Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

Soul vore is great because why stop at the body, reuse everything.

MPennanti - 5 years ago

I'm glad you're still excited for it! <3

I'm sure Mia will be a diligent student of magic and not be tempted to break any taboos in the pursuit of greater power...

Lyonesz - 5 years ago

I really hope this series continues someday!

Blahblahbum - 5 years ago

This series is awesome, I can't wait for another chapter.

Blahblahbum - 5 years ago

Ah, of course. Real life always comes first. Happy to hear that the next chapter is at least being imagined though!

MPennanti - 6 years ago

Being able to do magic on her own is definitely a goal she has. :3

Blahblahbum - 6 years ago

Rereading this series, I hope we'll get to see more of this amazing predator, perhaps visiting a school for young witches and devouring a bunch of delicious young girls to become a mighty goddess of sex and power.

MPennanti - 6 years ago

I'm glad you liked it!

I want to say yes to your question, but I have been very bad at making time to write lately. I do plan to continue it, though I can't promise when the next bit will come out.

Blahblahbum - 6 years ago

This is an amazing series! Will there be more soon?

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Too kind <3

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Thanks for the support! :D

Altimos - 7 years ago

So long as it's much later than your recent dinner...

And I may... be... *clears throat* unwilling X3

Straxacore - 7 years ago

Don’t worry. I’m sure I’ll have room for dessert

Altimos - 7 years ago

Oh yeah... and a watch, too XD

Altimos - 7 years ago

I don't normally add stories to my favorites... but WOW, this one is definitely being added!!!

Awesome story :D

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

You are what you eat.

MPennanti - 5 years ago

Thanks are always appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

Kartomic - 5 years ago

I'm quite late saying this, but goodness me what a story! You put a lot of time and attention into this, and I cannot help but be awed; stories like this are a rare treat to read and enjoy. Thank you!

MPennanti - 6 years ago

Thank you! Yes, I would like to at some point do another story with her. :3

Zalzas - 6 years ago

This was fantastic, your writing is really on point, vivid and polished. I hope you write about Kanti again!

Kelly - 6 years ago

Amazing story <3

ZaaZaa - 7 years ago

Super hot and well-written from start to finish. I look forward to seeing more like this (and of Dylan) from you. :D

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Dylan seems pretty happy about it at least! ;D

Straxacore - 7 years ago

Such a sad way to go. Oh well at least Doug is single now.

MPennanti - 7 years ago

I'm glad! :3

Straxacore - 7 years ago

Ummmm sure, why don't you come meet me and find out :)

MPennanti - 7 years ago

I'm sure you'd never take someone against their will though! >.>

Straxacore - 7 years ago

I'm very much a taker and this story appeals to me ^_^

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D

Readasaur - 7 years ago

Wow!
That's some domination!
You did a great job of depicting how completely he was subdued and used by the two of them.

Straxacore - 7 years ago

.... Fuck.... darn you and your infallible logic. Well I guess I could live without your stories, but you won't live if you ever stop >:D

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Though if you find out how sweet I am, how will you get more stories? ;)

Straxacore - 7 years ago

I'm not sweet. Don't get any ideas or next thing you'll hear is me saying just how sweet you were, of course it would be muffled :)

MPennanti - 7 years ago

You are too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

MPennanti - 7 years ago

That's a good question. ;)

MPennanti - 7 years ago

I should have another one out next Friday :D

Lupe - 7 years ago

Great story! The detail you put into him getting swallowed was great. I look forward to reading your other stories!

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Thanks for your kind words and advice. I think I've read too much Jacqueline Carey recently. :)

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Glad you liked it!

AegisOfRoses - 7 years ago

Kinky!!! And excellently written, you have quite the vocabulary! Some feedback is to not get caught up in that repitiore of words, remember to use some basic words, especially when you start repeating. All in all, this was a fantastic read!

Dooot - 3 years ago

excellent story. hope we get a seauel.

Spider8Fiend - 7 years ago

Well, this was a lot of fun! This is the first story by you that I've read, so I don't know if this story is part of a larger series or not, but I do appreciate the world building: it feels like all of this happens in a concrete fantasy world with rules and order, even if that's not the focus of the story. It keeps people entertained on
Multiple fronts, like many good stories should. On the whole, great job!

