blakdyfrst - 7 years ago

But doesn't that burn you out? At some point after writing, I can start to lose focus. This is troubling because I never run out of ideas.

Aces - 7 years ago

Persistence. I discipline myself to put out one chapter each week normally, aiming for 6 pages, excluding when I take a hiatus. If I am in a writing mood, I write as much as I can. I also write beyond what is actually published, regardless of if I met my quota or if I am on hiatus or not. This provides a buffer for my audience so they always get their 1 chapter a week, even if I have 10 to post.

blakdyfrst - 7 years ago

It's a dance of lust and enthrallment. I tried from chapter 1 to just finish the job and every time I got close, I'd soften up because of AMAZING PLOT. Talk about infinite teasing.

Nonetheless this story arc is out of this world! You have to teach me how you pump out these big long chapters!

Argh - 8 years ago

Jeremy' suffering at Juno's greedy hands is some of the hottest stuff I've ever read. I don't know what your future plans are for the story, but I personally have my finger's crossed that he ends up as a particularly thick layer of fat on Juno. Well done on another great chapter!

deletn92b69g26 - 8 years ago

Probably so. I think he just wants to shoot Zuren and kill him outright. That's the most logical reason.

Bellyl0ver - 6 years ago

Why do women fail to see that chubby is sexy?

Aces - 8 years ago

Woo! :U

Argh - 8 years ago

Oops, ha ha. Well, I love your fallout stories as a replacement compliment!

Aces - 8 years ago

I didn't draw this. :T Check the description...

Argh - 8 years ago

She looks so so so good. Nothing is better than post-vore weight gain, and you draw it so well!

TheGoldKeeper118 - 6 years ago

Shes a big woman O_o

keirons13 - 6 years ago

i've tried looking for the story on how she got those vorish abilities but i couldn't find it could you send me a link or the name to the thing please?

Royal_Starlord - 8 years ago

She cute. :///3

ChaoskampfNunc - 8 years ago

Love the tight fitting dress <3 Shows off that beautiful belly

MrDanMrCool - 8 years ago

Man this story is so good i find my self waiting for the next chapter and excited to read it when it does!

ImmortalNutcase - 2 years ago

Imagine the dad rounds the corner with his arms folded like: “Gonna just tell me what, hmm?”

ElJorro - 3 years ago

She should be grateful! Purified Water is a scarce resource in the Wasteland.

RossTheEmeraldFox - 8 years ago

Awwh man.. Now I rally feel like I should get to the story.. But I don't have time >~<

RossTheEmeraldFox - 8 years ago

My god.. As an art and not a story?.. Finally! I always looked at it and went "I should really read that sometime.." But then went "Nahh.. Reading is for NERDS!" X3

Sarethas - 8 years ago

Why is it that Amelia always manages to make me snicker. :P

Also, Zuzen seems like he might get into more trouble than he can handle with Violet. At least they're both having fun though. :3

Larkspurdiblock - 8 years ago

Hmm, I hope that Amelia finds someone; I quite like her.

Aces - 8 years ago

I revised chapter 1 and the prologue. She's actually 14 now, but she's still the "little sister" and thus may appear to be growing up a little slower than her brother--especially in the absence of peers.

Kaoru - 8 years ago

Also, your ability to write casual dialogue and character interaction, and scene-or-context specific dialogue, is top kek right now. Dialogue often frustrates me in stories when it feels forced, so this is a particular delight for me. :D

Sarethas - 8 years ago

So, I have to ask. I'm assuming that Amelia's problem with the nightstalker was relatively recent, so why is Jeremy so unconcerned with what might happen out there? Or is Amelia older than she's coming across as, because she seems to be acting like an 11-year old.

Kaoru - 8 years ago

Comparing this to Little Lamia in the Big City is like comparing a competent freshman writer to a published, budding author. I liked LLitBC, but I absolutely adore this. I've always been a fan of your writing on a lot of levels, but you've got a firm grasp of how character development and interaction works, now. How to make different dynamics between characters feel natural - you have real, complex, multi-faceted characters whose behavior changes depending on the situation and their company.

Competing motivations. Developing stories and good humor. An emerging world. It's honestly pretty fantastic. I don't want to give you an ego (or put pressure on you,) but to me this series is miles ahead of almost any other fiction on this site, especially that's currently ongoing.

I even like how the overarching storylines are developing (slowly,) the balance between casual character interaction, plot, and raunchy shenanigans... The biggest criticism I can give is that you only release one chapter a week! ;~;

But, in all sincerity. What you're doing is good, keep pushing in that direction. This and District 9 are really shaping up to be stories I can come back to again and again.

