iliketoread - 12 days ago

Yeah I like those kinds of conflicts as well in these type of stories. Not quite sure if we're gonna see a sequel or continuation to this particular story but I'll definitely be trying to put those types of conflicts in future writing.

Thanks!

Goliath1221 - 2 weeks ago

I like the conflict when there are feelings involved like in Jack and Emma, who although they loved each other, she was about to swallow him. I would like to see something similar in a second part with these two siblings (Ian being older and no longer a child) where his sister in another role-playing game considered swallowing him or eating him, but I expelled him because she wants him.

iliketoread - 2 months ago

Glad to know that the story was still enjoyable even for those who aren't familiar with tabletop roleplaying games. I tried to keep tabletop rules and formalities simple/ignored; So that they were more flavour than anything else.

And yeah the family is truly a rather psychotic group of individuals... Only after finishing writing the story did I realize just how deranged that family of characters is. But I needed their morals aside to have the good stuff happen, as is the way when writing these unhinged vore stories.

Thanks for the kind comment, appreciate it!

blab123 - 2 months ago

I'll be honest, I was a bit uncertain of the scenario towards the beginning, mostly due to having never played DnD before, but I have to say you nailed it once again with the vore scenes, especially Ashton's; a giantess struggling to swallow someone yet being determined to do it anyway is something I'll never get tired of. Megan's (un?)willing arousal at being tasted was pretty fun too, and I certainly felt the most bad for her out of all of the tinies, and the variety added by Fiona's forcefulness was a nice touch too, it really helped each vore sequence feel special. I also really liked Fiona's little backstory, and I can't help but wonder why whoever failed to keep her down before never tried again, although given that she was younger at the time, it wouldn't surprise me if whoever did it felt guilty afterwards or was quite young and thus lost interest afterwards.

As for the family, talk about a little gang of psychopaths, from Zoey using actual fire (Fiona was very lucky to survive that IMO), plus, you know, eating four people, Ian willing to kill his friends just to see one guy dead, and the parents' little backstory and ultimately dismissive attitude towards the fates of those poor tinies. Pretty solid story overall, and as always I look forward to whatever you put out next!

iliketoread - 2 months ago

All very good questions to ponder. Glad you liked it!

iliketoread - 6 months ago

Appreciate you taking the time! I really want to show you guys what I have in mind for their relationship, trust me. But yeah I feel like this story ended up coming off as me stalling that lol. I should have just let this story go 40k+ words instead of cutting it short for reading reasons. I've come to think that 20k+ words is a bit too much for these kinds of stories but I could be wrong.

Yeah the beer bottle part was a bit much... Editor suggested that Emma would probably do something fucked up to the campers. I agreed and thats what I came up with. Not sure what that says about me...

I feel like you'll really enjoy the next part. Dare I say I think that part will come out relatively soon (fingers crossed). Thanks again!

TinyHunter - 6 months ago

I just realized I never actually shared my thoughts!

This was great to read after such a long time but mostly it just makes me crave the next part even more, haha. I NEED to see Jack and Emma come to terms with the aftermath of their confessions and everything else, I just love that kinda crap. It was cool to see Jessie addressed again after so long, and I kinda hope they delve into that together as they figure out their relationship.

The only part that made me wince was the beer bottle insertion lol, but I guess that reveals a mental illness on my part if anything--I can read about Emma digesting someone alive without flinching but something as small as that fucks me up haha.

Like I said though, DYING for the next part. I just love the awkwardness of the setup of their relationship, with the bombshell's the doctor has dropped in Jack's lap.

iliketoread - 6 months ago

Ah I'm glad you feel the emotional stuff balanced out well with the more tragic "fetish-fueled" content of the campers! Thing is that I keep getting an inkling feeling in the back of my mind that I need to tone down the emotional stuff lol. I could be wrong, but I feel like most readers here want more straight-forward vore stories with less drama. Oh and I am obsessed with dark, mysterious "heart to heart" moments lol.

Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts!

ariarigatou - 6 months ago

to be real though i absolutely love the storytelling direction here; the emotional scenes balance out wonderfully with the ~oh so tragic~ fates of the campers, and i've got a special place in my heart for dark, mysterious "heart to heart" moments <3

ariarigatou - 6 months ago

born too late to explore the earth, born too early to explore the universe, born just in time to read vore university 5

iliketoread - 4 months ago

I'm glad you enjoyed the dynamics of this story. I too am a fan of dynamics which are tolerated but still controversial lol. And it's nice to hear that the time I spent on it was worth it.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment! Appreciate it!

TheMechanicalGLRK - 4 months ago

I liked this story, thank you for continuing to write and share with us!

I love seeing the situations people cook up and the justifications they give their characters for the terrible shit they do. The professor’s refusal to be proven wrong was a great and believable touch. I also liked that it’s not largely already accepted in society, ( tolerated but controversial is a sweet spot for the dynamic, I personally enjoy most) it helps drive home the inhuman horror, the powerless frustration from being at the mercy of systems far bigger and stronger than you that feels very real.

I think you gave it the right amount of thought for what this story is, others have already pointed out things that stood out to me as in some way odd, but they didn’t pull me out of the story I just noted it and felt amused.

Thanks again!

iliketoread - 6 months ago

Life is cruel and keeps us all busy I suppose... If I could write these stories as a full time job, I would! Fingers-crossed I can get a story out soon.

MisterNut - 6 months ago

Idk why it added so many question marks i didnt put those at all

MisterNut - 6 months ago

???? you, TinyHunter and DocClamor are like my big three on this site, and all 3 of you havent dropped a story in over a month... we need to get cloning made already so you can write more ???? ????
(Another guesstimation on next release?)

iliketoread - 2 months ago

I promise to try get to it when I have the chance! I'm sure we'll see it sometime soon, so stay posted.

FrogsToads - 2 months ago

I will pay you to make a part 2 pleaseeeee make a part 2

iliketoread - 4 months ago

Unfortunately nothing that I can say will be soon. I've been distracted by other stories/ideas. I do really want to continue this series but I am rather slow at writing these days and get pretty busy with other stuff.

It's nice to see that there are people interested in its continuation, gives me some motivation to get pen to paper.

Cheers!

Zabas392 - 4 months ago

Any word on a sequel?

iliketoread - 10 months ago

Thank you! I'm glad that little ironic piece got noticed, felt it was a fun little point to the story. Cheers!

iliketoread - 1 year ago

Can't blame him for wanting to get swallowed by a babe like her...

Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for the kind comment!

HentaiMaster90000 - 1 year ago

Poor Ash... I hate what Ethan did to her and how much I relate to him lol.
Amazing story

iliketoread - 1 year ago

Thanks! You got me blushing... ...Hope you enjoy my future stories half as much!

iliketoread - 1 year ago

I can understand and agree with the 4th-wall breaks being distracting. I normally would never add such parts to a story but this story was originally one big joke and so it had A LOT of them. After coming to my senses I heavily trimmed them down but clearly left some...

Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback!

xvx17 - 1 year ago

What a masterpiece, my heart trembled when reading this. It's been a long time since a story has been able to make me feel this way. A mix of comedy, melancholy, nostalgia, emotion, intrigue and genuine sadness. Curiously, they are emotions that relate too well. It was just perfect from start to finish, I have no words! I write this while shedding some tears, somehow I can see my life ironically reflected in many things in this story.

MisterNut - 9 days ago

Oh well guess I'll die.

iliketoread - 10 days ago

Wish I had some good news to provide you with :(

MisterNut - 11 days ago

Any news on that willpower lmao?

