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Practice Makes Perfect page 34
Big sister energy is dangerous. The "non-digestion-related injuries incurred" tally almost skyrocketed in panel 3.
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Posted by GrapeAim 1 year ago Report
Fantastic
Posted by BlueAugur 1 year ago Report
This comic is one of vore's crowning achievements. It's not only extremely sexy, but the writing is genuinely VERY good, with exceptional pacing and an immensely satisfying payoff.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
^^^ What this person said. I second this wholeheartedly.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
Third this
Posted by ArcticRaven 1 year ago Report
Quad this.
Posted by MadDogJG 10 months ago Report
Quint this
Posted by OffHero 5 months ago Report
Sext this.
Posted by Nugit 4 months ago Report
Sept this.
Posted by Matteo42 4 months ago Report
Octo this
Posted by AaronLOl 11 days ago Report
Nona this
Posted by IfMyFriendsFindMe8O 1 year ago Report
1000% agree!!
Posted by Voralove 1 year ago Report
This.
Posted by TheShutin 1 year ago Report
You're absolutely right, it feels like actually good representation
Posted by NagaRelic 1 year ago Report
This was actually a really good comic, I love the little bit of high detail with the one panel
Posted by Tanookicatoon 1 year ago Report
You always make some of the best comics with the best character development.
It honestly makes the emotional feelings you're trying to illustrate that much more special.
Posted by Rokka 1 year ago Report
Absolutely fantastic work UmU
Posted by MetalSlime 1 year ago Report
God, your comics are so amazing
Posted by joe354 1 year ago Report
This was an amazing read; the handling of unwanted pred to willing prey and pred and the build up with the two and the big sister being very supportive of her sister either way. Along with the anime action scene when she thought her sister didnt get what she wanted was funny and lovely. Tbh best comic of the year for me due to how you handle the interaction with best friends turn lovers. Cant wait to see more of you're work even if not about willing subjects!
Posted by joe354 1 year ago Report
(Mostly cause i enjoy unwilling more. Just love the feel of the hunt!)
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
I appreciate it. Unwilling really isn’t my jam, but no shame for whatever gets your engine running.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
I figured as much seeing as most of your project if not all of them have willing vore. Cant wait to see what you do next.
Posted by Allard-Liao 1 year ago Report
The closest to an unwilling one I can think of is the mermaid one where consent is dubious because of the mermaid's drugged saliva.
Posted by Star14281 1 year ago Report
just amazing, it's so cool to watch how your skill has only improved over time. Again great work.
Posted by PlaTT 1 year ago Report
This is one of the best things I’ve ever seen
Posted by Nonameplst1 1 year ago Report
What a story,i loved the character's developpement
Posted by Assimilation 1 year ago Report
I was so assured that I'd love it before I started, and I've come out the other side even more satisfied than expected. You're a top storyteller.
Posted by NavigerousVore 1 year ago Report
Outstanding. A marvellous achievement. You can be very proud of what youve made. Thank you for sharing it with us! ♡
Posted by ejames 1 year ago Report
Great comic!
Posted by soundbass24 1 year ago Report
You continue to make some of the best vore comics. The writing and comic itself is superb and im always happy and excited when i see you post. Keep up the excellent work and i hope youre doing well.
Posted by Dgztnx11 1 year ago Report
My dead name is Dawson so I love this comic
Posted by KyleWaterdrop 1 year ago Report
Fuck this one was absolutely amazing
Posted by Lucky 1 year ago Report
Phenomenal story. I loved it.
Posted by overlordxu 1 year ago Report
GOSH you are just sooo good at writing AND drawing!
The best artist on this site with almost no competition!
Posted by WizzardEck 1 year ago Report
You deserve an award or 2 for this,
Posted by Imstillyourfood 1 year ago Report
God I absolutely adored this <3
I wish we could have more of these 2 and all but I know shes gone now~
But gosh I love them <3
Wonderful work hun!
Posted by fangcalico 1 year ago Report
This was so good!!!
