Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore F/M M/F Same Size F/? Vore story Voreception
Synopsis: Kimberly is desperate to get her secret family recipe some notoriety. But soon patrons at the Beach BBQ Bonanza discover the sauce really is good on "Anything".
This was actually a quick commission a friend of mine asked from me (I do commissions now I guess)
Its on the shorter end for my stories. The goal was for it to be a quick read. I must admit shorter stories are a little bit harder than just doing the free flow jazz vore stories that I...
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Mizuna - 3 years ago
I dunno why, but every time I read this I think of the hotdogs from Regular Show
Schrodinger123 - 3 years ago
Secure contain protect basically it’s short horror stories focused around the containment procedures for odd kind of horror movie inspired items like a mailbox that is also a stalker or a Godzilla lizard that literally can’t die. Or a cicada that takes on human form and forces people to eat their teeth
Schrodinger123 - 3 years ago
Secure contain protect basically it’s short horror stories focused around the containment procedures for odd kind of horror movie inspired items like a mailbox that is also a stalker or a Godzilla lizard that literally can’t die. Or a cicada that takes on human form and forces people to eat their teeth
comandmaster - 4 years ago
lol would love a scp story on this
Talented Tamara Christmas Spectauclar
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore Unbirth Digestion F/F F/M M/F Absorption Cock Vore Cleavage Unwilling Prey Breast Vore Cum Digestion Willing prey
So... This one got away from me. This was supposed to be a quick 1 hour just for fun write up. That ended up with me spending most of my day writing a 7 page vore smut story. There's probably a ton of Grammar issues in this. So I'm sorry about that.
This story features my OC Tamara (There's pictures of her around her somewhere) and he many amazing talents. I promise you part 2 of wave rave will come someday.
This is an idea i had in my head for almost 3 years now...
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doomed - 4 years ago
i think you should just repurpose the story for something new rather than make a part 2.
Takaine - 4 years ago
I think its funny too so please don't feel bad. I promise I'll get around to finishing part 2 at some point.
doomed - 4 years ago
jeeez!!! this is long XD. ALSO is it bad that i find it funny you havent done a sequel to "Talented Tamara : Wave Rave " yet
anyways this is awesome
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breasts F/F Absorption Butt Female Prey Female Pred Muscle Girl Muscle growth Multiple Preys Willing prey
Felicia's Friends Continue to help her put on some weight in all the right places
Takaine - 4 years ago
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
willofwii - 4 years ago
I love the concept of the girls slipping into her clothing right into the body part they get absorbed in. It sexy and creative. Great work!
Granddragalia - 4 years ago
Hmmm not possible if the boobs were too huge maybe the upper body first as well the stronger spine then the boobs?
Takaine - 4 years ago
Yup. You've been paying attention :) stayed tuned
doomed - 4 years ago
DANG, NOW THEY ARE butt fat , whats next ? boobies?
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Sex Growth Muscle growth
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
Another Felicia 5 panel sequence.
Takaine - 4 years ago
As a former professional lurker I must say I am honored and very much loved your comment
Acherous - 4 years ago
... Okay... I normaly don't comment.... on anything but every sense of weirdness was screaming at me on this one.
Ahem...
[Fuckboy] How?! How can this be so good?
[Felicia] Poor Fuckboy, you aren't dealing with the average slut anymore.
[Fuckboy] Oh my god she is turning SUPER SLUTTY!
[Felicia] And I'm about to drain you dry.
bloodwolfvamp - 4 years ago
yays then...sorry im not partial for blondes thats why i like panel 3 most
Takaine - 4 years ago
overall the 3rd panel tends to be my favorite as well.
bloodwolfvamp - 4 years ago
i think panel 3 is best witrh me
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breasts F/F Absorption cunnilingus Female Prey Female Pred Muscle growth Willing prey musclegrowth
Felicia marvels at her weight loss but her friends decide to help her put on a few extra pounds in all the right places
Due to an agreement with the artist, the incredibly talented Oad_art, this is not unbirth it is absorption
Takaine - 4 years ago
I actually didn't even realize this got uploaded into my "Non-vore" folder
kibroman - 4 years ago
nice
Takaine - 4 years ago
Sorry bout the double should be fixed. Glad you liked it!!
