scar - 1 month ago

Hey uh, will this get continued? Been awhile since anyone has seen you

ThreeStrikes - 1 year ago

Good to hear

WillingWombPrey - 1 year ago

But I did permit WWP to post the story. They adopted it, so to speak.

WillingWombPrey - 1 year ago

Nope

ThreeStrikes - 1 year ago

Archive Of Our Own
..... Judging by your reaction, id say that's a no

JauneCinderEmerald - 2 years ago

Welcome back

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

My, what a twist. For the very person to have sent those 'heroes' on an isekai chase to vanquish the Demon Lord, turns out to be an (OP) Demon Lord herself?

If nothing else, at least that world's objectively 'safe' for mosnter girls, being able to breed with the summoned 'spawn' of incompetent heroes indefinately. Roughly right in vibe/line with my "RPG Pals" setting, even. :)

Apostolos - 2 years ago

Oh it wasn’t a complaint, just a bit unexpected

WillingWombPrey - 2 years ago

Well it was requested to be in the story.

Apostolos - 2 years ago

Well that was an interesting little twist at the end… and a smattering of incest

RokuXionInfinity - 1 year ago

Chronological is what matters in THIS specific argument!

Naganommer - 2 years ago

I've always seen that as strange logic. Like, it's alright to lewd this child because, by some fantastical explanation, she's actually four hundred.

It's comes across like one's just looking for a reason to lewd the child in the first place.

Granddragalia - 3 years ago

Technically she is 420 but she is physically and mentally 13 or 14

LemonBarb - 3 years ago

Imprints sell it 10/10, for me

elliotalien08 - 3 years ago

I love it!

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

I do not know at this point.

Apostolos - 3 years ago

Nice, will the series you commissioned continue at that point too?

elliotalien08 - 3 years ago

Ok, this is really hot

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

Once I get another computer, yes.

Apostolos - 3 years ago

Is there gonna be a story to accompany this?

FireRed2 - 3 years ago

Great work

JauneCinderEmerald - 2 years ago

Hot

kibroman - 3 years ago

very nice story
I have liked it
you have done a great job

Apostolos - 3 years ago

Cute little story for the family

doomed - 3 years ago

honestly, the death of three pizza guys and potentially one lover is still better than most gabi stories. most of her stories end in a massacre lmao

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

You might wanna give it another read over. I added a few things.

doomed - 3 years ago

This is honestly the sweetest gabi story ever lmao .

Apostolos - 3 years ago

Hmm that’s an interesting way to get a Harem and keep those you might lose close

Dinokid11 - 3 years ago

Excellent work

FireRed2 - 3 years ago

Great work

Uluruish - 3 years ago

Love this world and wish I could be a feraligtr (pred) in it

AlastorVincent - 3 years ago

I can't wait to see the story and this paints a great picture of what to come.

pokebreeder25 - 3 years ago

love it XD

doomed - 3 years ago

I LOVE THE EXPLANATIONS

UBFanDrake - 3 years ago

She's really cute, i personally prefer being melted in the womb to being treated motherly by the pred.

pleasedonteatmealice28 - 1 year ago

I am in love with this image <3

Spider8Fiend - 3 years ago

Hehehe, fair enough. Either way, Ruby had better get comfy!

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

Ruby won't actually become Yang's daughter. She's just spending a near-year long vacation in Yang's womb, if Yang ever decides to let her out, that is.

Spider8Fiend - 3 years ago

I can only imagine how Ruby will feel, becoming a daughter to her big sis?

