French_snack - 1 year ago

Thanks! Charlotte is certainly a lucky girl. :D There are no plans for a continuation at present, though; sorry.

miniboy - 1 year ago

wow~ i love alyssa. can her story continue? i want to be her food too

French_snack - 7 years ago

Maybe some day. :)

zoleitup - 7 years ago

you need to do another oyster unaware vore story again by time with digestion and aftermath :)

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I have to confess, I'm a teensy bit jealous of Charlotte here. ;) Even if Alyssa teases her by not giving her what she really wants, she gets to be played with repeatedly, as food on Alyssa's plate and in her mouth.

And although I *do* like unaware vore, where the "pred" never finds out that she's unknowingly eaten someone, there is indeed something quite satisfying in it being a fully conscious mutual relationship.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks. I feel that way too, about the simple soldiers being treated as disposable items rather than as individual people by the films. Whereas, if we were to catch a proper glimpse of them, we'd see they have a life and background and personality, and they're trying to come to grips with all this destruction around them…

Anyway, I'm very glad you're enjoying it! When I get round to it, the story will certainly continue.

Tassie - 8 years ago

Allegiance is rather a nice read for that sort of twist.

Also, too much of the whole SW theme revolves about the callous murdering of random people who happen to get in the way, with little to no thought of who or what they were.

Vader, the Emperor, the Count, big-name villains clearly warrant destruction, but the small-time cannon-fodder type characters get merely a few seconds before they die. Putting story to them makes it much more sad, but much more personal as well, giving the entire universe that much more depth; a real favour you've done for a galaxy that revels in destroying itself.

Aside, stories of non-canon characters are ALWAYS greatly more interesting!

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks very much! I'd read quite a bit of Star Wars fiction many years ago, but forgotten most of it, so indeed I had to do some research for this.

I was interested by the realisation that, a few years after Endor, the Empire are very much on the defensive - and, as you said, losing ground. So, from the perspective of an Imperial soldier or officer, it becomes a struggle to protect what remains of the well-ordered system they believe in, against the overwhelmingly powerful tide of the New Republic. In their own eyes, they become the underdogs heroically keeping up the fight for what's right. As well as it being a tale of ordinary men and women trying to live their lives while caught up in the vast swirl of galactic upheavals.

Tassie - 8 years ago

A very long, but VERY good reading! Easy to guess that much time and effort went into researching the fictional history of the Star Wars expanded universe.

A twisted mirror of the classic story of an heroic rebellion freeing itself from the tyranny of an evil Empire has been, if I may say so, convincingly turned around to the perspective of an ORDERLY and STABLE Empire losing ground to the mad chaos of criminals and anarchists.

Touching, thrilling, exciting, engaging, few things reminded me that this was a fan fiction, mostly reading from a screen instead of a book.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks! And yes, you're right about them having a tail. I've fixed it.

Amadaus - 8 years ago

Love the story! Although there is one thing - kinda nitpicking, but here it is.

"Neither of them had wings, nor a tail, although they were clearly succubi. Cgeyel recognised them both, through the amiable dealings that her mistress had had with House Malachos. The elder woman, Lady Meralimexia, looked up, noticed them, and acknowledged Lady Llehli with a small inclination of her graceful head. Llehli responded in kind."

They don't have wings, but both Chalyessa and her mom did indeed have tails like other succubus - I even remember Chalyss massaging her crotch with her tail in both the comics she was in.

Other then that though, love the story :)

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks. I was glad to get back into writing this series. It's still a troubled and uncertain galaxy that Talana and Arn are trying to raise their children in...

Vixen20 - 8 years ago

Sweet <3 Nice to see this, French :)

Miridium - 8 years ago

Well that's a shame. It would've been an interesting pursuit in my opinion. Even so you're doing a great job with the narrative and all these characters. It's why your my favorite writer on this site!

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks. I doubt I'll be putting much unwilling vore in the IVC, but Rupali's sneaky little pleasure was something that was bound to happen. These are girls who enjoy eating people, after all.

Miridium - 8 years ago

Wonderful story as always French. I especially liked Rupali and her little power trip despite her being a very minor part of the story. We could definitely use some more unwilling prey especially in the IVC series. I feel it's a topic that hasn't really been explored so there's great potential to be had.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks! Obviously I'm now very curious to see how Mona and Carla's relationship will progress! ;)

bedfordsb - 8 years ago

Yes, she did promise - still not sure if she's going through with it now!

I really enjoyed this story, and I keep going back to it and spotting new insights. Brilliant writing

French_snack - 8 years ago

Ha ha! Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :) And welcome to Eka's Portal, then! I too have something of a soft spot for Sahiba, but I wanted Kim, Abena and Oksana to be the European qualifiers this time round, so sadly there was no place for her… I'm sure we'll see her again some day!