Omnomplus - 4 years ago
As it contains absorption, which I think counts as a type of vore, this is the correct one and the one in the non-vore folder is the duplicate.
doomed - 4 years ago
double upload , also this is phenomanal
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Unwilling Prey Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Muscle Girl Muscle growth
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
Part one
Felicia meets a buff girl at the gym and has a better use for those muscles.
awakener - 4 years ago
Well that’s one way to build muscle mass.
nekobouya - 4 years ago
That's certainly a sexy way to get gains.
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breasts F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Big Breasts Muscle growth muscular girl
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
Part one
Felicia meets a buff girl at the gym and has a better use for those muscles.
Revealing your true self part 2
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Inflation Breast Expansion Non-Vore BBW popping
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Valerie is showing off her new body but she can't escape who she truly is
Talented Tamara Breast Vore Commision comic2
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Soft Vore F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Same Size Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Female Prey Female Pred
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
Takaine - 4 years ago
Just my "talented Tamara" story series
ALAMOS123 - 4 years ago
i really like this tamara character, do you have more stuff with her?
awakener - 4 years ago
Could not agree more.
Whereaminow27 - 4 years ago
Finally, some real good breast absorption. So hard to find this.
doomed - 4 years ago
Dude I need a story to go with this pleaseeeeesss
Also does it hurt when she eats a person . Like are they in pain ?
Talented Tamara Breast Vore Commision comic1
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Unwilling Prey Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Big Breasts
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
Part one
Takaine - 4 years ago
Yes. Tamara is from my stories.
RandomInjury - 4 years ago
Are these OCs?
Talented Tamara Breast Vore Commission
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Absorption Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Big Breasts
A commission done by the super talented OAD_Art
stressformurder - 4 years ago
Hell yeah! Cleavage vore FTW!
Takaine - 4 years ago
Leave a comment if you guys want to see more!!!! :)
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Non-Vore Navel muscular superhero Superheroine Abs Muscle Girl muscular legs Thigh highs muscular arms huge muscles
When The Fantastic Phallus isn't around the people cry out for a new Hero to save them.
Another gift from my good pal on deviant art Oad_art https://www.deviantart.com/oad-art
I've commissioned some Vore stuff for the near future. Until then I hope you guys have enjoyed the pics I've posted. Feel free to leave a comment and let me know what you guys think.
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Inflation Breast Expansion Non-Vore BBW popping
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
(He does do some Vore work if you're interested I promise to start Commissioning more of that in the future. Until then I hope you enjoy my Inflation pics)
Valerie is off swimming one day when she discovers a green orb in the pool. She picks it up and her body begins to inflate until she burst revealing the type of girl she always wanted to be.
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Inflation Breast Expansion Non-Vore Jessica rabbit
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Takaine - 4 years ago
the design is based off of her "Couture" statue
Justarock - 4 years ago
Jessica Rabbit? At first I thought she was that Wario character.
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Muscle Girl Muscle growth
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Muscle growth
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Muscle growth
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Jessica rabbit
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Slime Breast Expansion Non-Vore
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Princess Infaltion 3 Commisions
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Lactation
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
(it comes in pink and red as well)
Princess Inflation 2 commisions
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Takaine - 4 years ago
Glad you like. This one is actually one of my favorites.
Turbotowns - 4 years ago
Dayum!
Turbotowns - 4 years ago
Datum!
Princess Inflation 1 Commision
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore
A commission OAD_Art did for me on Deviant Art
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Blob M/F Absorption Unwilling Mind Control creepy
Hey guys. Its me with another sporadic update. Weird how it took 5 months in quarantine to muster up the will to write and I return to work shortly (so sadly don't expect too many updates but I will try my best to have more of a presence here).
This was just a weird writing prompt I decided to give myself today as I felt like I should be productive.