Apostolos - 3 years ago

I’d be interested in full stories for this scenario

doomed - 3 years ago

unbirth horror story . the only reason the last guy didn't run away was hopelessness . good thing he wont remember it otherwise hed have nightmares. great story as per usual

Nightcrawler99 - 4 years ago

Nice one! I love stories like this. I only Wish it could’ve dragged out a bit more instead of going right into rapid regression.

pendingdelet9024239vb4 - 4 years ago

This is the kind of Unbirth story I love. The ones where they aren't separated.

doomed - 4 years ago

great story though im kinda surprised that the guy didn't fight back. like its not as if they had the strength to actually subdue him. if he hadn't tried talking to the psychos he would've escaped

Sanserror - 1 month ago

Does anyone have the og downloaded because i remember reading it but not fully

doomed - 4 years ago

See that is pretty much what happened In this version already . They essentially are killing Markus . If they did it again, then no matter what they do the girls will never truly love them . The way I see it ,, their only hope is to be decent enough parents that when Markus tells the sisters what these murderers did , the sisters don’t hate them as much as Markus : that rift can heal . Because if they kill Markus even if it’s before he tells his sisters ; the b words lose lose their “ daughters “

LemonBarb - 4 years ago

Honestly, can't help but think if it got that far. There's probably a chance that if a "Snap ending" might have happened, the alternative might have been Markus being vored, and regretfully 'had' to be digested. And if I did a take on that, even if the predators got away under "Self-Defense", it'd still be a bit (less?) Tragic, in how his demise 'might' have happened there..

But enough about alt endings. Still got alt "ideas" that I need to spend some time to write up, at some point... :|

darkmoon64 - 4 years ago

I don't understand, This is a peaceful ending or a tragic ending
I thought women were going to regret it, but they kidnapped him too
I was hoping that the story would be calmer

doomed - 4 years ago

The murder one is the most logical tho tbh . You should do more versions like that lol

jeremy9011 - 4 years ago

wow very good! will you do a part 2 with the regression and birth?

VToons - 4 years ago

Awesome work :D
Thank you :)

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

https://aryion.com/g4/view/651771

spartan12 - 4 years ago

Were can i find the cover art at?

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Nice, was hoping there’d be some new unbirth stuff recently

VToons - 4 years ago

Awesome work :3
Thank you ^^

VToons - 4 years ago

Awesome work :3
Thank you ^^

SpiderKing - 4 years ago

Very nice choices

LemonBarb - 4 years ago

On a scale, would it involve a list of vore/unbirth, or not on this projected "list" of harem candidates?

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

It's for a story series I'll be writing, but looking for more work, has left me, kinda unable to get any of the writing done.

Daniel14541 - 4 years ago

So is this for any particular writing?

FireRed2 - 4 years ago

Nice list

FutanariPrincess - 3 years ago

Well, and Mahad is the name of Dark Magician, Mana is the name of his apprentice The Dark Magician Girl

FutanariPrincess - 3 years ago

Still say that this makes the Fruit Magician Girls of Dark Side of Dimensions the girls... If there wasn't the problem in timeline (by the time 5Ds takes place Anzu and Alexis would be far into adulthood, like Ushio was shown to be in 5Ds... Which would make Mana rebirthing them after just defeating Atem to be unable to happen unless there was Time magic like that which Alliaster used in 5Ds and Bonds Beyond Time.

FutanariPrincess - 4 years ago

just read a rebirth fanfic with the heroines of Parts 1 to 3 of Yugioh being rebirthed by Dark magician. Now my question, is that since the Dark Magician Girl character is a card form of the Ancient Egyptian Priestess Mana, Apprentice to Ancient Egyptian Priest Mahad And The Dark Magician girl has her own accomplises in the form of the Berry Magician Girls. Why didn't that author just use Anzu, Alexis, and Aki as the original beings of The Berry Magician Girls? And the author also misnames Dark Magician Girl, as Mahad is her teacher, not her. The Dark Magician is Mana. Which her Ka is https://yugioh.fandom.com/wiki/Dark_Magician_Girl_(character), and her Spirit form is https://yugioh.fandom.com/wiki/Palladium_Oracle_Mana. Thus with that being understood I feel like it would make sense to have an altered version of the story with more... Lorefriendly writing. The fact that The Dark Magician Girl could have her Magician Girl partners actually be her daughters in this fanfic, and the different colors of 3 of the monsters in the Magician Girl archetype, out of Apple, Berry, Chocolate, Lemon, and Kiwi, could be that of a reborn Tea, Alexis, and Akiza. And that Dark Magician Girl isn't Palladium Oracle Mahad, but Palladium Oracle Mana. As a lover of both rebirth fics and Yugioh I did really enjoy the story aside from those two main gripes, so thank you for writing it and posting it!

pendingdelet9024239vb4 - 4 years ago

I haven't been into Yugioh since I was a kid in the 90's, but that was a fun story.