The only serious criticism I have is (ironically) to keep putting the characters in situations that challenge them. We've seen the bedroom dynamic with Jeremy & Juno (although revisiting it down the line, especially with the way her mindset is evolving, would be fine!) - we've seen it with Zuzen and Violet, we've seen the dynamic between Amelia and Zuzen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter because it gives Amelia the chance to establish herself independently of Zuzen. Look for opportunities to endanger, challenge, and vex your characters. Frustrate them. Make them jump through hoops to get what they want.

In a nutshell, I'm telling you to keep making them suffer. Keep up the drama, keep up the action, and if people say that the close escapes and cliffhangers are getting stale, remember that mixing up different sorts of chapter-end cliffhangers with moments of peace or accomplishment, moments of humor, and moments of introspection or deep thought, are basically the staple for episodic television, ongoing books, and almost any form of story we tell.

P.S.: The inverted dynamics between Zuzen/Amelia and Jeremy/Juno are great. Somehow, this fucked up, dysfunctional family being teasily, dangerously awful to each other is just, fantastic. <3

Larkspurdiblock - 8 years ago

Heh, heh, I like this Dr. Smiles character! Same British politeness of Codsworth with just a hint of Medic's complete and utter disregard for standards!

RossTheEmeraldFox - 8 years ago

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Deska - 8 years ago

Please and thank you! ;3

Aces - 8 years ago

>.> *writes down ideas*

YesImCanadian - 8 years ago

I know Dr. Smiles is a Mr. Handy, but I couldn't help but make him sound like Curie.

ElJorro - 3 years ago

Ah...sibling rivalry.

SoggyPine - 6 years ago

Strange.
Deathclaws don't usually eat their sibling.
They actually are know to be very protective over each other.
I believe you may have made a mistake on your story.
Although It is understandable, most people don't come back after encountering a Deathclaw.

ςοгα - 8 years ago

pretty cool lovin the series on chapter 9 (^•ω•^)

LordDantai - 8 years ago

Yeah, She looks much more like the little sister deathclaw she should be. I tip my hat to you and to ndnode.

Aces - 8 years ago

Like the new, smaller Amelia?

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

Gotcha.
That makes sense. Though that means that sooner or later it won't be a fake out. Which could leave for some rather intriguing scenarios. Either way, rest assured I will be still be reading.

Aces - 9 years ago

It could be that I am trying to get the opposite effect. C: Boy Who Cried Wolf and all.

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

Shit, I meant but I will confess, not that I will admit for the second time. Christ, I suck at typing sometimes. X_X

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

I will admit, this stories aren't usually my type of bag, but I will admit, this is something about it that keeps me coming back for me. Though, if I want to be honest, the whole "fake out" thing is getting old. It kinda removes all tension at this point. Why even end on a cliff hanger? We all know the main character is going to get out come next chapter. So leaving ominous words that tease a death is entirely pointless.

Demicus - 9 years ago

Heee, game mechanics as described by the characters! I like it!

Ursa - 9 years ago

Gosh this is the fucking hottest story I've ever seen around here, thanks a lot for posting it, this kind of content is so rare I am really happy to find your stuff.
It just has everything I love - male pred, curvy female, bondage, force-feeding and aaagh this was terribly perfect. Also fallout vore, DAMN! So good.

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

Reform is called "replication" but it's pretty much reform.

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RadGrPGmnso

Here ya go. The trailer of the lost Fallout mmo. :P

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

I think it was suppose to come out at the same time as Fallout 3: Van Buren. But you know Interplay went under, and Bethesda bought them. :P

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

There was a planned fallout mmo back when Interplay owned it. Look up fallout online trailer. It's done in the style of 50's cartoons explaining the reform test and then at the end, we see it done in the real life sytle that fallout 1 and 2 did as we see a failed reform test subject get beaten to death by cultists.

Hurtthrower579 - 2 years ago

I would have done something but I'm bad at thinking of what to write.

Aces - 2 years ago

It turned into a bit of a train wreck once other people started contributing. I don't think it's salvageable at this point. I sure haven't forgotten about it but I'd definitely have to start from scratch.

It's too bad Aryion doesn't let me decide who can contribute to the story. I can't block people either. All it takes is one person either trolling or just incredibly bad at writing to trash the whole story.

Hurtthrower579 - 2 years ago

6 years ago. My this interactive story rest in peace like every single one that came before, and that have and will come after for not being finished.

Hollowedvessel - 3 years ago

I would be interested to see more of this.

AColdDayInHell - 7 years ago

Ah okay, alright then

ElJorro - 3 years ago

I have only recently discovered this comic...but I can already tell I will enjoy it. It combines three of my favorite things: The Fallout Series, Vore Bellies, and the indubitably talented NdNode! Onward!