Posted by Keylimes 1 year ago Report
I fell in love with your comics way back when you uploaded roomates. Your art has improved, your story telling as well. Your immersive universe. This is the PINNACLE of vore comics for me. And no doubt if you do decide to make another one I will be making another fan girl post ???? Its amazing. ❤️❤️❤️
Posted by Keylimes 1 year ago Report
Those were illegal emjois apprently not question marks lol... i will 200% be fangirling over this and other art from you forever ❤️
Posted by Windrin 1 year ago Report
Seriously your best work yet. I absolutely love your character writing. Great job!
Posted by KKtheneko 1 year ago Report
Always a good time when you post, this was quite good and I eagerly look forward to what you have in store next. You continue to improve and it is wonderful to see
Posted by x9comega 1 year ago Report
I adore how you do Casual Vore
Posted by HenBor 1 year ago Report
That was really good
Posted by NeoXtreme 1 year ago Report
A first time pred eats a one time pred, does that count for a double meal?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Fiona said she gained about 30 pounds from eating Lynne. Assuming they were both about 120 pounds to start with, that makes her a 1.25x meal at best.
Posted by secrettome 1 year ago Report
always fun to see ya post. From the set up an the awkwardness at first to the vore itself and aftermath, you've got a great knack for casual vore.
Posted by BardicLasher 1 year ago Report
Another masterpiece! You're literally the best at vore. I cannot overstate how perfect your comics are. I go back to your comics over and over and over again, and this is definitely getting added to that list.
Posted by Razgriz 1 year ago Report
i always find casual vore like this odd, but this was very enjoyable~
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Every time I think one of your comics will be my favorite forever, you come out with the next one, and the improvement is incredible every time.
That was a beautifully done relationship shift, from friends to pred and and prey. I know you mentioned at the start it was longer than usual, but that definitely helped the story feel ~real~. I mean, people don't just abruptly go from near-lifelong friends to a relationship (admittedly a vorish one) at the drop of a hat, and the gradual development drove that home and made the ending the much more satisfying.
Sorry to ramble. Amazing work!
Posted by Dews 1 year ago Report
This was simply beautiful, with such wonderful characterization, focus on willingness and on enjoying the process for all involved, and just... wow.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 1 year ago Report
This has to be your best work yet, Absolutely Breath taking and chills for days holy shit this is hands down one of the best stories of all time!!! The Continuity, build up, climax and solid ending You really touched my heart on this one forsure! Love the way you nailed casual and amateur vore so naturally! You definitely have a talent for writing stories! I havent had a rush like that in a while! Thank you shadow faps (who ever you may be) from the bottom of my heart :P ;)
Posted by Gorgrath177 1 year ago Report
Casually taking a dump in the same toilet your sister was just shat in is wild lol
Posted by CeleryPrey 1 year ago Report
This. I absolutely love how shamelessly casual it is to catch a whiff of that all-too familiar smell upon the air, meet face-to-face with the person coming out of your bathroom that you know just sent your sister on a one-way trip to browntown, and then to still give her a high-five of support as a fellow pred. "Nice one, kid." It's no harm, no foul since that's just what happens to prey, and her sister is DEFINITELY prey now ...
I also imagine there's almost a bit of prestige to eating and disposing of a pred's sibling in their own house, on the same porcelain seat no less! Emma got her sister on Blaire's home turf! It would be impossible for Blaire not to think about it every time she sends someone to the sewers afterwards, knowing that Fiona came plopping out and flushing down in the same bowl, looking and smelling the same way.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Huh. I was thinking of it more like a rental cabin situation. Y'know, scrounge up a bunch of friends to split a big AirBnB out in the middle of nowhere for a few days, ingest a few substances, maybe have an ill-advised hookup, that sort of thing. But looking back, I never really spelled that out, and I'll admit your interpretation is compelling.