... I also liked the sheer level of domination of Raja's body and soul, and Batari's rationalizations. It was both thrilling and realistic. I look forward to seeing more of Batari, if this is part of a larger series or not.

Straxacore - 7 years ago

I must insist you accept your reward. You can trust me >:)

I mean :), yes much more innocent

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Praise is my life-force, so thank you! <3

However, I'm too crafty to accept rewards from folks around here, it always ends the same way. >.>

Straxacore - 7 years ago

You are amazing and deserve a reward. :)

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Yeah, that's the jist of it. Sort of like when magical characters struggle inside some kind of mental realm. I leave it up to you to decide how much Diana actually remembers of it in the morning.

VVVx - 7 years ago

Usually not a fan a soul vore, but the way you wrote it was very interesting. Didn't catch on that that's what happened until this story. If I'm interpreting it right, Diana's soul and Trish's met within a dream?

TongueCuddlingLouse - 7 years ago

This was a fantastic read, really loved all the digestion talk :D

MPennanti - 7 years ago

I suppose it's a little ambiguous, but my personal interpretation is that Diana was a jerk and digested them both.

no one - 7 years ago

Loved the story, but I was left a bit confused. Did Diana become pregnant with Trish's son or not? I need to know whether to add the "pregnancy transfer" tag or not. Great story otherwise. ;)

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

I am rereading a lot of great stories, this is one of them.

MPennanti - 4 years ago

Thanks! I am glad this story still has some potency for you. ;)

Straxacore - 4 years ago

Still an awesome story for sure

Mechdragon1k - 6 years ago

On the other hand maybe the mother was actually abusive tearing down the child self esteem at every opportunity which was why he only got a job when he got a girlfriend. Girlfriend was the only one pushing him to make something of his self,

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Hm I see what you mean. The way I see it she already crossed a huge moral line by eating Mason, so it's easier for her to cross it again for someone she doesn't even know.

But maybe I just have too much of a crush on monstrous women. :3

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Haha I have been sitting on the next one in this series since last December, though it's only halfway written through its outline. Whoops!

Just for you I'll make an effort to get the next Aletha story out soon. Thanks for asking <3

VVVx - 7 years ago

Don't mean to be a bother, but do you plan on continuing this?

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks!

As a general rule I don't take requests/commissions, mostly because I refuse to do fandom stuff and it's difficult for me to write for kinks that I'm not interested in.

On occasion I take abstract suggestions, like one of my stories was based around someone mentioning they liked vore where it was a matter of survival for the pred.

Deleteduser89324b - 8 years ago

Nice work! Do you do requests or commissions?

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks!

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thank you, I am rather fascinated by monsters. :3

TETRO - 8 years ago

I can't remember if I've read your work before, but I'm quite impressed. Your characters posses a certain kind of, dare I say, evil I don't normally see in vore stories. Most preators are at least mostly driven by a need for food, but these characters seem to be driven specifically by the desire to kill. I feel almost as disturbed as I do aroused, but don't take that as a bad thing. You capture there point of view very believably.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks! I try to sneak soul vore in where I can. :D

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Glad you enjoyed! :D

Blahblahbum - 8 years ago

Awesome story! Love the absorption/soul vore going on here.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Haha, it's all good. I'll use my very specific set of skills to crank out the next one soon-ish.

Adseria - 8 years ago

Part of me was worried you wouldn't realise which quote I meant. The other part of me was worried that this was the end of the series!

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Oh alright, let's see how far down this rabbit hole goes. ;)

Adseria - 8 years ago

If you aren't planning to continue this series, [insert Liam Neeson quote here]

UnusualTwo - 8 years ago

if I could rate this it would get 5/5 stars

Spilch - 8 years ago

This is really, really good. It's a little bit horrifying to me how I find something so sexy about the abomination that is the pred in this story.

ryu33813 - 8 years ago

Great stuff. Still love the soul vore style dealing with memories. Would love to see more with this predator, she reminds me a bit of a villain I created for a halloween one off game a while back.

joeburp22181 - 8 years ago

Damn, such a harsh but sexy way to go!

crumplim - 8 years ago

Such an awesome character man, it'd be awesome to see more of her(:

Love you writing so much, please keep this going!

