Guzzlord1an - 1 year ago

Oh, you know they are!

cerealkillerx - 1 year ago

It’s a proven fact that ditzy college girls are naturally delicious! :P

Guzzlord1an - 1 year ago

It's okay if you don't want to spoil but what are some of the other movies you're planning on covering? I've never really watched that many campy monster movies so it's unlikely there will be one I'm familiar with, but I'm hoping.

Guzzlord1an - 1 year ago

Haha, your Little Shop of Horrors stories are among my favorites of yours, so that name immediately stood out. That interconnectivity is an awesome idea! Maybe you could connect to other stories like Pioneering Plays and the like too.

And ah, it's unfortunate Brisby will survive (from my POV that is). I guess being a pretty young woman in this universe doesn't automatically make you monster fodder haha. But we'll see.

Narrows - 1 year ago

Good memory. Was thinking Marcus from my Little Shop of Horrors story could have an uncle in the organization just for the sake of wanton inter connectivity and shared universes.

Won’t have anything untoward happening to young Agent Brisby, though. I like her too much.

cerealkillerx - 1 year ago

Dark and nefarious plans are brewing! ;) Glad to see a continuation of the further adventures of Abigail Haggsonn and her pet snake! ^^

cerealkillerx - 1 year ago

Dark and nefarious are brewing! ;) Glad to see a continuation of the further adventures of Abigail Haggsonn! ^^

Randomdude5 - 1 year ago

Personally I didn't care for the anthro mutt girl being eaten, but I consider this story to be build-up. I am greatly anticipating the next one. The build-up in this story is excellent. You gave enough details that I can infer that Eleanore Rosas is planning about having Figgs eat someone as the live sacrifice in her party.

Sure everything might go as planned, but there might be a plot twist. Who know what will happen? IDK if Figgs might eat Eleanore, or if Eleanore might try to find a way to get Figgs to eat Abigail. I consider both of these unlikely. I think that it is most likely that Eleanore will have Figgs eat a non-magical human girl.

Whatever happens, I am hoping that a hot girl gets swallowed by Figgs, and that there are spells so people can see inside Figg's stomach like Provost Siccarix's "Transparency Veil" during Abigail's trial for Figgs swallowing Cecelia. I am also hoping that there is a spell so the girl that is swallowed can breathe inside Figgs' stomach.


Anyways, great job with the plot in this story. You have me curious and anticipating the next one.

cerealkillerx - 1 year ago

Anytime! ^^ I think I’ve already asked this before, but I’d certainly would love to give your personal project a read ^^

Narrows - 1 year ago

May be a bit before I’m fully back in the groove - gave myself a deadline for Jan 1st to finish a personal writing project I’ve been slogging through. Still, thank you for the kind words! They’re a big motivator for me to return to the vore grind!

cerealkillerx - 1 year ago

It’s good to see you back in the saddle my friend! ^^ I’ve sorely missed reading your amazing vore stories and what better way to herald your return than reward us with a deliciously spooky and cautionary tale!

Randomdude5 - 1 year ago

I have a conspiracy theory. The Hagsons and the Haggsonns are the same family. They might have changed their name, and blamed all their misdeeds on the Hagsons, or there was a family spit, and one part of the family changed their last name and put 2 Gs and Ns in it.

To say whether Abigail is a witch or a hag, would need an objective definition to compare her too.

I actually like the idea of headfirst, fatal unwilling vore in this setting if there is a spell, so the girl being eaten can breathe inside Figgs' stomach.

Narrows - 1 year ago

Thank you! A detailed description of digestion was an ask as part of the trade, glad you enjoyed it!
I will admit, however, that willing, nonfatal and feetfirst vore is actually the opposite of my preferred headfirst, fatal and nonwilling vore but I'm really not against any type of vore with female prey.

TheHumanPred - 2 years ago

Nice ! Totally need to check them out one day

Narrows - 2 years ago

Thank you for the kind words! I agree that hard vore in general doesn't have a strong presence on Ekas but I guess it's a matter of taste. I have more shark and lion hard vore stories over on my DA account, I hope to transfer them over sooner or later.

TheHumanPred - 2 years ago

Deep Blue Sea was an awesome movie. Need to see the two sequels one day.

Also thinking about it, I am surprise by the lack of Shark Pred + Hard Vore stories on aryion.