DontTellMyWife - 8 years ago

I got so excited about this I created an account just so I could comment. I read the IVC stories a while ago but always check Ekas in case a new one appears. And today I feel spoilt, the stories made so happy that my wife (who I secretly want to eat me) became suspicious. I couldn't risk my vore fetish being discovered so I told her I was having an affair.

I jest of course. My wife left me months ago.

Great job once again, monsieur! I absolutely adore some of the emerging characters, hope to see more stories so these little minxes can get up to all kinds of naughty vore based shenanigans.

I agree with the last guy (or is it a girl?) It's time Patricia realised her true feelings for Josh, in true international vore superstar fashion.

Haven't seen anything from Bedfordsb for a while, I hope we're not kept waiting to see if the Mona fulfils her promise to Carla.

Au revoir. Merci beaucoup!

PS Please can we see Sahiba again soon, she's probably my favourite IVC character. She won my heart when she gobbled up the entire Vore Society in Turkey. I want to marry her. Then she can eat me of course.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks. That was the intention, yes. ;)

passingthroughyou - 8 years ago

*SPOILER ALERT*

Oh you tease! I thought Patricia was going to finally eat Josh, I would have loved that.

Excellent as always.

French_snack - 8 years ago

She failed to qualify, sadly. There weren't enough places for everyone.

French_snack - 8 years ago

I suppose, yes, it's even more difficult to write when the narrator is part of the woman's bottom and therefore can't see much of what's going on. Not facing in the direction that she's looking…

The idea of becoming part of a woman through digestion is one that's been with me for a long time, so I really wanted to write a bit about it. Having done it only once before.

oishi1 - 8 years ago

There's something interesting about getting a peek in another person's life. I know, after a while, being trapped like that would get old though. I believe, if he is specifically bonded to those cells, he only has seven years before he fades away (conjecture to be sure)

I started a story like this called "The End" (guess which part the character was) but couldn't get it to flow correctly.

Lupe - 8 years ago

Ohhh, I completely glossed over that! Thanks for the reminder.

And very interesting! Could pave the way into new ideas possibly. But then again, I don't know if clothing transformation appeals to you or not!

French_snack - 8 years ago

Thanks. As suggested briefly in Story 119, Emily actually transformed him *before* she met Annie, so she may well have stopped since then.

Interesting question… I suppose she may be able to transform people into clothing as well, yes.

Lupe - 8 years ago

Very interesting style you went with! Love o see the day to day looked into from their perspective. It seems Emily stays up to no good with her power! Just a question, is food transformation her only ability? Or can she change people into other things, like panties, a bra, etc.?

French_snack - 7 years ago

Thanks. And she might do. :)

Ladybellylover - 7 years ago

This has reminded me how much I like Cherry. I hope she comes back in a later story.

DontTellMyWife - 8 years ago

Ah. Eating her biographer must have been a one off. She did agree to eat him as part of the deal before he wrote the book I suppose.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Ah, sadly she herself doesn't really like to eat people she knows. She prefers to gobble up strangers, and then more or less forget about them. We may well see her again, though. Thanks.

DontTellMyWife - 8 years ago

I love Cherry so much! Thanks for this. Wonderfully inventive. I especially enjoyed the dialogue between the patrons when they discovered vore was among the lots.

I wonder how much the winning bid was. Certainly worth it, better than running a marathon and probably less painful. So much chafing!

I hope this isn't the last we see of her, I'm sure she will be getting a lot of private vore requests now she has retired from the IVC.

Although, I like Cherry best when she's eating someone she knows.

French_snack - 6 years ago

Thanks! I've got none planned at present, but we'll see.

hotcarl - 6 years ago

WOW this story is great! I love your Zoey stories and really hope you write more of them!

Herbnerb - 7 years ago

So...you're saying there's a chance lol ;P
Very true, I just love the stories!

French_snack - 7 years ago

I've got none planned for now, but it's tempting. If, some day, I have enough of an idea.

(Technically, this already IS a sequel!)

Herbnerb - 7 years ago

The people need a sequel! :p

Anonymouslion - 5 years ago

i think i read it but justn in case...

French_snack - 5 years ago

We see her again here, in a story that happens earlier: https://aryion.com/g4/view/397547 .

Anonymouslion - 5 years ago

I do hope eshel comes back somehow. I like her.

French_snack - 8 years ago

I'm not sure she's able to appreciate the irony. She'd never heard of Jora and her reputation for clumsiness before. ;)

Soloplayer - 8 years ago

Ah, so out of all the predators, Jora was the one to catch her. Ironic much, Eshel?