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Okay that was a nice cute story

kibroman - 4 years ago

very sexy

Robotdocter - 4 years ago

i absolutely love the way that they drew Jiro in this, same with Mina, especially with her eyes :O

622 - 4 years ago

now here is a question how did 1 become 2

threk - 4 years ago

Nice effort, the colour fill is pretty rough around the lines though. If you take the black&white picture and set white to transparency in GIMP or something you can get the black lines as their own layer, and fill/paint the colour underneath them.

NicoleSosa - 4 years ago

Excellent comic, brother, I really liked the coloring :3

NicoleSosa - 4 years ago

Excellent comic, bro, I liked it a lot :3

Robotdocter - 4 years ago

love the coloring you did for this :)

Wanderingspirit1333 - 4 years ago

Oh my

kibroman - 4 years ago

is very amazing
I liked much

Robotdocter - 4 years ago

lol i love this

seducingangel - 4 years ago

I love the good ending much more than the original ending. SO GOOOOOD.

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Ah we are all older brothers in agreement here then

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

https://aryion.com/g4/view/536432

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

What can I say, I love wrestling.

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

Yes this is after the original.

salin - 3 years ago

Thanks!

salin - 3 years ago

????

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

https://aryion.com/g4/view/740235

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

I might, hold on.

salin - 3 years ago

Well that sucks. : ( Would you happen to have a copy of the full pic?

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

The requests were, but that's why I stopped them. They kept piling up, despite me, closing up shop for a while so yes, I did have free stuff for a while.

ItachiUchiha - 4 years ago

I don't have PayPal sorry

C107galaxytachyon - 4 years ago

Implying that anything you were gonna make would’ve been free to begin with.

C107galaxytachyon - 4 years ago

Implying anything you were making was gonna be free in the first place.

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

If you want it, you have to commission it. Nothing I make is gonna be free anymore.

WillingWombPrey - 3 years ago

Original was removed and I haven't taken the link down yet. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Firefox1839 - 3 years ago

Since it says Story not found and is unavailable for reading

Firefox1839 - 3 years ago

Why cant i read it

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

Well, glad you liked it. An' thank you for your feedback, and I could do an omake, but that's gonna have to wait until after I get to those events.

Artlover8999 - 4 years ago

This pic and your description intrigued me enough to go and binge-read your fic in a night. It's fairly well written, though it could use some cleaning up. Love the story overall though! And honestly, you could DEFINITELY do an omake on ff.net or here where she does exactly what the picture shows. I think that would be great!

BellyLover045 - 4 years ago

It's kind of sad that he doesn't meet his future wife in this ending.

JacksonTheEmperor - 4 years ago

Yeah... That's...honestly very disturbing and uncomfortable.

I get that vore is very free to do that, but still.

Pardon my language, but it feels fucked up to me, especially with kidnapping involved...

ExistentialRowlet - 4 years ago

yeah true.

doomed - 4 years ago

Seee I think the reason is because of the relationship the commissioner makes the brother have with the kidnappers and the lack effort he puts in to get them back . It’s like he just gives up and Stockholm Syndrome

ExistentialRowlet - 4 years ago

i mean vore is a fetish where people can be killed by the thousands, but something about these kidnapping scenarios really rubs me the wrong way. may be because im some what desensitised to death idk

ken115 - 4 years ago

a good story but there is a lot of mistypes that kind of made me need to reread afew lines to kind of see what you mean but all and all a good story.

Apostolos - 4 years ago

Never tell a mother to wait on grandkids

FireRed2 - 4 years ago

*story*

FireRed2 - 4 years ago

I wont lie i completely forgot about it. But the stroyr is great.

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

Here's a link to the website.
https://pregchan.com/d/catalog.html
Go to this website and go to the Alternative Pregnancy thread.