My prompt was to write a sequel to a story of mine that had the most recent fave. And when I woke up today I fully...
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Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Unwilling Willing Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Multiple Preys
Finally the last part of Lunch Room Rampage. Sorry this took so long to produce and I very much hope it was worth the wait.
There will be more works coming down the pipe. But due to work and other life activities I can't truly promise as to when. Thank you guys for being so patient with me and staying fans of me I greatly appreciate it. Also down the road I'm considering doing a "remastered" version of this story with extras added in and all the parts together (if...
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The Fantastic Phallus comic sample
Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Non-Vore Transformation Muscle growth
A commission of the Fantastic Phallus that the nice folks at the soon to be Futanari fan comics did up for me.
I'm working on projects with them in the near future so if you guys enjoy my work I hope you support it. If not I 100% understand and greatly appreciate all you guys have even done for me to get even this far. Seriously, to everybody reading this and have read my work thank you so so very much.
Moving forward: I wish I could give a timeline on when works...
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Takaine - 6 years ago
in a word: yes. But it will be handled a bit differently.
Nalzindar - 6 years ago
I think this was a very nice picture.
The Fantastic Phallus is an entertaining story and I will love to see more of this^^
el_dogo_rabbit - 6 years ago
I'm glad this is becoming a comic, will it continue to contain cock vore?
Gabriel0813 - 6 years ago
okay cause the head is to small on that body and the dick just looks weird, like no this is not something i think people want to see on a futa it like a noodle dick
Takaine - 6 years ago
Not rude at all. I will always be working towards the best possible representation of the character when the project officially moves into development.
The Fantastic Phallus Commission Companion story
Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Cock Vore H/F Big Breasts dickgirl
Had a commission drawn by the incredible Okioppai and it inspired me to write a quick story to go along with it. This is a quick 2 page story took me a couple hours to write it. It isn't canon per se. Just a short adventure of The Fantastic Phallus dispensing justice the only way she can.
Also a little update: Sorry I haven't been updating so much as I initially promised. Work has been far more hectic than I had hoped.I do have several projects being worked on Specifically the...
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dinoman514 - 6 years ago
well... i have few oc i havent written yet that could do it, but its most this one that has the power to stop and reverse powers like that, but like i said have written him yet so doesnt count... but that right you put makes me think we should watch out for more things to come ;)
Takaine - 6 years ago
The Fantastic Phallus doesn't actually have testicles. She just has a massive cock. When villains are swallowed by the cock and pass through the base into her body they're normally digested and turned into cum.
Now there is a small window between being completely swallowed and the cumification process. So assuming somehow a villain was able to depower The Fantastic Phallus during that time: The villain would simply be forced back out as the cockflesh prison around them would begin to shrink. This would be incredibly painful to Christina as it would be like passing a kidney stone except its the size of a gang of sexy cheerleaders.
But this is a situation that would probably never happen as there's no one strong enough to take on The Fantastic Phallus....right?
dinoman514 - 6 years ago
So what would happen if she changed back with someone still in her balls?
el_dogo_rabbit - 6 years ago
I'm glad this wasn't forgotten or cancelled, the more futa cockvore we have the better
jgzman - 6 years ago
Ah, sweet. Glad to hear that Tamara is still in the works.
The FP series is also one of my favorites.
The Fantastic Phallus 101. Study buddies.
Uploaded: 7 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore F/F F/M Absorption Cock Vore Unwilling Story Willing Superheroine
Sorry for such a long wait between chapters. Life has been interesting to say the least on my end.
This is gonna be a longer multi part story arc as I continue to build the world of TFP. . It was originally supposed to be a 6 segment story that ballooned to over 24. So this is just 1 part of a larger story. When I realized it was gonna be very long I cut it at 10 pages in hopes of making it easier for the readers to digest it (pun intended). Its gonna be a long journey but one I...
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Takaine - 7 years ago
Penis waving and bad jokes is what the entire MCU is built on. So I think I have a good chance for a live action movie :) I'm glad you like the series.
rubuio91 - 7 years ago
As always, I love this series and its sillyness. I'm patiently waiting for the Hollywood adaptation.