Guzzlord1an - 2 years ago

See my story for Narrows here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/871713

CoolKaios - 2 years ago

Well i do appreciate the continuity~

Narrows - 2 years ago

Aye, though the SVP Foundation is a creation of Guzzlelord - though they may pop up again in future collaborations!

Narrows - 2 years ago

Those Illuminati mid-maxing bastards!!

Narrows - 2 years ago

Guzzlelord did have an idea for a post-credit type scene, I hope to get to it soon!

grz01 - 2 years ago

Incredibly hot, love the detail of the worms - s well written too.

Narrows - 2 years ago

Small worms with big appetites are always a fun pred. It's my first time trying them out and they've been a blast!

Narrows - 2 years ago

Indeed - and the real buffet is just about to start!

cerealkillerx - 2 years ago

So, the plot “thickens,” as they say. And so does the ravenous worms that greedily gorge themselves on delicious orc women meat! :P

Morphy - 2 years ago

I forgot to say this in the first chapter but there was a 13 part commish (belonging to Arainasc) that reminded me of little stretchy worms from the swamp over on Hentai Foundry...

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Arainasc

"Forbidden Treasure" parts 1 through 13

nornboy - 4 months ago

If you want an additional Twi’lek plotbunny, the memes about the source of the dress the Ewoks gave Leia being some unfortunate woman who was shipwrecked on Endor and fell afoul of the cannibalistic teddybears.

She’s a finely-trained, expensive Twi’lek courtesan whose master was killed along with the rest of the crew when their ship crashed. She’s sure if she finds civilization she can seduce a local to let her borrow a hypercomm and call for pickup and it initially seems to be working as she’s stripped, prodded and oiled, only to discover too late it’s not for an orgy like she expected.

She thought they were prodding and smearing oozy material onto her breasts, ass, thighs and lekku because they saw her as a sex object, rather than because they were testing the meat quality and applying marinade.

Possibly there’s a bit of unrecognizable meat left over for Leia to unwittingly eat when she arrives as a honored guest rather than a meal herself due to her friendship with the golden god?

umayo - 7 months ago

Wonderful writing. I especially liked the varied and creative similies describing the girls' slippery slides. Great introduction and buildup as well. To me, the suspense of wondering how a story's characters will meet their fate can be more enjoyable than a graphic depiction of their demise, but finding such a good plot is rare (notwithstanding jokes about enjoying this sort of content 'for the plot'...).

Only very minor complaint is that the third twi'lek's turn was a little anticlimactic.

The sarlacc has always had a special place in my heart as one of my first vore memories. I remember spending quite a bit of time perusing its page in the Star Wars encyclopedia I had as a child... really, together with the rancor, whatever Jabba was up to, and the more conventionally enticing dancers, the whole first act of Return of the Jedi feels like a softcore porno :P

Randomdude5 - 2 years ago

A week to a month would have made a lot more sense for the digestion time. Star Wars could ret-con it if they wanted. It is not like they haven't made all of the expanded universe non-canon. One way might be saying that the 1000 years of digestion was just Hutt fear tactics.
"Hey fans! I hope you weren't dumb enough to believe what our movie said."

Narrows - 2 years ago

Agreed on the 1000 years of digestion. Chances are Ara-Khan and her team will expire long before that, however it still stands to be a very unpleasant experience for them. Thanks for the comment, I also think Sarlaccs are a great pred!

Randomdude5 - 2 years ago

That was unexpected. Nice work on that idea. Sarlacc's make great preds even tho 1000 years of digestion is ridiculous. The only thing that would have made it better, would be if there was some part about what the ladies in the sarlacc's stomach were doing.

EnglishGamer - 7 days ago

Hi,

Since it looks like this is going to be on the backburner could you possibly post the outline for the rest of this story? give us an idea on what was going to happen?

EnglishGamer - 8 months ago

Hi, are you going to continue this series or has the commissioner decided not to keep paying for this?

EnglishGamer - 1 year ago

Always a good read through this series. Any ETA on the next chapter? Ramma may be too late to save the elf maidens.

PrinnyDood - 2 years ago

Well, I'm very happy if I can be a motivational boost when the story is this good!

Ohhh, you're coming up on the conclusion? Well, I can't wait to see how it ends, I'm sure it'll be a hell of a ride (hopefully with a healthy dose of voreness) however it concludes! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing it! :D

Narrows - 2 years ago

Thanks for your kind words and encouragement, it's a huge boost every time! Your theory was indeed correct, a moment of leverage that may or may not lead to deeper commitments. Only a few chapters left on this bad boy, I'll try to be quicker on the uploads this time around!

ouphe - 2 years ago

I like Fens.
Agreed. *eyeroll* Officers.