Posted by folomo 1 year ago Report
An incredibly compelling story. The art was really good, but the exploration of the history and relatioship between the two main characters were incredibly well done. Kudos! <3
Posted by SerenaBlaze 1 year ago Report
Great comic! :)
Posted by AaA2000 1 year ago Report
Great comic
Wish if we could see what went between the older sister and Dawson
Posted by Bids42 1 year ago Report
I wonder if her sister and her friends will join her in that stomach?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
An earlier draft of this script did end with Emma, now with confident pred swagger, trying to invite Blair to go the same place Fiona did. IIRC Blair turned her down but insinuated she might consider it if Emma had more practice. The bit went on too long, and didn't seem in-character for them. I opted for funny anime panel and callback to Blair's words from the end of page 6 as a wrap-up instead.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Wow, the page didn't visibly respond when I hit "submit", so I tapped it a couple more times. Then it posted repeatedly. Oops! Sorry for the spam.
Posted by buginacage 1 year ago Report
Another certified Shadowfaps classic. Anyone who skipped the "boring" buildup is a scrub.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Haha. At the end of the day, this is smut, not literature. I'm not going to shame anyone for wanting to get to the porn part of their porn.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
Smut? More like smitriture the diologue is seriously good stuff.
Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report
Return of the king. Emotional and sexy as always!
Posted by realitywarper 1 year ago Report
This was genuinely fantastic, hot and adorable!
Posted by HiddenBird 1 year ago Report
A genuine all time great holy shit.
Posted by Serithma 1 year ago Report
Fucking incredible. Genuinely nice writing in a vore comic, what the fuck
Posted by Sehnsucht 1 year ago Report
Absolutely floored. It's amazing what is possible when you give yourself space. The fact that the characters hit beats where they needed to back off and process made the whole thing so much realer.
Your _dialogue_ is incredible, by the way. In fact the general air of this piece put me in mind of this non-vore comic series: https://viruscomix.com/subnormality.html . I think you might like it. Each entry is about ten minutes' reading and is more or less standalone. What's common to yours is the candid dialogue, the vision to take a little space, the thoughtful visuals, and the thorough exploration of one powerful topic.
Please take the comparison as a compliment: I think what you did is really special. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by Perodian 1 year ago Report
If Blair cares about people being unwilling prey, does that mean the person she ate as payment was willing? Or does she just care about her sister's wellbeing?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Maybe they were willing, maybe Blair applies different standards to her family than to random strangers. Who can say?
Posted by mibankai1171 1 year ago Report
Awesome work! ^_^
Posted by BoobsButtBelly 1 year ago Report
Wow, I love this comic.
Lesbians being adorable and also vore.
Posted by OneOneBearForOne 1 year ago Report
Good lord you just post banger after banger. This was amazing, exactly the kind of casual voreverse slice of life that I aspire to in all my writing.
Posted by KinoTheCat 1 year ago Report
God damn, this was pretty amazing from start to finish. I absolutely love your character design. Every character always looks really lovely in these, and I love just how casual the vore side of things is handled.
Everytime I see you post a new comic it makes me giddy, and these are always inspiration boosts that make me want to improve my own work. This was fantastic~ <3
Posted by JustaLurkingPony 1 year ago Report
Awesome seeing another big comic like this from you. Roomies and Movie Night are some of my favs, and your art and story writing is improving massively with each comic. Awesome!
Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report
This was so wonderful! I love voremance like this, and the fact that you spent so many pages building up the characters and establishing their relationship pays off so fantastically. I just adore how emotional and playful this is.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
That was just plain amazing. This is one of those once-in-year comics at *least*. The characters were great. The pacing was great. The vore was great. The writing, the visuals, all fucking great. I love how we got a good taste of the "safe" ending with Emma letting Fiona out as promised; and I LOVE how it ultimately ended up, with Fiona becoming a delicious, loving meal for her loving, best friend pred. The build up made the payoff all the better. It's always better when you can really get to know the characters before the big event. I am gonna remember this one for a *while*. Thank you so much for making it and sharing it.