Takaine - 7 years ago
Currently the TFP story with the most faves. Thanks everyone :)
The Fantastic Phallus Annual #1
Uploaded: 7 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Breast Expansion Cock Vore Penis Unwilling Prey F/FFF Cum Digestion H/F Cock Bulge Penis Expansion
Christina is forced into an unexpected transformation, which has unexpected consequences for a gang of rampaging gymnasts start destroying school property.
Second story about my new super hero. I feel like I'm gonna write more about her. mainly because Cock-vore is one of my favorite kinks and it seems to be very under represented. And I enjoy crafting the weird heroic/erotic scenarios.
This one has a different flow to it as its mostly a flashback. It started out as...
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Takaine - 7 years ago
There arent any pictures yet.you certainly have my permission to draw her if you'd like. Feel free to send me a pm if you have any questions or comments about the character.
Takaine - 7 years ago
Thank you for your kind words. There definitely will be more in the near future. Stay tuned :)
VoreLover9012 - 7 years ago
Is there any art of Christina yet? If not I'd love to draw her if that's okay
RLord4268 - 7 years ago
This was great! I can't wait to see more of this series.
Tewtew - 7 years ago
Thumbnail pls?
The Fantastic Phallus #100:4 Alarm Fire
Uploaded: 7 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Digestion F/F Breast Expansion Cock Vore Story Unwilling Prey Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Cock Bulge Multiple Preys Willing prey Penis Expansion
***NOW WITH PROOF READING (But probably still filled with mistakes)
Christina is a super hero with an odd power. She has a dick and uses to fight for truth and justice. On her way home after school she sees a fire on her college campus and leaps into action to help put it out.
Been a long time since I posted something. I have a few stories I'm working on but this one popped in my head and had no choice but to write it. I also can't believe its been a year since i...
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el_dogo_rabbit - 7 years ago
That is good to know
Takaine - 7 years ago
Thanks. They accepted my script for a third one so hopefully it will go into production soon.
el_dogo_rabbit - 7 years ago
Also congrats on Pocket bra, I really like that comic.
el_dogo_rabbit - 7 years ago
No problem, thank you for leting me know, it was driving me nuts trying to find it like comics do
Takaine - 7 years ago
Sorry for the Confusion but Fantastic Phallus: Origins #1 doesn't exist. Its just a joke on how comics would sometimes make reference to past events and then tell you what comic that occurred in.
All that being said, you are not the first person to ask me about this and there is an outline for that story in progress.
I do apologize for delays. RL isn't giving me a lot of free time for the comic smut :/
Lunch Room Rampage: Interlude Quick Snack
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Unwilling police
Hello everyone. Hope you all had a happy New Year. Sorry I've been away for a while but I'm back and plan to get some serious writing done over the course of the next few days.
This story is a short one used to break up a long session. I'm currently working on a sequel to Lunch Room rampage (as it stands its my most popular story) but took a break to write this one in the past couple hours (Hurray insomnia). I guess I still had Sarah on the brain.
As always I do...
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Flatheaddog - 8 years ago
It is, I loved the first one and now this one and im exstatic for the next
Takaine - 8 years ago
I'll take this as a positive review.
Flatheaddog - 8 years ago
I cant wait!
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Belly F/F F/M Unwilling cheerleader f/multiple Cheerleaders Multiple Preys
Here's a quick story I wrote up in a couple of hours to stay in the habit of writing and to take a short break from my other projects.
I hope you guys enjoy and as always please feel free to leave feedback.
Takaine - 8 years ago
Sadly I don't recall where the picture is from. Just some lovely lady I've cum across in my travels of the Internet. Glad you enjoyed the story. :)
JustAnotherGuy - 8 years ago
May I ask, where is the thumb nail from?
Good story too.
Csx124 - 8 years ago
Love it. As you can probably tell by my drawings, I've always hated cheerleaders and thought they would make great meals. Their bitchy attitudes coupled with their hot bodies and tiny uniforms make them the perfect feast. Great story!