French_snack - 2 months ago

Thanks. Erotic and fun is what I was going for. And I probably was inspired by oishi1 and girlfood. :)

kbDArt - 2 months ago

Love this story. Both very erotic and fun. I’ve seen different versions on this theme by oishi1 and girlfood as well. All done very well.

lalalalas - 8 years ago

you have single handedly gotten me into tf vore

Indighost - 8 years ago

I really loved that about this story. I find that to be a key element of good writing, especially for us who like to do similar food-related fetishes, but want the readers to be a little uncertain and surprised . Not knowing if the characters will reach their goal or not can add a lot to a story.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Yes, it's not *exactly* an "all's well that ends well" story. ;) William would have preferred to be in Charlotte's place (kissing Lyssa and admiring her soft full tummy), and Charlotte in William's (being an oyster digested inside a hot little tummy). That's the risks of a game of chance!

French_snack - 5 years ago

Thank you! It's not my usual style, but it was great fun to write. That is indeed one very stuffed lizard, and I just like the idea of a girl treating this big, girl-eating reptile with tender affection.

And x-ray views of a full stomach can be fun as well. :)

Nalzindar - 5 years ago

Wow, great story, simply fantastic : )
Browsing through your numerous stories makes time fly.
The theme, women and creatures were great, the lizard was incredible stuffed at the end and it was nice to see the story from various points of view, both the erotic parts, and the voracious parts. Wonderfully descriptive and quite similar to Prinny's stories as you promised^^
Way to go!

French_snack - 8 years ago

"Mildly questionable", indeed! But we certainly can't fault the reptile-creature, who was just lumbering around happily, and quite innocently, eating up all that wriggly food. :p

Thanks!

PrinnyDood - 8 years ago

Whoa, I can't believe I missed this until now. I clearly need to keep a closer eye on your account here!

Anyway, this is a glorious example of some of my favorite aspects of vore, and honestly one of the best stories I've read with this theme. Sheina and her giant voracious reptile-creature were both so amusingly good-natured, it was impossible to be cross at them, despite their mildly questionable antics.

And I'm very pleased I've proved a source of some inspiration here, especially when this sort of thing is the result! :3

kongpow - 8 years ago

The other thing I like so much about this work, is the
"controlled hunger games" feel to it.

I think you did a really good job incorporating the sensual erotic writing your known for, into the observations of the watchers.

Also, the internal descriptions are really hot.

Cheers!

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Vixen20 - 9 years ago

Yeeeeeees <3 Great storytelling and world (literally!) building as always, French :)

Aickavon12 - 8 years ago

Well of course, you've proven that quite well and Milly has proven herself not as capable of a guardian as many may think/hope for. After all, she did almost get eaten herself. It adds tension!

French_snack - 8 years ago

I haven't got anything more planned for her for now. But her current situation does indeed have the potential for us to see her again.

I did want to show, though, that sometimes major changes happen, and things don't always end up going back to normal.

Aickavon12 - 8 years ago

reading this arc I wonder, will you ever do anything with Joanna again? :o it seems awfully dissatisfying just to... leave her there X3

French_snack - 9 years ago

No, all of my stories are still in my gallery, actually. Are there some you can't find?

Nevek - 9 years ago

This is very handy as some of your storys are missing

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. :)

Vixen20 - 9 years ago

Awesome! Keep up the good work :)

Adseria - 9 years ago

Precisely. My point is, she was shocked when that happened, which meant that a lot of the pilots in the navy, and probably most of the Empire, never knew about the first Death Star, or the enslavement of trillions of non-humans, or countless other atrocities that were hidden behind Imperial propaganda.

saintheartwing - 9 years ago

But it really wasn't a secret, everyone saw it used in the battle over Endor. That's even a plot point in an earlier story, she's confronted by rebel authorities and flat out told that Alderaan was blown up. She's like "That's impossible" and they counter that she SAW the Death Star blowing up huge spaceships over Endor, but she refuses to believe they'd destroy a planet.

Adseria - 9 years ago

Also, you have to remember that this is a different universe to the canon one. In this universe, the Empire kept things like the Death Stars secret. According to the way French_snack has written this story, Talana believes that the Empire was a good and righteous government who would never commit genocide.

French_snack - 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them.

MisterHoosierPride - 7 years ago

I just found your work and I'm in love with them.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Hehe, yes, I'm a bit jealous of my own characters sometimes. :D Thanks; glad you enjoyed it!

astrall - 9 years ago

Another great story! Very well written as I've come to expect from your stories, and it also involves a couple + sex scene which is one of my favorite scenarios. Courtney is enjoying her love making with her bf, whilst at the same time her willing treats are enjoying themselves inside her cosy tummy, too. What more could one ask for? Well, I guess being in their place :) Thanks for the story French_snack!