TheDragonBoy - 1 year ago

That's really cool that you're a fan of my stuff! Or at least it's really cool for me whenever an artist I like compliments something of mine, so I hope that's how it feels for you too. The length... *was* a bit of a problem for me. Honestly, my preferred length is closer to like 1/4 of this, or even 1/8. But that's a personal thing, and some stories legitimately take longer to tell and that's fine. What's really important is that yours was interesting enough for me to read all the way through it *anyway*- or that's what I think, anyway.

iliketoread - 1 year ago

I'm glad you really enjoyed it and that the length didn't seem to be much of an issue for you. I feel like most people would probably prefer a single read to be half this length lol. I appreciate you taking the time to write the comment; I'm a big fan of a lot of your stories so its pretty sweet to see you reading my stuff! Hope you enjoy my other stories if and when you get the chance to read them.

iliketoread - 2 years ago

It's a bit of a silly and short one, surely its easy to miss lol

Wolfsage - 2 years ago

Damn, can't believe I missed this story :D

iliketoread - 3 years ago

Yeah it was pretty fun to put the Reddit aesthetic together. Thanks for the comment!

Base54 - 3 years ago

I love the Reddit aesthetic to it all. I've been listening to a lot of r/nosleep, so this was definitely a welcome surprise.

iliketoread - 3 years ago

One of my best eh? Interesting. Thanks for the kind comment and yeah I hope to see more 'realistic' feral prey on this site in the future!

iliketoread - 3 years ago

Thanks for the comment, don't think I'll ever continue this story but who knows. Cheers!

BlackfireVii - 3 years ago

Wow... *loudly sips coffee. Smacks lips* This guy is a real asshole. Not even an asshole, he's a fucking dildo.
He isnt real enough to be called a dick.

I can't figure out a way to bring vore into it buuuut, this has a lot of potential to continue just as a story!

iliketoread - 3 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Can't promise I'll write similar stories anytime soon but we'll see...
Cheers!

SasakiKojiro - 3 years ago

One of the best stories I’ve seen in a while on here. Would also like to echo that I would love to see some similar stuff in the future also!

Animo24 - 3 years ago

Take your time your stories are awesome

iliketoread - 1 year ago

Thanks for the comment WestofJames, really appreciate it. Yeah its a bit of a harsh conclusion but it felt right when I wrote it. I think I would approach the scenario differently today but we learn as we go. I hope you enjoy my future stories, thanks!

WestofJames - 1 year ago

Awesome work on the series. Little taken aback at how it concluded, but was very enjoyable reading. Loved the way you do your stories, and if you do more in the future, I look forward to reading them too. Thank you!

TinyHunter - 1 year ago

If I could give any advice I would say just think about it like a puzzle. For my first 2-3 stories I was just making it up as I went along as well, I would write to the end and just see where it led me.

Now I like to plan things out a bit more but part of the fun of writing I think is surprising yourself and working with what you've set up, intentionally or not. I totally get regretting decisions along the way (I have plenty) but I think the easiest way to look at it is "well this happened...what would happen next?" and just try writing it and see what happens. If you don't end up liking it, start over and try again.

Obviously, no one's forcing you to continue the series if you're not feeling it anymore, but that's just what I do when I'm stuck.

iliketoread - 1 year ago

When I wrote the first part, I always imagined it would just be a single standalone story. No sequels and that would be it. I felt like it was good enough and I could have simply ended there... ...but it seemed to me like people were interested more so I considered writing more for Emma/Jack. Very quickly I had some ideas floating around so I continued it. Regrettably I just made up the plot along the way while writing the pages, in-turn not really thinking too hard about character motivations and what the story was supposed to be leading to. I ended up killing off characters I wish I didn't, lost focus on how certain characters should behave, and worst of all - at least I feel like this happened - I lost what made the first one so fun to read. The plot started taking itself too seriously which I feel like was never the point of this series. Its supposed to be a cheeky, "somewhat-believable", fun story about some normal guy whos horribly obsessed with a devious giantess who loves teasing him to no end (Vore comes included). Anyway, I know to most its not an issue and a lot probably don't agree but, as you and I know, the writer is always the biggest critic of his/her work.