Posted by BlueJade 1 year ago Report
I loved this! You always do an amazing job.
Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report
This was great! Loved everything about it and would love to see more in the future! This would of taken awhile to make to with 34 pages damn, make sure to have a nice break :)
Posted by ProbablyNine 1 year ago Report
It's been said like 70 times already but Imma say it again: This rules!
Posted by xxxxxxxxxxxx 1 year ago Report
Holy fuck, that was hot
Posted by xxxxxxxxxxxx 1 year ago Report
Shir, sorry. I didnt mean for it to post thar many times. Glitch
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Haha, no worries. The exact same thing happened to me on another comment above. Probably an issue with the new server.
Posted by xxxxxxxxxxxx 1 year ago Report
Yeah, looks like it fixed itself though. Atleast on our comments
Posted by 676darkness 1 year ago Report
I want to know. Can they be reformed or are they gone for good. Also amazing work.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Someone always asks.
These people and events are fictional. The comic told you everything I wanted to tell you about this fictional scenario. You don't need my permission to imagine anything outside the fictional narrative. I'm not here to stifle your creativity.
Posted by Deska 1 year ago Report
You rock! Had an absolute blast reading this. Might not be Shakespeare but I'll be damned if a little story doesn't make the lewd stuff that much better!
Posted by littleberryprey 1 year ago Report
I've always thought you were an amazing writer, but this takes it to a whole, new level.
Of course I still love your artstyle, but the writing really was incredible. You're ability to craft dialogue that really makes me believe in this world of vore is amazing.
Posted by Frozerain 1 year ago Report
Will there be a continuation of this as a series?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
I think I've told the story I want to tell with these characters. I don't currently have any plans for what I'm doing next, but I generally like to keep my comics self-contained.
Posted by Dilea 1 year ago Report
Shadowfaps, this is some of the most realistic, human dialogue I have read. These interactions feel incredibly real, I feel as though I know these people. Incredibly well done!
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
This , is why you’re one of the greatest
Posted by CeleryPrey 1 year ago Report
Shadowfaps, every time you post it's the return of the king.
Posted by ReiREND 1 year ago Report
Hot
Posted by omelettedufromage 1 year ago Report
This was one hell of an amazing comic series and a very interesting universe setting you have made.
Posted by RobotGoggles 1 year ago Report
The style change in the third panel is fuckin hilarious I couldn't help but laugh my ass off
Posted by Zakthegutslut 1 year ago Report
I feel like if lynne gave the wrong answer to fiona's sisters question she would be sliding out her sisters ass like dawson lol. The pred and prey side of me wish i could of seen the disposal but implied disposal hits just as good. Hella turned on when she said "i gotta flush dawson." Also i got a question can people in this universe get digested analy or eat people by shoving them in thier butt or would they be a human dildo siuation waiting to be released?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
I haven't really addressed anything but oral vore in this one, so I guess anal works however you want it to work (or not).
I don't think I've ever mentioned anal vore in any of these, probably because I'm not really into it personally. No judgment on anyone who is, of course.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 1 year ago Report
Fair Enough, thanks for the feedback!
Posted by Webbos 1 year ago Report
Legit one of the best; weirdly sweet! Enjoyed it!
Posted by Gatacko 1 year ago Report
This comic is the citizen kane of vore
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
I don't usually respond to comments that are just praise (I'm bad at accepting compliments) but I should let you know that this one has popped into my head a few times randomly over the last couple of weeks and made me smile. So, thank you!
Posted by Gatacko 1 year ago Report
I know it sounds like aimless praise, band high at that, but honestly i feel like it's deserved. I've read a bunch of your comics, and they're generally very good, like not even by vore standards, just in general. But I feel like in this one every jigsaw fell into place perfectly, or at least as close to perfect as I've seen anyone get. The characters, the writing, the art, everything is just *chef's kiss* here
Posted by yomomma 1 year ago Report
Where do you get the inspiration behind these storylines? Dialogue and development goes hand in hand for what makes quality smut for me. Is this inspiration personally driven or is it just whatever kink hits you the hardest? Cause I get a new kink with every new comic you post. Thanks for inspiration!