Narrows - 2 years ago

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

gonzodingo - 2 years ago

This was such a good read!

Narrows - 2 years ago

Appreciate the kind words! May have a bit of some internal scenes down the line, but the commissioner of this tale asked for the victims to get crunched up pretty good when they're eaten. Might not have too many examples of prey being swallowed both whole and alive - still, there are many preds to be had on the Planet of the Dinosaurs, it isn't an impossibility!

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

This looks cool, but I would like to see the pred insides,

Reggirt - 2 years ago

When are we going to see chapter 2?

cerealkillerx - 2 years ago

Anytime! ^^ They definitely a rarity, usually it’s elves, but honestly I like my women with a little meat on their bones ;)

Narrows - 2 years ago

Much appreciated, always enjoy hearing your feedback! I agree that buff, tough and rough ladies aren’t eaten nearly enough! So much protein!

cerealkillerx - 2 years ago

It’s always an absolute joy to read your pulp and dark fantasy material and this is probably one of the best ones you’ve written in my opinion. The world is so richly detailed and feels truly lived in. Also I’m a huge sucker for sweaty and hulking orc women and as dinner no less! It’s pretty rare to see them on the menu for once lol. Not gonna lie I pictured Agara as Zargala from Raid: Shadow Legends. I’m very eager to read the next chapter and see if Agara’s fellow orc sistren meet the same digestive fate

Narrows - 2 years ago

Thanks my friend! I'll admit, I do enjoy adding a bit of narrative to my fetish. Makes the vore itself feel a little more immersive!

cerealkillerx - 2 years ago

As an avid fan of both Warhanmer 40k and Mass Effect this story is deliciously grotesque! I love it ^^

EnglishGamer - 2 years ago

Are you ever going to come back to this? There is criminally little Warhammer vore.

frostiey - 2 years ago

Well she should be cut out of that troll be fore she dies, i wonder how many will be cut out in total

Narrows - 3 years ago

Thank you, my friend! So glad you enjoyed it! Your comments are always a big boost and a big motivator! And yes, as a Warhammer guy myself, it is true that ork boyz tend to lack an anti-large bonus as well as a movement penalty for swampy terrain. Luckily, Rama is a hero character with high armor, so-damage and spell resistance (as all Sunderskull infantry has). Should be a good match, though he’ll have to hurry to save Al’lia. Elven maidens have a racial weakness to digestive damage!

PrinnyDood - 3 years ago

Great chapter! Probably my favorite so far, at least with regards to the vore content!

Loved the atmosphere and descriptions, and I've been long-wondering how the aftermath of that battle would play out. This hit all the right notes - Very much enjoyed the emphasis on all those lovely, prideful, defiant elf-ladies being consigned to ignoble fates inside troll-stomachs. Not to mention their implied experience once eaten, with the subtle struggles and protests nervously observed by Al’lia. Sexy elf-maidens having a tough time remains among my most cherished themes. Easily some of my favorite kinky vore-bits I've read from you yet!

That said, the ending is also an intriguing cliffhanger, and by the look of things, the sexy elf-girls might be about to catch a break after all?

Because given the stellar track-record of Ramma and his boyz, I'd put my money on them vs the trolls (even if my experience with Total War: Warhammer tells me that regenerating monster-size units are pretty hard on melee-focused armies).

Even more intriguing though, is the message that spurred them into that conflict. Unless my shoddy memory is acting up, this raises some questions about what's happening back at the Sunderskull Encampment.

Why would he order the release & aid of the Avelorni?
Very curious . . . but depending on how things played out at the Sunderskull Encampment, could Taldeer's planned rescue have put him in a position where she could apply pressure in that direction? I'm eager to see the next chapter, that's for certain!

Anyway, sorry for the long, rambling comment there. I just kinda wrote it stream-of-consciousness.

Concise Version: Love the sexy voreness AND the mysterious, tense plotting! Looking forward to seeing where all the twists and turns (and elf-maidens) ultimately end up! Love how well this is all coming together, gotta say.

