MasterGryph - 4 months ago

Well, that was a quick turnabout. Mac didn't even have time to realize he'd just been lured in.

Very short class time too. It seems to just fly by. But Ms. Hernandez has the experience to make the most of it.

Bugface69 - 9 months ago

Can I make a request?

Bugface69 - 9 months ago

Here's a story request I would like to make to somehow see the out come of.

(Anal vore, same size, soft vore)

Story: During day one, Sunny and Kel come to the park to hangout only to see Basil getting shoved into Aubrey's ass as the hooligans encourage her while Charlene either looks away, or runaway. Sunny and Kel decide to help Basil out, only for Sunny to get anal vore'd and Kel to also get anal vore'd by Kim. After possibly Sunny, Basil and Kel being made fun of, Aubrey and the Hooligans goes they're separate way. Aubrey sits in her room deciding rather or not to digest Sunny and Basil, or keep them alive while fingering her ass, as Sunny and Basil are "almost" absolutely terrified. She ultimately keeps them alive, but decides to keep them in her until at least summer ends. Cut to Kim sleeping almost digesting Kel, but Kel manage's to escape through her ass, and run out of her house to make sure Sunny and Basil is ok, only to be caught and anal vore'd by Aubrey under a street light, and heads over to have a sleepover at Charlene's house. (You can end it here if you want, but here's some more if you want to continue) After they reached the end or summer, and after all of them reconnect, as well as letting "only" Hero know where they are, with Sunny's Mom giving up on searching for Sunny and leaving to "her" new house, as well as Mari and Mewo looking down in confusion and horror at what has happened, Aubrey finally let's them out through her ass, with Kim recording this on camera. She hugs almost all three of them, with Sunny and Basil leaving from this to mentally recover from this, only with Kel (with his new found kink) willing decide's to get anal vore'd by Aubrey again, along with Kim, still recording, decided to join in as well. The story ends with Hero and Aubrey face to face in front of his house still having both Kim and Kel in there, with Kel saying hello to Hero while playing pet rocks against Kim. Aubrey shrugs, while Hero facepalms himself in disappointment. I hope you to see this come to life some how, but it's really your choice to do it how you want to, or not to at all. Thanks for taking the time to read this.

doomed - 1 year ago

Yeah , I still have to balance if being a vore story and her being a good teacher . That’s why it’s set end of day Friday. This way she gets to keep him for an extended period of time without actually screwing him over too much.

Harleking31 - 1 year ago

You make excellent points
But keeping a student inside for a little longer than allowed? That's a winner for me. It's why I like the "Detention" of Threkk that much

happysorb - 1 year ago

No one knows? Really?

corruptedcroissant - 1 year ago

Missy is a mastermind!

XiaoRenzhe - 1 year ago

Looking really good! Do some studies where you draw it from several angles. Shading will be your best friend.

carlj - 1 year ago

I approve!

YepMcNope - 1 year ago

And yet, ironically, if they fail the course mentally preparing them to live forever as their professor's fat, they end up dropping out, and live forever as their professor's fat... lol

GinRyuKaza - 1 year ago

This was rather fun to read! I really like the different take here. Normally you don't get people fighting back successfully! ^^

Runbot - 1 year ago

Ngl, stories like this are amazing because preys that fight back are really amazing, fighting in the face of being eaten. I made an OC that is prey but he also hates being a meal and he has used self defense to protect himself or in worse cases has mortally wounded preds with his machete and so no one messes with him for fear of getting the crap beat outta them or stabbed with a very sharp machete.

SunnyCGI - 1 year ago

Mhhh so hot

corruptedcroissant - 1 year ago

I Say serves that failure of an employee right!

Catgirlherm - 1 year ago

Welp that’s one less life to guard.

SunnyCGI - 1 year ago

nice cock vore <3

ironman362 - 1 year ago

Nice use of the courtroom ethos. That was a good read :). Good ending too!

RasenGun37 - 1 year ago

I forgot that you do stories too, you not just one of the guys that comments everywhere lol

credxz - 1 year ago

Thank you for making this!

EloquentOrc - 2 years ago

No problem.

doomed - 2 years ago

Ah see I missed that . Thank you so much

EloquentOrc - 2 years ago

Makes sense. :) Reading it again, I feel I was being too nitpicky anyway.
There is one error that is unfortunate though, because it is one of the first sentences:

"Her name is a tall cowgirl named Mrs. Baker."

I would also maybe suggest trying to use a few more commas and replacing some of the periods with them, so it reads a little less "broken up".