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
These comics tend to be fantasies that excite me personally, usually built up over a long time. I draw them because I don't want them anymore. At some point in the process of turning it into a comic, by brain stops regarding it as a sexy fantasy and starts regarding it as a project. Then the project is done and the fantasy has been excised from my brain and I don't have to think about it again.
Posted by Augustin 1 year ago Report
Made my day.
Posted by IfMyFriendsFindMe8O 1 year ago Report
Oh my goodness this was amazing!! Thank you for being willing to share your tallent and interests!!!!
Posted by PAVAGA 1 year ago Report
Is there a way for people to support future projects?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Nope.
Posted by Vmaster608 1 year ago Report
Kind of want a part two to this.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
Even though this was long I liked the extra character development.
Also this is just a question but are all your comics connented is some way or are they just one offs. Because if they're all connected in this vore-universe (vorverse) then this comic does a lot to flesh out some of its rules which is cool.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
All of my comics are one-offs, except Family Reunion and Roomies. There are inconsistencies in the "rules" between comics, and I feel like the flexibility afforded by allowing those inconsistencies is more beneficial than establishing some shared universe would be.
Maybe it's a vore multiverse. Some universes have demons, some have mermaids, some have normal humans, some have only women. Some have digestion that takes hours, some have digestion that takes seconds. In some, prey are inaudible from inside the pred's body, while they can carry on conversations with the outside in others. Whatever suits the story.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
I see I see.
Posted by CaseyKane 1 year ago Report
Well, that was just about perfect in every way. I really don't know what else to say. I mean... just... wow! Thank you for posting it here.
Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report
often when people upload longer works, the exposition just does feel like it adds that much to the horny payoff. but you earned every page and frame, goddamn. so, so good.
Posted by fredfranktom 1 year ago Report
Well done!
Posted by donutbrittle 1 year ago Report
This is a goddamn thing of beauty. Loving, consensual fatal vore is vanishingly rare to begin with, and to see it done with such grace and artistry... Today is a good day.
Posted by TheShutin 1 year ago Report
Unreal, this was a super satisfying and entertaining read, thanks for your work!
Posted by MPennanti 1 year ago Report
Shadowfaps coming back after Thanksgiving to defend their title as "Lord of Vorses" was not the plot twist I was expecting in 2023, but it is an extremely welcome one.
Thank you for all the time and energy you put into your work as well as sharing it with us internet weirdos. <3
Posted by DADAOROU 1 year ago Report
perfect
Posted by Gam3rHulk673 1 year ago Report
Question: In this universe, is there a way to reform the preys?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
These people and events are fictional. The comic told you everything I wanted to tell you about this fictional scenario. You don't need my permission to imagine anything outside the fictional narrative. I'm not here to stifle your creativity.
Posted by Gam3rHulk673 1 year ago Report
Sorry, I didn't mean to offend you, it was just a question I wanted to clarify.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
No worries, you haven't offended me.
Posted by misplacedthoughts 1 year ago Report
Sooooo goooood!! I love them so much!
Posted by Kelly 1 year ago Report
Love your comics ! Its great how you show up every few months with a great comic x3
Posted by RDRW 1 year ago Report
This comic really was insanely good!
Posted by ejames 1 year ago Report
nothing better for me than a willing same size oral vore F/F comic. I loved the test vore, and than that lead to the actual one too. Great cominc once again.
Posted by Mortaven 1 year ago Report
Legendary! It's rare to have a story this long, that keeps it exciting, and tension constantly building all the way through to the climatic bits!
Posted by Heptarch8 1 year ago Report
You make the best comics on this site. I hope you know that.