LillyBells - 8 years ago

No offense, this is still amazing and great but Amelia looked better in the scrapped version ((' IN MY OPINION ))

EuritheSnek - 1 year ago

Oof, the feels there.
also, youre going to hate me but
"Eagerly i wished the morrow, vainly i had sought to borrow
from my books surcease from sorrow, sorrow for the lost Lenore
for the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore
nameless here, forever more."

Gabriel0813 - 9 years ago

Nice job man

Kaoru - 9 years ago

Very well done. A good slice-of-life chapter with some real gravitas. I've liked all the others, but sometimes you need something like this. It did feel weird having the first nightmare we see serve as a giant, linear exposition dump though, as dreams rarely work that way.

viny - 2 years ago

Go outside and have fun for once

Aces - 2 years ago

:thonk:

BIGBIG - 2 years ago

OO snap I never kneeew! Well I guess she chonk now ¯\_( ツ )_/¯

Browhatthefckeventhis - 2 years ago

You made a character immortal and you don’t even know what immortality means? Buddy anything immortal can die from virtually anything besides natural causes such as aging. That’s the whole concept of immortality. Not invulnerability. Like every human on the planets aware of this concept.

Mythic - 8 years ago

Fukin rip

zoroark720 - 6 years ago

ya he look fine on her rump

Gabriel0813 - 9 years ago

I kind of want to give her a hug she look so down

GUEST19216 - 9 years ago

Yeah, sure fine...although she should know by now she looks adorable and sexy ^^

AngelSony - 5 years ago

What a scene! So much suspence! But it came all ok~ I came from the comic and will deffinitely read all from the start now!

thespyfurry69 - 5 years ago

junos greatest power; being a bitch

Wolfknight130 - 8 years ago

This proves you dont need a huge open world to tell a good story (granted the vore is nice) but you really feel for the characters.

I almost wish I had Zuzen's powers, to be part death claw. That'd be kind of cool, even in just the game. OH! they could make that a new mod, or atleast a quest to meet the family or something.

pendingdeletew092423 - 9 years ago

Part of me was hoping she'd digest him, but oh well...

ruinedhaze1920 - 9 years ago

Oh shit dude, will Jeremy actually die? He was probably the MOST human person in the group, speaking in terms of no mutations and no ability to eat people. He's personally my favorite character as he seems to remind me so far that the wastelend of the future has room for normal people just fighting to survive.

Larkspurdiblock - 9 years ago

Oh, you clever bastard, you. You really know how to put people in suspense, you know that?

BigD - 7 years ago

Yeah, don't know what happened xD I kept on scrolling down right after the part where Amelia swallows Zuzen, but it wouldn't go any further. I think I was trying to scroll down the page instead of your story xDD

Aces - 7 years ago

~~~
“Your wha?—Oh that's what you said... Oh shit.” She facepalms. “Fuck, I'm sorry. One second!” Without question, she stands right up and turns around. She starts to squeeze her stomach from below. Great, now she's going to lose her whole breakfast. Well, she'd rather just play along than piss off this boy. He could probably just rip her open if he had to. Within moments, she vomits up Amelia, who splatters to the ground in a torrent of hot, sizzling mushy stomach slop.
~~~

From the last chapter. :P

BigD - 7 years ago

Nvm, I think I'm blind..... And I even triple checked to see if I wasn't an idiot and missed a part....... Regardless of my own need for new eyes, amazing story. ;)

Aces - 7 years ago

I think you missed a substantial part of the last chapter, because Amelia is explicitly released from Violet. The chapter ends with Amelia arguing with Violet. That wouldn't be possible inside of a stomach.

BigD - 7 years ago

Basically, chapter 3 ends with Amelia eating Zuzen. Chapter 4 starts with Zuzen outside of Amelia's stomach, Violet POOFS into existance near them and so does Vaas's gang. And later you hinted at the fact that Violet ate Amelia.

TheLibrarian - 6 years ago

*looks up at juno and hugs her* big fluffy deathclaw, best deathclaw!

Royal_Starlord - 9 years ago

At least Jeremy has a whole lotta woman to enjoy! :3

ruinedhaze1920 - 9 years ago

There is already a man who kills people with only a hand puppet in the canon comic series of fallout.
But also yeah, the parents so far in these last two chapters have been invisible or at least not mentioned. Ah well, the last two chapters were great, can't wait to see what happens next.

Aces - 9 years ago

Next chapter actually.

VoraciousArtistry - 9 years ago

So we now have a man who is more deranged than every other entity in the wastelands, I'm curious to see what's going to happen with that particular lunatic.

Oh, and when are we getting back to the parents?

HellBlaze - 3 years ago

Wow, after barely 2 chapter of the 100 I'm 100% invested into this story! Can't wait to read all the chapters!