TheWiking2000 - 9 years ago

Oh, that story! I've skimmed it but not read it. I'm not sure I'm a fan of the "Choose your own-" story type. I prefer to simply follow an author's vision. I've read almost all other stories by Oishi1's and Girlfood's though.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it! Indeed, Milly felt pleasantly stuffed. And she certainly appreciated some nice music with her meal. :D At an earlier point in her life, she might even have decided to keep you as a pet…

mach-one - 9 years ago

That was a good one, thank you very much for letting me take part of it! Those are lot of people in Milly's tummy, she must've been quite full.

Also, I don't really know if it was purposely written that way, but I bet my friends would certainly agree that caring about my guitar's state even when death is almost certain is very me-like.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Hehehe… :D Elli can be nice, when it suits her purpose. When it's to her advantage to be charming. As Wiking once said: We know we shouldn't like her, but we do anyway. Thanks!

mojo-2131285 - 9 years ago

Elli and Starwind's scenes always crack me up. You capture them both perfectly. I like to think Elli's a sweet girl deep down......way way deep deep down....so deep you barely notice.....ok she's a total bitch but I like her anyway.

And it's always nice to see Milly.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks! And you're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the experience. :D

Krauser - 9 years ago

Hey awesome story! Thanks for including us readers in there, it was real nice of you to do that.

This is definitely one of my favorites of yours! You are great.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Hehe… There will definitely be a third part, at some point. Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it (despite the lack of vore in part 2)! :) There may be a bit of monster vore in part 3...

Adseria - 9 years ago

I doubt they'd be particularly extensive, though. The Empire doesn't seem like it would waste space on that kind of thing when you can make it smaller and cram in another few turbolasers!

Adseria - 9 years ago

More? I'd say please, but I don't have a cherry immediately to hand. I'm sure I can find some whipped cream, though...


Seriously, though, I really like this series. I read this story, and I liked it enough that I went to have a look at what else you'd done, only to find that this was a sequel?!? I mean, sure, I was a bit dissapointed in the lack of vore in the sequel (I particularly liked the tiiliks in part 1 of "the good guys" - I prefer human pred), but, like you said, vore probably wouldn't fit.

Anyway, I seriously hope to see "rescue" (which you said is going to be the third part?) Soon, and I'll go find the cream now. ;)

French_snack - 9 years ago

I assumed Star Destroyers must have restaurants, at least for the officers. Plus, various recreation decks for the crew. They're places where people live, after all, for months on end. When they're not busy battling rebels, Imperial Navy personnel have lives to get on with. :)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Talana certainly isn't morally perfect, indeed. :) I think she lives life as it comes, knowing she might die any day. Her life is becoming even less steady and secure as the war spreads and drags on. Thanks!

Indighost - 9 years ago

This story reveals a very interesting side of the main character, she seems unhesitant to switch her boyfriend to a more rich and famous guy. The thoights and feelings around this are all very well written. Overall i must admit i am wrapped in suspense and just like the previous installment i have no idea what might happpen next and cant wait o read more! :-)

Vixen20 - 9 years ago

Well... *cough* She's certainly a lot less respectful now xD

Good story, glad to see you're still continuing it, and aren't trying to find ways to include vore for the sake of vore :) Star Destroyer restaurants... That's fitting really. I wish more people showed the non-formal sides of Star Wars militaries.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. There's no sequel yet.

fholgore - 9 years ago

great story i have the sequel?

French_snack - 9 years ago

No, indeed. But it certainly gives her a thrill!

mojo-2131285 - 9 years ago

Not the safest of hobbies Eshel has there.

French_snack - 4 years ago

A girl like her has appetites. ;)

Chupathingy1990 - 4 years ago

Malika packing a whole village in her belly is hot.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Giants don't have claws, though. ;) Extremely strong, constricting stomach muscles, I suppose… It's a *very* tight squeeze in there. No room to move their arms at all, I would think.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Thing is, though, how do they prevent their prey from tearing their way out? Normal snakes have to crush and immobilize their victims. Gators, for instance, have burst their way out of snakes with their claws.

There is the option of paralyzing venom.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. Yes, nagas can eat people close to their own size (i.e., their own size from the waist upward, but without a massive snake tail). Most Felaryan nagas don't, it seems. Malika (turboman's character) does, but keeps it secret from most of her friends, so as not to freak them out. Jissy had to learn how to do it (given that she was raised in captivity, and never did it when she was young). Crisis doesn't; she was raised by fairies to see fellow giants as "proper people", off the menu. Vivian doesn't either, as far as I know; perhaps because a giant naga who has just eaten a giant is weighed down and vulnerable.