"Speaking of the Melly. She is my trainer. Everyone calls her Melly the belly because she’s the secret bouncer. Also because her chubby belly is exposed no matter what outfit she wears. It has a tattoo of a box labeled time out. Whenever she bounces someone from the property. Their face appears on her olive-skinned belly. Next to them is a label of how long they have to stay as fat on her belly. I narrowly avoided being a prisoner for a day with the slime girl incident. If it had been anyone other than Tanny. I would’ve been belly fat for a week."

Especially the last two sentences, reads like one, that just have a period in the middle.

But like I said, it is mostly nitpicks.

doomed - 2 years ago

Yeah , too bad Dani has little to no clue what Jessie looks like lol

doomed - 2 years ago

How so ? part of the reason I left it like this is because it’s mostly Dani speaking to himself. So to an extent it’s not supposed to read like a proper story.

That said there is a limit to that . As anything that would make the story sound off or too long , or even genuine errors are something I need to fix . So amy advice is welcome

EloquentOrc - 2 years ago

Dunno about that, but it is fun reading about Dani trying to deal with hungry, horny women :)

doomed - 2 years ago

Extremely High praise coming from you, thanks

EloquentOrc - 2 years ago

Entertaining series so far :)

Luna2120 - 2 years ago

Hey if you've read my stuff you knot my writting is rarely spicy as well lol

doomed - 2 years ago

Thanks , the vibes are meant to be goofy and light hearted so Itlikely wont be very spicy

Luna2120 - 2 years ago

This looks like it will be a fun series

BondaBonda - 2 years ago

I’m sorry but I’m imagining a slurping sound a they go down.

Moxxieasslover - 2 years ago

Nah... it's good

ShadesofBlack - 2 years ago

Or so so right!

corruptedcroissant - 2 years ago

Don't eat bum in the hall! Or else you get slurped

Runbot - 2 years ago

I loved your Gabi's New Job story I wish that it was canon so Gabi would have some justification for eating people but it's still a great story.

SunnyCGI - 1 year ago

Love it^^

somethingsomething2077 - 2 years ago

No nipples finally
Jokes aside really like this

SmaxTheDestroyer - 2 years ago

Lol

doomed - 2 years ago

It’s the hat , and she’s totally the delivery driver . She eats those who leave poor tips

SmaxTheDestroyer - 2 years ago

I get a ‘she ate the whole pizza AND the delivery boy’ vibe from this… not sure why. Lol

BondaBonda - 2 years ago

That’s a segsy lady- er snake lady

doomed - 2 years ago

Thanks , I kinda wanted it to be that Margo paints her lips to match her tail

corruptedcroissant - 2 years ago

Nicely done! Love dat color on the scaly part and lips

SmaxTheDestroyer - 2 years ago

Beautiful~

GummySlider - 2 years ago

I think your improving

corruptedcroissant - 2 years ago

Most sexellent! Need moar of your art!

doomed - 2 years ago

Lmao

SmaxTheDestroyer - 2 years ago

Well seeing as she wore it for the first time today. It fits rather well~ would look even better with a nice large meal in her belly too~

AssImilate - 2 years ago

Woah I've been seeing your comments for a while now, it's cool to see you making things too.

disappearingtrick - 2 years ago

Looking forward to the story!

BondaBonda - 2 years ago

“god I wish that were me”

TheHumanPred - 2 years ago

Love good breast vore pics

rubuio91 - 2 years ago

Lucky you!

Moxxieasslover - 2 years ago

very good job :D

Moxxieasslover - 2 years ago

very goof job :D

Icylobster3 - 2 years ago

Nice and round tum :3

textingEdits - 2 years ago

I'm not sure what you draw in. But I recommend isolating the colors each to their own layer to reduce overlap. Then you can shade and render each color one by one. It sure helped me out a ton! Good luck!

doomed - 2 years ago

Thanks , my goal for the future is to get good at colors and shading . Then drawing since colors is harder for me

BondaBonda - 2 years ago

Omg I love Tina x,D
Bro that dude Derek must’ve been freaky af ToT he kept coming back yoooo????

doomed - 2 years ago

Lmao same though

bronzelara - 2 years ago

What I would do to partners or even just people who annoyed me too much too

doomed - 2 years ago

Thank you , I thought it was too much dialogue but thanks

Hawkeye7 - 2 years ago

Nice tale! Well done, love the interactions.

doomed - 2 years ago

Thank you ! I defin will be taking your advice

Tarantula - 2 years ago

This is a brilliant start, man ! Looks like the beginning to a very unique style. What I would suggest is experimenting with layers a tad to make sure that she doesn't clip into the background, otherwise, your anatomy is strong and this is really exciting to see !

