forcing her to eat a fan

LSWaffle - 1 month ago

Wow. What an interesting story (0///0)

Since there were so many comparisons with her parents, I thought that in the end she would have to eat one (or both).
Although I liked the thing about the fan and Leela's romantic need

NomNexus - 2 years ago

A shame, probably has a cameo of her being gurgled up

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Sabrina will be a one off character, next time Leela appears she'll be up to something else ^^

NomNexus - 2 years ago

Maybe get some revenge on Sabrina?

THEholySnail - 2 years ago

While I never read lovecraft, I often heard of him being renowned for great, chaotic monster designs.
It is amazing how many people he inspired with his works.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

My humble thanks for the feedback! Lovecraft provided some further details for its appearance in his story(if you can understand his take on rural speech!):

Bigger’n a barn . . . all made o’ squirmin’ ropes . . . hull thing sort o’ shaped like a hen’s egg bigger’n anything, with dozens o’ legs like hogsheads that haff shut up when they step . . . nothin’ solid abaout it—all like jelly, an’ made o’ sep’rit wrigglin’ ropes pushed clost together . . . great bulgin’ eyes all over it . . . ten or twenty maouths or trunks a-stickin’ aout all along the sides, big as stovepipes, an’ all a-tossin’ an’ openin’ an’ shuttin’ . . . all grey, with kinder blue or purple rings . . . an’ Gawd in heaven—that haff face on top! . . .”

The face on the top is human-like, with red eyes and a few white hairs :0

THEholySnail - 2 years ago

Your description of the monstrous creature was very vivid and terrifying. A truly chaotic type of appereance!

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Indeed, she was just going through her life thinking she was safe because preds rarely snack on skinnier women (unless they want a light meal, which is rare, or if they're still beginners who can't stomach meatier women, which is also rare) only to get suddenly devoured by a random dude. She didn't even see it coming, and I don't even think she managed to give Phil any gas as a form of revenge...

Bomberboy18 - 1 year ago

True to that, considering the fact that she was skinny as well compared to the others chicks he ate. But honestly, it kinda sucks for her though. Cause even though she was an anonymous teen, you can just imagine she was either studying for her major or maybe going to see her bf (if she had one), and then suddenly she gets devoured to where her life ends there since she’s in a world where you cannot reform after being digested. Also I wonder if she gave him gas?

zenitharms - 1 year ago

We gotta give her some credit though, since Phil had her for breakfast and by the time he was going to have dinner she still wasn't fully digested...well, maybe Phil's metabolism was just a bit slow that day in particular

Bomberboy18 - 1 year ago

Lmao, yeah. I was thinking that she was probably struggling (maybe making outlined bulges lol) after getting devoured out of nowhere, but then probably gave up as the acids had reached half of her body.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Thanks! As for the skinny girl, It could have been either, but considering it was probably just a quick meal Phil snatched up without even giving her time to think about it, she might have been unwilling.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Oh, it's massive. It even belongs to the same universe as H. P. Lovecraft's Cthulhu Mythos.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thanks for the data and the information.

Apparently the lore of Conan the barbarian is bigger than I thought at first.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Yes, Valeria's hubris proved to be her downfall. At least her end wasn't in vain, since it meant somebody got to have a juicy pirate meal.


There's actually canon Monster/F vore in one Conan story, called "The Slithering Shadow" (also known as "Xuthal of the Dusk"). There, an evil hottie get's too distracted torturing a blonde she brought to feed her slimy monster-god and ends up eaten by the creature herself. I wrote another story based on it, called "The Slurping Shadow".

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Valeria could have lived another day if it weren't for her arrogance.

He had heard several times of Conan the barbarian. I didn't expect it to have material for vore.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

You're the one that needs to be thanked for reading it! :) I'm happy to hear you liked It!

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

You're welcome and that'd be amazing, nevertheless, I look forward to what you work on in the future!

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

A willing brat would make for a fun pred, might have to do something with that in the future! My humble thanks ^^

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

I love the setting of this fic so much. There being a reluctant pred and willing prey was amazing too, would be interesting to see the opposite in the setting as well. A ravenous young boy that teases and torments his aunts that all have ambitions and futility fight back... mmmffggg

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thanks for the clarification. It seems that Tobey will have to work hard if he wants to eat another woman.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Couples are just like regular couples! The female who was chosen to be spared of being eaten gets to have a husband while the sisters do that sometimes, but aren't allowed to have any long-lasting relationships that might end up with them getting pregnant.

Couples don't get to eat people, unless the husband gets a job at the Population Control Center, which is pretty hard. Outside of the Center, only growing boys get to eat the aunts, and once they're done with them, they cannot legally eat anyone else. Still, they do snack on other relatives sometimes, like cousins or sisters, but they never get in trouble for it.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

I do also like Alexis a lot myself :) I had a lot of fun writing the duel, although it was harder to write than my usual vore junk where things just go the way I want them to go lol

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

As Yugioh fan, enjoy this story. The duel was very well done and kept me waiting to see who would win.