Felarya isn't an entirely safe place for giants. Milly was once almost completely swallowed by Tilhian; Jade rescued her, and Malika later told Tilhian sternly not to eat her (Malika's) friends. I've also written stories in which human-sized nagas eat humans, and tiny nagas eat tinies.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Wow, I didn't know a naga's insides were strong enough to hold a full sized prey and prevent escape. Them's some strong nagas in Felarya, lol, good stuff!

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Wow, I didn't know a naga's insides were strong enough to hold a full sized prey and prevent escape.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks; glad you're enjoying it! Zoey is quite an endearing and irresistible character. It was fun exploring her possible interactions with her babysitter. She knows how to get what she wants from him (and he knows very well what she's doing), but (as you've shown) she's also become genuinely fond of him.

AdjectiveNounCombo - 9 years ago

I'm starting to read this part now. I enjoyed the first one. Nice little fan tribute. Maybe I'll pull elements of this into the canon.

French_snack - 9 years ago

I stumbled across that series by chance, and couldn't believe I'd never noticed it before! :)

Thanks. I'm very glad you feel that captures the essence of Zoey's character, while also giving us a few additional hints into the way her mind works. Of course, it's only my own interpretation of someone else's character, but she's quite fascinating to write about. Especially in a first person narrative from the point of view of her babysitter, who knows what Zoey is doing but who can't resist her anyway.

mach-one - 9 years ago

I love the zoey character, you really manage to capture the casualness with which she eats people in this story, in the story she really seems like the kind of girl who thinks way more than she lets others know, whether it is by what she says or her actions so I guess you nailed her.

Also, thanks for introducing me to the baby fat series, that's quite a discovery to make ;)

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks! Zoey's quite an irresistible character. I couldn't tear myself away from writing this.

Apostolos - 9 years ago

I can think of some biscuits that could qualify as desserts but no, cookies are cookies unless they are biscotti

French_snack - 9 years ago

Haha! That's just because I'm part-British. I think and write in British English. There's a lot of specifically American vocabulary that I don't know very well. (Are all biscuits called "cookies" in the US?)

Apostolos - 9 years ago

Interesting how you wrote us in as a British person in America, crisps and biscuits....

bartek21 - 9 years ago

great story. incredible attention to detail. as you read this imagination works. nicely describe the inside of her mouth. please more

French_snack - 3 years ago

Good catch! I can't remember whether that's what I had in mind, but it's certainly possible!

VortexFoodsTM - 3 years ago

Just been reading through these gems again and noticed a little detail that had me wondering... when Lindsay says “I had two yesterday, and that was kind of a slow night here”, is she by any chance referring to Alec and Lucy from story 105? If so, it's a nice little allusion I missed before!

astrall - 9 years ago

I understand. Knowing that there will be another one is worth waiting for :)

French_snack - 9 years ago

There'll probably be one at some point, yes. My level of motivation to write has been lower than usual these past couple of days, but I'm just waiting for it to return. :)

astrall - 9 years ago

Hey French_snack! Can we expect another Forbidden dish story or maybe other shrunken human story with human pred soon? I really love these stories :) Thanks.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Actually, it seems to me they cover up more in Hell than in Heaven. It's just that in Hell, the way they dress emphasises their sexuality, while in Heaven everyone is just naturally naked. Plus in a strip club, I suppose the dancers move in ways that they wouldn't if they were simply wandering down the street. ;)

Thanks!

Vixen20 - 9 years ago

Etti still makes me uncomfortable, but the story was superb and I enjoyed the descriptions of the various settings :)

Also I like the fact that Hell even bothers having strip clubs xD You'd think that they wouldn't need to go far to see some desirable bodies.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Hi. Just to let you know, I've followed your advice: I've bought the novel "Lost Stars", and am currently reading it. My impressions so far are expressed here: https://aryion.com/forum/blog/French_snack/reading_star_wars_lost_stars_b-31654.html .

Thanks for recommending it!

French_snack - 9 years ago

Hmm; it does sound as if it could interest me. Thanks for letting me know! :)

Vixen20 - 9 years ago

Really later on, I know, but in September a canon story regarding Star Wars - "Lost Stars" was published and released. It covers various events through the war and a bit afterwards with the fragmenting Empire. It deals with multiple viewpoints, shifting loyalties, the lenghts people go through to convince themselves that the bad was good, etc. It shows both the rebel and Imperial side of it through two star crossed lovers, one a female imperial officer, the other a fighter pilot. :) Thought you might like it! Has some similar themes, but it's different from your story for sure.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks.

ouphe - 9 years ago

Wonderful job.