Also, I should have mentioned it earlier but I had a feeling back when I first read your first story that Nate and Becca had an inspirational slice of Jack's/Emma's DNA. Cute honestly. It makes me very grateful that I managed to inspire you.

I do want to still continue Emma's and Jack's story, just not sure when. Cheers.

TinyHunter - 1 year ago

How do you feel you messed it up, if you don't mind me asking?

DocClamor - 11 months ago

Nah, don't say that! You do excellent work on the regular, I just occasionally browse back through and felt I should comment, that's all. The Greatest Magician... Ever? is honestly a contender for being one of my favorites of yours. Underrated premise and a willing but "unaware" pred committing in front of crowd was something I particularly enjoyed. I mean it when I say you do excellent work. I'm sure the best has yet to come.

iliketoread - 11 months ago

I started posting on this website in the hopes of inspiring others to write so I'm glad it worked! All the feedback over the years really has come down to showing that I peaked at the first story I posted lol.

Thanks for the kind comment!

DocClamor - 11 months ago

Honestly, this was one of the stories that inspired me to start writing myself. Everything about this one is absolutely perfect. The detail, the build up, the sense of dread that permeates through the sequence is just too good. I model a lot of my ideas around how you present yours.

Excellent work, along with the rest of your stuff. Cheers, my friend.

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Glad someone understands my love for "just-the-right-size" preys LOL. I've always had the same feeling about a tiny being too small as pointless and too big is a bit difficult to believe (I also selfishly dont like the idea of ruining the 'normal' figure of the pred...)

Thanks for the kind words! I hope to write possibly a story or two this year.

Drakovyr - 2 years ago

That size difference is definitely the best for me too !
Too small and it doesn't feel significant,too big and it feels too unrealistic, when the prey is just big enough to make the pred struggle to pass it down is just perfect :D
I love your work so much, and that story is with no doubt one of my favs !
I keep rereading it regularly, and it's always a blast, hope you'll bless us with some more of your talent <3

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Perhaps... perhaps...

kbDArt - 2 years ago

This fun, unaware, then callous voring was a good story. I enjoyed the read. The only thing I might quibble with was the wearing of clothes - maybe he should have stripped off the greasy clothes as a means of escaping her plate (less slippery, perhaps).

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Glad you think its worth calling it a classic. Debatable but I appreciate the kind gesture! Thanks!

AnAccount - 2 years ago

Spent a lot of time looking for this one. Its a classic

iliketoread - 2 years ago

I'm sure there is plenty of people who would wanna see that version. Writing can be fun if you got an idea you love :p

iliketoread - 1 year ago

Perchance... whos knows though...

daeway - 1 year ago

Huh.
Ya think in the war b/t the Terrans and Earthlings, the Earthlings will grow even bigger humans, only to cause the extinction of both races?

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Sorry for the late reply.

Yeah I do also really enjoy it when the pred has a hard time swallowing down their prey. Something about the physical tightness and the significance of the prey really make it work well for me. Not sure how much larger I like to let bellies get in my stories but I'll look into writing more descriptive bellies. I can see myself possibly lacking in that department.

Thanks for taking the time to write a comment, I appreciate it!

18874172826 - 2 years ago

Recently I had a rare vacation, and I finally had time to write down my thoughts.Reading your previews on the sequel of Take's place in the Earth's Least Favourite Babysitter a long time ago, I thought the infiltrator would be bigger and stronger than the President's family, so it might be harder for Melany to swallow them and even risk choking. I thought it might be more exciting. She will also end up with a bigger belly. Maybe we could add more belly descriptions.All in all, I like your writing style very much, which inspires me to write something.Have a nice day

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Thanks Thrill! I do think its definitely one of my better stories. Hooopefully I'll post again sometime in the near future but at the moment my writing has been put on the backburner. ...There is one story that is pretty much done that I may upload in the near future but we'll see...