Alexis how to Pred is a brilliant idea. I like the idea that my favorite Yugioh girl improves her attributes by eating her prey.

I have to admit that at first I thought the Vore was only limited to dueling monsters. The ending was a nice twist.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

It's not like Konami or their banlist exist in Yugioh GX :)

Dontplanonposting - 2 years ago

Insert comment aboutpot of greed being banned here

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Yes, Takahashi-san's death was a great loss for us all...thank you for the comment ^^

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Indeed

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

Bookworm Baobhan is peak Baobhan imo!

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Yeah, it's evident in your writing that you enjoy it when it tends to be more involved.

Also, thanks, love the bookworm thing she has going on in this ascension. Makes her seem kinda cozy without losing her edge.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I share the feeling regarding monster preds

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I see! It's not often that I indulge in world-building, but sometimes I get very invested while writing. Also, I'm quite partial to your pfp myself lol

zenitharms - 1 year ago

She's a babe, that's for sure. And tasty too, it seems!

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Hey, hey, hey A story with Hitomi Tanaka? She deserves more content here and apparently she was one of the stalker's first victims.

Without a doubt my favorite Japanese actress and with many Vore ideas that can be done with her :)

Camacho - 2 years ago

A bit of collateral to take into consideration but that's expected from naturally fat tits like that ~

zenitharms - 2 years ago

A LOT of fat, for sure! The creep might never recover from the "damage" those two caused to his body XD

Camacho - 2 years ago

one has to wonder how much fat would be in the combined breast force of Hitame's and Enri's rack, super fattening I bet

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Yeah, and she's a bit of a rare pred too ^^

That1Person - 2 years ago

Always good to see Ushi as pred!

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

I don't think id mind that XD

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks! And yes, Abby might end up eating every single servant if master dosn't put her under control, even her fellow preds!

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

Ok i absolutely loved this 10/10 they better hurry resummoning those other servants... or they might just run out of food XD with the way abbey is going

AtomicArcher21 - 2 years ago

*Pushes up glasses* That picture is offensive you know. XD

zenitharms - 2 years ago

https://imgur.com/a/mXNoEms

zenitharms - 2 years ago

????

AtomicArcher21 - 2 years ago

Totally unrealistic. If aliens came to earth we would probably kill them just because we are human.

Mulcher - 2 years ago

Thats unbelievably hot damn it

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

That might just be the case, i certainly love seeing them reduced to ass fat
As for our dear kohai shes just absolutely adorable

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Maybe you like aggressive characters XD the only exception is Eggplant Girl!

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

Her, yu, caenis and gorgon are all top picks (with mash obviously) clearly i either have a thing for abs and tomboys or a thing for dominating them XD

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Oh, cool! Didn't know she was your fave:)

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

Mo is my favourite... but i also love making her prey

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Not when it comes to the Parkers, but the creep might appear again.

nico240 - 2 years ago

I mean the story of a troubled wife will have a continuation

zenitharms - 2 years ago

?

nico240 - 2 years ago

and the parker family

nico240 - 2 years ago

and the parker family

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Don't worry, a new chapter will come soon. I was a bit down about this series but I'll try to post it more frequently!

Skippy - 2 years ago

I didnt notice the glaring "3 months ago" thingy XD

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Hey, thank you for the vote, but the voting period for this one is over! ^^

Skippy - 2 years ago

A

zenitharms - 2 years ago

End of the voting period! The A option won!

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks! It was kind of no brainer with the Wind-Walker...

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

I do like the idea of a cold belly.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Thank you very much, I'm giving it a lot of effort.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Oh, I didn't know about that ancient toad! Now I'm very interested, thanks for introducing it to me :)

As for Hunter Gammas, they're some of my favorite predators ever. Indeed somewhat underestimated, I wish there was even more content of them.

Also, good luck with your story!

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Oh, I didn't know about that ancient toad! Now I'm very interested, thanks for introducing it to me :)

As for Hunter Gammas, they're some of my favorite predators ever. Indeed somewhat underestimated, I wish there was even more content of them.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

By the way if you want ideas for monsters based on toads you can use the Beelzebufo ampiga. A prehistoric toad that fed on dinosaurs.

Although there is also the Terror Toad from the Power Rangers or the Hunter Gamma from Resident Evil. In my opinion a little underestimated predators.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

Oh thanks for the clarification.

I'm writing my first story in a note blog and that's why it caught my attention.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

I understand. The last few generations of Pokemon have made me distance myself from the franchise a bit.

Don't worry, I was able to enjoy the story without any problems.