Adseria - 9 years ago

*did :)

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. Indeed: Those poor Imperial mooks we see getting blasted in the films are people too, after all, who most likely do see themselves as the "good guys".

FenrisWolf - 9 years ago

Excellent Read! I'm a huge star wars fan boy, my friends jokingly refer to me as the "Star Wars Professor". In particular I loved the TIE Fighter and X-Wing flight simulator video games the youtube video is based off of (one of the best fan films of all time in my humble opinion). I loved your line about the missile lock, still gives me a small seizure when I hear it. Wonderfully engaging read though, even knowing how this all plays out it's always fun to write a familiar scene from a different perspective. I approve as well of the attempt to humanize the Empire, who from their perspective would view the rebellion as a collection of terrorists and space pirates. Yes they are essentially Nazi's in space but we forget to often the complexities that motivate humanity, and the lies we tell ourselves to justify insert totalitarian reign X here. In short, great little story that peeks underneath the bucket.

Indighost - 9 years ago

What an avsolutely fantastic and lovely story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it! Somehow, you were able to achieve that exciting sense of unpredictability and the idea tbat anything could happen next!

Ruler101 - 9 years ago

Oh, my mistake then.

Hmm. I know I read it, though now I suspect it might be one of those small novels that was never really canon.

In most incarnations, the Sith favor Sith Purebloods and Himans, since they were the founding sith races. Though yes, Palpatine was himself far more bigoted than most sith. As far as I know, he had a "you're an exception' attitude towards Pelagius. (I think that's how it's spelled.)

Of course, the Star Wars canon is not a very consistent place, not helped by the various levels of canon being able to overwrite each other on a whim.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Not something one can often be. Best make the most of it. :p

TootCore - 9 years ago

Oh hi. How are you holding up ? Because I, am a potato.

French_snack - 9 years ago

That's okay; thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed comment. It's a fair point. You're quite right that Annie is not being rational or methodical. But then, many people aren't. It's a common misconception that we're, first and foremost, rational beings. It seems to me that people act on the basis of feelings, wishful thinking and self-persuasion rather more often than on the basis of clinical reasoned detachment.

Annie is emotionally drawn to Emily. She has persuaded herself that Emily is a troubled soul who can be "healed" or helped with a bit of steady love and attention, which she's happy to provide. It's a flattering self-image. To some extent, she's telling herself "As long as I show her I love her and trust her, as long as I make her happy and give her something to live for, she's not going to do that any more". It's not reasonable, but it's pretty powerful self-persuasion. And Emily knows what to do to keep Annie persuaded, including just by turning on the waterworks and looking hurt and appealing tearfully to her trust.

Of course, we don't actually see the full workings of Annie's mind here, since the story is told entirely from the perspective of the transformed person she unknowingly ate. There may be occasional niggling doubts or alarm bells, which she silences by telling herself she should be ashamed of not fully trusting Emily. That shame would make her want to make an even greater effort to trust her completely.

Plasmids - 9 years ago

I'll admit that my first comment to you did have some unfriendly moments in some of the sentences, but I say again that I did not mean them to be mean or insulting at all to you. I'm blatantly honest when it comes to commenting on stories or artwork. I apologize again if anything that I said offended you or hurt you in anyway. With that being said once again, I going to try and keep this next comment more civil then the last one was, but there may be some things in here that you may think are unfriendly. But just know that I’m not being mean or insulting, just being honest on what I thought about after reading the story and your last story

I really did like your quick description of your character Annie and do I agree with you when you say that Annie has wishful thinking when it comes to trying to think Emily has changed her ways or even thinking her attempts at changing her are working. And also that the wishful thinking in real relationships can blind people from the truth of the matter. However, that can only last so long before logic breaks in and shines the brilliant light of truth on you. So, I will still stand by my conclusion on how I described her in my last comment, as being really naive, gullible and not thinking things out in a very methodical way. Basically, you have just told me that she really wanted to believe Emily and now she is practically blinded by love to not even remember or even look at all the evidence that she has found out or even experienced while being around her. After re-reading your story again and your last one, I noticed some things in there that really stood out to me and made me think about why has she not looked back on these things and thought, “Huh, you know, maybe she is lying to me.” I’ll briefly go over the points that I thought explained why she is naive and not thinking things through.