Aces - 9 years ago

That means a lot. Thank you.

ruinedhaze1920 - 9 years ago

I honestly sit here day after day waiting for a post from you, you write some really interesting stories.

deletn92b69g26 - 9 years ago

MMMMMMMMM...making me shiver with excitement good sir. I eagerly await next chapter.~

Aces - 9 years ago

I have something very specific in mind for next chapter. :O

Mechdragon1k - 8 years ago

I also find it cute, and nice with the spice of danger.

Aces - 9 years ago

Quick note: Wasn't a fan of the name Samantha, so I just changed it to Juno.

Aces - 9 years ago

I haven't done writing commissions in ages and they're hardly cheap, but if you're interested, send me a PM and we'll discuss pricing.

Wolfhound9 - 9 years ago

More storys pls and keep continuing the story too :) i really like this so much. commission me if chance? My character is a wolf his name Zandro.

Deska - 9 years ago

Nice to see you back into the writing swing! Wish you the best of luck with funding a small comic with this project, and hopefully more writing too come ^^

JacktheGreen - 7 years ago

This is a phenomenal first chapter :) This has got my definite attention

Aces - 9 years ago

Expect more. I didn't even get all that deep into it just yet. c:

pendingdelet032h2439 - 9 years ago

that was awesome. love bbw dom vore

ken115 - 9 years ago

good story

KevinK1993 - 3 years ago

Having a map like this with all these locations... sounds like you've really put a lot of thought into these countries and where each location is within them.

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Hahaha that ls classic “fuck it say something ridiculous” right there

Aces - 4 years ago

Akeshlahab'lakesh (ah-kesh-lah-hab-lah-kesh) or just Akeshlahab for short was a nation with Arabic and Persian inspired themes to it whose name was inspired by an old Tzar RTS map that I developed for a custom game back when LAN parties were a thing.

I asked my friend what I should call the map. He blurts out, "Akesh... lahab... lakesh." And spits everywhere.

And I went, "Great. Perfect. That's the name."

"Wait you're fucking serious?"

"Map saved. Let's play."

Apostolos - 4 years ago

One of those just looks like you got tired and slammed a hand on the keys

sweetladyamy - 8 years ago

That's...really cool. I definitely bookmarked the tool.

TheGreatDegenerate - 2 years ago

Just to let you know, this site: https://www.pngitem.com/middle/himoTRx_fallout-4-deathclaw-human-hybrid-hd-png-download/ stole the artwork and removed ndnode’s watermark

Aikahime - 9 years ago

I always liked that hybrid characters such as this are technically not impossible in the world of Fallout, considering all the scientific experiments. And the fact that vore isn't impossible either. Spore plants and Nightstalkers can eat people

NekoYuki - 9 years ago

Don't worry. Ella will still love and look after him.

Aces - 9 years ago

In fact this character wouldn't exist to begin with if I hadn't roleplayed with that person. The only reason I don't have a commission of this character from them is because they haven't been open for commissions in years.

Aces - 9 years ago

In fact this character wouldn't exist to begin with if I hadn't roleplayed with that person.

Readasaur - 9 years ago

Oh, Jarome... -_-

Aces - 9 years ago

Yes. c:

Readasaur - 9 years ago

Wait, is his whole rap-sheet just the result of his ravenous appetite for women?

Aces - 10 years ago

http://aryion.com/g4/view/247675 Well, read and decide for yourself.

TheBlueEnigma - 10 years ago

Doubtful, I'm the kind of person who gets pissed off by guys like this.

timdavis - 9 years ago

Wow, I'm surprised at how much I like this.

Michael Palic - 11 years ago

Oh holy shit, that was incredibly hot, very nice!

ilbv - 11 years ago

My God I love this

LastRider100 - 11 years ago

that was amazing, GJ

silverspec - 11 years ago

That was pretty cool.

Aces - 13 years ago

Well mind you a bed of that size only serves one naga. :P

Kaoru - 13 years ago

"Also, chapter 14 is finished being written. Currently proof reading. Should be done by early next week."

Ooh, I can't wait! Also, very interesting design on the apartment. That bed looks almost comically small compared to the giant couch and bath. I wonder if they rent that apartment specifically for nagas, or if she just had to look for an apartment with 'gigantic bath' as a requirement?

Friendlykailangel - 13 years ago

You used floorplanner. ^^

Eurodex - 14 years ago

xD

Aces - 14 years ago

xD I had a feeling you'd get a kick out of this.

Eurodex - 14 years ago

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Frakass - 14 years ago

Wow... You just did a great job for the speech bubble ! Now, this drawing is PERFECT (in all modesty) ^^

Bright - 14 years ago

Got a good smile out of that one.

Aces - 14 years ago

Something like that. <.<

Dragga - 14 years ago

I take it this is the lil' lady who has a bad habit of losing track of the catboys she takes in? ;P

Gloom - 14 years ago

Very sweet looking lady~

Tetravexitus - 6 years ago

The name of a dragon..I recall. This is wicked.