TVSS - 3 years ago

I already said what i thinking on Deviantart. But still, it's great work. Continue like that ! :)

doomfister - 3 years ago

Also here is her character ref if your curious:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/752776

doomfister - 3 years ago

Aye, i took alot of inspiration from antiquity when i designed her, I am just glad :iconnarrows: liked it enough to write a short story ;)

BeautifulBad9 - 3 years ago

Interesting lillith connection, what with her originally being a deamon and first wife of Adam, then with the goat, you know your shit I must say

unicorn - 3 years ago

Lovely! You do anthro stuff quite well

EnglishGamer - 3 years ago

Double post? You are spoiling us.

Stanku - 3 years ago

An interesting idea and a marvelous execution; in other words, nothing less that I'd expect from you!

Reggirt - 3 years ago

It's good to see that you are still active, I can't wait to see where you'll go with this story.

PrinnyDood - 3 years ago

Well, sorry the feedback was so (ridiculously) late this time, but better late than never, I guess!

Yeah, but methinks the Rock Drake forgot to read the fine print about the possible soporific side-effects of those oily elf-ladies. xD

Narrows - 3 years ago

Thank you my friend, it's always a huge boost to read your feedback! And yes, during talks for this chapter the Rock Drake's lawyer made it clear that his client get to devour at least three lithe and oily lady dark elves. I think it turned out for the best. Look forward to see what you think of chapter 6, hope it tickles your fancy!

PrinnyDood - 3 years ago

Just saw chapter 6 pop up, and thought: 'wait, I thought 5 was next', and then realized I'd missed chapter 5. I need really to pay better attention, I guess.

So yeah: Good stuff! As always, fantastic work on the descriptive language, and action in particular. And the vore-sequences remain a huge treat as well, naturally. The Rock Drake does get all the ladies, doesn't he? xD

And the continuing plot is also very much riveting. Interesting to see more of Kallo's background, and very curious to see how current events play out, since Mr. Sunderskull certainly seems to have gotten himself into a bind. It seems unlikely for his story to end there, but how he could get out of this one, I can't speculate.

Great work, and I'll definitely read Chapter 6 as soon as I get the chance!

EnglishGamer - 3 years ago

Sorry to be a bother but is it possible we can have an update for this story?

EnglishGamer - 3 years ago

Always nice to come back to this series. Can't wait to see what Voreish wonders you grace us with.

Dracoshippuden961 - 11 months ago

It was a pleasant read. I admit I got confused at the end.

The Pred was 10/10 I just loved it.

Tsuki Uzaki is, in my opinion, a much better prey than her daughters. So the part where she started getting swallowed was my favorite.

Narrows - 3 years ago

Very much appreciated, my friend. Your comments are always a huge encouragement and I am glad you enjoyed the story. I hope to keep the content coming now that I'm back in writing shape so stay tuned!

PerilStories2020 - 3 years ago

Oh gosh, this was absolutely great!

I know I sound like a broken record but your skill at writing straight horror is nothing short of impeccable. You describe the monster so vividly and disgustingly, and the way it hides the bones of it's victims through-ought it's lair and in the house itself is chilling (special credit to the skull that it seems to use to taunt Hana before and after eating her mother). Also really love how you depict the beastie's intelligence - not humanlike at all but still a clearly smart creature, particularly how it cleans and repairs the house once it's meal is finished.

I also really enjoy the way you abruptly shift gears to comedy, like when we go from the horrific image of Hana being forced to watch her little sister's body being dragged beneath the floorboards to the traumatized girl having to listen to her mother gloat about how she's still able to fit into her high school swimsuit. I think it gives the whole thing a surreal feel that really fits Hana's perspective on the nightmare that has befallen her family.

And the vore scenes themselves are just lovely! The way you blend the visuals of soft vore with the clear gory implications of what happens once the girl is swallowed is just not something I've seen any other author do nearly as well as you. It manages to keep the horrific aspects of the girls being eaten while still being extremely sexy, and I love it!

I enjoy how each of the three girls were subjected to each of the three main vore positions -- headfirst, assfirst, and feetfirst. Hard to say which is my favorite -- I'm very much a headfirst guy and Yanagi has that going for her, but the other two Uzaki ladies each have such well-written scenes that I genuinely can't choose.

I particularly like the switch back to the monster's perspective as it slurps down Hana -- I may have mentioned it before but I enjoy inserting as the pred so it's wonderful to see it's perspective as it savors it's delicious, sexy, buxom treat.

All in all, an absolutely wonderful story! A great way to mark your return to writing.

TheHumanPred - 3 years ago

First thing I love your story. I absolutely love the bone remains. Just awesome.