The first thing I noticed was when Annie asked Emily if she has ever killed someone before or done something horrible to anyone in a joking manner and right away she said no to her. That right away should have been a dead giveaway later on when she revealed her true colors. She is a pathologic liar! And if she lied about something like that, what else has she lied about or is capable of lying about? But no, she total forgets that part and just moves on with her relationship with Emily like nothing happened. The next thing was Emily reveal to Annie that she loved Laura, again another give away. She has done this to someone that she loves and she sees nothing wrong in that. Shouldn’t Annie have, after learning about her true nature, that maybe she may try this on her if they ever got too close or even to the point of loving each other? I mean if she does it with someone she loves and to her friends, she can’t be trusted to not do it with Annie too and she should have thought about that. The third part, she had experienced life as a banana for a few hours. She had the sense of fear, helplessness, confusion, dread, and many other panicking emotions that you can think about and yet she seems too not to remember or even have nightmares of the effect Emily did on her. Which in turn would cause her to be paranoid at the very thought of eating with Emily, wondering if she has turned someone into food in her own kitchen, wondering if Emily is giving her a person turned food to her during dinner, or wondering if Emily making dinner is excuse for her to turn more people into food to serve to Annie or her guests. In another words, she should have a “spidey-sense” which is a voice in the back of her mind telling her things like, she may be lying to you, that carrot may have been a person, or why is she giving me that pickle or for that matter why is she offering to cook dinner. You know, that sense we have in our minds, the flight or fight instinct that goes off when we feel some thing is wrong or something is off with that person. But no, she has none of those things on her mind after being turn back into human form, nor does she even have those feelings until someone flat out tells her. Like the police officer for example. You would think that after being in traumatic experience that she would have a sense of worry and paranoia surrounding her.

And the last thing is probably the most important red flag of them all, how Emily reacts to the fact that she turns people into food and watches people eat them. She loves it, plan and simple. She was smiling about it, like it was a fond memory to her. She has lost track of how many people she has done this to, she admits that she is a monster or a psycho (Oh wait, she thinks it’s a negative word my mistake. Spoken like a true looney bird), she tells her that it’s a sexual fetish to her, she enjoys the fact that she loves knowing that Laura is innocent about the whole thing, and she goes on about it more and more and how much she enjoys it. What person in there right mind would want to be friends or even a relationship with this nut ball after discovering the truth?! It’s like saying that a young hannibal lecter is in a relationship with a young woman who knows he eats people and yet she figures that he has stopped doing that, when in fact he continues to and even puts human cooked parts on her plate with out her knowing it and enjoying it. Be honest, would you ever in your life want to date someone like this after she lied to you several times, turned you into a banana, almost had your cousin eat you, then turned you back to normal and then claimed she would stop doing this? I know that I would never in my lifetime would ever date her, after being turned back I’d get the heck out of there and move someplace where no one can find me.

The point that I am trying to make here is that Annie is either blinded by what you call, self-peruasion and wishful thinking that really is so powerful that it overcomes all the truths that she has been bestowed upon. Or she just can’t read between the lines and see that the person she is dating is nothing but a nut that belongs either in the nut house or in hell itself. She is wearing the horse blinders throughout this entire relationship and is not even going to methodically think about all the things that she has witnessed and come to the conclusion that no matter what she does to Emily. She will never, ever change her ways. Annie should know that the first rule of an addict is when they become addicted to something, it is almost impossible for them to get rid of that addiction.

And when you mentioned that Emily is not stupid, I never once mentioned in my comment that she was stupid. In fact, comparing Annie to Emily she is about twenty times smarter then Annie is and in fact she doesn’t have to try to convince her that she has not done anything to that missing person. All she has to do is pretty much shed some tears, put on whimpering voice, tell her she has not done anything wrong and beg her to not leave her and say that has promised to never do this again. And right away, Annie believes her. I mean, all that is missing is for Emily to say, “Would you kindly drop the subject,” and she probably would (Bioshock reference). I'm just saying, that when all the facts are present to Annie she doesn’t utilize or remember them at all when the time is ripe for them to be used. I also understand that Emily would have some self-control on her addiction, after all how else would she get with it for so long without having some control. But again, Annie knows her secret and was told be the officer about a missing person that Emily was the only person to have seen him last. That should have raised some alarm bells in her head, but instead she stands around listening to all the lies that Emily is feeding her, like a deer in the headlights. And all the lies just go over her head. She is obviously not the brightest bulb in the socket. I agree with deej1011, when he said that Annie should have called her out on that fact that she was lying and then leave in a huff. Which would have made Emily think long and hard about how much she loves Annie and after few days of thinking she realizes that she does indeed love her. Then it could’ve ended on a cliff hanger where she is calling Annie to talk with her. Maybe fix their relationship or mess it up more? And she could even have a semi-honest statement that she would not turn people into food, so that Annie can trust her more and then she can use her fetish powers again in the future. Something that, but as I said before, no rational, methodical or even free-thinking person would ever do or even fall for. Emily should have been a better liar, but sadly you can see her lies from a mile off… especially when you know her true self.