Cheers!

zhanye_00 - 1 year ago

You are one of the reasons i came back (i wish was a carrot haha )

iliketoread - 1 year ago

God I wish that were me...

Also, glad to see you back on the site. Love your work!

zhanye_00 - 1 year ago

I wanna be in this magic show !

kbDArt - 2 years ago

Thanks! I will certainly do. :)

iliketoread - 2 years ago

Thanks! For this one? Sure, just make sure to credit me for the original version of it :)

Luxio512 - 2 years ago

His?
Emma is clearly a girl.

Luxio512 - 2 years ago

His?
Emma is cleary a girl.

iliketoread - 4 years ago

Ah thank you thank you. I loved the older Observer macro/micro stories. Really wished he still did writing :( I am working on the next installment but I must admit its going rather slow, I'm quite unhappy with my writing and I'm trying to improve it.

And yes, I also do love Emma's behavior around other her soon-to-be prey. Does she get a Mean Girls trill? I don't know... you'll have to ask her >:)

Thanks again!

TinyHunter - 4 years ago

Love this series, they remind me a bit of the old Observer stories. Can't wait for the next installment!

Also I've gotta say, Emma is at her best when she's being catty and taunting her female prey. The parts where she singles out Sandra during the whole ordeal are the best moments. Does she get some kind of Mean Girls thrill out of eating other girls?

vortexx - 5 years ago

I love emma!no end to his hunger a real black hole :) here is some proposal of scenes to put for your next chapter: a scene where she swallows thirty people (why not prisoners?) to show the endless limits of his stomach;) a scene with a telephone ringing in his belly then recovered through his poop as in jurassic park 3 with the spinosaur! and finally a happy ending scene with emma pregnant with jack;)

nineplay - 5 years ago

Those are two very fair points! A big reason why I write with shrunken people is exactly that—it's just easier to have them interact with a world at regular scale.

Nothing better than contrasting such intriguing carefree cruelty with a dash of reminding the reader that ultimately this shit's weird and fun and not afraid to be so, haha.

YES. NEXT TIME. C'mon man. That setup. I can't believe you've done this. :3

Anytime dude. I'm hooked for whatever you write next!

vortexx - 5 years ago

very good story, I love Emma! will have to add a scene with the phone as in jurassic park 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kRB8Mjyz3Q ;)

Adelais - 5 years ago

Another wonderful piece of vore. I really enjoyed the thickening of the plot and the introduction of the concepts to another girl. I'd love to see something more overtly sexual between Jack and Emma as their relationship develops, but, whether or not you want to do that, I'm sure that I will really enjoy how this plays out.

iliketoread - 5 years ago

:)

iliketoread - 5 years ago

Thanks again. That was the original plan for the next part... maybe it will still happen. Who knows. I'm currently rethinking the next part.

Cheers!

iliketoread - 1 year ago

Feel free to leave criticism still if you like!

xvx17 - 2 years ago

What just happened was very strange (I don't mean the story) I was reading this and after finishing I wanted to leave a comment with how much I liked it and some criticism. Then I realize that this story is 2 years old and that there is also a remastered version. I felt like a time traveler, how crazy!

Wolfsage - 3 years ago

Damn, poor Jessie, I kinda liked her, she was pretty cool.

iliketoread - 4 years ago

Thanks for taking the time to comment on my work Rissery! It's my first story so it's not perfect but I think it did a decent job at the whole world building part. Fortunately, I've already made a part 2 and 3 to the story you can go read if you like. (Unless this comment was meant for all three parts) but I do plan on making a part 4 too!

Thanks again!

Rissery - 4 years ago

Very nice story, good world-building. I struggle with that, so my writing tends to stick with established locations and stuff. I would like to see a continuation of it.
I only noticed a couple typos, so it's pretty good in that area, too.