ItachiUchiha - 4 years ago

Where is the full comic at?

famergg - 4 years ago

Thank

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

Sorry, I was half asleep when I responded. It's from a comic page I found on Pregchan in the breast pregnancy thread.
https://pregchan.com/d/thumb/1585450310269-1.png

ItachiUchiha - 4 years ago

where is you find the image FOR THE STORY?

Robotdocter - 4 years ago

i really like the better happier endings you write for these stories, the originals are way to hard to read due to their endings, especially considering most of them end with a brother losing at least half his family in the process. >:(

Nightcrawler99 - 4 years ago

I like this ending a bit better.^^
Family’s are not torn apart and almost everyone stays friends.
Would love to see a sequel to this one where the girls have to go back for some reason and they then learn how to undo the unbirth the right way after some trial and error.

That, or a sequel to the original work were the interruption of the ritual causes the girls not to regress and they give their captor a rough and wild time before finally managing to get out at the end.

randomentity777 - 4 years ago

Always like me some Kali

FireRed2 - 4 years ago

Awesome pic

WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago

Welcome aboard.

KingOfRust - 4 years ago

Got yourself a new watcher.

Nightmare49 - 4 years ago

oh nice picture you got from him! he is a great artist!

Apostolos - 5 years ago

True, just stay well my friend

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Yeah, just trying to do some personal writings to clear my mind. I'm slowly working on my other writings, but those are coming at a bit of a slower pace.

LillyBells - 5 years ago

JUSTICE! FINALLY!

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

You doin' alright, bud?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

You'll just have to wait and see for when I post the entire story.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Uhuh yep that was a good one, still shivering with interest and I don’t know what else, admittedly i was a bit worried with who the commissioner was but realized it was one of yours.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Glad you liked it

Groblek - 5 years ago

Ooh, fun! Your descriptions are great, as usual. And I like the twist on the unbirthers’ motivations being to heal the people they’ve unbirthed of problems that they might not even know they have..

Groblek - 5 years ago

Ooh, fun! Your descriptions are great, as usual. And I like the twist on the unbirthers’ motivations being to heal the people they’ve unbirthed of problems that they might not even know they have..

Moonsniper - 4 years ago

When are you going to continue this

Moonsniper - 4 years ago

Are you going to do more soon

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

There are still a few chapters left of each story for them to review. After that, I'm not sure, I'd have to get permission from the author's to do a review story. Other than that, I'll just keep Kali with doing her own adventures between the review chapters.

Moonsniper - 5 years ago

Are you going to start another series for them to read since the other two don’t have new stories yet

Nightmare49 - 5 years ago

too bad Weiss didn't get turned into a breast drider. :P still cute and funny in a nonsensical way. :)

KorinDragoon - 4 years ago

I can see Ruby enjoying the Tummy Time as much as Blake but Yang might not.

Can't wait for more of this story.

benjdsen815 - 5 years ago

what a great story very good i enjoy everything about it great job

TheMysteriousSadSack - 5 years ago

Great alt ending, cute outcome for all involved

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Thank you.

Brazzel - 5 years ago

Only joking, my friend! I think that WillingWomb did a great job with this.

S1nZ - 5 years ago

your's was good too. I just prefer non-fatal.

Brazzel - 5 years ago

(ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง

Groblek - 5 years ago

Nice!

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

No, it's just Alice and Anna in there. I'm writing the story this pic is based off of.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Huh looks like this continuity also got Ms. Steel unbirthed

Groblek - 5 years ago

Fun!

ifdre - 5 years ago

OK. I got it. Thank you so much!

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

I might do one for fun sometime in the future, but that's yet to be seen.

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Oh. Well seeing as how it was a happy ending in the fourth chapter, there won't be a need for a remake of the third.

ifdre - 5 years ago

I meant, as you've been writing your versions of 'Sal Vaeshun' series, are you writing your version of 'Stomach enVaeshun'?

WillingWombPrey - 5 years ago

Remake? I don't know anything about a remake.

Apostolos - 4 years ago

You gonna do more with this little family?

PlastikPikmin - 5 years ago

I'd love to see more oral vore in those stories. It kinda fit pretty well in my opinion.

Apostolos - 5 years ago

Huh nice way to jump some plotholes