MPennanti - 8 years ago

I thought about it, especially since it'd be a fun ongoing gag (until his eventual demise through some happy accident) but the honest reason is I got greedy and wanted to see him get used up. :D

minasan - 8 years ago

I liked it but kind of wonder why she wanted to finish him off at all. Having him permanently keeping her from being hungry while still being able to eat more if she wanted to seemed ideal.

Straxacore - 8 years ago

Very nice story :)

Camlio420 - 8 years ago

Clara is cool... I like the, I'm usually too lazy for this but you've just fucked up hard enough to piss me off type characters.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

I make no guarantees. XD

hernextmeal - 8 years ago

So you're saying, if I want to wind up in a vore model's engorged stomach, I should buy a clip and ask for a refund?

Indighost - 8 years ago

Short and sweet indeed. In particular, I really liked this sentence:

"He screamed as he was pushed head-first into her esophagus, the painfully tight tube of muscle almost crushing the breath out of him as it propelled him down into the hot depths of her slender body."

It's very descriptive, it's well constructed and flows naturally and sexy as well.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks. In general I seem to tend towards prey that "deserve it", though maybe it would be fun to go the other direction and have an extremely amoral predator. XD

00000 - 8 years ago

Really love that you included some post-vore sexy time in this one! We don't see enough of that. Good writing! Any more in mind on a similar theme?

TongueCuddlingLouse - 8 years ago

Really love this idea and some really awesome post vore scenes! :D

Indighost - 8 years ago

That scrape bit makes sense.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Good points about depression being "comfortable", since that's what it is - a comfortable rut. Stasis.

I think part of the challenge of this story was choosing to make it first-person since you have a unreliable narrator. It originally was very ephemeral and dreamlike, which I tried to preserve.

I was a little torn though, since I didn't want the girl to represent a happy state, as there's a line between being okay being a loner and wanting to connect with people but choosing not to due to depression/anxiety. She comforted him, but she also isolated him and eventually killed him.

His demise was very stylized, but the scrape of her teeth at the end was the sound of the slide on a pistol, if that helps clear things up.

Indighost - 8 years ago

I like the ambition of this story a lot, the idea of using vore to give a real life lesson. I get the moral of the story and it has some relevance to any internet nerds who usually frequent a website such as this one. However i wasnt fully sold on the story itself. What did the narrator like about the monster? Are we to understand that when the narrator masturbated that he was having sex with the monster? How did he die exactly?

I think that depression could be a little better represented if the monster girl was more welcoming and sexy in the way that depression can be a very comforting choice vs the challenges of the unfair real world.

Indighost - 8 years ago

I like the ambition of this story a lot, the idea of using vore to give a real life lesson. I get the moral of the story and it has some relevance to any internet nerds who usually frequent a website such as this one. However i wasnt fully sold on the story itself. What did the narrator like about the monster? Are we to understand that when the narrator masturbated that he was having sex with the monster? How did he die exactly?

I think that depression could be a little better represented if the monster girl was more welcoming and sexy in the way that depression can be a very comforting choice vs the challenges of the unfair real world.

Kaoru - 8 years ago

Thrilling and chilling. I hope some folks get your message.

Indighost - 8 years ago

Ok

minasan - 8 years ago

I wasn't saying not to double dip :P I'd quite like more of this variety.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

I promise not to double dip too often. ;)

minasan - 8 years ago

It is quite similar to Addict. Basically the same except she didn't intentionally shrink him and didn't know how it happened plus she digested him faster.

I liked Addict though and I like this one too.

Straxacore - 8 years ago

Great story. I loved it :)

Indighost - 8 years ago

Holy shit this is totally fantastic!!! Absokutely loved this story. Excellent characters, suspense, sexiness, everything. Perfect!

deletn92b69g26 - 8 years ago

Keep the stories coming...and gods...I would love to be those witches.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

:D

deletn92b69g26 - 8 years ago

Heh. Lovely as always.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

One of the alternate titles was "Emergency Rations" XD

necryel - 8 years ago

Rabbit: Awww, you rescued me!!! Thank You so much.