GummySlider - 2 years ago

Just keep playing with digital

doomed - 2 years ago

good to know , and youre phenomenal .

funny thing is , with pen and paper I'm decent, but digital is new

GummySlider - 2 years ago

I'm not a great artist, but draw every day, and don't be afraid to use references.

NonBinaryFuta - 2 years ago

Great story, I'm invested in your alternate MCU and wish Karens were this easy to deal with.

doomed - 2 years ago

Thanks

Rockyvorefan - 2 years ago

Very good story

doomed - 2 years ago

that was the intent so im glad it came across , also this is high praise coming from you

heromc - 2 years ago

Good stuff, I loved how casual it was!

CoolKaios - 1 year ago

I think Gabi would actually thrive in this environment. Gabi does seem to have a sense of justice about her, and I think being vindicated in her diet would make her happy, as well as having a garenteed supply of food.

The only hiccup might be Gabi's friends and family. They are far more malicious to and distrusting of "normal" people. She's been ingrained with the idea of "no witnesses" for so long, and her predatory friends are far from enabling.

I can only see Gabi going down this route once she learns to trust "normal" people. Until she does this she will always lean toward the "cruel" spectrum I think.

Topedo - 2 years ago

It's an interesting new approach.

doomed - 2 years ago

thanks im steadily improving

TavTheBored26 - 2 years ago

I will tell you it wasn't bad, I enjoyed it so good work.

AshLovehart - 2 years ago

nice!!

doomed - 2 years ago

I’m gonna do a bio do him and a better story soon

AshLovehart - 2 years ago

Wish I coulda had a description of Theo!! He seems like he'd very likely be my kinda pred :P

nomnomvore - 8 months ago

Ooo I liked this one, I like how she makes people willing, everyone wins in that situation~

Hawkeye7 - 2 years ago

Wow, a really nice tale.

SmaxTheDestroyer - 2 years ago

Love this kind of Teacher- student pred prey relationship

UnreliableKnight - 2 years ago

Interesting story.

Matteo42 - 2 years ago

lol that was a *really* long one ;)
I aint complaining though! haha

Hawkeye7 - 2 years ago

Very nice short story. Perfectly done.

srstar177 - 2 years ago

You dun fucked up Eris.

Would love to read more Jake x Scott!

Drakira - 2 years ago

I wish I knew what Alex's story was ^.^

titus12army - 2 years ago

more of this.

doomed - 7 months ago

Wow I inspired one of my favorite writers

GinRyuKaza - 8 months ago

My memory sucks! I remember this story! xD

Its a favorite of mine and inspired my hammerspace ninja! xD

certifiedfroglover - 2 years ago

Abby is adorable! You should do more stories with her

RandomCPUman - 2 years ago

Sorry... there's just a LOT to praise about this.

RandomCPUman - 2 years ago

I absolutely loved this! The idea is super intriguing, the execution was flawless (to my untrained eye), the situation and characters seem so wholesome, and this definitely has to potential to become a linear story, should you choose to make it one.

crankzzz - 2 years ago

Loved the read~!

doomed - 2 years ago

https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=50938

DrRose - 2 years ago

Hey susie, your ass is grass
Your ass
Is grass
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DrRose - 2 years ago

That didn't help much

doomed - 2 years ago

https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=21&t=60266

CHECK HERE

dagar - 3 years ago

Really fun! Though I could never make fun of femboys, it's still a fun sounding fate. <3

doomed - 3 years ago

Lol , I actually have a character that I’m writing a story about who likes to eat people who make fun of him for being a femboy . And the entire experience as a part of his body is so pleasurable that he breaks their minds

dagar - 3 years ago

This was a fun story. Love the idea of some fem boy with souls jiggling in those cheeks. <3 Makes me jealous of those lucky minds.

SunnyCGI - 1 year ago

<3

doomed - 2 years ago

do it, i created my world to explain all the vore tropes i love. if it helps you I'm happy

doomed - 2 years ago

thanks

GummySlider - 2 years ago

I like your explanation of rules for your stories.

bnnnnxg19 - 2 years ago

An idea suddenly occurred to me. First, there were two women, one older and one younger. The young were brought up, the middle-aged women were swallowed into the womb, and the middle-aged women were born backward in age. Middle-aged women are already babies...... Let her grow up and swallow another woman into her womb, repeat, and live forever.

doomed - 3 years ago

yeah , unfortunately for me , i dont have the skills to write a story or draw. but i can at least explain the lore for people . and those who are interested can write a story or draw a picture for it

TheMysteriousSadSack - 3 years ago

Deepest lore