Again this is just my opinion and nothing more. I say again that I don’t mean to be mean or insulting, but I’m just being honest about what I read about and that is it. Nothing more.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's interesting to imagine, I felt: having his consciousness within two girls at the same time. Being part of both of them; experiencing both their lives, as part of their body.

And I agree, I would probably favour become part of a girl's breasts. But the idea of being part of Laura's bottom would have some appeal too.

French_snack - 6 years ago

Could be!

Scrumptious - 6 years ago

Starring Emilia Clarke?

thedragon - 9 years ago

Alright she still looks very sexy. :)

French_snack - 9 years ago

No, sadly not.

thedragon - 9 years ago

I wonder if she can swallow Someone her size

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks! I'm not really looking to publish professionally at present, though. I write just for pleasure, because I enjoy it.

Bafomet - 9 years ago

You write too well to ever be successful on this fetish site. If you haven't already, you should legitimately publish somewhere. It was enjoyable reading this latest installment of Ayna's story, and I look forward to the next one.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks!

SputnikDX - 9 years ago

Good to have you back

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thank you! I'd never seen it done before, indeed, and I wanted to explore what it might be like. I don't know yet whether there'll be a continuation… If not, at least the seeds are sown for readers to imagine what might come next. ;)

thisgirlroolzz - 9 years ago

Hi, I really want to tell you that this story for me at least, was amazing! I have seen movies with similar ideas of giving a person a way of seeing and feeling what another person sees and feels, but WOW, you are the first to really delve deeply into the idea and give emotion to the concept. I also LOVE the romance and potential love that is implied. I very much hope you will write more of this story line, I want to see what happens.

Saftkeur - 9 years ago

Ah, so not simply a few generations back, but way back to... whatever the Felaryan equivalent of the Jurassic period would be, then? That would definitely be a difficult decision, run out onto the sand to avoid the immediate danger of being eaten, but knowing that you're almost certainly going to end up dead once you've "escaped".

French_snack - 9 years ago

Except that it's the very distant past, so leaving a message would be difficult. And it's even more dangerous than the present. ;)

Saftkeur - 9 years ago

That's quite an effect! Potentially a useful one, I suppose, but rather drastic... not much better in terms of escaping a predator, but that would be a very last resort, I would imagine, leaving your entire world behind, your only hope of communicating with family and friends coming in the form of leaving them items for their future selves to find.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. It's the Akaptor desert: Stepping on it sends you back into the distant past. There are ways of travelling it (and Calina's ancestors may well have done so), but it's safest just not to try.

Saftkeur - 9 years ago

A lovely little look into both Calina's past and some of the world around her. Kinda haunting, in a way, though I don't know if that's from the world itself or something else...

I'm sure it's something that's detailed elsewhere, but why is it that they can't enter the desert at all?

French_snack - 6 years ago

Thanks!

zobabu - 6 years ago

Very nice story! Love the succubus characters :)

French_snack - 2 years ago

Ha! Thanks; I'm glad it was enjoyed. ;)

Gapemaw - 2 years ago

To this day this specific Vore scenes remains one of my all time favorites.

I know it wasnt well received when it was released.
But boy did it do things to me.

devilnaga - 5 years ago

Fair enough

French_snack - 5 years ago

Sorry, but I prefer not to come back to this. :)

devilnaga - 5 years ago

Do you regret pulling this story? And what was your plans for what happened next?

nap25 - 9 years ago

I imagine her temporary green color may make her especially enticing for Elli.

French_snack - 9 years ago

Thanks. And, heh… the thought has probably crossed Elli's mind. :p

nap25 - 9 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this, just like the rest of your stories. However, I'm really hoping for a part 2 where Elli and Calina get a little "closer". Lol.

French_snack - 1 year ago

It's certainly an idea; thanks! I'm not sure I would know where to start, though.

Avenger233 - 1 year ago

Have you ever thought about using ai technology to make the image of each character, you can use a variety of styles, such as reality or anime style, of course, there are more, this technology is now relatively mature, you only need to input the description of the character can be generated, of course, the more detailed the better. If you want to make it, you need to post it on a forum and not in a gallery.

French_snack - 1 year ago

Sadly not; there are no artists among IVC story readers, it seems. It's something we've all been wishing for a long time.

Avenger233 - 1 year ago

Do you have any pictures of Mona? She's a very attractive girl. Of course, are there any pictures of other characters, I'm curious about them.

Miridium - 9 years ago

Ah ok.