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Hey! There might be more pokémon vore in the future, but I can't promise anything. I'm not as much into this franchise as I used to be.

As for the name differences, that's interesting, although I hope it didn't confuse you too much while reading the story.

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

I didn't expect you to have a vore history with Pokemon. Much less see Wally as a predator.

Hoenn lost the greatest beauties to her. No one would believe that they all ended up in the same stomach.

It was intriguing to see how long Wally could take.

By the way, will there be more vore stories set in Pokemon? I ended up wanting more.

Finally, the story reminded me that because of the language, the names of several characters are different in my area (Shelly, Flannery and Lisia are an example) a detail that he sometimes forgot.

hyhyd - 2 years ago

That's fair. (probably nothing a water type and lots of soap can't fix) Either way, this story was great

zenitharms - 2 years ago

I think they're too dirty for him to keep. Thank you!

zenitharms - 2 years ago

:)

miner249er - 2 years ago

alright

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Not really rn or for the near future, but if you want to PM me your idea I can write it someday ^^

miner249er - 2 years ago

are you still taking comissions?

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Repressed predatory instincts plus possessiveness and emotional neediness do wonders to a mother's brain ^^

zenitharms - 1 year ago

Glad you liked it. Indeed, it will be a very shameful thing for Barbara to explain to her superiors. As for the lizardman, I'm sure he'll probably live his own adventures thanks to her accidental trip across space, although he's going to be very confused about the whole ordeal XD

Dracoshippuden961 - 1 year ago

How I love science fiction stories and this was no exception.

Lucy's ignorance, Sandra's anger and Barbara's arrogance led to a tragic end for the crew where there was only one survivor.

How will Barbara explain what happened when she arrives on earth?

But my biggest concern is the lizardman from QUEEN-01. Will he end up on another planet where he will have new prey? I admit that it would be curious.

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Oh, nice to see a fellow Monster/F fan :) I have 2 other stories of this kind in my gallery, if you want to check them out

umarjamil789 - 2 years ago

Monster/F is my fav, thank you!

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Eh, it is what it is. All that can be done is to learn from it.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I failed to take advantage of that fact when I wrote the story, but now that you've pointed it out, it's quite true

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

Yeah, tbis story had a whole lot going on and i loved it. Would've been nice if there was more double teaming going on considering the broads outnumbered the swine iirc.

zenitharms - 3 weeks ago

I hope you find some progress in my work, although it's far from being high literature. I've got some variety though so I believe you'll be amused!

It makes me happy to see that you had such a positive reaction to this story, there is nothing better for me than seeing people pleased by my posts. I do believe that any of the characters, be it the monsters or the women, had a lot of stimulation in this story so it's understandable that you'd feel that way

Chimera117 - 3 weeks ago

You're welcome! I usually tend to look through people's for stuff that intrigues me. I try to start off with the early stuff so i can see how their writing/drawing style has evolved.

Also, the aforementioned scene really did a number on me in a good way. I usually insert myself as the prey in a story, but that scene in particular had me wishing i was any of the 3. Honestly, the whole fic had me thinking that way.

zenitharms - 3 years ago

End of the voting period! The B option won!

VigorousJazzHands - 3 years ago

B

jjlava - 3 years ago

B

nico240 - 3 years ago

ok

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Sorry, I don't think I'll do it

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks, there will surely be more monster/F in my gallery :)

Wx232B - 2 years ago

It's great stuff! Look forward to seeing your stuff in the future :)

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Part of it! It was broken by her stomach walls and partially digested. What it couldn't deal with, the creature belched out

Thanks for the feedback, my monster/F stories usually aren't very popular :)

Wx232B - 2 years ago

Great story! Did the creature really manage to digest the whole yacht?

zenitharms - 2 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you thought so:)

elliotalien08 - 3 years ago

Oh nooooooooo ;-; not my girls

zenitharms - 3 years ago

My humble thanks! :D

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Sorry, can't do it :(

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Sadly, the ones she did manage to eat were erased from the Throne and converted into Carmilla's magic energy forever :(

Slimowrites - 3 years ago

Another great one!

elliotalien08 - 3 years ago

I look forward to it :)

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Thanks a lot! I intend to bring more FGO stuff in the future ^^

elliotalien08 - 3 years ago

I do hope murasaki doesn't hold it against Helena when she returns, it was her fault after all, she shouldnt have been so delicious

10/10 story i love fate grand order

zenitharms - 3 years ago

That's pretty ominous :)

gauro5 - 3 years ago

it depends on viewpoint

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Thanks :D

Maxchatt200 - 3 years ago

awesome ending

zenitharms - 3 years ago

Added!

rekleam - 3 years ago

I think u missed NTR tag

zenitharms - 3 years ago

I'm glad you liked it ^^