Calico: Yup......gotta keep my rations handy.

Furryvoreonly - 8 months ago

Do you have any plans to write more amazing furry vore stories like this? This story is really great!

Furryvoreonly - 1 year ago

Great job with this story, hope we get to see Vera in a part two of some kind!

HungryFox3586 - 1 year ago

This story is amazing, Id love to see more of Vera some time. Maybe shed get up to some predatory shenanigans back in civilization? Shed have to be a lot more sneaky about it though ;)

TootCore - 8 years ago

You're very much welcome. c:

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Making me blush here. Glad you liked it!

Darjus - 7 years ago

Sooo romantic <3

Indighost - 8 years ago

well thanks!

Yes it's been five years, but at the time i posted it, i'd been a lurker for six years! And very glad i did that and all my other stuff, for me, making these items is somethign a little bit more than pornography :)

I can tell you've got excellent talent as a writer, more than me, so I hope you agree and continue to make awesome interesting stories that only you can make!

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks! I usually worry that my characters come off as flat, so that's pretty high praise. :D

Oh, also I re-read Liza's story the other day. Hard to believe it's been five years since you posted it, eh? Belated kudos, since I was too much of a lurker at the time to comment. :)

Indighost - 8 years ago

fantastic writing! You really make the emotions of the characters come alive.

MPennanti - 7 years ago

Thanks!

TootCore - 7 years ago

Backstory, lore, vore, some character development... What a delightfully pleasant surprise this story was. Excellent job.

MPennanti - 8 years ago

I don't see soul vore very often, so I try to contribute where I can. :)

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks Bright! I see you've been enjoying my back catalog too. ;)

MPennanti - 8 years ago

Thanks! I try to catch all the typos I can, but feel free to comment if you spot some. I'll usually take the time to fix and re-upload. :D

Readasaur - 8 years ago

That was fascinating seeing it from the perspective of Sara like that.

deletn92b69g26 - 8 years ago

I luv this. ~
Also I agree with Ixbran, I hope you make a sequel where Sara herself gets eaten.

deletef093nb49d - 8 years ago

Very nice read, though heres hoping Karma comes back to give that little bitch what she deserves

Straxacore - 8 years ago

Another great story :)

Straxacore - 8 years ago

Another great story :)

Choco0 - 6 years ago

Also I hope you'd continue doing male pred, they're my jam ^^

Choco0 - 6 years ago

Wow that was definitely sexy, I loved a lot of things there !
Just the soul vore part that was a little confusing, but I guess it's just not my thing.

Keep the amazing work !!

MPennanti - 6 years ago

Aw, I'm glad! <3

Straxacore - 6 years ago

It's still great ^_^

Straxacore - 8 years ago

Great story. One of my favs for sure :)

mojo-2131285 - 9 years ago

Very good.

htaed - 6 years ago

>Wendy fell from the pages of history forever.

You can say she went down in the anals of history.

MysteriousPlan - 7 years ago

I have to wonder what it would have been like if the Professor had teleported her instead, maybe out of curve & height envy or for being pulled out of the machine before pressing the red button at the last moment? I can imagine an Alternate ending, with Amy being told by Wendy to set up the imaging equipment, noting to also install cameras inside the teleporter as well, being inorganic and unable to affect their results. Amy, being more than intelligent enough to recognize obvious danger, protests before giving in after the future of her career is threatened and begins setup, only to look up catching a glimpse as the apple from before sails toward the button while Wendy stands right on the "X" mark grinning madly... That would certainly be one massive belly... Maybe it ends a few months later while she's talking to her brand new assistant, while sporting some bountiful curves, and mentions the "inactive" artifact needs cleaning as she chews on the end of her pen drooling...

Bright - 8 years ago

This was a really enjoyable story.
A bit of karmic destiny is always fun.

MPennanti - 9 years ago

Yeah... there was some creative license taken with where she ended up. And feel free to have her gain a bunch of weight in your headcanon, I don't mind. :D

Draconatedz - 9 years ago

Wonderful story. It felt just the right amount of wordiness and scientific flair that kept it flowing well. Excellent disposal and digestion scenes.