Posted by blahtaco1 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much for sharing this. After reading through it I am blown away by just how good ART it is. Focusing just on the art, your refinement of your style is astounding. I'm not an art critic, but I do know good looking pieces when I see them, and boy are these good looking pieces. Seriously the little touches like the face on 34 blew me away, not just because it was funny, but because how well it was drawn.
Your fantastic understanding of how to draw the "bumps" of a prey when swallowed continue to be so far beyond anything else that nothing can compare.
The framing of the panels and the throughline of the 'action' is legitimately better than what I've seen in professional comics/manga.
What I didn't expect was to be so drawn in by the story. It was emotional and intimate in a way that really drew me in, and I thought the use of performance anxiety was genuinely inspired.
In addition to the story, your dialogue writing actually made me care about these characters, I didn't want to just see them get together cause it was a vore comic, but because I actually wanted them to.
TLDR:
This is your best work yet IMO. Please keep creating art, no matter what it is. You are not just a good vore artist, you are a good artist.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 1 year ago Report
Thanks again for this masterpiece. I truly Appreciate your creativity.
Posted by DonburiBowl 1 year ago Report
This. was. too good for a simple fetish comic. The writing, the pacing, the dynamics, the art - all of it fffucking rocked. EASILY going down as one of the best vore comics out there.
Posted by AnonymousAthiest 1 year ago Report
Thank you for taking the time to create and post this, seriously dude your work is some of the best on this website. The fact that it's available completely for free is just amazing.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
While I do love oral as much as the next vore enthusiast I hope the next comic you make is a different vore type to otal or multiple vore types in the same comic to satisfy every kind of vore type. As long as your ok with it.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
Fair. I tend to come up with a story and then use the type of vore that makes sense in the context of that narrative, rather than coming up with the physicality of the vore act and then creating a story to justify getting there. So far, that's only led me to oral and vaginal vore. I have some scrapped scripts featuring cock or breast as well, but breast in particular seems dauntingly difficult to draw in an attractive way without size/hammerspace shenanigans. So I guess the vore types in decreasing likelihood of appearing in a future comic would be oral, vaginal, cock, breast, and then all other types are at near 0%.
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
Whats your aversion to anal vore? If you do t mind me asking.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
I don't have anything against it (or the people that enjoy it) but it just doesn’t appeal to me personally. I guess if I had to pick a specific reason, I think it feels like anal vore has more of an inherent humiliation aspect to it.
Posted by Karsap 1 year ago Report
Can't wait for your next vore comic.
Posted by PhantomOfMars 1 year ago Report
This was a super good story.
Posted by Achille 1 year ago Report
Respected and influential
Posted by Robop3nisalltheway 1 year ago Report
Cant wait to see what comic you decide to work on next.
Posted by officerclockwork 1 year ago Report
could you make an alt ending where fiona is released or smth?
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 year ago Report
No.
Posted by Grog 1 year ago Report
Love this comic it was great but also love the deeper look at this societies culture I'm a sucker for world builder soldier on shadowfaps glad to see your return
Posted by Jackpot13666 1 year ago Report
This was beyond amazing. Emotional, yet casual. Hot, yet sweet. A perfect blend of arousing porn and interesting world-building.
Posted by BellaShway 1 year ago Report
Best vore series in existence, by my count! <3<3<3
Posted by luizfelipekratos01 1 year ago Report
incridble, fantastic.
Posted by HunterZ 11 months ago Report
Asking if something else is in the works.
Posted by Shadowfaps 11 months ago Report
My blog exists solely to answer this question.
Posted by Karsap 11 months ago Report
Nice job. So what's your next vore story?
Posted by Shadowfaps 11 months ago Report
No, really, my blog exists solely to answer this question.
Posted by Kelly 5 months ago Report
How come that when ever you post its just instant classics ?
Posted by CVLOVERCHURNn3 4 months ago Report
Awesome
Posted by French_snack 4 weeks ago Report
Aww, this is honestly one of the sweetest vore stories I've read! You have them say just the right things for it to be endearing and for me to want them to both be happy, and their facial expressions and body language amplify that. Fantastic!