Through I do have a question. Do you have a link to where you found the story thumbnail pic if it not to much to ask ? I absolutely love it.

cerealkillerx - 3 years ago

Awesome introduction my friend! I really love how you first start off with the creature’s perspective lurking beneath the dusty floorboards of the Casting House, patiently lying in wait for its next unsuspecting victim. A nice ode to horror pulp magazines from the 50s and I can’t wait to read the next part :)

Krunchlesnitchles - 3 years ago

when is next part posted?

monikerman - 9 months ago

Will there be a part 2 for this?

Quarters - 1 year ago

Color me intrigued. Did this ever get part 2?

Stanku - 3 years ago

You certainly did better with the prompt than I ever would've, I'm happy to acknowledge! Didn't imagine you'd like it enough for a two-parter, but it makes me glad to see the story played out for all it's worth. Also, sorry for not posting my own half yet; it was only today that I happened to see this. Thanks again for the trade!

Bitter - 3 years ago

A bit like the stream audience, I'm hooked-- can't wait to see where this goes in Part 2.

toro45's admonition and sign-off really brings a palpable sense of dread in me for some reason.

ouphe - 3 years ago

I laughed at that end of the chat. "Show feet?" "Show feet."

Narrows - 3 years ago

Rippin' and tearin' is for the boars! The rock drake prefers its ladies whole and alive. I think it'll be right up your alley!

PrinnyDood - 3 years ago

Oh yes, Dark Elves most certainly apply as well! Hard vore does nothin' for me, but I'm not bothered by it's presence either, especially when the overall quality of the storytelling is so high!

Narrows - 3 years ago

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Narrows - 3 years ago

Thank you again for the kind words, it's always a big encouragement! Though I remember elven maidens are among your favorite victims, I hope that extends to the dark elf variety as well as the next chapter will have quite a few of them ending up as drake chow!

PrinnyDood - 3 years ago

Another great chapter in a great series.

Despite the fact almost none of the events in this one fall into my 'kink-zone', I was nonetheless highly entertained throughout!

It was very interesting to see the tables seemingly turned on Kallo's group here with the rather unexpected appearance of the dark elves. The combat sequences were clear, snappy and appropriately brutal. The whole thing also makes a nice contrast with the ambush against the Sisters in the last chapter - in both cases the surprising force is able to immediately seize the advantage, as you'd expect. Taldeer does great as the protagonist caught in the middle here, too.

I'm also intrigued by the reveal that Alarielle has five hundred(!) more maidens with her. Clearly things are setting up for future chapters, and I remain completely intrigued to see where this goes!

On that topic though, my only criticism is that it might have been good to delay the reveal-flashback with Alarielle until a little later. Thus have the Dark Elf attack - and Taldeer's exchange with Mora - a bit more mysterious and uncertain.

In any case, great stuff, and thanks for another fantastic read! :D

Guzzlord1an - 2 years ago

I love this story! Poor Mary, she made delicious prey

Deegen - 4 years ago

I feel the same way, I find that vore often has plenty of build-up while lacking epilogue... love having an insight into how the world just goes on without them.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Aye - very glad you liked it! I've always enjoyed stories where we see the aftermath of a girl's demise - just nails in the finality of their demise.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks for the kind words! My short story 'Ikki and the Naga' has a younger and more inexperienced Nara gobbling up Ikki from the Legend of Korra series.

Deegen - 4 years ago

Amazing read, I love it! Found the perspective change to the teacher and Swamp inhabitant very interesting, finding the remains and confirming the girls are gone for good. Would love to see some sort of sequel to this!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks! Appreciated - this was a commission piece and I admittedly do not know anything about Persona 5 other than what I researched for this story. Still, it looks like an awesome universe with plenty of sexy ladies as potential victims to boot.

KR75 - 4 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job with the vore scene and the aftermath describing the remains of Makoto in her skirt, shoes, and phone. We got the sense that Ann was in bliss when swallowing Makoto..would have enjoyed a little more description on her flavor. Hoping this is the start of a series and that Ann partakes in the consumption of the other female phantom thieves and social links. Nice work and thanks!

Stanku - 4 years ago

Very thrilled to see ponies get some attention from you; hopefully the trend will continue in the future to, say, Dashie or Fluttershy~.

TheBlarg - 4 years ago

Never mind I found it.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2054768?sd=desc&sf=id&q=artist%3Afidzfox%2Crarity

TheBlarg - 4 years ago

Cover art source?