Darjus - 7 years ago

Congratulations, astonishing end :o

Deletn29hb626 - 8 years ago

Very tantalizing story, I love the soul vore element.

Bright - 8 years ago

Nicely written. Both an aesop and a vore story.

MPennanti - 9 years ago

The Conspiracy of Gregs!

ruinedhaze1920 - 9 years ago

Man, two stories with intersting questions put into light, first was quickfood911's story of "what is your life worth in total?" and now this story with the question of "What would you do in the afterlife?" My answer is easy because I know I am selfish and would not waste my time with others frankly because they wouldn't for me.

Still it is nice to see a guy make amends for a mistake but Celadon was right ultimately, mistakes are made and you have to let go, not hang on to the past.

Good read and good choice of wording I found both this story and the story written by quickfood911 very interesting.

Straxacore - 9 years ago

^_^ Cool. I'm glad you like my stories too

MPennanti - 9 years ago

Thanks! I actually just re-read "Snowstorms and Brownies" the other day. :D

Straxacore - 9 years ago

Great story. You have got my attention ^_^

Littledude - 9 years ago

That was a lengthy digestion to be sure, but you handled the pacing well enough that it never got cathartic. The playing sequences were entertaining and Simon managed to be both deserving of yet pitiable in his fate.

MPennanti - 9 years ago

Thanks! And yeah, that's the fun thing about shrinking, it allows the pred to stay in their element. :)

MPennanti - 9 years ago

There are a couple of other ideas I had, though I might do one-offs for a while. :)

Draconatedz - 9 years ago

I'm sad it's over.

Anymore story plans for you? I love your work.

QuickFood911 - 9 years ago

Eagerly awaiting for the next chapter.

QuickFood911 - 9 years ago

Great Series! The suspense is really great and I am empathizing with the characters.

Draconatedz - 9 years ago

I really like where I think this is headed.

Diamonte - 9 years ago

Very nice!

It looks like the Overseer is the mole? Better digest some more men to relieve the tension. :D

JayJane - 9 years ago

I just binge read all 8 chapters. SOO GOOD.

I know none of us want to get rid of the vore, but I have to say, the concept of purely soul vore could easily carry this to something like a TV show.
It just has such a great concept behind it!!! I want to see more of everything!!!

Squall - 9 years ago

This is an example of a great story. Fleshed out, settings described well, even backstory and character angst. A "little" more description about the act itself wouldn't hurt, and potential for continuation with the main character coping with internal issues could lead to problems in future episodes. This gets two thumbs up from me. Thank you, sir.

Bright - 8 years ago

Ooh, that ending, spooky.

ryanshowseason3 - 10 years ago

Haven't been reading this series but the end there was an excellent twist. Bravo. I may have to use that device someday.

Caesar - 10 years ago

Well done! The flow is excellent and you have made Alex and her counterpart interesting and engaging. And that twist at the end! Can't wait for the next part!

Bright - 8 years ago

Really like this setting so far.

QuickFood911 - 10 years ago

This is turning to be a great series. Great story again!

Redpod - 10 years ago

mcioe

QuickFood911 - 10 years ago

Great story!
But couldn't understand these lines "Pissed off and frustrated as I was, I did something that I wasn't supposed to. I focused everything about my prisoner into my throbbing unreachable clit." Is there some consequence because of that?

Diamonte - 10 years ago

Excellent pair of stories. This was how vore was meant to be!
Great world building and plot without any extraneous bits to slow the story down. Female predator in charge at all times, so sexy.

f4k3n4m3is1234 - 10 years ago

All i can say is wow. (Two great stories in a week!?!)

Redpod - 10 years ago

ncie ja

Bright - 8 years ago

Nicely done.

Sarkopheros - 9 years ago

It's rare for a story on here to hold my attention. You write very well.

FrozenTear89 - 9 years ago

Liked the moment when she asked him to breath all way out. Very nice story, going to read next parts!

QuickFood911 - 10 years ago

Great story. Loved the twist about the guy being innocent.

f4k3n4m3is1234 - 10 years ago

Well written, well sorted, well tagged.
and most importantly:
enjoyable story!
Good job with this written Work MPennanti!