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: F/F Blob M/F Absorption Unwilling Mind Control
Ok so I'm going to be honest, this one is a lot weirder than my other stories.
Synopsis: John is in need of money so he volunteers as a guinea pig for a brand new procedure guaranteed to make sex better. But is the overly generous scientist telling the truth.
So I'm watching the movie you might've heard of called "Suicide Squad" and one of the villains is a creature that kills a bunch of people and converts their bodies into a giant CGI monster. It was...
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PhantomWolf - 8 years ago
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Takaine - 8 years ago
This story is a little bit of a departure for me. If you guys like it I'll gladly write more. If you don't well then I don't have to worry about finishing The Spooge pt 2. Constructive Feedback is always welcome
Talented Tamara: Wave Rave pt1
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore Unbirth F/F F/M Absorption Unwilling
Getting back into the habit of writing.
We return to the adventures of Tamara as she and Laura make their way to the anticipated WavRave. Last time Tamara discovered she was more talented than she originally thought what does this new talent mean and what exciting ways will she use it going forward.
This story i broken off into 2 parts. For several reasons. 1 being i have several projects I'm working on and want to make sure they're receiving an equal amount of...
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Takaine - 6 years ago
Its cool. Its people who even bother ask "where the heck is this?" that gives me the drive to even do it. Makes me realize there's people who still care.
Arrogancy - 6 years ago
I'm just happy to hear that. I can hardly act entitled to free content. Thanks.
Takaine - 6 years ago
yes. I'm aiming for mid to late January. So sorry for the wait.
Arrogancy - 6 years ago
Will this ever return?
Arrogancy - 7 years ago
I eagerly look forward to it then.
The Talented Tamara: New Sensations
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Unbirth Digestion F/F Unwilling Willing
Tamara and Laura are waiting for a pizza as they decide what they want to do for the evening.
This story is a squeal to body shots. And the second chapter in what I'm calling "The Talented Tamara" series.
Its a purposefully short story to "get back in the groove" of writing. And continue the narrative of Tamara. I do certainly plan to write other stories involving other characters but since I'm still new to the whole writing game and Tamara is...
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Takaine - 8 years ago
Glad to see you enjoyed the story. More is to come :)
anonymous19999 - 8 years ago
i missed this one before. its a good one
TerminusOmega - 8 years ago
I too really hope she gets to eat Laura one day. It should be a chapter all it's own. With how special Laura is to Tamara and how much she wants to eat Laura, she should be allowed a full story so she can enjoy eating Laura as slowly and sensuously as she wants. With Laura being her best friend, Laura deserves a slow, sensual, and worshipful devouring. She should be allowed to be eaten alone rather than with others.
ShadesofBlack - 8 years ago
Fantastic! I love the casually open way these folks treat affection, sex, and vore.
Takaine - 8 years ago
nice to know i win at Vore writing
Uploaded: 8 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Unbirth Digestion F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Fatal Willing Implied Digestion Large Breasts
Joan is moving away and wants to spend one last night with her girlfriend Liberty
My second story. This one was more of a free-writing exercise. I simply came up with a Title and method of Vore (unbirth) and just went at it. I assume there's still spelling errors and I do apologize for any formatting errors that may happen. (eka's seems to hat me but I'll figure it out)
That said I'm really happy with the way this story came out considering I built it out of...
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MysteriousPlan - 2 years ago
Great story, almost wish there was a version where Joan was a futa, not even caring if it was cock vore, just would love to see what you'd do with it now after your work on Fantastic Phallus.
(PS: Will FP ever have sex scenes before vore?)
Takaine - 6 years ago
the story was one of my first I've ever written and more of an exercise on if I could convey an emotion. Its personally my favorite story (despite the grammar and punctuation flaws) and something i may revisit someday.
I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it
theApolyon - 6 years ago
Good story, but sad. I think, i would to make friends with Liberty (I mean, we have similar ideas about love, i think)
LillyBells - 8 years ago
It cleared up a few things, but not everything, there's still the fact Liberty could've gone to germany with Joan instead of having Joan absorb her, but this isn't my story, it's yours and so it's absolutely your choice what happens, i respect your decision, and it's a great story either way, good job.