Chitown1911 - 4 years ago

Oh I get what you mean, it’s definitely a pleasing aesthetic

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks! Much appreciated - it is a treat to have prey wriggling from tonsils to tummy, but I am also a fan of limp, trembling limbs gettin' slurped as well.

Chitown1911 - 4 years ago

Loved it! Very fun story with fantastic writing.
I usually prefer prey to remain conscious as they’re ingested, but I suppose that wouldn’t make much sense in this case XD
Great work <3

stellakiro - 4 years ago

Very rarely post anything here anymore, but I would love to see talented writing like this working on more soft vore. Thanks for sharing and ill keep an eye out for future content.

Stanku - 4 years ago

Really liked the play on moods with this one so far. All three major settings - the lion, the girls, the hunters - have a very distinct tonality expressed. The band's personal dynamic in particular offers a great contrast to the absolute savage sovereignty of the lion. Good to see some thought put in vore!

SleepyIsland48 - 4 years ago

I’d love to see this as a soft vore story. I love lion preds and punk girl prey, but those are really rare.

doomfister - 4 years ago

Nice to see this make the journey over from DA :)

Narrows - 4 years ago

Indeed - Squigly seemed the sweetest of the Skullgirls I came across while researching this story.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you! These were written together however I figured it be best to split them up due to length. Still though, it's always fun to see a pred find themselves on the wrong side of a fork every now and then.

thedark123star - 4 years ago

A fate well deserved for what she did to my favorite striped stocking cladded zombie girl

cerealkillerx - 4 years ago

Well that was incredibly quick, two fantastically written stories in one night!

It seems the terrifying Fukua finally encounters someone more nightmarish and horrible than her. A rather fitting and deserving end for a predatory shapeshifter. I wonder if for the first time Fukua felt what it was like to lose control, despite all her ferocious strength. She ultimately became a similar victim like so many she herself had eaten. Simply brilliant work!

cerealkillerx - 4 years ago

Anytime, bud :) It’s always a pleasure reading every story you write.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks as always my friend - these were commission pieces and I too was unfamiliar with the Skullgirl franchise, but the art style certainly lends itself to fun thoughts of vore.

cerealkillerx - 4 years ago

I will admit I’m not overly familiar with the Skullgirls franchise, but after reading this story and the previous one I now eagerly want to invest in learning more about the characters.

I personally enjoyed the chemistry between Valentine and Fukua— they are both cold, calculating, and ruthless killers, but ultimately it was Fukua’s frighteningly voracious appetite that claimed victory over her ill-fated creator.

As always my friend your writing is impeccable and deliciously erotic! I can’t wait to read the next part in this series!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you very much! Currently the next chapter is under way and we will indeed get another new monster for an all you can munch buffet of elven lady!

EnglishGamer - 4 years ago

Nice, found this story and your account bu accident and I am glad I did, you are doing amazing work.

As previous guys have said Warhammer is very underused for vore and I am happy you are adding to it.

It does make me wonder what the future holds, will there be anymore creatures? will we see Arachnarok Spider or Giants filling their bellies?, not mention there are loads of creatures the Dark Elves have that they can steal (Hydra, Bloodrack Medusa etc)

What of the final confrontation, will Alarielle win or will Kallo get his revenge, if so who is the lucky beast that dines on the Everqueen.

Cannot wait for the next chapter, hope it comes soon.

EnglishGamer - 4 years ago

Nice, found this story and your account byu accident and I am glad I did, yu are doing amazing work.

As previous guys have said Warhammer is very underused for vore and I am happy you are adding to it.

It does make me wonder what the future holds, will there be anymore creatures? will we see Arachnarok Spider or Giants filling their bellies?, not mention there are loads of creatures the Dark Elves have that they can steal (Hydra Bloodrack Medusa etc)

What of the final confrontation, will Alarielle win or will Ranma get his revenge, if so who is the lucky beast that dines on the Everqueen.

Cannot wait for the next chapter, hope it comes soon.

Stanku - 4 years ago

Oh, tell me about it... I rarely restructure my pieces afterwards, being so lazy. And especially with multi-part stories it is harder to anticipate what a good exposition order would be.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Once again, I appreciate the comments and constructive criticism - a longer for vore story is a fun project but I do admittedly fall victim to 'write first, structure later' syndrome as I do.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks! I very much appreciate your kind words - I have a huge respect of your own writing talent and thus your praise goes a long ways with me!

PrinnyDood - 4 years ago

Such a great story!

I have to commend you for just how well-written this is. Utterly gripping from start-to-finish. A great read completely independent from the kink-factor. Gotta love the intriguing mystery of Kallo's vendetta, and the surrounding tension. Not to mention the perfectly-executed Ork-dialog.

Elf-Maidens are among my very favorite subjects for vore and The Rock Drake's terrifyingly slow digestive-system is both kinky and somehow still feels very Warhammer.

And that cliff-hanger! You've really got me on the edge of my seat here. And given the narrative-focus, I'm legitimately uncertain how the next chapter will pan out (though I confess I'm hoping some vore-centric shenanigans will ensue, as opposed to strictly bloodshed).

Big props for such an outstanding work. Definitely looking forward to the continuation!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Stay tuned, there's about to be quite a few lady elves being gobbled in the next chapter!

Narrows - 4 years ago

I have not read any of the novels, however I've played the Total War Games (which takes place in the fantasy verse of Warhammer) however and am a big fan of 40k too. Thanks for the comment, though, much appreciated!

lore74 - 4 years ago

Your writing is really top notch. You do a great job of depicting the Warhammer setting and the orks in particular. Out of curiosity do you read any of the Warhammer Fantasy novels?

Cynder13 - 1 year ago

What an amazing series o hope we get to see these two return in a series

Ghostdragon - 4 years ago

I am a heck of a sucker for Audrey II to be honest. There is a majour lack of such content be it written or drawn and we are certainly overdue for it. One day I hope to draw out plenty of images for the voracious plant~

TheCreeper - 4 years ago

Marvelous, absolutely splendid! Bravo! A perfect encapsulation of everything I love in vore right here! A public display laughing and mocking a victim as they're eaten. You even crafted a genius way for Moana to be in her signature outfit. I LOVE IT!!!! This was everything I hoped for and more.

balanced-guy - 4 years ago

Agreed, I do enjoy this kinda fun weird science type story.

balanced-guy - 4 years ago

Good story, this lab definitely feels like one of those seedy, questionable science ones, that'd be found in my own Unusual Entity setting. Good pacing overall, gotta feel bad for the victim walking into that.

longwayofftiff - 4 years ago

Some SCP foundation kinda stuff! Love it!

French_snack - 4 years ago

I enjoyed this story. Mrs Trask is a cool one! And she didn't lie: Tammy was indeed doing an excellent job in subduing the asset!

She even got a promotion for it. Sort of. :p

PrinnyDood - 4 years ago

As I said before: This was awesome! Huge thanks for doing this trade with me: was a lot of fun, despite my slowness!

Reggirt - 4 years ago

Amazing Story, really loved how you portrait the despair in the preys.
Also love the detail of the striped stockings.

longwayofftiff - 1 year ago

Nightmare fuel when I really think about it. >shivers<

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

I wonder what is next for this lizard lady, I always love the more detail digestion the better.

I wonder if she may eat most of her foes now, but let some out, the ones that deserve mercy.

longwayofftiff - 3 years ago

That was a absolutely badass read! I liked both main characters; both Gallu and Nari! I can totally see myself fighting an opponent like that and getting swallowed. You sound delightful to RP with too.

JustaNumber - 3 years ago

Your writing is absolutely top-notch, you are my new favorite vore author

Umhuebr - 3 years ago

This was such an unusual tale, but in a very positive way! All characters were very organic and life-like, and the story worked both with the "serious" topic and the slight humor. Despite the grim situation of Lady Nari's demise, Gallus' honored and surprisingly kind personality was most refreshing. This truly felt like a genuine Knight's tale. Great story! Truly great!

Stanku - 4 years ago

Pouty elf girls and hungry monsters make a wonderful combo~.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you very much! This was a very encouraging comment and it was much appreciated. I do admit that I can be a bit indulgent and rambling in descriptions, I try to tighten it up where I notice it. I hope you like the future chapters, squigs get future opportunities to cut their teeth on some pouty elven maidens.

Stanku - 4 years ago

Must say, this was clearly among the best stories I've read on this site - and not just in one way!

For one, you made me see the potential in Warhammer from the vorish perspective; it seems so obvious in hindsight how well Squigs for example work there. Second, your eloquent expressions and turns of phrase were a pleasure to roll on the tongue; the sort of language that wants to be read out loud. At times I feel the descriptions rambled somewhat, but you do know how to make a point as well, so I'll count bits those off as difference in personal preference. Not that I can blame anyone of excess verbosity anyhow...