Takaine - 8 years ago
The story is about the finality of their relationship. Two lovers, who obviously care for each other, are torn apart by an outside force (Joan being forced to move).
The "Digestion/Absorption" is based on the passionate decision made by Libby. Joan isn't even truly aware that she has the power to even unbirth Libby. It's Libby that awakens it in her desperate act to be together with Joan. Libby allowing herself to be absorbed into Joan brings the end to their relationship on Libby's terms and not someone else's. (Even though Libby will always be apart of Joan)
I hope that cleared up some things for ya.
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore F/F F/M M/F Cock Vore Unwilling Willing Breast Vore Oral Sex Cleavage Vore Implied Fatality
Tamara is the life of the party and she takes an old favorite drinking game to new levels.
(this is the first story I have ever written. I am very very new at this. I hope you all enjoy and I very much welcome any constructive criticism)
The formatting is a little better on this version. (its not just 1 giant block of text) added a different thumb nail as well.
Kooshmeister - 8 years ago
Sexy as hell, I loved it!
ShadesofBlack - 9 years ago
*Accidentally deleted my first comment, trying again*
I love the character interaction in this. At first, I thought Tamara was putting an unfair double standard of "It's okay when I do it, but you better not look at other girls." on Mike, and was very pleased to see that wasn't the case. I still enjoyed the dominant but loving and a little possessive attitude she had about him.
And good heavens, the completely open, shameless, lewdness of everything was delishious! I love vore where the prey are enjoying it on this level, and the predators enjoy the attention. I'd be a vore stripper if I could. There's just a surreality to it that I find fascinating.
ShadesofBlack - 9 years ago
Honestly, I loved that the three of them were so sexually open. And I loved that you wrote equally erotically about Mike as you did about Tamara when it came to his time to shine.
At first when she told him no, that Laura was "off limits" I thought she meant sexually. I have a cringe-at-the-unfairness-but-also-like-the-dominance reaction to the double standard I see in some erotica where women who are already doing sexual perverted things with whoever and loving it still consider it cheating if their boyfriend looks at some other girl's ass, etc.
I still loved it for the dominance, but the realization that she meant off limits as "off the menu" and that the restriction was theoretically a global one made me like the characters a lot more. And like I said below, I love it when vore is seen as hot by the prey, and the pred enjoys the attention like this. I would totally be a vore-stripper if I could.
ShadesofBlack - 9 years ago
Good god, this is the sort of vore I love to fantasize about. The craziest level of wild sex parties or abandon.
Takaine - 9 years ago
If I may be so bold as to ask what were people's favorite parts? Any specific areas on the writing that they enjoyed?
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: Takaine
Tags: Oral Vore F/F F/M M/F Cock Vore Willing Breast Vore Cleavage Vore Female Prey Male Prey Female Pred Implied Fatality Casual vore Multiple Preys
Tamara is the life of the party and she takes an old favorite drinking game to new levels.
(this is the first story I have ever written. I am very very new at this. I hope you all enjoy and I very much welcome any constructive criticism)
darc22005 - 9 years ago
Shows how you improved right
Mastercin - 9 years ago
A wonderful story! Separate your paragraphs more and try to make who is talking more apparent but other wise very well done! Please write more!
Takaine - 9 years ago
I uploaded another version that is a little better in formatting. (easier to read on the website). Normally I would scrap a debacle like this but I'm going to keep it up seeing as its mt first ever post in any manner such as this.
PhantomWolf - 9 years ago
Not bad not bad you have potential Im impressed
darc22005 - 9 years ago
Yeah makes it a bit harder to read. I kinda just zoom in the page to make it easier. IF you can fix the format ild like to read it
Takaine - 3 years ago
HA LOL I didn't even know about this a thing. After a quick google search: Yeah, you're right.
Thanks for reading and glad you liked the story.