Finally, the vore itself was of prime grade, truly a delight to take in from foreplay to the act itself. The teasing and insinuation especially shine here, although I do confess being a biased to the darker tones played out here. In short, can't wait to read next chapter, or your other stories at that!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you very much for the kind words, it's a big encouragement! Fantasy has always been a treasure trove of vore potential and I very much intend to continue with this story!

PrinnyDood - 4 years ago

I gotta say, you are SUCH an excellent writer. This was quite entertaining even outside of the vore-related aspects. Darker than the other stuff I've seen from you, but this IS Warhammer, after all.

While I'm mostly familiar with Warhammer from the Total War games . . . I must admit seeing Sisters of Avelorn running about in a setting populated with dragons, hydras, dinosaurs, squigs etc. has piqued my imagination down similar lines more than once.

Curious to see how this goes, if you continue.

Narrows - 3 years ago

Thank you! It was a fun one for sure.

gonzodingo - 3 years ago

This is a fantastic story!

AlphaSaban - 4 years ago

Man, what an awesome way to kick off spooky season! I've always loved the idea of a predator imitating those it's consumed and using its new identity to trick the next victim. I wonder how many times it could pull that off before someone started to notice, haha

Stellar work, one of your best!

cerealkillerx - 4 years ago

Anytime dude! The story is a masterclass example of white-knuckle tension and you definitely subverted my expectations with the ending. I am fondly reminded of the infamous blood test scene from the Thing where an assimilated Palmer attempts to ingest one of the group members, which I can tell was the main inspiration for the insidious creature that resides beneath the rotted floorboards of Echo Manner.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks! I've always enjoyed preds that embody a sense of the surreal, dark and otherworldly. Thanks again for the kind words, it's a huge encouragement!

-Winston

Mechdragon1k - 4 years ago

I wonder if the shark was not targeting it prey for food but to deal with someone claiming what belonged to it.

doomfister - 4 years ago

NP bud, just working on my thing with Nal atm, perhaps in time we can do more naga action ;)

Narrows - 4 years ago

Very much appreciated, I always enjoy vore stories that explore the lives that will be lost at the conclusion. Thanks for the comment!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Indeed - the flighty fancy of apex predators will never be truly understood. Thanks for the comment!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thanks - your encouragement is always a help. Cheers, my friend!

Stanku - 1 year ago

Another marvelous feat that makes vore seem like a real, distinct genre. Was happily surprised to see bone disposal and digestion play from you, it's a personal favorite to see the prey both before and after a lot, though I know in general you prefer leaving minimal traces.

JustaNumber - 3 years ago

This was possibly the best story I have read in a long time, absolutely brilliant!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you, I'll always be a proponent of building a scene, working the characters and indulging the details!

SeruOmen - 4 years ago

Man, I love your work. It's hard to find fetish stuff that's well-written.

Narrows - 4 years ago

Appreciated, I'm glad it holds up! Cassandra is always an appetizing prey.

TheCreeper - 4 years ago

Like I said, totally worth the wait as will be the last meal. This story definitely has me hooked on wanting to see how this all ties/ends up!

cerealkillerx - 4 years ago

And definitely not the last I hope! :D

Narrows - 4 years ago

Very glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for your patience - one last pair of feet to go slidin' down Audrey's throat! Stay tuned!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Not the first scoundrel lady to meet an end in Audrey's belly, I'm sure.

TheCreeper - 4 years ago

I absolutely loved it! Talk about getting my money's worth and then some. Adding Jane's eating scene same time as Nabiki busts in was a fantastic unexpected pleasure.

I love how this came out, WELL worth the wait. That twist at the end with how Nabiki becomes lunch was definitely not expected. The spanking and camera burped out was just the cherry on top. Love-love-LOVED it!

Narrows - 4 years ago

Thank you! It was Doomfister's premise, he's got plenty of awesome preds in his gallery too!

Combat - 4 years ago

What a unique premise for a story. Amazing work.

wolfSnack - 4 years ago

I liked this a LOT! Poor Amber and Jackie, though, wrong place and wrong time... I hope we see Emma get her comeuppance for this. Maybe fed to the same drake? I'd love to see another wolf-girl's tail slip down that throat, especially when it's a karmic punishment... Or maybe the mistress will dispense the justice personally~

I wasn't a huge fan of the crushing and hard vore aspects, but it did fit the degrading mood perfectly. All around, a great story!